Writing Check-In by Maggie Ray https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml Emo and Intel on the process so far en-us 2017-10-12 18:57:43 UTC 2017-10-13 12:36:00 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr Ray: maggie_ray https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196597708 Please take a moment to give me some feedback on yesterday's "stations."  Does this process work for you?  What else do you need from me?  Please post anonymously and with school-friendly material. ]]> 2017-10-12 18:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196597708 Worked Well https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196651580 2017-10-12 22:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196651580 This process helped me. https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196666412 2017-10-13 00:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196666412 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762015 Very helpful! Gave me a template of the things you look for in my writing.]]> 2017-10-13 11:45:13 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762015 Gave me a better idea of what I need to put in my writing https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762471 2017-10-13 11:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762471 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762495 The outline was helpful and guided me in the right direction.]]> 2017-10-13 11:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762495 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762666 It helped me a lot]]> 2017-10-13 11:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762666 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762778 This was very helpful ]]> 2017-10-13 11:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762778 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762962 It was fun and helpful]]> 2017-10-13 11:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196762962 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763129 very helpful gives me the several chances to revise ]]> 2017-10-13 11:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763129 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763225 It was very helpful. The introduction outline really helped. The SEXI worksheet showed me what I needed to add.]]> 2017-10-13 11:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763225 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763536 The worksheets were vary helpful and gave me a good idea on what to do to my essay to improve it]]> 2017-10-13 11:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763536 The sexi writing worksheet and the opening paragraph/thesis statement revision activity worksheet were very useful because they helped me in polishing my introductory paragraph, my body paragraphs, and my concluding paragraph based on the 7 steps and statement, explanation, example, and interpretation. What I want from you is to revise my essay to make sure is correct and so I can delete the errors or mistakes I made on it. https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763969 2017-10-13 11:53:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196763969 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196764701 The outlines were helpful 


]]> 2017-10-13 11:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196764701 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196764887 I found it helpful when writing the introduction paragraph and thesis.]]> 2017-10-13 11:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196764887 Some of the examples for the introduction outline confused me but it was helpful overall. https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196765088 2017-10-13 11:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196765088 This process worked well for me. I do not need anything else from you. https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766093 2017-10-13 12:02:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766093 Sexi can I? https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766121 The sexi worksheet helped me revise and figure out what really needed to be in my essay paragraphs.]]> 2017-10-13 12:03:05 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766121 . https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766280 It helped me with my introduction which was short at first

]]> 2017-10-13 12:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766280 Hi I'm Aju, and you're watching Disney Channel https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766306 2017-10-13 12:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766306 Umm I did like how the intro one was set up because it told me I didn't need a lot of detail and sexi writing was helpful too. https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766342 2017-10-13 12:04:00 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766342 Bringing sexi back https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766350 the outline helped a lot when it came to polishing up me essay ]]> 2017-10-13 12:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766350 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766500 it helped but it was still slightly difficult ]]> 2017-10-13 12:04:37 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766500 Amazing RESULTS https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766632 Get amazing essays in 5 easy steps in 2 weeks!]]> 2017-10-13 12:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766632 Daniel Kolawole https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766686 The models and templates were quite useful, in helping me develop my body paragraphs to link them to my introduction.]]> 2017-10-13 12:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766686 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766759 it helped but it was still a little difficult.]]> 2017-10-13 12:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766759 Grammar https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766823 The worksheets were good. I'm just having trouble writing my essay grammarly correct.]]> 2017-10-13 12:05:46 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196766823 Sample https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196768228 Knowing how my paragraphs should look helped me alot. ]]> 2017-10-13 12:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196768228 https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196775784 I really don't remember ,but I think it was helpful.

]]> 2017-10-13 12:32:40 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196775784 They are helpful, it's just hard for me to concentrate because i get distracted easily and bored and re-writing the same thing over again gets old fast, but it's helpful in the end https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196775910 2017-10-13 12:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maggie_ray/9boj2f52lfml/wish/196775910