https://padlet.com/susana_paiz/9h9ezjzo7y8 Directions: Find your best revised sentence. Give us the before and the after sentence. Put your whole name on it. Comment/give feedback on one other post. en-us 2017-09-19 13:03:15 UTC 2017-09-19 16:14:38 UTC hello@padlet.com ashley_koshy https://padlet.com/susana_paiz/9h9ezjzo7y8/wish/188973237 2017-09-19 16:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/susana_paiz/9h9ezjzo7y8/wish/188973237