Please leave your comments for 1B students! 2年目クラスの生徒たちにコメントお願いします！ by Hiroko Zeller

gibsonsensei — 2021-01-27 07:49:03 UTC

ローレンさんの漫画（？）に感動しました。皆それぞれ絵や写真を使って発表しているところが面白いと思いました。

hzeller1 — 2021-02-05 00:00:02 UTC

ギブソン先生、Screencastify,Google Slideなどのツールを使ってフォーマルなプレゼンテーションができるようになったことは、オンライン授業の一番の収穫です。ローレンさんの発表は、生徒達が「教師が予想していた以上のクオリティの作品を作ることができる」好例だと思います。

2021-02-05 18:26:36 UTC

誰もが素敵なビデオを持っています！

2021-02-06 23:27:12 UTC

この２Bクラスのみなさんは、日本語学習2年目ですよね。長くてくわしい家族の紹介（しょうかい）ができていてすごい！感心（かんしん）しました。Pronunciation and deliveryもとてもいいですね。これからも日本語や文化をいっぱい楽しんでくださいね:-)

aa33203 — 2021-02-08 18:27:15 UTC

あきお Frank S. Greene Middle School

2021-02-08 18:28:09 UTC

Hello Everyone, my name is きしょるらじゅもはぬ and I am in Period 1 Japanese 1A. I thought that Naomi-san did the best, because she had a good presentation with pronunciation and explanation, giving us most of the details about her family and personality.

2021-02-08 18:30:23 UTC

あいら　　
I really enjoyed all of the videos but i really enjoyed Naomi's because she was clear and easy to understand. Also because of the picture she used, it was very creative. :D

2021-02-08 18:30:26 UTC

グレグ. Greene Middle School. The best one for us was Naomi's. What I liked about her presentation, is that the pacing was good and the pictures really helped understand it. I think I could include the pictures as well.

2021-02-08 18:30:28 UTC

Greene - デイビット
I liked that you could say all of the information pretty fluently. In my video, I will probably include a slideshow.

2021-02-08 18:31:10 UTC

The Family Introductions are very good! -From

ディラン

2021-02-08 18:32:55 UTC

リバー, i like the drawings, i want to include drawings too

2021-02-08 18:38:00 UTC

日本語がとても上手で、私の生徒は、これって、日本語のイマージョンクラスだと思っていましたよ！！！楽しくみさせていただきました！ありがとうございます。💮💯

2021-02-08 18:57:43 UTC

アビ: Frank S. Greene MS. I liked the authentic accent and the amount of information. I will most likely include my name, age, grade, likes and dislikes, and more.

2021-02-08 19:00:06 UTC

私の名前はライアンです。I am from Greene Middle School and am 14 years old. I liked how each student had a different personality and told us about what they liked to do, interests, hobbies, etc. For example, my favorite video was Jacob's, as he described where he lived (Monterey) what he liked to do (skate board) his nationality (America).

2021-02-08 19:00:59 UTC

(Lia from Greene MS) I like how your videos talked about different hobbies and interests we have in America :)

2021-02-08 19:02:06 UTC

わたしのなまえはケシャブです。わたしはグリーン中学がうこうにいきます.i liked how one of the kids liked to skateboard, and i liked the drawings the kids did. I also liked hearing about other kids familys

2021-02-08 19:02:13 UTC

Lillian - Greene: i liked how each person had really good pronounciation

2021-02-08 19:03:02 UTC

ソフィーマイス

Greene Middle School

I liked how well structured the sentences were and how good their pronunciation and flow as. I could really understand what they were saying. Great job!

2021-02-08 19:03:03 UTC

I like how you said everything so smoothly. You probably put a lot of work and practice into this unit. Great job! (アイビー, Greene MS)

2021-02-08 19:04:19 UTC

my name is bobby, i live in palo alto and am 13 years old. i like carlo's video because he discribed his age(12) and that he is american and mexican

2021-02-08 19:05:17 UTC

エリカ - Green Middle School - I like how they included and went into detail about their likes and dislikes, and I will include that in my video.

2021-02-08 19:05:22 UTC

アンドリュー

Greene Middle School
I liked how you were very descriptive about yourself, including a lot of information.
If I were to do an introduction, i would try to be as descriptive as possible like Walter Colton's videos

ly40186 — 2021-02-08 19:05:36 UTC

リサ（Lisa Yan)

I’m 13 years old, I live in California, Palo Alto, and I go to school at Greene Middle school.

2021-02-08 19:06:16 UTC

シャンテル I live in Palo Alto, and I’m 14. I go to Greene Middle School. I liked that in all the videos they talked about what they liked and didn’t like. If I made a video I would do this too.

2021-02-08 19:09:31 UTC

私はロハンです私はグリン中学校いきます I liked how they had very fluid delivery

2021-02-08 19:14:43 UTC

リース、Greene Middle school, I like how fluent and smooth the transitions and speaking was, the pronunciation was good. Good Job!

2021-02-08 19:14:53 UTC

小林光、ぐりーん中学校三年生(13)
I watched Allison’s video, overall it was very good~ Some things to possibly improve on, less use of ‘私’, it is a little uncommon? (in introduction), certain tone/flow was sometimes a little too fast or slow (but it was still very understandable), and some syllables are under pronounced. Thank you for creating this video, Allison-san.

2021-02-08 19:15:28 UTC

私はイータンです。I go to Greene middle school. I liked how they said everything clearly.

