Focus 3 by Катя Кухарчук

Writing Maria

2020-10-06 15:01:49 UTC

Hi Adam ,

I found out that you are going to go to Italy where this cousin lives. He agree to show you the city .You haven’t seen him before? Let me describe my cousin to you to make it easier for you to find him.

His name’s Sam. The first thing you notice about him is that he looks a little younger than he is . He is our age , but he
looks twelve because of his babyface .He is very kind and friendly, I think he will easily find a common language with you. Personally , I find it bed of roses with him . He is also very creative and loves to draw.By the way, his paintings were exhibited at a famous exhibition at the Italian Art University.Sam is into all sort of music , from R&B and rap to classical and jazz and I think he’s the kind of person who can inspire you.

Sam is also very cleaver and pretty . He is tall height and slim , and he ‘s got short , curly, blonde hair . He dresses not be so fashionably , though usually in white t-shirt and jeans. I think he looks kind of cool despite the usual style .

On the negative side , he isn’t exactly tide and he can be a little moody at times . He can strain you with his stupid questions and may be offended if you ignore him. However for that it is never boring with him .

So ,tell me later how he is to you.

CU soon

Maria

Writing Alex

2020-10-08 10:06:10 UTC

Hi, Max. My friend is coming to your city soon and I would like you to give a tour. I will be in bed of roses if you can help me.

His name is Vitya. What catches your eye is he looks older than he really is. He is 15. He looks 20 because he is wide and tall. he is friendly and loves animals. You have a lot in common, he loves to play games like you do. I think you will make friends. He is going to apply for an architect, he is also interested in architecture.

His distinguishing features are blue eyes and short brown hair. He loves to dress fashionably. His style is: shirts, jeans and sneakers.

His negative sides, he is sometimes blunt, and he is also quick-tempered. He is also sometimes sad and boring, this is normal

So, tell me how it went

Your cousin

Alex

Email from Lola

2020-10-08 11:25:52 UTC

Hi Max,

My friend told me she was going to visit Kiev. She has never been there before. I would be enormously glad if you could show him the capital of our country.

Her name’s Jeanne. The first thing you notice about her is that she is religious person. She is in her mid twenties. Jeanne’s a very cheerful, optimistic and extraverted girl. In my personal view sometimes she can be stressed out, nevertheless I love her. She‘s the kind of person who always tells to you her honest opinion. She likes dancing. She’s into all sorts of dancing. Jeanne is just good in it and jump at every opportunity to dance. She’s would make a great choreographer.

She’s also so gorgeous and extraordinary) She’ fairly well-build and not very tall. Jeanne’s got short pink hair. Her eyes are brown. She’s got a friendly smile. She dresses brightly-colored fashionable clothes which suit her very much.

On the negative side, she’s particularly boring and greedy. She tend to be rude if you touch on religion. But come on, she’s so talented.

Thanks for your help. Go to her page in Instagram (link encloses) 💕

Love Lola 💗

:V

2020-10-08 11:27:44 UTC

Hi Bob
My friend is coming to your city.
His name is Tom he is 16 years old like you.He have brown wawy hair,blue eyes and friendly smile he is slim and tall and loves music remixes
He will wear blue jeans sport sneakers white T-shirt and sunglasses when you meet him.
On the negative side he loves fall asleep very late he can watch videos or play game the whole night and fall asleep in the morning but not all the time.
He is friendly positive person with funny jokes.He always can revive company by this, and he is interested in serving in internet and riding a bike you will get along.
Thank you that agree to show him around I think you will be good friend.Time to say goodbye.
Best withes.Dima:v

Writing

2020-10-08 12:53:02 UTC

Hi Max,

My mother told me that you argeed to show my friend around the city.If so , I want to tell something about her .

Her name's Taya.The first thing you notice about her is that she has various color of eyes .She's your age , but she looks a little older.She is immortally sensitive and honest. Otherwise she can be a little shy. She's type of person who always joking , so I can say that she has perfect sence of humour. She like art .Taya knows a lot of about modern art and old art . She like painting and making different photos of nature.I guess that you have a lot of in common with her ^^.

She's also adorably charming :) She's about short height and fairly well-built .She's has got short ,straight, dark hair.Also she has nose piercing . She dresses fasionable , though usually not something bright.

On the negative side , she's a bit too chatty. Also she isn't always hard-working . But hey , she can support the diologue!)))

Thank you a lot that you can help my friend !))) I hope you will have a great time together.

