Essay Checklist by Hannah Goeglein

2023-02-07 15:19:23 UTC

it was a queestion

kenneth and olman

2023-02-07 15:19:50 UTC

A hook is at the biginig of a sentsce

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:20:10 UTC

A Question and a fact mixed

Dylan/Graycin

2023-02-07 15:20:27 UTC

This was a question and a fact.

Preslie\Emily

2023-02-07 15:20:47 UTC

They used a question for the hook

landon

landonrevella — 2023-02-07 15:20:50 UTC

they put a question

natan

2023-02-07 15:21:06 UTC

they used a queston to hook the reader

olivia and brody

2023-02-07 15:21:06 UTC

they think bugs should be addedd to the cafateri

mya + jennae

2023-02-07 15:21:40 UTC

they used a question

Emily/Preslie

2023-02-07 15:21:51 UTC

They used a question as the hook

Dylan/Graycin

2023-02-07 15:21:55 UTC

Their thesis is that eating bugs is sometimes healthy. But not all bugs are

Jennaeee/Myaaa

2023-02-07 15:22:05 UTC

they used a question

dj

2023-02-07 15:22:08 UTC

they used a question

livia and brody

2023-02-07 15:22:13 UTC

they are good fòr the enviorment

isabella/valery

2023-02-07 15:22:31 UTC

usaron una pregunta

kenneth and olman

2023-02-07 15:22:54 UTC

they are good for you

landon natan

landonrevella — 2023-02-07 15:23:19 UTC

the claim

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:23:21 UTC

Their thesis is that eating bugs is sometimes healthy. But not all are.

isabella

2023-02-07 15:23:26 UTC

natan

2023-02-07 15:23:38 UTC

there thiesis is that the bugs are not wierd

Angeles y linsi

2023-02-07 15:23:45 UTC

is good for your health

Emily/Preslie

2023-02-07 15:24:05 UTC

The thesis is that they think that eating bugs isnt weird and that they are healthy for you

Rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:24:09 UTC

They used the part "did you know....." to hook the reader

Terrance and tarcan

2023-02-07 15:24:15 UTC

its a scientific question

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:24:41 UTC

That eating bugs is not weird, and in some states that its normal.

angles y linsi

2023-02-07 15:24:49 UTC

they have proteins

Dylan/Graycin

2023-02-07 15:24:54 UTC

They said Entomphagy not that weird..?

Preslie\Emily

2023-02-07 15:24:57 UTC

The thesis is that they think its good for you and its healthy and isnt weird to eat them

valery isabella

2023-02-07 15:25:00 UTC

hicieron una pregunta

PRESLIE\emily

2023-02-07 15:26:05 UTC

The first reason is that they said they aren't weird to eat bugs that we would't know cause we've never tried it before.

Kenneth

2023-02-07 15:26:07 UTC

they are good for you and that they have bugs in some foods

isabella/valery

2023-02-07 15:26:07 UTC

la tesis es que piensan que los bichos son saludables para todos

Terrance the awesome carrrrrrr!!!

2023-02-07 15:26:39 UTC

Eating bugs is not that weird

olman

2023-02-07 15:26:45 UTC

they have protein

valery isabella

2023-02-07 15:26:49 UTC

los bichos son raros para algunas personas

jennae/Mya

2023-02-07 15:27:06 UTC

They said bugs are good for you

rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:27:27 UTC

its something where you ask a question as a science one.

angeles y linsi

2023-02-07 15:27:30 UTC

bugs are naturally

isabella/valery

2023-02-07 15:27:43 UTC

segun la cafeteria los bichos son saludable

valery isabella

2023-02-07 15:27:49 UTC

te dan energia y es bueno para tu salud

isa/vale

2023-02-07 15:28:14 UTC

son saludables y nutritivos

Terrance rozar

2023-02-07 15:28:23 UTC

The first reson is that there good for you(if you cook them)

mya + jennae

2023-02-07 15:28:23 UTC

the thesis is they think bugs are healthy for you

olman

2023-02-07 15:28:38 UTC

they have good enserd for you and that they hoke you

landon natan

landonrevella — 2023-02-07 15:28:40 UTC

that eating bugs is not weird

natan

2023-02-07 15:28:58 UTC

the first reason is because its not wierd

isabello/valerio

2023-02-07 15:29:00 UTC

son muy sanos

valery isabella

2023-02-07 15:29:34 UTC

por que son nutrientes

Emily/Preslie

2023-02-07 15:29:50 UTC

The first reason is that their healthy for you and not gross they said that we wouldn't know cause we've never tried it before

rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:30:09 UTC

The first reason is...that they say bugs are healthy for u and there not that weird.