2021-02-08 19:39:29 UTC

I liked how Paris was fluent. I would include that I like to ski. Benji (Jls)

2021-02-08 19:40:58 UTC

My favorite video was from Paris, the way he presented it was very clear and had a lot of energy. -Arden Lee. JLS california

il34775 — 2021-02-08 19:43:58 UTC

こんにちわ！バニラです！I liked the colorful drawings and decorations! I liked the pronunciations!

2021-02-08 19:45:02 UTC

クロイ jls - Allison's video is clear. I will include my parents personality.

2021-02-08 19:45:46 UTC

Andersen Tanriverdi, JLS. I liked how they talked clearly. I would include how many people in my family and who they are.

as32841 — 2021-02-08 19:47:25 UTC

The videos were great. I really liked the ones were people shared there screen to present and especially Lauran's when animated her presentation.
-Aaron, 13, Palo Alto

2021-02-08 19:49:22 UTC

わたしのなまえはジェイデンです I go to JLS

I liked Paris’s video the best. I was very clear

I am going to add what I don’t like for my video

2021-02-08 19:50:00 UTC

えみり　Emily Tang JLS- Allison's video was very clear, I would add my parent's hobbies and jobs.

2021-02-08 19:51:00 UTC

Nice introductions!
-Adam

2021-02-08 19:51:26 UTC

カイ JLS

I liked how you guys had videos with cool drawings in them. I am probably going to use the idea of including a real family portrait in the video.

2021-02-08 19:51:52 UTC

エイミー I found your pronunciation was on point, good job, -エイミー(we have the same name)

2021-02-08 19:53:18 UTC

My favorite video is Aulii's video. My suggestion for everyone is to speak slower and clearer. - キャサリン

2021-02-08 19:55:45 UTC

My name is ダニー and I'm from JLS middle school. I liked the drawings in one of the videos, and I will probably do some drawings in my video too.

2021-02-08 19:59:40 UTC

ジャック　JLs middle school

2021-02-08 20:19:34 UTC

ウィリアム JLS
I liked how well they spoke and they all introduced themselves well. I would include what I don't like in my self introduction.

2021-02-08 20:20:06 UTC

アチュロ-JLS
I liked the fact that they spoke fluently and without hesitation.
Something from their video that I will likely include in mine is the birthday date.

2021-02-08 20:20:44 UTC

Allison's introduction was very fluid and she really introduced herself.

2021-02-08 20:21:26 UTC

りしもらじお JLS

I liked the part where they described the family members with good detail.

I would include the ages of the siblings and parents.

2021-02-08 20:22:30 UTC

I think some of them used complicated vocabulary (that I don’t yet know how to use) so good job on that! I also plan to include what I like/dislike in my own video.

-ソフィア (JLS)

2021-02-08 20:22:57 UTC

JLS ナオミ
みんなは自己紹介ができるがとてもすごいです！
ゆっくり話して、もっと良かったになります。
日本語を勉強している続けるよ！頑張って💯

2021-02-08 20:23:53 UTC

ミラン　JLS 中学校　アランさんのビデオが一番良かったでした！面白かったです。でも、みんなさんのビデオも楽しかったです。がんばってね！

2021-02-08 20:24:07 UTC

JLSのサマンサです。I really liked how you guys spoke loud and clear, it seemed well rehearsed! Also, I heard some great pronunciation and well formed sentences. I plan to also include my likes, dislikes, and birthday in my introduction video. Excellent work!

2021-02-08 20:25:41 UTC

わたしはなまえはみあです、 I thought that the first video was good. Alison's pronunciation and delivery was nice, I could clearly understand what she was trying to say.

2021-02-08 20:25:56 UTC

２B クラスのビデオが好きです。みんあーさん、がんばります！
-ハナ、JLS

2021-02-08 20:36:15 UTC

ジホ (J.L. Stanford Middle School)

日本語2Bクラスのpronunciationとvocabularyは素晴らしです。でも、学生は早く話しました。僕のビデオもGeneral formatはkeepします。

2021-02-08 20:49:12 UTC

ジャック JLs middle school . I really like Lauren add this funny picture and create a scene

2021-02-09 00:00:02 UTC

I Liked Amys video because of how she/they were clear and how you were able to hear them clearly. When I do my family introduction I would use doodles or pictures for significant things. -めぐみ JLS Middle school

ベンジャミン (Benjamin)'s Post

2021-02-09 00:25:26 UTC

Name: Benjamin Yang
Age: 13 School: JLS
I liked Lauren's video because she created a picture to help explain her topic (in this case, her family). It was also very entertaining.

2021-02-09 01:20:38 UTC

I like Lauren's great pictures and creative scene.-ドリーン JLS

JLSとグリーン中学校のみなさん

hzeller1 — 2021-02-09 05:40:50 UTC

たくさんコメントありがとうございます！ぜんぶよみました。またサイトを見てくださいね。これからもどうぞよろしくおねがいします。(Zeller Sensei from Walter Colton MS)

2021-02-09 16:30:30 UTC

marvelous!!

素晴らしい!! Subarashī

2021-02-09 16:30:38 UTC

Good Job Allison!

2021-02-09 16:30:41 UTC

ありがと！！

まっくす

2021-02-09 17:07:28 UTC

School: Greene
I like Naomi's clear Japanese accent, and no hesitation.

Good job lauren

2021-02-09 20:03:11 UTC

りく (JLS)

2021-02-12 05:00:15 UTC

My favorite was Naomi's since they had a good pacing, but most of the introductions were very good. If I had to make an introduction, I would try to add lots of details. (But not too many)

2021-05-28 15:23:24 UTC

johanna used undertale music. i am happy now.

you guys are so good.

2021-05-28 15:37:25 UTC

Nice!

2021-05-28 16:16:24 UTC

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