Revising Our Stop and Jots by https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m en-us 2020-10-26 18:29:44 UTC 2025-11-02 01:46:21 UTC hello@padlet.com Miss Kennedy skennedy93 https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/880347725 Chief Burkholder is upset. ]]> 2020-11-01 19:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/880347725 Miss Kennedy skennedy93 https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/880348812 Chief Burkholder does not appreciate that she was left out of the case meeting. I know this because she pushed passed Glock, and rolled her eyes. This makes me realize she is really dedicated to her work as an officer. ]]> 2020-11-01 19:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/880348812 Miss Kennedy skennedy93 https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/880355135 1) text evidence 
2) add more detail 
3) make an interpretation about Chief Burkholder's character ]]> 2020-11-01 19:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/880355135 https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882513359 2020-11-02 14:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882513359 Amy https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882513652  Ivy  does not know how to do a cartwheel. Bean and Leo never get along]]> 2020-11-02 14:50:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882513652 nico https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882514079 niles is a tatel tale and aways douse whats wright he always says if you do something wrong but it makes a right its good he also anoyes miles because he thinks he parked the car on to the stars


also my outher one is 
niles is a tatle tatle and he sucks]]> 2020-11-02 14:51:04 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882514079 Milo https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882515827 Larry is pretty dumb.]]> 2020-11-02 14:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882515827 Diya https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882516143 Harry was very nervis and upset.]]> 2020-11-02 14:51:34 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882516143 Owen https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882519956 it is prank day and Nate filled the teachers lounge with packing peanuts]]> 2020-11-02 14:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882519956 Alana Fitzgerald https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882520308 Humphery is very kind. He loves seeing kids opening and making gifts. In the story Holy says, ¨I am going to make every person in the school a gift!¨ And Humphery says, ¨I can´t wait to see all of the kids gifts!¨]]> 2020-11-02 14:52:33 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882520308 Ivy does not know how to do a cartwheel. Bean and Leo never get along there always fighting about who gets the Side field. Ivy and Bean were making a blood oath but instead they use there spit! https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882520855 2020-11-02 14:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882520855 anya https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882522583 Ellie only cars adout the spot light and her friends support every thing Ellie does.]]> 2020-11-02 14:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882522583 Kyle https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882524603 Dan and his sister found the two missing pages of the notebook]]> 2020-11-02 14:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882524603 Milo https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882524881 Larry is pretty dumb because he tried to trap Zebra by bricking up  Zebra's doors and windows so Zebra couldn't get out so he can eat him, but Larry couldn't get in.]]> 2020-11-02 14:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882524881 Diya https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882528444 Harry was very nrves becaus he had acstra  lesins  with Snape and did not know what it is for and why it was with Snape.]]> 2020-11-02 14:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882528444 Aariyana Patel https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882528646 An inference/character trait for Piper shows throughout the book. She hates beauty and always wears faded and clothes and has choppy clothes.]]> 2020-11-02 14:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882528646 Sahil https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882528650 My stop and joy is about bad kitty and how he wants to run for president for the kitties.]]> 2020-11-02 14:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882528650 Bid Nate slitent but deadly https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882530193 2020-11-02 14:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882530193 Amy https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882532801 1) Add more details  
2) Only add important parts
3) Add everything that's happening!
4) Add More sentences



]]> 2020-11-02 14:55:17 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882532801 anya https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882533254 Ellie tryed talking to her friends but the just were like in a mad mood to her and then she fixed that by giveing them a note and saying will you forgive me in the hall ways and they said yep.]]> 2020-11-02 14:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882533254 Kyle https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882533325 Dan and Amy were So happy that they found the location of the notebook ,but they both knew that  they could not celebrate yet because all the other competiters were richer and they did not have the resources to keep it safe]]> 2020-11-02 14:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882533325 Riley https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882534137 In my book Nate nothing really interesting happened but Nate was raking the leafs and franics cat was in the ways so Nate said''move your cat but franic'' said you do it  you want to move him and Nate said its your cat Franic tried but it hised so that really makes me realize that Nate likes to aruge.

]]> 2020-11-02 14:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882534137 miles is a good prankster he did one very big prank so far with a fake person and he got alot of presents because of it and he is thinking if he going to do the speach that the person is not real or not because he might get hate and people fighting him bacause they baught presents for a fake person. https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882535578 2020-11-02 14:55:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882535578 Ethan Tang https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882535913 Katniss is calm, she is also caring]]> 2020-11-02 14:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882535913 Maeve https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882536193 Logan was excited that Miles's family was coming over for dinner, it made him feel like a normal kid.]]> 2020-11-02 14:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882536193 Arianna K. https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882536299 Melody was feeling really happy about butterscotch (there dog)]]> 2020-11-02 14:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882536299 Owen https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882536966 It was prank day at Nate's school and he got to school early and missed walking to school with his friends but when he got there he filled the teachers lounge with packing  peanuts]]> 2020-11-02 14:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882536966 Ethan Tang https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882540010 I think Katniss is very calm. Even though she doesn't like something.  She is also very caring. I think this because when her sister Prim got chosen in the Hunger Games and Katniss immediately wanted to be switched with her. This makes me realize she really cares about her sister.]]> 2020-11-02 14:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882540010 Diya https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882542193 1) text evedins 
2) more details
3) made it clear that Harry dislicet Snpae.]]> 2020-11-02 14:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882542193 Amanda Engelhardt https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882543226 The bed was  falling throught the floor and now Ms watson thinks mercy is going to get the fire department but really what she is looking for is toast 

