5th Period Peer Feedback by Dena Green https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219 Paste your lead. Give feedback to 1 student in each column. en-us 2020-12-09 03:52:52 UTC 2024-05-17 04:58:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f99d.png EXAMPLE 1 dgreen92 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1000883507 I was startled by the annoying loud alarm clock on my phone. "OH my goodness why does school have to be a loop!” I jumped out of my bed too fast and i got very dizzy. Some time later I went to the bathroom and did my business. For a long time i finally get out of the shower and went to my room to change. As soon as i was done changing I saw out the window and it was foggy. ”Hmm...I wonder how today is going to be?” ]]> 2020-12-09 03:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1000883507 EXAMPLE 2 dgreen92 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1000883770 On new years day my uncle asked me if I would be the best man at his wedding. ]]> 2020-12-09 03:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1000883770 My NAME dgreen92 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007611395 Have you ever spent 8 hours on a computer? Well, everyday, I spend close to that for remote teaching. I have to take attendance, lesson plan, teach advisory, history, and English. If that’s not enough, I then spend another hour conducting office hours. If it’s a long day, then I have meetings!   My eyes get very tired.]]> 2020-12-10 19:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007611395 emjhay gundremj https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007611832 HEY EMJHAY COME ON WE´RE GONNA BE LATE!¨ my dad yelled as I packed my bags ¨OK JUST A MINUTE¨. I went downstairs and I saw my mama, my papa, my cousin, my uncle and my aunties and lolas (grandmas) putting all our bags in the van ¨ok do you have all your stuffs¨ my dad asked ¨opo (yes in tagalog)¨ I said to my dad ¨are you sure?¨ my dad asked twice ¨ ¨opo I promise I got all my stuff¨ I replied, After that we went inside the van and drove to the airport. I was so excited at that time because 1. I haven't been in a plane before and 2. I was going to america.]]> 2020-12-10 19:09:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007611832 Lorenzo Sablan sablalor https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007613188 Have you ever rushed to class because you were late? Well try doing that without knowing your full schedule and ONLINE, pretty difficult right? Well that happened to me. Let me tell you how this happened...]]> 2020-12-10 19:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007613188 slater JACK https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007613681 Man plane rides can be a huge pain! Even when you are going somewhere that you have wanted to go for the longest time, can easily be ruined by a plane ride. I realized though that after taking off its not too bad but that's not what we're talking about today. 


]]> 2020-12-10 19:09:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007613681 Larissa tomaskin tomaslar https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007615766 Have you ever been camping?well i did and it didn't go as well as i thought.i went camping it was my first time going with my uncle he usually didn't take me because of how accident prone i was,everything was going fine I was running around having fun and being weird when i saw this mound of dirt so I yelled out to my uncle "whats this thing on the ground!!" my uncle just told me not to go near it but i didn't list and i poked it with my pig stuffed animal and a bunch of ants came flooding out!]]> 2020-12-10 19:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007615766 zakiah camaczak https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007616555 I could see the outlines of the clouds and the leaves of the trees blowing in the wind.]]> 2020-12-10 19:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007616555 Danae https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007617251 Me and my sister were playing Minecraft when we saw a sheep and made it our pet, then named him Jeb. Jeb became our imaginary friend, and we started talking to Jeb as a joke. Then weird stuff started to happen.


]]> 2020-12-10 19:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007617251 Madilyn https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007626834 Have you ever moved before? Well I have and I haven't even been to the place. It would have took us 15 hours but it took us 24 hours. 24 hours in the car! 

]]> 2020-12-10 19:12:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007626834 Brody brashbro https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007629827  It started out in 5th grade when Brody was in band. The principal got on the intercom and said “ School will be cancelled until further notice. Stay safe and have a great rest of the school year.” I was happy until I figured out I still had to do school. My teacher Mrs. Crain, had to get on a zoom meeting and teach us math or ELA. By the end of the school year we had summer break and that I was happy about.

]]> 2020-12-10 19:13:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007629827 Jaydn staples https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007629978 2020-12-10 19:13:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007629978 Lead kyianang https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007631441 “Mommy! Mommy!” My younger self screamed and laughed as I ran into my mothers arms. “Yana’s chasing after me!” I screamed, and my older sister ran forward and jumped to me before I could reach out for my mom. We both screamed and laughed as my sister tackled me to the ground and started tickling me. 

]]> 2020-12-10 19:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007631441 Zoey Kline https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007631935 2020-12-10 19:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007631935 Lia Lloyd lloydala https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007632523 You probably know what its like to be without your friends for a weekend. Can you imagine a few months? Maybe almost a year? Its hard and not fun at all.


