Walter in ADSS (P2) by Mdm Sharifah

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azfah18 — 2023-04-13 02:10:41 UTC

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azfah18 — 2023-04-13 02:11:11 UTC

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azfah18 — 2023-04-13 02:11:19 UTC

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azfah18 — 2023-04-13 02:11:31 UTC

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azfah18 — 2023-04-13 02:11:38 UTC

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azfah18 — 2023-04-13 02:11:53 UTC

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to .................

1) Changes to my idea concept
2) Changes to Editing techniques
3) What is the title of my Artwork

Mdm Sharifah

azfah18 — 2023-04-13 03:29:30 UTC

My idea is i am going to surround walter in a sea of apples. I will distort some of the apples using different colours & dispersion effect

Name:Jing Yuan

2023-04-13 03:30:21 UTC

My idea is to add apples to the plants to make them look like apple trees and i will change the color of the apples on the different plants to create variety and distort some of the apples

After hearing my friends feedback i am going to finish my apple artwork first

The pictures i need to prepare is the apple drawing

Ashraef

2023-04-13 03:32:29 UTC

My idea is to maybe add myself standing next to Walter to show more emphasis and convey the leading lines much better.
After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to find a good position for me to stand next to Walter to make sure it still looks symmetrical.

Kevin Yong

2023-04-13 03:32:53 UTC

My idea is going to have little figures of me of my poses. I include a few apples in some of the pictures like the ones with dispersion, variety of assorted color like an explosion act.

afifah

2023-04-13 03:33:21 UTC

my idea is i am going to place apples in a wave and then put it near walter.i will distort the apple in a wave

Name: Jiahe

2023-04-13 03:33:24 UTC

Me idea is to add apples in the backrgound wall but not make it the main point but just to show a better background.

My fried feedback is to ,add lesser apples and try to make it not so focused on apples

yuanen

2023-04-13 03:34:18 UTC

Name: yuanen

My idea is that i am going to either line the apples along the two poles or cover the human's face.

Elaine

2023-04-13 03:35:57 UTC

My idea is to place many apples at the step below, i will make them overlapping so it will be similar to a pattern

After hearing my friends feedback, Im going to line up the apples up the pole

The images that I will prepare is many apples and duplicate them to overlap

liina

2023-04-13 03:36:06 UTC

isaac

2023-04-13 03:36:36 UTC

my idea is i am going to surround Walter using an equal number of apples near the plants for both sides in the picture for balance and maybe have green and red apples for variety and distort them too to look cooler

Kyra

yong_wen_xuan_kyra2_1 — 2023-04-13 03:38:54 UTC

My idea is that for the bold cracks , i am going to replace it with apples and walter is going to be eating an apple . I can also put an apple near the out of bounds
After hearing my friend comments

Tristan(4)

2023-04-13 03:38:55 UTC

my idea is to have the apples at both sides of where the pebbles are at so it gives off a royalty feeling and i feel that it enhances the movement of the artwork

MARSYA

nur_marsya_umairah_salleh2_1 — 2023-04-13 03:39:13 UTC

my idea is putting apple around walter

Ulfah

2023-04-13 03:39:56 UTC

I want to put an apple on Walters head and around Walter.

Name: Jayden (2)

jayden_chan_kai_lun2_1 — 2023-04-13 03:40:46 UTC

My idea is to put a pixelated or distorted apple to make it look like vomit and hence Tristan tryna kill Walter :<

Elly

2023-04-13 03:41:27 UTC

My idea is that I am going to add just one apple beside walter on the table.

Ivan

2023-04-13 03:41:42 UTC

My idea is to use a big apple and distort it in the background of walter this will attract the viewer's eyes and make the art work more interesting

Ryan ( 1 )

2023-04-13 03:42:12 UTC

my idea is that im going to place some apples in a straight line at the top of the staircase , and some apples the bottom of the apples and distort them.

jayson

2023-04-13 03:42:21 UTC

Ivan

2023-04-13 03:44:26 UTC

I want to add apples hidden in the background to fit in the garden theme I can add in pictures of different shapes and sizes of apples including my own drawn one instead of just copy pasting apples i can distort my apples in different ways.

