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2. free time time for hobbies
3. unpolluted air
4. midweek days off
5. can work remotely
6. quite environment]]> 2021-01-21 09:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109278636 Life in london https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109286911 1.extortionate rents
2. low quality of life
3. city accomodates the rich
4.]]> 2021-01-21 09:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109286911 shaistaqureshi https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109289608 Life outside London: running own coffee shop by the sea; opening an antique shop; work
remotely; lunchtime swims; midweek days off; quietness; fresh air; ‘do whatever you want’; more
free time; try out new hobbies (i.e. yoga). ]]> 2021-01-21 09:48:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109289608 Life in London: extortionate rents; poor quality of life; can’t afford to go out; can seem a ‘playground for the rich’; working all the time then staying in; not being to afford to try out new hobbies. shaistaqureshi https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109291514 2021-01-21 09:48:46 UTC https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1109291514 While both texts begin with an imperative-'meet' and 'free'-the adverts heading is much more impactful and gives clear connotations of freedom through the imperative language used. In addition, by using the possessive pronoun 'your' it gives the impression that the reader deserves to own the freedom and oppurtunities that london offers them. Overall the opening to the advert is shaistaqureshi https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1135628537 2021-01-28 10:23:46 UTC https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1135628537 While both texts begin with an imperative – ‘Meet’ and ‘Free’ – the advert’s heading is much punchier and more direct, with its simple imperative use of ‘Free’. In addition, by using the possessive pronoun ‘your’, it gives the impression that it is speaking directly to the reader, establishing a shared bond. shaistaqureshi https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1135631377 2021-01-28 10:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/shaistaqureshi/9iucpzooa03qdtu3/wish/1135631377