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         <description><![CDATA[<div> 1. <strong>A powder derived from the North American Echinacea flower, which has been effective in preventing colds</strong>, is grown by many small farmers out West.<br> (A) A powder derived from the North American Echinacea flower, which has been effective in preventing colds, <br>(B) A derivative, which has been effective in preventing colds, of the North American Echinacea flower<br> (C) A North American Echinacea flower derivative, which has been effective in preventing colds<br> (D) The North American Echinacea flower has a derivative which has been effective in preventing colds, that <br>(E) The North American Echinacea flower, a derivative of which has been effective in preventing colds,<br><br> 2. Trying to mimic some of the pitch variations of a dolphin chattering is <strong>the same as attempting to sing like a sick parakeet when one is intoxicated</strong>; the complete lack of harmony and apparent randomness of the noise means the human vocal chords are completely incapable of reproducing these sounds. <br>(A) the same as attempting to sing like a sick parakeet when one is intoxicated <br>(B) similar to an intoxicated person singing like a sick parakeet <br>(C) like singing like a sick parakeet as an intoxicated person <br>(D) the same as an intoxicated person singing like a sick parakeet <br>(E) like the intoxicated person is singing like a sick parakeet <br><br>3. The possibility of an attack on Indian Point, a nuclear power plant, has caused local governmental officials to <strong>plan evacuation routes, build shelters, and offering citizens potassium pills so there will be</strong> fewer casualties in case of a leak. <br>(A) plan evacuation routes, build shelters, and offering citizens potassium pills so there will be <br>(B) plan evacuation routes, build shelters, and offer citizens potassium pills in order to have <br>(C) planning evacuation routes, building shelters, and the offer of potassium pills to citizens so there will be <br>(D) evacuation route planning, building shelters, and offering citizens potassium pills in order to have <br>(E) a planning of evacuation routes, shelter building, and offering potassium pills to citizens to have <br><br> 4. Although the sting of <strong>Egyptian Scorpions are rarely dangerous, they cause red welts to appear, posing minor health risks to infants, who are particularly vulnerable to its </strong>venom. <br>(A) Egyptian Scorpions are rarely dangerous, they cause red welts to appear, posing minor health risks to infants, who are particularly vulnerable to its <br>(B) Egyptian Scorpions are rarely dangerous, they cause red welts to appear and pose minor health risks to infants, who are particularly vulnerable to their <br>(C) Egyptian Scorpions is rarely dangerous, it causes red welts to appear, posing minor health risks to infants, who are particularly vulnerable to their <br>(D) Egyptian Scorpions is rarely dangerous, it causes red welts to appear and poses minor health risks to infants, who are particularly vulnerable to its <br>(E) Egyptian Scorpions is rarely dangerous, they cause red welts to appear, posing the greatest danger to the infant, who are particularly vulnerable to its <br><br>5. The catastrophic San Francisco Earthquake at the turn of the century destroyed numerous buildings and <strong>many were led to believe that the city had become </strong>a permanent disaster zone. <br>(A) many were led to believe that the city had become <br>(B) many had been led to believing of the city as if it were <br>(C) the belief this led to was that the city had become <br>(D) led many to the belief of the city as if it were<br>(E) led many to believe that the city had become <br><br>6. Besides offering such physiological rewards as toned muscles, <strong>karate, if practiced regularly, can turn the body into a dangerous weapon</strong> and produce numerous other benefits. <br>(A) karate, if practiced regularly, can turn the body into a dangerous weapon <br>(B) one can turn the body into a dangerous weapon through karate, if it is practiced regularly <br>(C) the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon as a result of karate if practiced regularly <br>(D) when karate is practiced regularly, the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon <br>(E) when practiced regularly, the results of karate can be to turn the body into a dangerous weapon<br><br>7. The new government requires <strong>employers to inform an employee of their</strong> legal right to holidays and overtime pay. <br>(A) employers to inform an employee of their <br>(B) employers to inform employees that he has a <br> (C) employers to inform employees that there is a <br>(D) that employers inform an employee of their <br>(E) that employers inform the employees that they have a <br><br>8. Riddled with bullets, shattered by bombs, and hidden in alleys,<strong> the historic buildings in Lodz, Poland, were long ignored by tourists, traveling</strong> instead to more well-known memorial museums. <br>(A) the historic buildings in Lodz, Poland, were long ignored by tourists, traveling <br>(B) the historic buildings in Lodz, Poland, were long ignored by tourists, who traveled <br>(C) tourists long ignored the historic buildings in Lodz, Poland, traveling <br>(D) tourists long ignored the historic buildings in Lodz, Poland and traveled <br>(E) tourists long ignored the historic buildings in Lodz, Poland; they depended <br><br>9. <strong>Rallies organized in conjunction with the dissemination of democratic principles which was once prohibited by Communist Chinese leaders,</strong> are beginning to take shape at a grass roots level permitted by the new Chinese leadership. <br>(A) Rallies organized in conjunction with the dissemination of democratic principles which was once prohibited by Communist Chinese leaders, are <br>(B) Rallies organized in conjunction with the dissemination of democratic principles, a practice that Communist Chinese leaders once prohibited, is <br>(C) Organizing rallies in conjunction with the dissemination of democratic principles, as once prohibited by Communist Chinese leaders, is <br>(D) Communist Chinese leaders once prohibited organizing rallies in conjunction with the dissemination of democratic principles, but they are <br>(E) Communist Chinese leaders once prohibited organizing rallies in conjunction with the dissemination of democratic principles, but such principles are <br><br>10. By the end of the nineteenth century, five of the Western European states had developed a railroad system, but <strong>only one in the East</strong>. <br>(A) only one in the East <br>(B) only one eastern state <br>(C) in the East there was only one state <br>(D) in the East only one state did <br>(E) only one in the East had </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-11-20 23:00:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Answers.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. E<br>2. A<br>3.B<br>4.D<br>5.E<br>6. A<br>7. C<br>8. B<br>9.E<br>10.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-11-28 21:30:49 UTC</pubDate>
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