]]> 2020-11-02 14:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882543226 Ethan Tang https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882545452 I made sure to....
1)Add detail
2)Text evidence]]> 2020-11-02 14:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882545452 Sahil https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882545502 I think bad kitty is desperate to be president because he wants to stop stray cats and thinks it as if it is a king. This makes me realize that bad kitty really likes it when as the upperhand]]> 2020-11-02 14:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882545502 anya https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882546167  I added more details 
and I added more names because i said the friends.]]> 2020-11-02 14:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882546167 connor https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882546874 my stop and jot is about 2 kids who are traveling around the world]]> 2020-11-02 14:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882546874 Aariyana Patel https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882546887  Piper hates beauty. I know this because when she had the blessing of Aphrodite she tried so hard to take of her nice clothes but every time she did, they would come back. Aphrodite is the goddess of love and beauty and I cannot believe Piper is a daughter of Aphrodite because she is the total opposite. Also, all of the time, 
( except the blessing of Aphrodite) Piper wears jeans or pants, faded shirts and she has choppy hair. Also when they were in a different place by Aphrodite, Aphrodite changed Piper's clothing into a teal dress and Piper grumbled: "Why mom, oh why." This makes me realize that Piper doesn't care one bit about looks, beauty and clothing. ]]> 2020-11-02 14:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882546887 Ryan https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882547784 Nate is a bad student because he is always sleeping in class

]]> 2020-11-02 14:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882547784 Owen https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882549922 1).  more text evidence 
2). More sentences
3). More detail]]> 2020-11-02 14:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882549922 nico https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882550267 1) have more than 3 sentences
2) have the carters name
3) made shure that it tells the reader that whats happning in the story ]]> 2020-11-02 14:59:24 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882550267 Maeve https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882550345 currently in my story, Logan's parents invite Mile's parents over for dinner. Then, shockingly, Logan's parents let Miles sleepover. And, they get to sleep in Logan's favorite place in the factory, the tropical room!]]> 2020-11-02 14:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882550345 Julie Richardson https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882550664 Kristy has changed she's being really nice to the new. girl but she still refuses to watch the Watson's.

]]> 2020-11-02 14:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882550664 Arianna K. https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882551244 Melody is feeling happy about Butterscotch. She said I am so lucky to have butter scotch, butterscotch always is there for Melody to. Melody always takes care of Butter scotch. This makes me reliaze that Melody likes pets. ]]> 2020-11-02 14:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882551244 Alana https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882552720 Humphery is very kind.]]> 2020-11-02 14:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882552720 Morgan Smile https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882554111 What I wrote first is... Raina and her town were sad because there was a flood 

After Raina and her town had a huge flood the town was upset. That was not only important but shocking. Thankfully her town stayed alive. ¨A huge bridge fell down in town!¨]]> 2020-11-02 15:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882554111 connor https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882555808 jack and annie are nervos that they will get caught, jack said what happens if we get caught i dont now annie said.]]> 2020-11-02 15:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882555808 Milo https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882556830 1) More sentences
2) made sure the reader knows whats happening]]> 2020-11-02 15:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882556830 Julie Richardson https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882557816 Krsist is being different she starting to be nice. to everybody and enjoy the new girl and is being nice to the new girl.  she also still Rufuses to watch the Watson's.

]]> 2020-11-02 15:01:13 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882557816 Maeve https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882560522 1). Added more sentences]]> 2020-11-02 15:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882560522 Alana https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882561634 I made sure to...
1 add more sentences.
2  add more text evidence.
3 add more detail ]]> 2020-11-02 15:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882561634 connor https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882565127 i have text evidence.
charter traits
and patterns]]> 2020-11-02 15:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882565127 Julie Richardson https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882569126 I made sure that I added more to the stop and jot]]> 2020-11-02 15:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882569126 Amanda Engelhardt https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882589708 the bed is falling throught the floor and mercy got off the bed. And Ms watson thinks that mercy is is going to get the fire deparerentment ]]> 2020-11-02 15:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/882589708 Arianna K. https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/883536635 1.  more sentances 
  2.  feelings 
3. text evidence 
 4. add more detailes 
5. also added what it makes me realize 
]]> 2020-11-02 18:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/883536635 Aariyana Patel https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/883637701 I added:
1. more details
2.  Put more of Piper's background 
( who her mom was)
3. Added an interpretation ( this makes me realize.)
4. Added how Piper gets the blessing of Aphrodite and tries to take it off.
5. Put in more evidence and put in dialogue.]]> 2020-11-02 18:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/883637701 Sahil https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/888020169 Add more sentences 
add an inference
add a trait
added his point of view]]> 2020-11-03 22:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/888020169 Amanda Engelhardt https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/906656824 Leroy wanted to be a cowboy so he started stealing stuff. He thought he would go to the Watson house and steal their stuff.  Eugenia called the police, but the fireman heard screaming.  They ran to the Watson house.  Mercy stoped Leroy by sitting on him. The policeman took Leroy to the car. Ms Watson was glad it was over. She was a little sad because she knew that he did not mean to steal there stuff. Mrs. Watson made toast for the firemen, policeman and the neighbor. ]]> 2020-11-10 01:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/906656824 Amanda https://padlet.com/skennedy93/9e6369loqf6h9z0m/wish/906764127 1 Add the important parts of the story. 
2 I took some stuff out of my writing. 
 3 I added more sentences. 

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