External Critique 1 by Azhan Abdul Aziz

External Critique 1 by Azhan Abdul Aziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments Post a session photo AND Share comments by the group panel, according to the following categories: 1) concept, 2) site synthesis, 3) site zoning, and 4) massing. Thank you. en-us 2014-08-20 04:03:48 UTC 2025-10-06 11:22:56 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d262le4z25sx36.cloudfront.net/portraits/brainstorm.jpg Group 3 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1872769031 Panel's comments:]]> 2021-11-07 13:54:54 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1872769031 Wan Muhammad Ammar bin Azman (Luxury Collectible Piano) wanammar235 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1873977399 1) CONCEPT
- Can add application of rhythm too.
- Use repitition of lines.

2) SITE SYNTHESIS
- (commented with Site Zoning)

3) SITE ZONING
- Zoning on Semi-Private-Public area.
- Switch Gallery-Auditorium with Hotel-Cafe, to make the Gallery capture more of the desirable view.
- Offset the hotel backward a bit, to emphasis and focus more onto the Gallery.
- Make the hotel in a slim shape, become one of the linear element on design.

4) MASSING STUDIES
- Make it not too rigid and have roughly form (apply with the rhythm).
- Refer Timber Architecture (Glulam etc).
- Show sections (to show human scale and volume, with the green plaza).]]> 2021-11-08 03:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1873977399 Group 4 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874020792 2021-11-08 03:53:38 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874020792 Group 2 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874090384 2021-11-08 04:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874090384 Nur Hanis Afifah Bt Rozali ( Vintage Telecommunication) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874093034 1) CONCEPT
-To be translated into planning / quality of spaces.

2) SITE SYNTHESIS
-Using Asrama Doktor Siswazah as an opportunity rather than rear/bad view that is ignored.

3) SITE ZONING
-Create buffer that has emotional attachment element to achieve design goal.

4) MASSING
-Proposed elevated pedestrian walkway to shows the movement of pedestrian going "inside-out" from the building correlate with the concept.]]> 2021-11-08 04:35:50 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874093034 Muhammad Fahim Ramle (Vintage Supercar Engine) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874113477 1) Concept
-can be seen at the section of the building not only the floor layout. overall applied to the building

2) Site Synthesis
- need to add more on swot, explain more.

3) Site Zoning
-auditorium facing frontage, can be one of the future.
- study how people move in the spatial organization of the building.

4)Massing
-more detail, show the form of the building.

5)Others
-consider the approach in design, refer to MBI goal n objective.
-special studies on the future that can add value to the building.
-mechanical services for the gallery.
-consider the character of the item to be applied to the building

]]> 2021-11-08 04:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874113477 Engku Nazmi bin Engku Mat Nasir (Vintage Keris) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874115555 1. Concept
- To play and learn with nature to require to show the series of activities (Keris).

2. Site Synthesis
- Take opportunity of Perodua visitor (pedestrian, green).

3. Site Zoning
- Propose green at frontage as continuity of padang (green) and to attract the big crowd from Dataran Ipoh and Padang.
- Make attraction of green as actual activity of Keris since this item is active, vibrant and celebrative.

4. Massing
- Center the block as grandstanding to show the stability of Keris complement each other. ]]> 2021-11-08 04:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874115555 Nur Iffah Bt Ismadi https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874131379 Pocket watch & horology museum
1) item
- diversify the exhibition item (watch, clock, etc.)
2) Zoning
- bas circulation to avoid traffic
- rearrange outdoor cafe area to avoid view, smell form service road
3) Others
- Mbi vision & mission regarding green design
- to consider new normal
- to consider universal design space
- to study mechanical system for exhibition ]]> 2021-11-08 04:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874131379 Muhammad Shahrol Azimie Bin Ismail (Typewriter) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874186872
1) concept/ Item
-enhance what is typewriter all about.
-character of typewriter to use as form
exp ink,keyboard, mechanical,history
-explore more about form making based on typewriter.
2) site synthesis :
-explain more
3) site zoning :
-circulation and spatial organization of the building.
4) massing :
-enhance the level or layer
-Less harmony connection between the space or shape
-explore with mockups]]> 2021-11-08 05:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874186872 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874193674 2021-11-08 05:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874193674 Ahmad Haridz Bin Hasan (Gunpla and other figurines) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874204048 1) Concept
- justification on why the item i choosen
- design goal to achieve more simpler

