it was passed was because a significant

portion of the colonial economy during

the French and Indian War was involved

with supplying food and supplies to the

British army, but the colonials thought the tax was because of the new tax program

John Bergantino

Why do you have a period after reason?

This sentence just runs on and on.

What do you mean by an indirect tax?

What new tax program?

Where is the period at the end of the sentence?

Gianna Vallesi

The first sentences are very choppy. Pontiac was the leader of the Ottawa's who formed an alliance with Native Americans west of the Appalachian Mountains.

In should be capitalized

In May of what year? What area? French needs to be capitalized.

You must start a sentence with a capital letter.

Where is Fort Duane? Do you mean Fort Wayne?

as a general warrant, allowing customs officials to enter

any ship or building that they suspected for any reason

might hold smuggled goods. The writ of assistance proved to be useful tool in the fight against smuggling.

British passed the document because of the colonist were smuggling goods.

Nick Dionizio

The sentence is just thrown in at the end. It would have been better to discuss the colonists reaction to the law.

Crowds were over crowding the customs office

Named after Charles Townshend who sponsered them.

Jackie Mignacca

What about the crowds? Why were they there? Who were they? What was named after Charles Townshend?

Great Britain needs to be capitalized

He became the treasurer for King George III after Lord Bute. Handle what?

Your sentences do not make any sense. This appears to be a cut and paste job that does not flow smoothly. You must use your own words when you write.

Kenny Hanner

the longest ruling British Monarch. He rulef

from 1760-1820. He appointed Lord North as

prime minister in 1770. George III supported

Lord North's policies which then started the

American Revolution. Some of the things that

Lord North did was create the Stamp Act and the

Townshend Act. He later repealed them all besides

the one on tea. George III became a very unpopular

ruler and many attempts of assassination were done.

Sometimes he went insane and began to attack people.

He later died on January 9th 1820 due to insanity and

age.

Christopher Men

He ruled

Do not include Lord North.

I did not want information about when he was born or died. I wanted information about the era we are studying.

several assassinations were attempted

Marco Nelson 10/31/2013

These are not complete sentences.

The Cumberland Gap is a pass through the Cumberland Mountains...

What about Daniel Boone?

an explosive action

Sofia Pontarelli

He was born in Boston and studied at Harvard.

Was an American statesman and not the way to make a complete sentence.

direct tax by the British parliment

especially on the colonies of British

America. It required that many

printed materials be produced on

stamp paper in London.

Zachary Pecchia

Stamp Act needs to be capitalized.

a direct taxation by the British Parliament, especially on the colonies of North America.

North American British colonies. The group was formed to protect

the rights of the colonists and take to the streets against the abuses

of the british government. They are best Known for undertaking the

Boston Tea party in 1773. In reaction to the tea party Which lead to 

the intolerable Acts and a counter mobilzation by the patriots.

Jeffrey Wardle

The title must be capitalized

You copied a definition that you found on the internet or in the textbook because it is not a complete

sentence.

American is spelled wrong.

British should be capitalized

Patriots should be capitalized

Boston Tea Party capitalized, Intolerable capitalized

the pre- independence

Most of this does not make sense. It seems that you were cutting and pasting from somewhere else.

He felt impelled to administer the letter to British Law

and thus becoming more and more unpopular. He was

replaced by General Thomas Gage.

Zachary Higahm

You didn't spell your last name correctly.

He was governor of where?

I think that you mean that he felt he make sure that colonists followed British law completely.

Lia Ranallo

Emily Bovill

In 1762,

forced him to leave his village

Camryn Sandbach

These are not complete sentences

What do you mean he led the Townshend Acts?

Acts should be capitalized

Boone also fought in the Revolutionary war and was part of the Virginia general assembly. He soon fell in debt in Kentucky and moved to Missouri to live the rest of his life.

Brett Traficante

American must be capitalized

modern-day Kentucky

Wilderness Road, Cumberland Gap

passing the stamp act. this act taxes all paper goods

and the British did this because they were n debt

from the french and Indian war. Patrick Henry and James Otis

were the leader of the boycott of British good.  

A boycott is when you refuse to buy something and

in this case they didn't buy good from Britain until

they repealed the act.

-katie sleboda

The boycott

Parliament

Stamp Act

This act

were in

French and Indian WAr

leaders

did not

7,1763 by King George the lll. After Britain

won the Seven Years' War and gained land

in North America the Proclamation of 1763

made sure the colonists did not settle west

of the Appalachians.

Shirley Figueroa

King George III not King George the III

a law passed in 1765 that placed

new duties on legal documents and 

taxed newspapers, almanacs, playing 

cards, and dice. In October 1765 nine 

colonies sent delegates to what is now

know as the Stamp Act Congress. The

Stamp Act Congress was against the

Stamp Act. The delegates made petitions

to King George the third and to the

Parlaiment. They made the petitions to 

get rid of the Stamp Act. So to tie it all up,

the Stamp Act Congress was a group of

people who didnt like the Stamp Act and

was trying to get rid of it.

Elizarose Machado

Congress not congress

legal documents, newspapers, ...

In October 1765,

Delete the sentence The Stamp Act Congress was against the Stamp Act

Made petitions is a poor choice

King George III not the third

So to tie it all up is too informal

didn't should be did not

were trying to get rid of it