https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9 What is something that you learned about narratives from our writing, and what is something you still want to work on in your narrative writing? en-us 2021-11-08 21:00:54 UTC 2021-11-09 16:39:23 UTC hello@padlet.com s1004042475 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876381634 A narrative take-away for me is how to write long stories.


In narrative, I am still going to work on how to end my story.]]> 2021-11-08 21:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876381634 s1004031990 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876383496 A narrative take away for me is putting Transition words for my story 

In narrative, I am still going to work on is put How to start a story and putting . in my story. these are what i want in my story ]]> 2021-11-08 21:16:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876383496 s1004033485 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876383898 A narrative take-away for me is editing stories. 
In narrative, I'm still going to work on transition words.]]> 2021-11-08 21:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876383898 s1004036404 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876384272 A narrative take-away for me is that adding similes and metaphors. Also how to start a story. 

In narrative, I still need to work on how to keep my little seed and spread it. ]]> 2021-11-08 21:17:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876384272 s1004035406 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876384347 A narrative  take-away for me is...

In narrative,I am still going to work on  my writing to get better bc I need to look at my writing to see if write my words are right . and to to a good ending for my writing. ]]> 2021-11-08 21:17:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876384347 s1004035927 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876385770 A narrative take-away for me is ending.

In narrative, I am still going to work on elaboration because sometimes it's hard for me to think of more things to write.]]> 2021-11-08 21:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876385770 s1004035864 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876385837 A narrative take-away for me is adding more details into your story.
In narrative, I am still going to work on elaboration. ]]> 2021-11-08 21:18:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876385837 s1004038822 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876385986 A narrative take-away for me is endings and beginnings.

In narrative, I am still gonna work on details, transitions and dialogue in my stories.]]> 2021-11-08 21:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876385986 s1004029753 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876387038

a narrative take-away I am still going on my end of my story
In narrative i am still going to work on elaboration because i can put this for my story. to see the reader would like my story.]]> 2021-11-08 21:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876387038 s1004034406 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876387606 A narrative take-away for me is putting me
Additionally,  for my story  

In narrative, I am still going to work on
how to end my story.

]]> 2021-11-08 21:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876387606 s1004042420 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876388045 A narrative take-away for me is adding better transitions in my stories.

In narrative, I am still going to work on elaboration. ]]> 2021-11-08 21:19:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876388045 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876390397 A narative take-away for is puting pics and adding music

i'm working on mine :/ so sorry i need to work on ending and i like mine a lot O-O U-U  
also when u use transiton words you can put it some whee it makes sense]]> 2021-11-08 21:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876390397 s1004035866 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876392108 A narratives take-away for me is to keep writing more so you can make a small short story into a big long story.

In narrative, I am still going to work on is transition words. ]]> 2021-11-08 21:21:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876392108 s1004035425 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876394481 A narrative take-away for me is making my story real


In narrative,I am still going to work on how to spell better on my story]]> 2021-11-08 21:23:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876394481 s1004036668 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876396542 A narrative take-away for me is putting in some transition words on my story's.


In narrative, I am still going to how to end my story.

]]> 2021-11-08 21:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876396542 s1004029885 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876397690 A narrative take-away for me is using punctuation and spelling.

In a narrative, I need to work on when to use commas and work on it quicker.]]> 2021-11-08 21:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876397690 kelsey_anderson1 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876398397 A narrative take-away for me is...

In narrative, I am still going to work on...]]> 2021-11-08 21:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876398397 s1004046899 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876404947 A narrative take-away for me is.....
adding more detail and excitement as well as ending each paragraph

What I really want to improve on is dialogue. I also want to work on my transition words.]]> 2021-11-08 21:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876404947 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876409010 A narrative take-away for me is 

In narrative, I am still going to work on get better

]]> 2021-11-08 21:31:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876409010 s1004034983 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876605382 A narrative take-away for me is...

In narrative, I am still going to work on how to not say I a lot,I want to say myself. Another thing that I want to work on is using paragraphs  because if the paragraph is not long then I feel like its not good. The last thing that I need to work on is Simile. ]]> 2021-11-08 23:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1876605382 https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1877211657 in my narrative,I should keep on working on my seed making it in 2 slices of the watermelon.]]> 2021-11-09 04:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kelsey_anderson1/9fbzg7s7bdoho6k9/wish/1877211657