2)Site Synthesis
- hardscape and landscape

3) Zoning
- vertical zoning
- making sure the circulation is smooth

4) Massing
- relate more to design strategy
- more decon style form]]> 2021-11-08 05:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874204048 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874222321 2021-11-08 05:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874222321 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874227873 2021-11-08 05:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874227873 NASHARUDDIN BIN KAMARUDDIN (VINTAGE BRASS MUSICAL INSTRUMENT) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874228738 1)items/ concept
- add the character of the instrument and famous musician and collector in presentation to support the concept and attract people.
- explain the technical of the instrument and adapt in the building.

2)site synthesis
- explain more

3)site zoning
-circulation of the building

4)Massing
- do a conceptual physical model to make the form clear.

5)others
- explore function follow form style
- explore how to make sound using the airflow through the building to make it more attractive.

]]> 2021-11-08 06:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874228738 MUHAMMAD AIMAN BIN SHAHARUDDIN (2017174279) - Vintage Film Projector https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874232971 1. Concept
- reproducing the Cinematic Space to eye-level to emulate the viewer's experience in theater/ cinema

2. Site Synthesis
- View/Noise buffer to consider vegetation height and type (public view)

3. Site Zoning
- Entrance at front and rear of the building
- Restaurant grouped with the public zoning (refer Site Synthesis)
- Promenade to be reconsidered (activity inside vs outside building), preferably only landscaping
- Walkway serves as external gallery, storyboard, behind the scene of film-making
- Enlarge the walkway to accommodate the spaces

4. Massing
- the end section of Plot Diagram to be reflected on the gallery level (lower level)]]> 2021-11-08 06:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874232971 Muhammad Luqman Hakimi bin Roslan (Gramophone & Record Player) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874249355 1) Concept/Item
-to list the specialties of gramophone to strengthen the reasons for sustainability of the gallery
-to contemplate relation of concept with hotel space (therapeutic)

2) Site Synthesis
-no amendment needed

3)Site Zoning
-to change direction of ingress and egress of hotel other way around for drop-off purpose.
-services road ingress to be changed
-contemplate on events in building and their programming
-refuse house to be relocated

4)Massing
-to implement gramophone form for roof]]> 2021-11-08 06:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874249355 Muhammad Imran Daud Bin Mohamad Zamani (Vintage Swiss Timepieces) mmimrandd https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874273473 1) Concept
- explore how to apply concepts to more aspects of the architecture.
- create an interesting narrative to apply the concept in terms of philosophical thinking.
- look into parametric architecture.

2) Site synthesis
- improve on proposal explanation.
- make use of the strong frontage and revise the building position.

3) Site Zoning
- reassess the built form and orientation to mimic hotel regency to create seamless pedestrian continuity.
- do a simple section to show how the proposed building will sit with the context.
-make use of the frontage.

4) Massing
- To illustrate the use of the concept, site factors, and zoning to implement into massing study.
- human scale consideration.]]> 2021-11-08 06:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874273473 GROUP 1 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874312735 2021-11-08 06:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874312735 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874313312 2021-11-08 06:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874313312 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874313664 2021-11-08 06:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874313664 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874377232 Norizan Binti Noh
( Antique Clock & watches)
(Site Zonning)
- To enhance more in urban context
- Need to have a border for public and private promenade
- To clarify drop of area
-To clarify OKU needs
-Set the zoning for staircase to accommodate hotel and gallery user.
-Identify how to sperate hotel user from gallery user in term of circulation and safety
- to identify the level of need for gate services on the left side of the site (why not all use the main gate only)

