https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be Made with ♥ en-us 2018-09-04 02:58:52 UTC 2021-05-24 21:19:46 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Balance.png ARamanlal123 https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/277766435 Hello, this padlet is there to improve your writing. Feel free to write anything and I will give feedback on your writing. Enjoy! ]]> 2018-09-04 21:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/277766435 ARamanlal123 https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/279206293 Sentence: She looked behind her as death crept. It was time to jump. ]]> 2018-09-09 22:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/279206293 https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/280175688 She looked behind her as death crept. It was time to jump. It was time to fly. As she spread her white angelic wings, she sprinted and ran towards the breeze. She was then next to several new clean bed sheets floating in the light blue sky. It seemed like day and night was sitting next to each other.]]> 2018-09-12 03:05:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/280175688 ARamanlal123 https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/283170463 I really like the way you utilize short sentences to create a consummate and laconic short story. I also like how you used describing words. Next time, include a conflict of some sort that your character is facing. Perhaps also include a second character. Despite this, Well Done!]]> 2018-09-18 21:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/283170463 https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/283234298 *Carrying on the story*                                                   She then recognized a familiar fragrance in the atmosphere... A similar smell that reminded her of her childhood home when her whole family lived together, before her parents divorced and she was separated from her other half, her twin brother. While being immersed in her thoughts, she heard a high voice calling her name. "Hey Bella!" Turning around, a tall figure was coming closer and closer, fading from the pitch darkness. Unlike his cheerful voice, his body was completely different. He was 6ft tall and muscular, which is quite bigger compared to other kids his age. Right when they were one meter apart from each other, a strong force pushed them away, preventing them to go in contact. Wonder why?]]> 2018-09-19 03:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/283234298 https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/286737357 There was one thing different to Ben and Bella's family compared to the other families, which was that they were the only family which had twins. And right now, you may be thinking 'It's only just one more kid, stop freaking out like it's a curse or something'. Well guess what? It's a damn curse. The curse started long long ago, and still is living curse. It is passed on or starts from any family that has twins. And the effects? They are deadly. Having twins are thought that a spirit or ghost which followed the 'normal' baby into the world. When a twin is born, normally the smaller one is killed because it seems 'weaker' than the other. But when Ben and Bella was born, they were the exact same weight and height, so it was impossible to choose which baby to kill. So, they just left both babies alive, but the family had to lie to all their relatives and friends saying that they weren't twins and were born separately.]]> 2018-09-27 20:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ARamanlal123/9eixvy01n5be/wish/286737357