https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp en-us 2018-07-30 16:10:08 UTC 2025-12-09 21:23:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905075 1. Reference 
2. Good introduction and conclusion
3. Organization and structure ]]> 2018-09-05 10:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905075 https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905152 Well organization
Well unified
Clear introduction
Good paraphrasing
Good reference
Well written conclusion
Excellent range of vocabulary and Language structure]]> 2018-09-05 10:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905152 w441787308 https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905178 development of ideas
strength of arguments
well conclusion 
critically


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Did not combine each paragraph together;
Counter argument ,
No cohesive devices,

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format style 
range of vocabulary(formal)
defiin]]> 2018-09-05 10:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905638 https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905974 1. Grammar 
2. Linking word
3. Wrong form and wrong words
4. Non-academic eng]]> 2018-09-05 10:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277905974 https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277906102 Cohesion
Requires better accuracy of language and grammar]]> 2018-09-05 10:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277906102 https://padlet.com/emma_davies_8/9lhsm6eduosp/wish/277906959 Range of vocabulary;
Good format;

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