natan

2023-02-07 15:30:55 UTC

its not wierd because its common in ghana mexico france

Terrance paernce carence clarence

2023-02-07 15:31:32 UTC

they have are eaten in different places so if you live there go with the trend

PRESLIE/Emily

2023-02-07 15:32:50 UTC

They also said that bugs have less fat and are just as healthy as fish

natan

2023-02-07 15:33:06 UTC

the third reason is that the kids i cafeteria would like it

EMILY\preslie

2023-02-07 15:33:42 UTC

They also said that bugs have less fat and are just as healthy as fish

Dylan/Graycin

2023-02-07 15:33:43 UTC

Grasshopers are almost as healthy as lean ground beef, and mealworms are almost as healthy as fish.

rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:33:55 UTC

they also have a lot of protein and they have little on filling someones stomach up

Angeles and Linsi

2023-02-07 15:34:04 UTC

The last reason is that they need to add bugs to the cafeteria menu.

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:34:06 UTC

Grasshoppers are almost as healthy as lean ground beef and mealworms are almost as healthy as fish.

Terrance barnce harnce

2023-02-07 15:34:06 UTC

they dont need alot of food and water also you can keep them in a box

angeles

2023-02-07 15:34:59 UTC

olivia and brody

2023-02-07 15:35:22 UTC

the only reason that we think its weird is that all we knoew of it

rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:35:31 UTC

that bugs could be served in lunch and people in different countries eat bugs.

natan

2023-02-07 15:36:08 UTC

''they contain a lot of protein, fiber healthybfats, and important nutrients such a calcium and iron

PRESLIE/Emily

2023-02-07 15:36:10 UTC

they said that it should be on the cafeteria so it would help the environment .

EMILY\preslie

2023-02-07 15:36:20 UTC

They said it should be on the catfereta so it would help the environment.

Terrance chainsaw bear

2023-02-07 15:36:27 UTC

"grasshoppers, they have almost as much protein as lean ground beef

rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:36:50 UTC

just bugs ._.

Angeles

2023-02-07 15:36:59 UTC

They have good enserd for you and that they noke you

Terrance is a carrot and likes gummy worms

2023-02-07 15:37:43 UTC

"As you can see"

PRESLIE/Emily

2023-02-07 15:38:18 UTC

"They will fill you up and healthier than corn dogs and chicken nuggets "

EMILY\preslie

2023-02-07 15:38:23 UTC

''They will fill you up and healthier then chicken nuggets"

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:38:42 UTC

Insects should be served at school.

rylee

ryleeprater — 2023-02-07 15:38:51 UTC

they used "As u can see..."in the beggining of the conclusion

mya + jennae

2023-02-07 15:38:52 UTC

the only reason we think its gross and disgusting is because we all know.

natan

2023-02-07 15:38:53 UTC

another reason why bugs should be served

PRESLIE/Emily

2023-02-07 15:39:43 UTC

Did you know that more than 2 billion people eat bugs and that they are good for you ?

EMILY\preslie

2023-02-07 15:39:58 UTC

Did you know that more than 2 billion people eat bugs and that are good for you.

angeles y linsi

2023-02-07 15:41:23 UTC

A question and a fact mixed

olivia and brody

2023-02-07 15:41:30 UTC

it is proteen

Dylan/Graycin

2023-02-07 15:41:40 UTC

It says in p. 1 "In many countries, including Thailand, Mexico, Ghana, and France.

briody and olivia

2023-02-07 15:41:57 UTC

healtrhy for envirement

mya + jennae

2023-02-07 15:42:03 UTC

beleive it or not, eating bugs is already normal in any parts of the worlds.

angeles y linsi

2023-02-07 15:42:22 UTC

the thesis think bugs are healthy

brody and olivia

2023-02-07 15:42:30 UTC

as you can see

Dylan/Graycin

2023-02-07 15:43:10 UTC

Did you know that more than two billion people eat bugs and that they are good for you?

