https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt First Essay Feedback en-us 2018-03-09 13:29:26 UTC 2021-07-09 20:50:56 UTC hello@padlet.com samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240129458 What feedback can you provide for Reading 1? ]]> 2018-03-09 13:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240129458 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240269673 Its good. They proved all of their points with evidence and had a good concept of what they were talking about.  ]]> 2018-03-09 17:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240269673 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270295 It showed important information and it backed it up with facts. ]]> 2018-03-09 17:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270295 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270373 All the paragraphs have a lot of information in them that makes sense and you can tell that they read and studied.]]> 2018-03-09 17:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270373 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270662 All the paragraphs provide information about each subject ]]> 2018-03-09 17:25:30 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270662 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270727 Well structured other than the repetition of the first sentence in the paragraph. Very good evidence, reasons, and facts also]]> 2018-03-09 17:25:37 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270727 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270771 The paragraph had information that told us what we need to know with details ]]> 2018-03-09 17:25:41 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270771 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270869 I feel this was written well it explained what cuneiform was and how it helps us figure out information about the ancient civilization]]> 2018-03-09 17:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240270869 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271104 they are all good they all included details from the document to support there idea ]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271104 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271157 it was good, paragraph had facts and they were backed with reasoning]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271157 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271309 The writing is very good, it is related to the topics of what they wrote]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:39 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271309 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271383 it had good detail about the topic]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271383 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271428 I think it's good. It just states most of the information that we already know.]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271428 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271451 The paragraph is well written and contains enough details and evidence to make it trustable]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271451 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271463 they provided good detail. But the handwriting was pretty sloppy]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271463 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271472 some sentences were kind of repeated but had a lot of good facts and details]]> 2018-03-09 17:26:57 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271472 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271501 DOCUMENT 2]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:02 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271501 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271536 In the paragraph about Document 3, they do not comment on how it was the first form of writing to record history.]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271536 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271560 The paragraphs tell us important information. They provide us with details on how they valued the Nile river, and cuneiform.]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271560 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271564 It was a good paragraph and had many details ]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271564 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271695 (document 1)Before they even started writing they stated what they were going to write about which really helped with the understanding. ]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271695 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271734 (Doc 1) Good; The paragraphs elaborated on the main point and provided a lot of detail. This person also used good punctuation and gave good information about the topics.]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:31 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271734 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271794 The writing had very good detail ]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271794 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271904 Explains how the Tigris and Euphrates river was so important to civilizations, and how it benefited them.]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271904 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271962 They had a lot of good details and you can tell that they studied]]> 2018-03-09 17:27:59 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271962 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271963 DOCUMENT 2]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:00 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271963 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271988 It's pretty good. Need more details. ]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240271988 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272070 Good example but a little short]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272070 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272091 the first paragraph is bad because it doesnt say what they need or who they were talking too]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:14 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272091 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272164 The writing explains what the topic is about and backs up with detail]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272164 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272165 Document 2 is good they gave exact quotes from the passage ]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272165 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272207 Good thesis statements and good use of quotes. Only suggestion is that they provide more detail.]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272207 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272215 The details are decent and more information would be great ;)]]> 2018-03-09 17:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272215 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272550 Explains why the rivers are important and how it had helped people.]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272550 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272575 good deatil and facts about the does not go into detail ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272575 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272579 It was good. They wrote why the rivers were important]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272579 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272594 Good with putting the question into the answer]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272594 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272641 It was ok but needed more info ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:21 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272641 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272645 It was good explained the importance, but lacked detail]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272645 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272686 It was alright because of the lack of detials]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:28 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272686 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272694 They could give us more details but they provided quotes. ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272694 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272718 lack of detail ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272718 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272746 It could use more information, but it referenced to the passage which gave it more information ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272746 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272787 Document 2 has bad grammar, and lacks information.]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272787 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272810 In the paragraph on Document 2, they only go over one detail.]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:41 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272810 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272893 it's alright, the text is not really detailed though]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272893 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272900 Good because of the details that were put in it to back the reasoning.]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272900 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272903 Good because they gave quotes and reason behind what they were saying]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272903 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272908 great thesis statements and use a lot of supporting details which helped to form a understanding. ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272908 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272921 The paragraph had details about the rivers and good information. ]]> 2018-03-09 17:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272921 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272955 I feel it could use more more explaining it says the quote and then with out the river they wouldn't be able to build their stuff i feel they need to explain stuff]]> 2018-03-09 17:30:01 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240272955 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322000 What are the positives of DOCUMENT 1]]> 2018-03-09 19:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322000 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322592 They got more resources ]]> 2018-03-09 19:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322592 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322744 Very descriptive]]> 2018-03-09 19:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322744 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322935 They used thy evidence to support all of their clams]]> 2018-03-09 19:02:50 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322935 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322940 more detail, how were they descriptive]]> 2018-03-09 19:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240322940 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323003 Provided background information about the topic]]> 2018-03-09 19:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323003 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323020 They were very descriptive and elaborated on all the points ]]> 2018-03-09 19:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323020 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323128 they used things from the past to determinate what things were important and what effect they had on society]]> 2018-03-09 19:03:09 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323128 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323425 Described how things were important]]> 2018-03-09 19:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323425 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323653 They have specific details, like how the writing was wedge-shaped, and that the symbols weren't words or letters, they were objects, they symbolized things.]]