Ming Zhe

chia_ming_zhe2_1 — 2023-04-13 03:44:27 UTC

my idea is to add some figures thats hiding around the background and walter will be trying to find them

Khor Zen

2023-04-13 03:49:52 UTC

My idea is that I will put apples at both sides

kess

2023-04-13 03:50:43 UTC

aaryan

2023-04-13 03:51:22 UTC

my idea is to put apples around walter in all shapes and sizes

jAde

samleong1978 — 2023-04-13 04:00:16 UTC

Tis is my photo. you liek?

Name: ___________________________

azfah18 — 2023-04-27 02:45:01 UTC

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to .................

1) Changes to my idea concept
2) Changes to Editing techniques
3) What is the title of my Artwork

Name: ___________________________

azfah18 — 2023-04-27 02:46:15 UTC

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to .................

1) Changes to my idea concept
2) Changes to Editing techniques
3) What is the title of my Artwork

Name: ___________________________

azfah18 — 2023-04-27 02:46:50 UTC

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to .................

1) Changes to my idea concept
2) Changes to Editing techniques
3) What is the title of my Artwork

Name: ___________________________

azfah18 — 2023-04-27 02:47:14 UTC

After hearing from my friends' feedback, i am going to .................

1) Changes to my idea concept
2) Changes to Editing techniques
3) What is the title of my Artwork

Elaine

2023-04-27 03:18:21 UTC

My Title: Tanning with walter
Story: I took this photo under the hot scorching sun, which leads me to my title of tanning with Walter along with a field oapples because i was extremely hungry that time. So in conclusion, this is like a dream to me, being with walter with a bunch of fresh apples

afifah

2023-04-27 03:23:39 UTC

my tittle: beach day with wlater

story:walter went to a magical island where the sea is full of apple and he saw a dolphin this is inspired by my dream as i always wanted a sea full of appkes but still have dolphin inside

MDM SHARIFAH

azfah18 — 2023-04-27 03:53:16 UTC

Artist Statement: Falling into Walter's World
My art is about Wendy the bunny that fell into this portal & appeared into a whimsical world of Walter where everything seem strange and bizarre.

Changes to my idea concept:
+ suggestions made by my peer to add more items that will be distorted to illustrate the strange world

Changes to Editing techniques
+ not to overuse the effect for Wendy the bunny. Instead i should focus on the proportion scale
+using skew or distortion techniques to make a strange and bizarre landscape more obvious

Kevin Yong [Walter in Self Friend land]

2023-04-30 01:18:14 UTC

Further from beginning crackling tension=Free to rise and shimmer in the bright

Walter is on the escalator building where he could do anything he wants while going up but somehow its this feeling where he has a framed self that reflects the experience. Not only that, but other people( which may be me) have their reflective personality as the apple scale indicates the life journey to a new level of freedom that Walter is about to go on. Plus the skill used is mirror so it highlights the way of you having your best self forward to.

Marsya

nur_marsya_umairah_salleh2_1 — 2023-05-03 01:40:40 UTC

jAde

2023-05-03 01:40:52 UTC

Title: Our Apple Fantasy
Artist statement:
Elaine and Walter are having a date in their apple fantasy despite being from different worlds.
After hearing feedback:
I will change the apples on Elaine's side to be blueberries so that it will depict more clearly that she and Walter are from different worlds.

Syura

2023-05-03 01:43:18 UTC

yong_wen_xuan_kyra2_1 — 2023-05-03 01:45:44 UTC

Title: Partner In crime
Artist statement : The Sec 4 are having their O levels and Walter and Kess are curious and decide to peek into the hall and see what is happening and the little boy was just walking past and notice that Walter was hiding behind the bushes while eating the apple. The apples on top is actually decoration for the walls.
I have decided to leave it like this since there are no comments and it looks fine just like this.