Best wishies ^^

Vika )

Bad writing

2020-10-08 13:04:20 UTC

Hi cousin

My friend told me that he wants to visit Saint Petersburg for the frist time. I know that you have been leaving there since 1995 and I belive, you know all masterpieces of this city. I want to describe his

His name's Rodya. The frist thing you notice about his is that he looks tired. He is our age but he looks much older. Well he is not easy-going nature but he has incredibly interesting personality. He has a great sense of humour. Nevertheless he is so seriously. He has no hobbies and I advise you not to try to interest him in anything. In my personal view hi is quiet. He will listen to you and do everethyng you ask.

He is kind of people who is not very beautiful but also not ugly. He has dark eyes. Generally everething he has is dark except his soul. Dark short hair. Dark jacket that he wears all the time. Dark boots. Dark jeans.
He is short and slim. He always wears ordinary clothes and so on.

He has some negative sides. First he's not particulary georgous. He isn't always hard working. He looks kind of punky.

Hope you will become friends. I enclosed photo with us. Good luck
Your cousin

Artem

Writing from Masha

2020-10-08 14:48:26 UTC

Hi Christie,

I am writing to you about my friend Angelo. She recently told me that she wants to visit London. She has never been there, so I will be glad if you show her the sights there.

The first thing you should notice is that she has very long white hair. She's about my age.

Angelo is positive, easy-going and incredibly friendly. She has a great sense of humor - you will definitely laugh. It is because of this that she is very vulnerable, please do not offend her. She‘s the kind of person who always do everything creatively. Angelo loves to paint and does well. She'd make a great painter.

As I said she has long straight hair, which she is very proud of. She dyed her hair white. Angelo got a unusual slime. Her eyes are green. She is short, about one meter fifty eight. She is slim. She always dresses pink clothes, and therefore she looks very cute.

On the negative side, she isn't exactly punctual and she isn't always hard-working. But hey, she is a creative!

Thanks in advance. Then please write me how it went.

Love, Masha :>

Vicky 💕

2020-10-08 16:21:38 UTC

Hi Cole)

How are you? I'm sorry for being silent so long, but now I want to tell you something about Alice, she is my BF. I want to say "Thank U❤️", course only you agree to show the city for her. She has never been abroad. I hope she will like Glencoe

The first thing you notice about Alice is that she looks older than she is, but she's our age. And the second thing that you must to know about her, is that she has a good sense of humour. She's very polite and generous, and she'd make a great jurist. What about the music that she like? She is into rock music. If I don't wrong, you like music of AC&DC? Alice crazy about them. Alice fond of football,
her favourite team is Manchester United. Do you like them? As for me you will find a lot of them to discuss.

Alice very beautiful, she is tall and fairy slim. And she is well-built. She have big brown eyes, and she is got beautiful straight dark hair. And most importantly - she always dresses casually.

What about the cons? Alice not always hard working and punctual, but it's not so important, course she have a good sense of humour.

In the end I want to say that, I hope you will have a good time together, course speak with her is like be in a bed of roses.

Bye 4 now,
Vicky

P.S. send some photos to me, please 💋

Danya's writing

2020-10-08 18:07:43 UTC

Hello Valera,

How are you? I'm writing to you about my friend. Are you remember what i said about what my best friend want to come in Odessa?

His name's Jora. The first thing you notice about his is that he looks older than he is. He's my age, but he look like he is twenty years old. He has brown curly hair, he's very tall, he's got a friendly smile and well-built.

I think he has a great sense of homur. He is very sunny person,
he's very easy - going and funny.
He like plays at Paladins and other games. He is very like listen rock music, powerwolf his favorite band. I think you will make a friends. He hasn't negative side, only possitive)

Thank you so much for what you agreeing to show him out city, i hope you have a good time.

See you soon,
With best wishes,
Danya

Anastasia 👺

2020-10-09 11:38:56 UTC

Hi Peppa,

How is it going? I’m writing to you because I want to tell you THANK YOU SO MUCH that you have agreed show my close friend around the city! You have never met before so I want to tell you a little about her.

Her name is Clara. The first thing you notice about her is that she looks older than she is . She’s your age, but she looks like she’s already in her teens. She’s very gorgeous! She’s got long, wavy, blond hair. She isn’t tall moreover she’s fairly well-built. She dresses smartly in brightly-coloured. In my view she looks kind of perfect.

She’s a very interesting and kind person. She’s into music, TV serials also she’s likes to read. Her favorite singer is Britney Spears. She can be a little scruffy but in a good way. On the negative side she doesn’t have a good sense of humor. She tends to modest. Clara is the type of person who always thinks of others. However she has more pluses than minuses you'll see!

Well I must be going now. Thanks again for agreeing! Have a good time.