]]> 2020-12-10 19:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007632523 Aulaya whitfaul https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007635753 Have you ever realised that you have done exactly the same thing again? ]]> 2020-12-10 19:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007635753 JUDY https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007636609 WHO WAS THERE 

whole family

WHAT WERE YOU DOING

i was cleaning my little bros room and did not see the glass

DID IT HURT

i did not feel any thing and i dont know

i get extremely hot and my back of my neck turns red

WAS THERE ALOT OF BLOOD?

yes a ton of it we had to was the cloths and towels 4 times to get the blood out

DID YOU SCREAM?

i yelled for my mom bloody murdur

DID YOU HAVE A POTTY MOUTH?

Nope

WHO HELPED YOU AND HOW?

my mom took me to the dinning room table and yelled for my dad and every time i started to drift off she slapped me

yes my dad was carrying me down the stairs then i screamed and woke up my sister bekah and she had to hold it the whole time until we got on post
HOW LONG WERE YOU IN THE HOSPITAL?
about 6 hours
did they say any thing weird in the hospital?
yes this one doctor was talking about eating a tarantula
what did you do when you got home
?
we got Slurpee's and then McDonalds

HOW LONG TILL YOU COULD WALK?
like a month


]]> 2020-12-10 19:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007636609 Danya Gentry gentrdan1 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007658553 2020-12-10 19:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007658553 Zoey https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007660416 n the begining of the year people got this vires that we call covid-19 aka corovires  and you are prprobley like whats covid. Covid is a deady world wide vieres that left us all in a pamdemict there was nothing at stores because people were going crazy and buying everything. Also we had to do school some way. So we had to start remote learning witch was an app on the computer call ZOOM.

]]> 2020-12-10 19:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007660416 samir mohamed https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007664551 Have you had to stay home 24/7 every day. Well, I did, we couldn't go outside, to the store, to the park, and the movie theater at all. We have to go to school in zoom which sound not bad but it comes bad when teacher voice start glitching and you keep hearing a really loud sound and when your teacher about to tell us what to do, the screen freeze which you might spend 30 minutes trying to join the zoom again and top of that  we have nothing to do just staying home and  playing chess.

]]> 2020-12-10 19:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007664551 Jaydn Staples https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007666906 Have you ever played video games all day? Well  I do every weekend  every  weekend I play from after i brush my teeth and hair to 11o clock at night on the weekend.Everyday on the week days are a lot of work, I have Advisory health,math,science on monday and wednesday,then on tuesday and thursday I got art,elinglish,and social studies.]]> 2020-12-10 19:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007666906 https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007667855 2020-12-10 19:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007667855 Mia Mozer miamozer https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007672774 “Mom I want a cat.” I said.
“We cant Mia, we already have a dog so we can’t.“ said my mom. I screamed and threw myself on the ground. I had been asking for weeks and I wanted one so bad! Even though I was in first grade, this was no way to act. I wiped the cold tears off my cheeks and stomped to my room.

]]> 2020-12-10 19:22:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007672774 Tayzo https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007684036 Have you ever had to finish the school year online because of a pandemic? Have you had to say goodbye to your school the last time, through drive thru? I had to and well, it was weird and a bit stressful, but here’s how it went.]]> 2020-12-10 19:25:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007684036 Alex He https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007690263 Wow,this is the first time put his foot in me,it.it.it,it is stinky,and it is warm,when is the last time this person take a shower,will,I am just a shoe,and I can’t talk,so,I can only endure,and that sucks...]]> 2020-12-10 19:26:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007690263 response from slater to Larissa https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007723187 2020-12-10 19:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007723187 Jaden Lucas lucasjad https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007746083 When I opened the front door to find a package there, I was excited. When I realized that it was the Bark Box for Licorice, my all black doggo, I was even more excited. “I can’t wait to see what she got!” I thought to myself as my mom opened the package.]]> 2020-12-10 19:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007746083 Alexander https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007759619 2020-12-10 19:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1007759619 Colt Bowlan https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1018053005 Would you like to know a secret about me that no one else knows? Most people don’t know that I like to build templates. What is a template you ask? A template is a square drawing with a x in it and a deformed smiley face to adapt to its new face. All templates are different in form, shape, or size, all of them have a new appearance for example one can be an computer, another can be a ring ext. ]]> 2020-12-14 21:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1018053005 Edrick cardoedr https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1018610430 Last summer i went to legoland and it was amazing and we had to drive for 2 day and it was boring but not boring when i went to the swimming pool in the hotel my brother had fun in hotel and i we were there in the lego land first we rent a hotel for 2 days then we went to the lego shop then explore the lego land we went to the star war lego and it was fun then we went to a movie then tomorrow we went to the pool but i had fun then we had to go]]> 2020-12-15 02:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1018610430 Luke https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1025152375 Have you ever made a video game before? Of course not because youre just a child. Anyways when I grow up I might become a game designer. Its gonna be cooooool.]]> 2020-12-16 18:19:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dgreen92/9ctvvxdhazipm219/wish/1025152375