https://padlet.com/20walterz/9k7zf3lbw5jz ＡＥＳＴＨＥＴＩＣ en-us 2016-10-05 16:35:24 UTC 2025-11-20 19:36:12 UTC hello@padlet.com http://orig08.deviantart.net/242c/f/2016/191/2/3/siivagunner_by_rockylalonde-da9jyv1.png 20walterz https://padlet.com/20walterz/9k7zf3lbw5jz/wish/128560148 2016-10-05 16:47:42 UTC https://padlet.com/20walterz/9k7zf3lbw5jz/wish/128560148 20walterz https://padlet.com/20walterz/9k7zf3lbw5jz/wish/128560658 2016-10-05 16:48:44 UTC https://padlet.com/20walterz/9k7zf3lbw5jz/wish/128560658 20walterz https://padlet.com/20walterz/9k7zf3lbw5jz/wish/128561474 I think my essay on The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy lacked structure and specific examples.  I strayed from my main topic far too much.  My introduction paragraph could've used some reworking too.  I may have gotten to specific too fast.  Throughout my essay, I only had two quotes.  I put too much time into explanation and ended up going off topic, when I could've been more concise in my explanations and used more quotes from the text.

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