Persuasive Writing by Nick

Boris

2019-05-01 09:11:33 UTC

School Should Start an Hour Later

Are you sick to death of those early morning wake ups from your mum, trying to stuff your face with vegimite toast when you're half asleep at the table? I am, and I categorically believe school should start an hour later.

Firstly,

Finn z

2019-05-02 01:46:58 UTC

School should start an hour later

Are you getting a good night’s sleep? Well, i’m not. That’s why school should start an hour later.Ferstle if you have a enough sleep what means you

2019-05-02 01:47:04 UTC

Sophie
We should have no school
School should start a hour later....

Why do we get up really early for no reason we have lives why can’t be home schooled we have family’s to look after and pets school should never exited

School stands for six cruel hours of our lives
Math stands for mental abuse to humans
Homework stands for half of my energy waste on random knowledge

Who wants to sleep in but all because of school you get hardly enough sleep to get through the day do you want to fall asleep on your desk NOOO!

Malikah

2019-05-02 01:47:14 UTC

School should start an hour later

Are you tiered of your parents waking you up at 7 o’clock in the morning rushing you to eat breakfast and get dressed well I think I’ve solved that problem don’t you think school should start an hour later.

Firstly I strongly believe that WE NEED MORE SLEEEP!!! We cant learn if we don’t have enough sleep.kids should at least have 10 hours sleep

Addy

2019-05-02 01:47:21 UTC

School Should Start an Hour Later

Would you like an hour later to play your favourite video game with your friends????(like roblox)
Or stuffing breakfast in your mouth???? -_-(yeah not good)

Firstly , It’s Monday and the weekend has just finished you feel like sleep in but your mum yells at you to get up and she throws the blankets(>-< yeah BLaNkETs)off you . (WhAt ArE yOu DoInG iN mAh SwAmP|| =_= (get out off my room MUM!!!!!!!!) . When everyone get to school no one is productive because no one got enough sleep (-_- cuz your brothers blasted his loud music)IM NOT DONNNEE

2019-05-02 01:47:21 UTC

Harvey
School should’t Start an hour later because it well end at 4:00.pm
Would you like to be stuck at school at 4:00pm in the awfully hot weather
Firstly if school starts at 9:00am they will be lost of traffic sum kids will be late to school
Sum kids have to wat for their mum or dad to pick them so the traffic will be extremely bad so you may be home at 4:30.pm

Ty

2019-05-02 01:47:28 UTC

School should start a hour later

I strongly believe school should start a hour so you can have more free time in the morning. And are you sick and tired of wake up super early and still being brushed by your parents.

Study’s show kids that have eight hours + of sleep are more enajetick and are better at school work

School should start an hour later

2019-05-02 01:47:29 UTC

Marcus

Are you tired of getting up at seven in the morning and eating in a rush just to get to school at eight theirty?
I know you are sick of it that’s the reason school should start at nine theirty.

Firstly you need more energy to work and play think about us as kids with no energy and working are butts of with school work it like hard labor.

School should start an hour later

2019-05-02 01:47:30 UTC

Elliot

How do you feel about getting up super early just to get ready for school?

Firstly, Because getting up early is annoying it’s like getting up just to learn about useless stuff. Also you would have more times to walk the dog or watch some Television. Did you know that most people ride to school in the freezing weather so starting school an hour later solves this problem and many other.

Secondly, A lot of students don’t get enough sleep so the students are drowsy during class. In the morning students are not ready for quick pop up questions. Also School stands for seven/six cruel hours of our lives. I’m certain all students do not like getting up at 5:00a.m. For school

I am 1000000000% sure school should start an hour later. Are you sure you like getting up super early to answer super hard questions.

School should start an hour later

2019-05-02 01:47:31 UTC

Keno

Are you nuts to to think school is at the right times ?

Firstly. I strongly believe that it is ridiculous to wake up at night just to get some food down your throat and shuvel stuff in your bag ! ALL THAT JUST FOR REDICULOUS SCHOOL!

Secondly
`We need more sleep.
We need more sleep to grow and if we don’t we’ll be tini !

2019-05-02 01:47:42 UTC

Damian

School should start an hour later!

Are you sick and tired of those days when you want to sleep in but you have to go to school? Well, if school starts an hour later that’ll solve that and so many other problems.

Firstly, We can all agree that we need more time in the morning to get ready and do the thing s you need to do. You’ll have more time to pack your bag and more time to play with your pets. We’ll have way more time to brush our teeth and comb our hair, because right now we’re coming to school with messy hair and dirty teeth. We really need to have time to pack our lunch boxes so we actually have food to eat. We all can agree on that.

Secondly, when we do work in the morning everyone Is tired and gets questions wrong. Well if school starts an hour later we’ll have a fresh start to the school day and we won’t get yelled at by our teacher. Everyone will be happy!

Lastly, We all need our sleep. If kids don’t sleep nine hours or less we’ll be super tired on the school day. But we can stop this by making school start an hour later. I saw my brother once when he didn’t sleep and his hair was messed up his eyes had like twenty rings around it and his head was as red as a tomato

I know people say you can wake up earlier but kids our age CAN’T! We all have an alarm clock but kids like us ignore it. If school starts an hour later we can sleep in AND do the things we love in the morning.

I am 100% sure we need school to start an hour later later so we get our sleep, we can do the things we love and get a fresh start to the school day!

2019-05-02 01:47:45 UTC

Sommer

School shouldn’t start an hour later

How would u feel if you got one hour less of school not much time of learning.