> 2018-03-09 19:03:57 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323653 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323664 Gives us a better idea]]> 2018-03-09 19:03:59 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323664 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323834 Described how cuniform was important and changed over time]]> 2018-03-09 19:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240323834 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324153 what can be improved? ]]> 2018-03-09 19:04:52 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324153 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324204 for document 1 ]]> 2018-03-09 19:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324204 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324225 They answered the question and backed it up ]]> 2018-03-09 19:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324225 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324427 described how the Nile River was an important source in Ancient Egypt]]> 2018-03-09 19:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324427 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324462 They could have used specific examples from the text]]> 2018-03-09 19:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324462 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324631 They explained their answer. For example in Document 4 it said "The Nile River helped a lot with transportation..." instead of saying The Nile river helped a lot and that's it. ]]> 2018-03-09 19:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324631 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324671 They used information to back up thy clamis]]> 2018-03-09 19:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324671 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324735 they could've shown its direct impact on us today]]> 2018-03-09 19:05:56 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324735 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324767 It briefly described cunieform and its relevancy in ancient civilizations]]> 2018-03-09 19:06:01 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324767 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324942 they could use quotes]]> 2018-03-09 19:06:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324942 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324950 What can be improved]]> 2018-03-09 19:06:21 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324950 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324964 They cold back the info up with quotes ]]> 2018-03-09 19:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240324964 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325241 They could have described it a little better]]> 2018-03-09 19:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325241 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325319 They could have improved by explaining what cuneiform is better]]> 2018-03-09 19:07:02 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325319 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325330 they could have expanded more about vague topics, like they could have explained that the nile was a barrier because of the cataracts in the river]]> 2018-03-09 19:07:03 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325330 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325448 elaboration on different points instead of being long on one point and being short on lots they should elaborate on all points]]> 2018-03-09 19:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325448 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325650 They could bolden words]]> 2018-03-09 19:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325650 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325653 What was POSITIVE about the other answer set? ]]> 2018-03-09 19:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325653 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325961 Gave us more examples]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325961 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325977 provided examples from the text]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240325977 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326001 They restated the question, which made me understand what they were talking about]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326001 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326002 They gave specific quotes from the text]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326002 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326040 More informative overall]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326040 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326055 I had more quotes to back up my reasoning. ]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:32 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326055 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326082 the rivers gave the people a barrier against enemys.]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326082 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326165 had a lot more information]]> 2018-03-09 19:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326165 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326343 it show us how they were effected directly and gave examples how]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:04 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326343 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326354 They gave quotes to back up their statement]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:06 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326354 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326355 more descriptive ]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:06 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326355 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326388 more information in less writing]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326388 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326441 describe clearly]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326441 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326471 They gave specific quotes to back up what they were saying, like "irrigation of the..." which was relevant to the point they were making]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326471 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326503 There was a lot more information ]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:25 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326503 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326583 what could have the SECOND answer set improved on? ]]> 2018-03-09 19:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326583 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326879 they could have elaborated more, just so they show they have a bit of a deeper understanding of the topics]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326879 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326901 more text]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326901 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326968 我 是 美 国 人 They should have elaborated]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326968 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326969 it could have explained who it effected directly]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240326969 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327019 more information]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327019 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327043 More paragraph text]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327043 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327116 what more text? ]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327116 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327149 They could have explained it more ]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327149 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327240 I could have not said the same thing again for every question but I still did good giving information because Quality over quantity ]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327240 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327262 they could've been more brief]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327262 samuel_smithson https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327263 be more specific]]> 2018-03-09 19:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327263 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327540 They should have said what the text was instead of just saying "the text" it was too vague and from an outside source, you dont know what text they are talking about]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:20 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327540 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327550 They could have explained what the quote means ]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327550 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327582 Use more than one example to explain  what thy is]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327582 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327595 It does not say what text it just says in the text]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327595 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327726 one of the documents had 2 sentences ]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327726 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327754 They could've explained more about each of the facts that they stated]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:44 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327754 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327852 po ]]> 2018-03-09 19:11:55 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327852 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327904 G A M E D A Y]]> 2018-03-09 19:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240327904 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240328633 dead meme]]> 2018-03-09 19:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240328633 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240329559 Smithson can see your name]]> 2018-03-09 19:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240329559 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240331054 F is for friends who do stuff together]]> 2018-03-09 19:18:39 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240331054 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240331117 U is for you and me]]> 2018-03-09 19:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240331117 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240331295 N is for anywhere or anytime at all]]> 2018-03-09 19:19:12 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240331295 https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240336112 ???]]> 2018-03-09 19:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/samuel_smithson/9m16f8isswt/wish/240336112