by Josh Davis

btbeats n bantz

2015-06-19 16:17:39 UTC

Jonathan Fisher

2015-06-19 16:17:51 UTC

Very good narrative piece. A compelling and clear story told with easy to understand graphics.

I like the idea of the masks, and how the main character is not some super-awesome-badass guy,

just a normal guy with a original job that has been made interesting and relatable.

The writing is fluid, ignoring the several linguistic errors.

Callum Matthews

joshdavis2014 — 2015-06-19 16:28:53 UTC

I like the art style and how it is set out, i like the different

kinds of masks, they are really unique and somewhat scary.

i like the mask that has like claws on the bottom, i feel like that one is the more epic on them all.

I would like to see the piece more cleaner, such as cleaning up some of the lines, because they look a bit out of place and some are overlapping

Ben Cornwell

joshdavis2014 — 2015-06-19 16:34:48 UTC

I liked the organisation of the work, the drawings looked better with the red in them. I thought that the text was nice too. Though I feel that some of the drawings were better than others as the linework seemed rushed or just not as good.

Liam Bratt

joshdavis2014 — 2015-06-19 16:38:58 UTC

I believe this work is pure decent because it is easy to

see and read what is happening without any difficulty. Also

the fact that 3D has been added to some aspects of the art to

make the environments look more realistic. Overall pretty dece.