Love,

Anastasia

Artem🗿

2020-10-09 12:18:56 UTC

Hi, Dima

How are you? I'm writing to you to say thank you very much for agreeing to show my close friend around the city. You' have never met before so I'll tell you about him.

His name's Kirill. The first thing you notice about his is the he looks older than he is. He's your age, but he looks like he is nineteen years old. He's very easy-going like you! He's got dark, short, hair. He's of medium height and well-build.

To my mind he has a great sense of humor. He's into all sort of music, from jazz to hip-hop however he's favorite sort it's rap. Travis Scott is his favorite rapper and he dreams of attending his concert. He also loves to play musical instruments and walk near the sea. I hope you become friends as he is a very interesting person to communicate.

Well write me later how he is to you. Thanks again for agreeing!

Love,
Artem

Nastya

2020-10-09 15:35:52 UTC

Hi Ann,

How is it going? I hope you're well. It was very kind to agree to show my friend your city. You've never, so I want to tell you about her

Her name is Liza. The first thing you notice about her is that she older than she is. My friend is your age however she looks like she's already in her middle twenties. Liza looks like a model because she is very tall and slim also has got gorgeous straight blond hair. She is trendy and always wears fashionable clothes

I guess Lisa comes across as kind and friendly cause she is always smiling. Honestly, its true. My friend is sort of person who gets along with everybody around. She is also sensible and responsible, but sometimes she tends to be too emotional.

Lisa is into cooking. She likes making desserts , especially cakes for celebration. In my view, she is really good at it. Liza interested in reading books, so I hope you'll find something in a common

Thanks again for agreeing to spend time with my friend

Bye 4 now

Nastya

Ann

2020-10-10 16:46:15 UTC

Hi Tanya!

I'm very thankful that you agreed to show my friend the city! It's really nice of you! I'm wriring to describe my friend so you will get to know her better.

Her name is Dasha. She's one year older than me, but I suppose she looks her age and not older. She's very easy-going and friendly so it won't be hard to get along woth her. Dasha's the type of person who is very friendly and it's easy for her to talk to others even if she barely knows them. She's a very open-minded and nice person. She's into fashion and she is studying restaurant and hotel business.

Dasha is very good looking! She's medium height (or a little shorter) and slim, she has long dark brown hair and outstanding blue eyes. She has a great style, her outfits are very fashionable!

I'm sure it won't be a problem to get along for both of you!

CU, Ann

Ksenia

2020-10-15 14:13:32 UTC

Dear Sonya,

How are you? Thanks that you're agreeing show my friend around the city. Now I will tell you a little about him.

Her name Nastya. She's a little younger than me. She is a very kind person and she has a great sense of humour. Nastya is going to Kiev with her family to see this beautiful city. She loves to travel and has already been to many cities of Ukraine.

My friend has dark hair, green eyes and friendly face. She's medium height. Nastya is trendy. She likes to be the centre of attention. First, she watches the fashion. Secondly, she has a familiar designer who sometimes tells her what is in fashion now.

Nastya is interested in music. She likes play on guitar. She listen pop music and her favourite band - "With no restrictions".

Thank you again for agreeing to help. Hope you have some fun there!

Love,
Ksenia

Story from Maria

2020-11-24 14:01:29 UTC

How an ordinary bike became a water bike

I think most people could not imagine such a situation in real life, cause they saw this only in hilarious videos on YouTube. It was a warm autumn day, early September. My parents and I wanted to try some kind of extreme sport for a long time. AANNDD, we chose mountain bikes. Of course, a lot of things terrified us in this sport, and watching a video on this topic was scary, but the interest was stronger and I wanted to feel the adrenaline. But no one could have thought that such a thing would happen. This situation can be described by the expression ‘hurry people make fun’.

On the first day when we arrived at the place, we booked an instructor who will select the route for us and teach us basic skills. Mom and I were nervous at first, but Dad said, 'Don't be scared it will be cool.' And the instructor added, "The main thing is to feel the balance with the bike and you will succeed." It was utterly arduous to find balance on the mountain road. We fell, laughed, got angry and had cheerfully . In the end, everything went well and we fell in love with this sport.

After a few days of training, we ourselves went to the chosen route. Since I felt confident, I decided to go, as the saying goes, "the locomotive has crossed." I drove confidently and utterly quickly and I heard my dad's voice behind me ‘Masha brake, there we crossed a mountain stream! ‘. And in fright, I press the brake and feel the bike fly out from under my feet. I fall backwards and the bike goes straight into the river without me. Parents drive up. Mom picks me up, and dad calls the rescuers and explains the situation. We waited for them for about fifteen minutes and the rescuers arrived with a first aid kit and a rope to get the bike out of the river. And they took us to the hospital.