(Massing)
To enhance auditorium as main attraction

]]> 2021-11-08 07:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874377232 Nurul Izzaty bt Zulkipli (Vintage fan) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874390144 1. Concept
-try to concentrate on the inner components of the fan; make it as a part of the gallery's journey
-explore the item's potential not only from its physical

2. Site synthesis
-none

3. Site zoning
-prioritize gallery as the main spaces of the building
-big parking area at the frontage is not preferable due to the site potential
-loading bay cannot be done from the outside of the site boundary

4. Massing
-find out the actual width of each accessible road to be used for services or circulation consideration]]> 2021-11-08 07:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874390144 Muhamad Firdaus Shafiq Bin Abd Halim (Scale Ship Models) firdausshafiq06 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874497956 1) Item/Concept
- Include more ship elements and terms into project to make it interesting (mass, starboard, sails, captains quarters)
- Highlight water features in multiple spaces, because display items can be along with the water features (rivers/lake/waterfall/fountain)

2) Site Synthesis
- no comments

3) Site Zoning
- Consider merging the ingress and egress to allocate more space for the outdoor plaza
- Integrate the central arcade water feature with outdoor plaza

4) Massing studies
- Consider open passage of frontage to integrate outdoor plaza with central arcade
- Explore the form with commented aspects above]]> 2021-11-08 08:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1874497956 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1875066296 2021-11-08 13:45:21 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1875066296 Nor Athirah Najwa Binti Abdul Hamid https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877089612 1)items/ concept
- choose one main characters from the marvel.
-study more on comic

2)site synthesis
- explain more

3)site zoning
-study more

4)Massing
- do a conceptual physical model to make the form clear.

5)others
- explore function follow form style

]]> 2021-11-09 03:23:17 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877089612 Nurul Fatiha Rusli (Historical Board Games) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877273601 1) Concept
- Include local board games to localize the design and familiarity

2) Site Synthesis
- More explanation on Site Scape and design opportunity on the site

3) Site Zoning
- Parking at the back of the site
- Orient the building to the center of the site
- Facilities placement to be accessible from the non-visitor
- Gallery as a frontage for façade
- Entrance near the façade facing direction

4) Massing
- Use modular architecture only on façade design not structurally
- Create frontage near the road
- Make sure the form blends in well with the existing building ]]> 2021-11-09 05:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877273601 Mohd Nasiruddin bin Mohd Mansor (Vintage Sewing Machine) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877476958 1) Concept
- Instead applying movement try to approach the product of sewing machine which is stiches.
-apply the movement concept inside than outside.

2) Site Zoning
- connection and response of building with the street
-relationship between gallery & restaurant
-hiding the parking area
-restaurant & retail prominent

3) Form
- applying stitch pattern on façade]]> 2021-11-09 07:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877476958 AIMAN HAKIM BIN SAMSUDIN https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877488578
1)Site zoning
- Identify how to separate hotel and museum in term of privacy and safety of the item in the museum
- Consideration of corridor before entering space such as gallery and museum
- Consideration of people from public area (Dataran and Field) to come to our building

2)Massing
-Play with a volume of the facade to seem an element of lego
-Relate with the design strategies to show to the concept
-Show rough section idea to seem level high of the spaces]]> 2021-11-09 07:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877488578 Muhammad Roshaidi bin Ramly (Malay Traditional Weapon) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877509383 1) Concept
- Not only focused no Malacca Sultanate, but overall "Nusantara" if can.
- Gallery club is a sense of belonging to the club member
- As a place where the user can share the idea or option about the vintage item.

2) Site Synthesis
- Address the street by putting the building near the street.
- Adjust the building placement

3) Site Zoning
- try to make landscape as apart of display
- not priority the parking, keep it at the back or hide.