2023-05-03 01:45:48 UTC

my idea is that i will put apple all around the table and just around walter

aaryan

2023-05-03 01:46:06 UTC

title: in another world
artist statement: walter is stuck in an alternate dimension at adss and is figuring out how to get back

Aiden

2023-05-03 01:47:02 UTC

Title: Cloud Gazing Walter
Artist Statement: Walter is gazing the clouds and apples in the sky

aaryan

2023-05-03 01:47:20 UTC

title: freezing winter
artist statement: walter having the time of his life at his favourite place: adss with many colourful ornaments

Ulfah

2023-05-03 01:47:29 UTC

Walter and the stickman named, Green, traveled into a new world after eating a mysterious apple. Now, this new world had apples all around with little people, who are investigating this strange occurrence.

Changes I made: Based on my friend's feedback, I have added an effect which further shows that they are in a new world. I made it more colourful to further imply how strange it actually is. For the idea concept, she said she liked it. :D

Elly

2023-05-03 01:47:32 UTC

Artist statement: Walter loves fruits.
My art is about Walter loving fruits and he is dreaming about the many fruits as he wishes that he could eat all these fruits. But in reality, big fruits do not exist. He needs to wake up.'

Suggestions:
-To make the clouds similar to each other
Things that my peers liked:
-The angle of the picture taken
-The placement of the fruits
Questions:
-What is my picture about?

kessler

princess_kessler_seow_rui2_1 — 2023-05-03 01:47:55 UTC

My title: Inside Out
My art is basically being playful. To represent this playfulness, I added the hair of a game character to both a stick figure and a duck. In the background, I also added a game character's background theme for randomness. For the apples, I did not make them smaller, but left two apples large and the last one small. The main playfulness depicted here is that Kyra is looking into the hall when exams are held, rather than taking them herself showing that she is a mischievous student (disclaimer: no exams are being held, kyra good student)

Suggestions:
The apples can be in a messy line instead of straight to display more playfulness

Ming Zhe

chia_ming_zhe2_1 — 2023-05-03 01:48:01 UTC

title: hide and seek
artist statement: walter is trying to find the stick figures as they are hiding around the map having fun...

ping yuan

2023-05-03 01:48:08 UTC

Jing Yuan

2023-05-03 01:48:43 UTC

Title: Hiding Apples
Artist Statement: An old video of Walter is finding apples in his garden
Changes:
-Add question marks to make it look like walter is finding the apples
-Add more effects and images to make it look less empty

Liina

2023-05-03 01:48:48 UTC

tittle: Watching a show with walter
story: Walter was exploring the school when he found a view of balanced apple in a pyramid structure he sat down to admire this and a man joined him too.
After hearing from my friend's feedback, I decided to make it more festive
1) add effect to make it more festive
2) make it more merrier

Ashraef

2023-05-03 01:48:50 UTC

Artist statement: Euphorical Foodie Wonders.
On his journey to venture out and find food, he sensed a presence of someone, more specifically a photographer, camouflaged deep into the abyss of the canteen, luring Walter in with the help of a trailing path of mouth-watering apples. Will Walter fall for his trap, or continue his journey?

Changes to my idea concept:
-Added converging apples that decrease in size to add more movement.
-Added a "playlist" frame to give an impression that Walter is in a cover of an album.
-Gave it some effects to appeal more to the eye.

jiabe Title: Old Hag

2023-05-03 01:49:09 UTC

Artist Statement: This artwork is inspired by Joe Rogan and Dana White as I heard them talking about Windows once in their podcast this is Walter inside of Windows Drawing Application. This is pure gold, pure diamond and PURE LEGENDARY

Ying Xuan

lee_ying_xuan_5_2_1 — 2023-05-03 01:49:29 UTC

Tittle: Self-Directed Walter
My artwork is about Walter and me were having recess in school. Walter is eating while looking at the words "Self-Directed Admirals" and want to set it as his goal. And I am standing at the side looking at Walter. I am there watching Walter growing up.

