Narratives that contain flashbacks by Miss Milton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1 en-us 2017-01-17 18:21:10 UTC 2023-03-27 09:21:40 UTC hello@padlet.com Learning Objective: To write an opening and flashback for a narrative missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147634882  Success Criteria: 
Must: Include speech
Should: Use a range of vocabulary 
Could:  Vary sentence structure 

Expectation:
At least one page- quailty counts for more than quantity at this stage in the writing process.

]]> 2017-01-17 18:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147634882 Spelling Rules: missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147635332 2017-01-17 18:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147635332 Punctuation Rules: missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147636477 2017-01-17 18:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147636477 missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147636762 2017-01-17 18:29:58 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147636762 Purple Group: Inverted Commas for speech missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147637376 " Did you get to Platform 9 3/4 okay?" asked Hagrid. 
"Yes I replied safely", Harry replied. ]]> 2017-01-17 18:31:29 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147637376 Ellipsis missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147639107
 Ellipses can express hesitation, changes of mood, suspense, or thoughts trailing off. Writers also use ellipses to indicate a pause or wavering in an otherwise straightforward sentence.

Examples from Harry Potter
"That car's new, he's not sitting in it alone. . . ." 

"I . . . don't . . . want . . . him . . . t-t-to come!" Dudley yelled   ]]> 2017-01-17 18:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147639107 Semi-Colon missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147640235 Two independent clauses can be joined using a semi-colon (Providing a FANBOY would join the clauses) 

Examples in literature:


The path to the castle is paved with stone; trees line and shade the travellers. ( The Magic City) 

The house he lived in, on the edge of the town, was quite small; but his garden was very large and had a wide lawn and stone seats and weeping-willows hanging over (Wizard of Oz)]]> 2017-01-17 18:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147640235 Relative clauses/ pronouns missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147642076 2017-01-17 18:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147642076 Spot the mistake! missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147642564 2017-01-17 18:45:28 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147642564 Dashes missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147642699 Don't ask questions - that was the first rule for a quiet life with the Dursleys.   (Harry Potter)]]> 2017-01-17 18:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147642699 missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147644066 2017-01-17 18:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147644066 Conjunctions missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147644828 2017-01-17 18:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147644828 Brackets missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147649167 "You could just leave me here," Harry put in hopefully (he'd be able to watch what he wanted on television for a change and maybe even have a go on Dudley's computer).  ]]> 2017-01-17 19:02:36 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147649167 WAGOLL missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147657746 2017-01-17 19:25:57 UTC https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147657746 Short sentences: missmilton https://padlet.com/missmilton/Narratives_with_flashacks1/wish/147665332 "Marley was dead, to begin with" (Charles Dickins
"Sometimes there’s no warning" (Chronicles)
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die.” (The Book Thief )

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