4) Site massing
- Make a building interior like a sense of the past. ]]> 2021-11-09 07:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877509383 NUR SHAZRIENA BINTI MD NORDIN (RETRO GAMING) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877512805 1) CONCEPT / ITEM
- generation gap

2) SITE ZONING
- parking. try pindahkan parking ke blkng2 or kwasan tersorok and gantikan parking (yg kat bhgian dpn) dgn landscapping

3) FORM
- make the facade looks fun, bold, and futuristic
- give identity to the building. something related to the game yet nicely or smartly done

]]> 2021-11-09 07:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877512805 Nur Dayana Basirah Bt Rudy Shahriman (Vespa) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877535273 Concept/Item:
- Justification on the chosen item in relation to local context of Ipoh
- Concept to be relate with significance of Vespa
- Narrowed down issues into design issue, client issue, site issue and end-user issue

Site zoning & planning:
- Activities to be include: renting vespa to tourists (local & international)
- To provide a designated outdoor space for riders to park and display their Vespa bikes
- Vertical zoning to determine the activities on all levels

Massing:
- implementation relating to concept

]]> 2021-11-09 07:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877535273 Nur Fakhira Binti Faizul (Vintage TV) faizulfakhira https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877579676 1) Concept
-Change the issue, use new concept of journey of the TV history

2) Site zoning
-find out the exact size of boundary between roads

3) Massing
-explore more on form and design strategies ]]> 2021-11-09 08:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877579676 NURUL NAJIHAH ARIFFIN (Coffee Grinder) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877586968 1) Concept
- precedent study represent the concept well

2) Site Synthesis
- 1 entrance should be reconsidered rather than 2
- don't focus too much on the public field

3) Site Zoning
- no need for second entrance for service - one circulation only, no need to separate service & main vehicle circulation
- put the workshop space before the exhibition hall, so that public will recognize the activity that will be held at the workshop
- bus stop and parking should be placed at the back, clarify proper radius for bus
- separate refuse chamber from other services/ put near the road, garbage truck doesn't have to pass thru site
- specify drop off area for hotel
- good separation of entrance between hotel and gallery
- clarify spaces and facilities needed for hotel
- clarify the fire staircase placement based on the travel distance
- no need for another f&b upstairs

4) Massing
- switch function between the main building, gallery facing the MBI square & hotel facing the public field
- focus on option 1, option 2 main problem is on the natural lighting at the plaza blocked by the main building
- clarify the main space that will enhance the building form to avoid from bulkiness]]> 2021-11-09 08:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1877586968 Mohamad Raihan bin Mohamad Rafi (Vintage Artwork & Painting) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1878229779 1. Concept

- to be implemented on site planning and spatial quality
- diversified the item not only painting. eg- sculpture
- design approach on building facade to reflect the concept

2. Site Synthesis

- to create a pedestrian walkway that connecting the site and adjacent buildings
- refers to MBI on proposing elevated pedestrian bridge and zebra crossing

3. Site Zoning

- justification on enclosed exhibition hall and adequate natural daylighting from skylight
- retail exposed to public space to attract buyers
- services road not necessarily on site, can be pocket services

4. Massing

- to relate based on design strategies
- detail on the formation of the building]]> 2021-11-09 13:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1878229779 Nur Fatimah Azzahra binti Nasir (String Musical Instrument) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1878733521 1) Items/ Concept
-limited product size & shape to display. Add more string instruments from other places

2) Site Synthesis
- no comments

3) Site Zoning
- accommodation and refuse chamber should not be near each other

4) Others
- refer mbi regarding green design
- study on circulation in building for new normal
- study on universal design to make them accessible to all people
- to study mechanical system for main gallery]]> 2021-11-09 16:01:20 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1878733521 https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1878793366 Nurmaisarah binti Ahmad Zamri (Tamiya RC Car)

Site Zoning
- services entry might distract the flow
- Widen the outdoor track near to the public parking to create a so called tamiya heaven
- provide an outdoor grandstand for the club member to gather and amend the rc car.
- to have a different level of outdoor races

]]> 2021-11-09 16:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1878793366 Muaz Bin Ahmad Marzukhi (GUNDAM) https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880166534 1) Item / Concept
- is it vintage?
- Who the target user actually?