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:43:19 UTC

France, Thailand, Mexico, and Ghana, they all serve bugs to eat.

angeles y linsi

2023-02-07 15:43:29 UTC

grasshoppers have so much protein

Graycin/Dylan

2023-02-07 15:44:16 UTC

Did you know more than 2 billion eat bugs and that they are good for you?

mya + jennae

2023-02-07 15:45:08 UTC

the third reason is becuase people only dont like it because they find it weird

Kennedy/Elizabeth

2023-02-07 19:59:39 UTC

The hook is a question and a fact

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:01:59 UTC

that over 2 billion people eat bugs

Kennedy/Elizabeth

2023-02-07 20:03:13 UTC

They state there opinion (bugs should be added to the cafeteria menu)

bug

2023-02-07 20:03:23 UTC

did you know MORE THAN @ BILLION PEOPLE EAT BUGS

kennedy/shupert

2023-02-07 20:04:10 UTC

They are healthy for you

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:04:50 UTC

Did you know that more than 2 billion people eat bugs and that they are good for you?

Kennedy/elizabeth shupert

2023-02-07 20:04:54 UTC

They are good for the envirment.

elizabeth and kennedy

2023-02-07 20:07:35 UTC

eating bugs is not weird!!

London and tilly nsjfgjfhmckrkfh

2023-02-07 20:08:07 UTC

most people eat bugs aka 2 billion

Liam jordyn

2023-02-07 20:08:32 UTC

I think that people eat them because they think it is good for you and has nutrients.

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:09:20 UTC

they said that bugs should be added to the school cafeteria

kennedy short + elizabeth shupert

2023-02-07 20:10:12 UTC

The text states ¨In my opinion bugs should be added to the school cafeteria menu. eating bugs is not that weird, they are healthy for you, and they are good for the envirnment.

Yahir It asked a question and gave some info.

2023-02-07 20:10:25 UTC

Josafat

Lexi And Cristal

lexiramirez — 2023-02-07 20:10:29 UTC

Their thesis is that they should have it is because it is heathy fo the kids and also because it is healthy for the kids and they thing that the kids would get them nartures for the kids and its healthy as a a fish .

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:11:42 UTC

the are really healthy

london and tilyyyyy

2023-02-07 20:11:56 UTC

bugs are good for you

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:12:14 UTC

Bugs should be added to the cafeteria.

elizabeth and kennedy

2023-02-07 20:12:55 UTC

as you can see................

LoNdOn AnD tIlLy

2023-02-07 20:13:28 UTC

that bugs should be added to the school menu

london and tilly

2023-02-07 20:13:40 UTC

they are healthy and are good for the environment.

london and tilly

2023-02-07 20:14:47 UTC

''as you can see''

Lexi and cristal

cristalreyesgonzalez — 2023-02-07 20:14:47 UTC

they asked a question

Yahir,josafat It says that eaten bugs is not weird and they should add them to the school menu.

2023-02-07 20:15:20 UTC

Madison, and Adri, and Dae

adrianfarmer — 2023-02-07 20:15:37 UTC

bugs are healthy for you.

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:15:45 UTC

they are better for the environment

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:16:46 UTC

Bugs are healthy for you.

Yahir,josafat They sed that bugs are healthy.

2023-02-07 20:16:51 UTC

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:17:31 UTC

They are good for the environment.

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:17:31 UTC

bugs are really good for u

They said that bugs don't need sunlight.

2023-02-07 20:17:39 UTC

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:18:30 UTC

when u see a bug think how great they are

london and tilly

2023-02-07 20:18:47 UTC

''bugs contain healthy fats and calcium and iron''

enzelis/ashly

2023-02-07 20:18:47 UTC

porque son saludables

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:18:57 UTC

They have proteen.

Cristal + Lexi

lexiramirez — 2023-02-07 20:19:03 UTC

Another reason bugs should be severd in the cafeteria is because they are healthy for kids so thats why they think they should severd bugs .

Yahir,josafat

2023-02-07 20:20:05 UTC

They sed that bugs are esy to grow.

joseph/camden

2023-02-07 20:20:33 UTC

eating bugs are that strange

enzelis/ashly

2023-02-07 20:20:39 UTC

porque contienen proteina,fibra

madison'adri'dae

2023-02-07 20:20:51 UTC

grass hoppers are good for the environment .

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:20:53 UTC

grasshopper are good for the environment

Madison, Adri, and Dae

2023-02-07 20:21:14 UTC

As you can see.

Liam.E/jordyn.W

2023-02-07 20:21:28 UTC

there are more people that eat bugs then people inside of indiann

london and tilly

2023-02-07 20:21:44 UTC

that they are that multiple people eat bugs