https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w Please leave some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 12:27:54 UTC 2026-01-24 21:16:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634412 Mariana does her presentation well, she is knowledgeable about her subject and does not read word for word from her PowerPoint. However, she lacks when interacting with her audience. She has a good grasp on the concept she is proposing, but if she provided more eye contact and projects her voice more, it would have further enhanced her presentation. Overall, good job on the presentation.]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634412 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634469 -Try to make more eye contact 
- Try to elaborate your points
-interesting topics
- It would be better if you read off the slide instead of your iPad 
- Looks like you know what you are talking about 
- your knowledge on this topic is impressive 
-I like you took the perspective of both gender prisons rathen than just women’s prisons
  ]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634469 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634491 - Give deeper comments (It seems like you care deeply about this topic, but don’t display your knowledge on it fluently) 
- Be stronger and more confident in your voice. I think the level of your sound was okay, but you could have been louder if you wanted to :)]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634491 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634496 Attempt more eye contact. Nice recovery after JOHN so rudely interrupted you! 
The PowerPoint makes it obvious that you did your research. Nice use of contrasting color to emphasize your main points.
Try not reading directly from the PowerPoint so much.
Nice job using direct examples & statistics in your PowerPoint. The questions you raised displayed critical-level thinking!]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634496 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634498 I enjoyed your presentation. You made some very interesting points, especially the comparison of men to women. It seemed like you read off of the PowerPoint and avoiding eye contact with the audience. But overall, a good job :)]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634498 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634503 Kameron James
All you gotta do is speak a little louder and make eye contact. Other than that, you straight. ]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634503 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634508 You did not have much eye contact with the audience and you seemed to go on for a long time rather than summarizing your presentation. You informations and factual supports are strong and valid but sometimes too many facts can overwhelm your audience.]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634508 bayonjoh001 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634520 The information present is great. 

Just work on your confidence in public speaking.]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634520 shraitar000 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634523 - Eye contact
- Loosen up, get comfortable
- Great presentation, very factual]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634523 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634524 I wish she would have spoken up and felt more confident in the words she was using. She was looking st her iPad a lot but that's also understandable due to her PowerPoint being on her iPad. She just needs to work more on balancing the amount of eye contact and iPad attention. I liked that she added information that wasn't even on the slides! She had a lot of really good information and looked as if she spent a lot of time on it! ]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634524 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634529 - I think that this PowerPoint was great and very detailed.  
- You started off nervous but then gained confidence throughout your presentation.]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634529 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634536 - tell more about the backstory of the prisoner and their case
- talk alittle slower 
- good presentatiom]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634536 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634537 Great presentation but know what’s in your PowerPoint. Stand straight, speak up and properly.]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634537 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634550 - Have more eyecontact  with us 
- I like that you had your main points highlighted 
- Nice job at bring up another source while explaining
- I like the questions, it keeps us interested
- Try not to look at the slide as much

]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634550 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634560 Next time don't look too much at the screen and make occasional eye contact ]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634560 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634563 - try and give more eye contact to us 
- Interesting topic I like the individual you chose 
- try not to read from the slide 
-thanks for the extra information about transgender men didn’t know it was interesting
-interesting topic you did your research clearly overall great presentation ]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634563 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634587 -Great PowerPoint
- went into details and gave extra informa]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634587 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634620 -keep eye contact with the audience 
-try to make your sentences flow better 
-don't read off of the slides so much]]> 2017-09-27 12:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634620 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634626 You need to speak more fluidly and professionally, expect what you will say next

Interact with the audience, grab our attention 

Deliver more passion within your presentation 

DO NOT READ THE SLIDES TO US

Nice details on your PowerPoint 

Good job at nit staying stagna]]> 2017-09-27 12:56:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634626 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634695 -Next time, try making more direct eye contact with the audience and face forward more. You could pull your PowerPoint up on the iPad so you could look at that instead of the screen
- Perhaps include more pictures and videos in your next powerpoint
-I liked how you highlights the important text.]]> 2017-09-27 12:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634695 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634700 Powerpoint is very detailed. 

Just try to look at the audience more rather then reading of your ipad or the screen. 

The research and effort is clearly shown, just the delivery of the presentation is shakey

Genuinely interesting topic

Super thorough evidence]]> 2017-09-27 12:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634700 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634709 - Try to keep eye contact with the audience
- Speak up more so the audience can hear
- Be more expressive while talking 
- Present yourself with more confidence 
- Powerpoint was very detailed and had interesting information. It flowed well.
- Had many great points that backed up your argument
- Had good outside information that was not mentioned in the powerpoint ]]> 2017-09-27 12:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634709 https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634814 A little more eye contact
It’s good that you’re mentioning things that aren’t on the PowerPoint because it shows that you know what you’re talking about. ]]> 2017-09-27 12:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9kfvkg12qe4w/wish/191634814