2) Site synthesis
- No comment

3) Site Zoning and Massing
- Entrance to be considered again
- Main image should be addressed to the public
- Landscaping check again
- Cafe and retail placement
- Service lobby application]]> 2021-11-10 03:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880166534 MUHAMMAD SYAKIR IMAN BIN YAMAN - CAMERA https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880169078

Design objective
- creating the journey of camera - type of camera is primary - brand is secondary
- create a something fun experiences for student - education purpose
-origin/history of the camera and the inventor make it as a part of the gallery's journey

Programmes
- cafe/restaurant relate to camera - experiences of photography - part of main attraction

Site zoning
- practicality of the entrance - justify

Massing
- frontage is important - first impression

]]> 2021-11-10 03:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880169078 DIYANAH BT ISA MIKAIL AMIN SULAIMAAN 2019359045 (Guitars) diyanahisa https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880533781 1) Concept/Item

- Justification on chosen item in relation to ipoh

- Narrow down issues to design issue, client issue, site issue & end user issue

- Concept approved but need to elaborate more on especially in design process

2) Site synthesis

- Need to change to site B because the chosen item (guitar) & proposed ampitheater space is not suitable at site A (will be too noisy). Site B would be more suitable because of many open spaces surrounding the site.

3) Site zoning

-ideas on zoning ok but better to change site

4) Massing

- to implement relate to concept

]]> 2021-11-10 06:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880533781 MUHAMED IZZMIL BUKHARY BIN IZAT BUKHARY https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880762478 Concept/Item
- justification on item chosen and its relation to Perak (feasibility study)

Zoning
-vertical zoning
- making sure there a gap between spaces(for circulation)

Massing
- to relate to concept and design strategies

]]> 2021-11-10 09:08:41 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1880762478 MOHAMMAD SYAZWAN SHAH BIN ROSALI https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1881183542 2021-11-10 13:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1881183542 Muhammad Aideel Bin Adenan https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1881281488 1)items/ concept
- Concept need to relate to site relation and the item character

2)site synthesis
- Need to have context to neighbourhood to relate to concept

3)site zoning
-Zoning need to understand the function of the every spaces
-Need to know spaces that need view or not and spaces that need to be seen or not

4)Massing
- Massing need to relate to concept so that the form of the massing is easy to find out

5)others
- Explore form which relate to character of the product

]]> 2021-11-10 13:42:43 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1881281488 Overall Comment azhanaziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882592941 Overall good but need to study more to the flow on site and in the building. Must consider a green approach elements, OKU requirements and mechanical system for the exhibition gallery.]]> 2021-11-10 22:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882592941 Overall comment azhanaziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882595685 Just mediocre without anything special in terms of ideas and concepts. Students need to understand how to get interesting ideas and concepts as explained. All students need to make sure the concept, idea and design strategy are brought to the end of the design.]]> 2021-11-10 22:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882595685 Overall comment azhanaziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882597015 Students are generally capable and have great potential. Some are way infront and some need guide and great improvement. (refer individual assessment). The challenge now is how they can translate those concept elements into space & structural design. I m keen to see the development]]> 2021-11-10 22:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882597015 Overall comment azhanaziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882598008 Azreena Shazwani & Abdul Rahim perlu perhatian dan bimbingan yang lebih, masih lemah didalam memahami 'site context' dan 'site massing' serta 'design approaches' ]]> 2021-11-10 22:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882598008 Overall comment azhanaziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882598883 Most students do not respond to the street. Their proposals back away from the street and they place either landscaping or carpark fronting the street.

I am of the opinion that the students should fully embrace the street. The street facade should be bold n expressive of the function behind it, but at the same time engaging with both the pedestrian public as well as with other buildings and the urban scale.]]> 2021-11-10 22:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882598883 Overall comment azhanaziz https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882601037 need to enhance the idea and concept from the product, next to refer to Basic principle from DK Ching, create an art form from it and develop from there, a bit lacking on site planning that reflect the client and surrounding, need more improvemennt ]]> 2021-11-10 23:00:07 UTC https://padlet.com/azhanaziz/AAR680Bextcrit1comments/wish/1882601037