I strongly believe More hours of school would make u smarter
IMAGINE the things u could to do when ur older
At school u can make so much friends with little kids,teachers and kids ur age
I had a friend who was so smart I will tell u some things what she was good at math,art,English
Just think what u could learn so much things ur mom can wake u up for school at 6:00am and u can still get ready for school then have five min to free time before going to school when u get to school There so much thing u could
Look forward to

When u start ur class

Grace

2019-05-02 01:47:57 UTC

School has to start an hour later!!!

Are you sick and tired of waking up an hour later to get ready for horrible school?

Firstly, you will be Stuffing your face with sticky toasted jam because your late for school and then you got a stain on you tee-shirt and you have to go to change your tee-shirt after you done that you have to school because your mum is at work

Ruby

2019-05-02 01:47:57 UTC

School has start an hour later

I strongly believe school must start an hour later
Have you hade enough of waking up early and getting out of your comfortable bed every single day
And scoffing down your breakfast and also chocking on it if school started an hour later all your

If you sleep in you get way more energy and you can run like the wind!!!

2019-05-02 01:47:59 UTC

Jay
Are you tired of getting up early in the morning and scoffing breakfast in your mouth?
Well that’s why school should start at 9:30am so you have more time to sleep and not eat breakfast in a rush.
Are you getting enough sleep at night? Are you sick and tired of waking up at 7:00am and rummaging around half asleep?

Our teachers should consider that it is a good idea to let us get to school at 9:30am I think even teachers would like to sleep in.

Marilyn

2019-05-02 01:48:01 UTC

I strongly recommend that school should start a hour later.
How you feel getting yelled by your mum to get up every morning?
Well you would be day dreaming about how you would be sleeping then going to
School is droll.you have to fill your mind with information you don’t want. For instants learning things from last year to this year.
Secondly walking to school not energetic

School Should Start an Hour Later

2019-05-02 01:48:04 UTC

Griffin

How would you feel if you woke up early just to go to silly school half asleep? I know right it's horrible even just to hear it. That’s why I think that schools should start an hour later.

8:30 in the morning is to early to early to do schoolwork and I know it.
I’m certain most students are sick and tired of waking up at silly o’clock just to spell words and add numbers together and
It has been proven that without a good sleep there is no enthusiasm and energy which is essential to learning,

School should start an hour later Reed

2019-05-02 01:48:07 UTC

How would you feel if you had to wake up early just to go to school half asleep not even able to eat break fast. school should start at 9:30.

Kids are too tired early in the morning. If we are being woken up at the time the roosters are crowing we will still be half asleep and not able to think in school.

School shouldn’t start an hour later

2019-05-02 01:48:55 UTC

Jada
I strongly believe that school shouldn’t start an hour later because you already enough time to get ready plus you don’t need any screen time before school because you won’t be so focus.

Firstly
How would you feel if you missed half of school why even go to school because your only spending a fey hours their

Liv

2019-05-02 01:50:20 UTC

School Should Start An Hour Later

Would you rather get up early for school or get to wait or play a game before school? You know we need school, I know we need school, everyone knows we need school, but if we really need to do it, do we have to give up out time with our family and friends?

First of all, when you wake up an get ready for school, you feel tired. That’s because you start waking up early an all you’re hours of non-sleep clock up and you just need to sleep. If school is one hour later, you get the chance to have a good day.

Secondly, AAAAAHH!!!! Nooooo!!!! I’m not done!!!!!!! D:

Ethan

2019-05-02 01:50:35 UTC

School should start an hour later
Do you hate school.? `getting up is boring because you have to get up early and get dressed in boring old uniform. I don’t it’s dumb we shall all wear free dress every day and year

Leaning g

2019-05-02 01:51:53 UTC

Armani

Should start an hour later. Are you tired of getting out of bed early and skofing your breakfast and buzzing to school.
Don’t you want to sleep in? cryky! Buckle up buckle roo for the drive because its learning with Armani on school no more watch YouTube of Logan Paul

Firstly I strongly believe we should have one hour of school because you dob’t have to bye warm clothes in the morning because it wil be warmer boys. Secondly it is extreamly important that us kids need to be inerjetic and active ok students! Thirdly

2019-05-02 01:53:17 UTC

Finn.D

Do you think school to start an hour later.

Most of us get tired at school and can’t concentrate l’ some don’t get enough sleep.
I believe this wowuld help me and l would have more time to concentrate on maths and stuff.

2019-05-02 01:54:25 UTC

Sophie
We shouldn’t d have no school
School should start an hour later....

Why do we just get up really early for no reason we have lives why can’t we be home schooled we have family’s to look after and pets school should never exited

School stands for six cruel hours of our lives
Math stand for mental abuse to humans
Homework stands for half of my energy wasted on Radom knowledge

Who wants to sleep in but we can’t all because of school who wants to fall asleep on our desk NOOOOOO!

Lily

2019-05-02 02:00:30 UTC

School should start an hour late
How would you feel getting up early in the morning just for school.
But if school started an hour later you could sleep in.

Firstly
I believe school should start an lat becauseyou can lay your favourite game on your iPad,phone or computer.
And you don’t have to rush to get ready for school in the morning or stuff your breakfast down your thought.

Evee

2019-05-02 02:04:29 UTC

School should start a hour later

Are you sick an tired or getting up and stuffing breakfast in your face ?

Firstly I strongly believe that School should start an hour later

Calum

2019-05-02 02:15:52 UTC

Are you sick of you alarm going of and your mum ripping your bed sheets of of you?
Six hours of our life wasted on wasted

2019-09-12 06:14:43 UTC

Harvey

Foxes
Angry and proud.
He angrily walks through bush.
Orange fur like the sun.
Legs like black cars.

Silent and alone.
He proudly guards his territory.
His eyes roll over like tiny balls.
In the darkness.