https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg Dialogue and Character Development en-us 2017-09-13 15:33:18 UTC 2017-09-13 19:53:33 UTC hello@padlet.com sutmiller_jonathon https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187224768 List team name on every post
post in order
Each team must use dialogue
punctuate the dialogue the best you can
use words besides said
see how the character changes]]> 2017-09-13 15:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187224768 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187238240 I remember the crazy time I went to my first actual house party.]]> 2017-09-13 16:00:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187238240 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187238943 There were a whole bunch of food and drinks and people I didn't know.]]> 2017-09-13 16:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187238943 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187239464 It was so lit.]]> 2017-09-13 16:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187239464 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187239812 There was at least 200 people.]]> 2017-09-13 16:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187239812 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187240369 "Crazy party, right?" I shouted to my friend.]]> 2017-09-13 16:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187240369 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187241213 "I CANT HEAR YOU!"Screamed Jennifer.]]> 2017-09-13 16:06:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187241213 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187241864  At that moment I realized my phone wasn't in my pocket.]]> 2017-09-13 16:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187241864 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187242397 I looked everywhere but I realized it was in the bottom of the pool.]]> 2017-09-13 16:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187242397 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187243412 "Jennifer, do you know how this happened?" I exclaimed.]]> 2017-09-13 16:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187243412 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187244118 "It problably fell in while you were talking to your girlfriend."said Jennifer.]]> 2017-09-13 16:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187244118 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187245266 "I'm going to get in trouble if my mom finds out."]]> 2017-09-13 16:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187245266 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187245971 "Just jump in and get and put in some rice,"Said Foo.]]> 2017-09-13 16:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187245971 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187247041 After I got it out of the pool, which included a lot of people getting wet, I asked Foo if he had any rice.]]> 2017-09-13 16:18:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187247041 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187248628 Then I realized my phone was water proof, "I got wet for no reason." I remembered ]]> 2017-09-13 16:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187248628 sutmiller_jonathon https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187267756 Team one begins

]]> 2017-09-13 16:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187267756 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187269287 I was on a boat in the middle of the ocean on a bright and sunny day.]]> 2017-09-13 17:00:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187269287 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187272022 2017-09-13 17:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187272022 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187272050 Then a shark attacked the boat.]]> 2017-09-13 17:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187272050 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187272833 The boat shook fast as the shark attacked the boat everyone yelled out for help.]]> 2017-09-13 17:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187272833 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187274656 "We're all going to die!" Billy screamed.]]> 2017-09-13 17:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187274656 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187275356 They all jumped off the boat!]]> 2017-09-13 17:13:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187275356 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187275994 We all started to swim towards the island near by.]]> 2017-09-13 17:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187275994 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187279114 "I can't swim". said Billy !]]> 2017-09-13 17:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187279114 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187279940 Billy thought he wouldn't make it.]]> 2017-09-13 17:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187279940 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187280248 We had been floating at sea for hours when the sharks began to circle us. 

]]> 2017-09-13 17:23:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187280248 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187280653 After floating for many hours Some playful dolphins came and rescued billy.]]> 2017-09-13 17:23:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187280653 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187281389 They took them to the nearest island.]]> 2017-09-13 17:25:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187281389 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187282914 When they made it to the island where we starving and dehydrated and Billy die]]> 2017-09-13 17:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187282914 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187311414 I remember looking down the gigantic hallway the first morning at a new school. ]]> 2017-09-13 18:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187311414 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187313407 I was lost and I had to have Help from my friend Billy.

]]> 2017-09-13 18:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187313407 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187315369 I got made fun of because my clothe was from Goodwill .]]> 2017-09-13 18:34:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187315369 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187317660 I got talked about the first day and I was sad.]]> 2017-09-13 18:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187317660 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187318664 I needed his help because I knew he always had extra clothes but I couldn't find billy in the hallways or his classes.]]> 2017-09-13 18:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187318664 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187320290 "Billy!" I screamed.]]> 2017-09-13 18:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187320290 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187320780 I finally found Billy in the hallway "I need some clothes,"I stated. ]]> 2017-09-13 18:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187320780 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187322704 I found some cloths and he was bloody]]> 2017-09-13 18:49:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187322704 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187323558 I asked him why he had blood on him and he said, "This huge monkey looking guy shoved me in my gym locker and broke my glasses!" "The glass scraped my arm!".]]> 2017-09-13 18:51:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187323558 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187324239 He had helped me out and I knew it was my turn to help him too. ]]> 2017-09-13 18:53:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187324239 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187324539 I helped Billy pick up his glasses.

]]> 2017-09-13 18:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187324539 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187325127 I was Going thru the one way hallways trying to get the principal.]]> 2017-09-13 18:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187325127 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187326104 2017-09-13 18:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187326104 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187334878 Narrative with details and dialogue 
Post in order of team 1-4
Build on them story
Keep it clean
Use proper punctuation 
Use dialogue ]]> 2017-09-13 19:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187334878 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187339085 Why would I have ever let my mom pick out my school clothes for me?

]]> 2017-09-13 19:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187339085 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187339966 She doesunderstand the style these days. .]]> 2017-09-13 19:34:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187339966 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187340177 She made me put 
a pink tux on.]]> 2017-09-13 19:35:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187340177 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187340913 It made me mad because I hate pink!

]]> 2017-09-13 19:37:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187340913 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187341113 "I look like an idiot," I said to my mom.]]> 2017-09-13 19:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187341113 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187341721 "Baby I think you look so handsome", replied mom.]]> 2017-09-13 19:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187341721 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187342032 She just didn't understand that I couldn't wear a pink tux to football practice. I was so embarrassed. What was I going to do?]]> 2017-09-13 19:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187342032 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187342436 I asked my friend if I could use his football gear.]]> 2017-09-13 19:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187342436 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187342922 "Of course not I need to use my football gear," said my friend.]]> 2017-09-13 19:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187342922 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187343363 So I ran home at lunch to get my football gear.]]> 2017-09-13 19:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187343363 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187343591 I got caught leaving school and got into mad trouble.]]> 2017-09-13 19:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187343591 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187344037 I got called into the principals office and when I went in he was there sitting with my mom. ]]> 2017-09-13 19:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187344037 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187344378 I ran out of the office and I started crying.]]> 2017-09-13 19:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187344378 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187345104 I heard my mom shout "come back!"]]> 2017-09-13 19:50:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187345104 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187345410 When I got home, my mom started whipping me with my dads belt! "OUCH!" I told my mom!]]> 2017-09-13 19:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187345410 https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187345786 2017-09-13 19:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sutmiller_jonathon/9blghnoxbntg/wish/187345786