https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33 1. Excels... 2. Needs improvement... 3. Question I have... en-us 2019-03-06 04:08:42 UTC 2019-03-06 17:37:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338500872 you cited, so that's good. But whatever you tried to say didn't make much sense, so you have to try to make it clear next time. did you re-read why you wrote ? ]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338500872 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338500920 This student did a good job citing the evidence, one suggestion would be to reread your work and make sure what you wrote makes sense.  ]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338500920 valenviv011 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501058 The most outstanding aspect of your work is how you have full sentences in your paragraph. One suggestion for you would be to double read what you write in order for you to catch any mistakes you might of committed while writing. Did you consider re-reading your writing?]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501058 howardym000 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501244 You did an terrific job on citing your evidence, but one thing I suggest is to make sure your sentences flow together and have the reader understand your point of view. I was wondering of you re-read what you wrote? Do you consider changing around some words or adding words to make your sentences flow more?  ]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501244 ortizfer0051 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501247 The student did a very good job at citing the evidence, next time don't forget to ask someone to check your work to write better, Did you ask anyone to proof read your work? ]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501247 dewalded000 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501383 You excel at writing full sentences. You could improve making your point of writing the paragraph more clear to understand.]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501383 amezcala0001 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501397 The author does not actually write a flexible paragraph where the output has multiple missing words and everything doesn't string together.]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501397 montemar046 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501415 Excellent job on citing the evidence but one suggestion would be re-read the writing and make sure it flows. One question I have is, did you consider find evidence that flows with the explanation?]]> 2019-03-06 17:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501415 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501451 Excellent job on punctuation, one suggestion would be to reread what you wrote in the future. One question i have is what were you trying to say?]]> 2019-03-06 17:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501451 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501592 The student did a great job citing his or her evidence. One suggestion will be reread your paragraph and make sure everything you say makes sense clearly.]]> 2019-03-06 17:25:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338501592 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502323 The greatest aspect of your work was citing your work, but i was wondering of you looked back at your work. Why did write this?]]> 2019-03-06 17:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502323 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502740 excellent job on your summarization of the story. 
next time you should have a peer check your work.
did you consider putting more detail into your writing.]]> 2019-03-06 17:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502740 ramirdes000 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502849 you did a great jog at citing but it didnt make sense overall so try to make it more clear maybe re-write it and read it over to make sure it makes sense.]]> 2019-03-06 17:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502849 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502898 The ]]> 2019-03-06 17:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338502898 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338503580 The student did  a decent job, i think they need to improve in there writing and making there sentences shorter.]]> 2019-03-06 17:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338503580 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338503711 Great job at citing in the paragraph, although you might want to elaborate better and make more sense into what you're saying.  ]]> 2019-03-06 17:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338503711 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338504316 2019-03-06 17:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338504316 jr915235 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338504885 You did okay but next time you should go over it before you finish because it didnt make sense ]]> 2019-03-06 17:30:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/9kezeildu33/wish/338504885