Mini Plenary(AFL) by Anila Binu https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37 When redrafting your mystery story, how can you include and develop the following key elements: a clear problem, logical clues, suspects with motives, and red herrings? Provide an example of how you would improve one of these elements in the current story. en-us 2024-11-10 19:39:19 UTC 2025-01-21 10:00:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4ac.png troycoutinho0502 https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298533739 I would re-write my mystery story by: making a plot twist/red herring,I would make my story more detailed with feelings and add tension and suspense

]]> 2025-01-21 09:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298533739 https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298533813 We can add red herring after you finished the story to add a plot twist in the story and make it more interesting

Selim ahmed

]]> 2025-01-21 09:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298533813 https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298534332 Mohab Mohamed:I would make the problem more attractive for the reader and add more clues and I will check my spellings and add more figurative languages and I will also add verbs and strong adjectives and more characters.

]]> 2025-01-21 09:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298534332 https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298534372 Taha

We can add elements of mystery story and add more suspense and tension and change word into details

]]> 2025-01-21 09:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298534372 https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298534776 Mohamed Ahmed Askar



We could use descriptive language, by adding many adjectives(sensory language) , we can use mystery phrases and words, and evaluate our story.

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we will improve our story and plot we will use

More detailed writing and add key elements

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We can add it and make it clearly by adding suspense and tension this helps the reader to understand more and make it more clearer and spellings grammar are important so we can understand and make it more interesting for the Examples:

Panic

Unease

Horror

Unexpectedly

Distress

Without hesitation

From the shadows shudder

Silently

In alarm…


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I Would Rewrite my story by making the detective have an least amount of clues so when he's about the answer the problem a Alibi or an red herring comes to intervene


I Would Make Alot of suspects so the detective can't select which suspect might be a criminal

]]> 2025-01-21 09:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298535582 charlesj_wss https://padlet.com/anilabinu1982/9l6trh9umlmg3v37/wish/3298537688 I would write it in detail with litterative language and adjectives and also make clues more interesting by adding more adjectives .

I could also make the red herring More hidden and well written also for the clues

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