My friend(s) feed back:
Something she like:
- the effect
Question she ask:
- what is the story behind the photo?
(at the top)
-why am I in the photo?/what am I doing inside the photo?
I am in the photo is because I am the character that is watching Walter growing up.
Suggestion(s) she give:
-take out the bunny at the side as it does not link to my theme.

Khor Zen

2023-05-03 01:57:01 UTC

title: wondering walter
Artist Statement: wondering around the canteen.

Jyden

jayden_chan_kai_lun2_1 — 2023-05-03 01:58:25 UTC

Title: The Elaine of Oz

2023-05-03 02:01:16 UTC

Queen Elaine and King Walter relaxing on their “thrones” with a golden carpet in front of them decorated with golden apples at the sides of the carpet. 👑

Adrian

muhammad_aqeel_adrian_adam2_1 — 2023-05-03 02:03:20 UTC

title: asserting dominance over walter
artist statement: I am standing over walter as if i am "asserting dominance" over walter. i was trying to replicate the mirror effect in horror movies where the reflection is different from the actual thing.

2023-05-03 02:04:14 UTC

title: first day of school
Walter having a schoolbag and snack for school

Ashraef (comment for Jiahe)

2023-05-03 02:05:45 UTC

What I like about your artwork is the fact you were creative with using different elements like the window frame.
One question I have is to question why there are 2 apples located each on one side only.
A suggestion I have is to try adding more apples on the bottom as it makes more sense.

Ivan

2023-05-03 02:05:50 UTC

Title: Walter in the wonder apple garden
Artist Statement: Walter is tired and he stumbled into the wonder apple garden where he rested and relaxed amidst the multiple apples. All the apples have different colours as well and gives a very joyful and extraordinary feeling to a commonly overlooked place

Comment for kevin yong

2023-05-03 02:11:30 UTC

I like the symmetry and I artistic digital artwork your apple is very vibrant in colours and I think you should improve more on your placements of yourself

isaac

2023-05-03 02:11:43 UTC

title: The Alleyway
artist statement: walter came across an alleyway and there was suspicious apples presented to him by 2 people

Ivan

2023-05-03 02:12:12 UTC

After hearing from my friends' feedback, I am going to try to make walter more of a focal point .
1) Changes to my idea concept:
I am going to use the apples to maybe direct the viewer's eyes to walter
2) Changes to Editing techniques
Use apples in more creative ways
3) What is the title of my Artwork
Walter in the apple wonder garden

Reply to Zhi tong

2023-05-03 02:12:34 UTC

Maybe you can change the apples and bag colour to something that goes better with the whole colour scheme of Walter/The background. I like the colours of Walter.

Tristan

2023-05-03 02:13:55 UTC

title: pinnacle of LIGHTS
Artist statement: Apparently Walter had shown all of the LIGHTS values extremely and therefore he becomes the pinnacle of it as he is behind the pillars of LIGHTS and i am attempting to put red apples at the side of the pathway so that the human eye would lead their eyes to Walter and also add a royalty feeling to it since apples are red and that kind of symbolises a red carpet given that Walter is the pinnacle of LIGHTS already. And i would like to add a light ray to shine on walter to still lead the eyes of viewers to walter

feedback for Ulfah

2023-05-03 02:15:05 UTC

add FX effects and put the other things (stickman, apple...) smaller to focus on walter
and what I like about your artwork is your artist statement which is you story:)

afifah

2023-05-03 02:19:37 UTC

after hearing the feedback , i (changes to my idea concept) add some filters to the background , (changes to my editing technique) i repositioned the stickers, my title of the artwork is beach day with walter