Eventually, I had a slight injury to my arm and a couple of bruises. As the doctor said, "You have got off easy yet." We arrived at the hotel scared, tired, but satisfied. I have never experienced such emotions again.

«Aspire an inspire»

2020-11-26 12:34:46 UTC

To my mind we live in the world with a lot of opportunities. Now, if you want to be an artist or a musician, it won’t be a problem for you. However, it can be only one nuance. Where can you find inspiration for your future masterpieces? Louise Harper found her inspiration on a desert island. The old saying, ‘aspire to inspire’ is definitely true based on story of Louise’s life.

She finished the university and started to work as illustrator in the local edition. She was working there for a long period of time when she decided to quit her job and went on a trip. She bought a ticket to cruise ship to Bangkok. However the ship was wrecked.

The following day was utterly boiled. The sun was shining. Louise opened her eyes and understood that she was on a desert island. She had spent there one month when the lifesaver find her. After all the girl had experienced, she discovered a talent for landscapes.

In one of her interviews Louise said ‘This shipwreck helped me to find a new self. The felling that I experienced made me discover something new and unknown in me. I am proud to be able to inspire other peoples’. However now she will never go to Bangkok. She believes that it was God’s Sign.

Lola💗

Light at the end of the tunnel

2020-11-26 14:18:05 UTC

I could have lied about what happened then, but I will tell the truth - that day I will never forget. A year ago, when I was on vacation with friends, we decided to try ourselves in diving. It was a bed of rose's for me, unlike friends who dived for the first time. However all divers say that skill comes with experience.

One such day we decided to try an extreme sport - cave diving. Our instructor then discouraged us. 'This is very dangerous!', He said. Already when we were wearing brand new equipment for diving, we started to get nervous. At first everything was fine, but the further we sailed into the underwater cave, the more we panicked. It was totally dire and if it weren't for the powerful lights, we wouldn't even see the tip of our nose. It was very nice inside. The walls of the cave glittered and were repelled with paints. Suddenly the light went out.

We started swinging our arms and legs in an attempt to find each other, which was very dangerous. But in the end, we just scratched the air cylinder's quite a bit. The instructor turned on a spare flashlight that was barely visible in the dark. We turned around and swam in the opposite direction. And when there was a stone's throw to the end of the path, and the light at the end of the tunnel was in close vicinity, I realized that I couldn't breathe.

I grabbed the instructor's hand. At first he didn't understand what had happened. At that moment, I like a bat out of hell began to swim forward. My ears were stuffed up by the pressure and there was almost no air. To my happiness, I managed to emerge. As I was later explained, 'You damaged the air cylinder.'

In fact, now thinking about it, I understand that it was my own fault in that situation. Panic is your worst friend.
(Story from Masha)

Extreme bike riding(Dima)

2020-11-26 14:34:27 UTC

It was hot and boring summer I was sitting and playing computer all the morning.But Then my parents ask me that I want to try extreme bike riding.

Say that I was overjoyed that say nothing, because I ride my bike great since I was 8.
Then we went to there where we could do it
We look at their site and ordered 3 tickets and went there.They say that I can take bike for hire there but I preferred take my bike.
When we came they offered to me try the first road for the bike but it wasn't interesting and I want to check out the forest road with
obstacles and moreover they say that on the trees they have cameras and I can take videos or fhotos of my riding.It was my first try extreme sport and it was Fantastic
and fearfully at the one moment that was the most interesting thing what i was doing in my life,but in one moment when my bike hit on a stone his wheel fell off and I break my leg,It was very painfully but I try to concentrate on save myself I try to fhone to my parents but there wasn't connection the moment I remember that they say that in the forest they have cameras on stone pillars I was finding this pillar and some time later I found it I waved my hand in hope that someone will saw me And someone really saw me.The group of people came to me and bandaged my leg and help me to came to the base.

If really this situation in no way discouraged my desire to ride a bike,on the contary added it.

Snow in summer

2020-11-26 14:45:44 UTC

(by Artem)
It was 23 July. I was somewhere in this small peace of this endless world that we call Earth.

I was thinking about nothing. Perhaps nothing was thinking about me but I didn't ask.During this extremely thrilling process I understood that I have window. First I couldn't see there anything special. Just usual freezing winter. And only than I saw the date. 23 july. Snow. Freezing. Me. Window.

It was utterly strange that when I saw my mom she was in calm. The only thing, I could say was 'What...?' She expained me what had happend there.I understood everything.

Finally, I know that you have one question. The last question. The main question of all this story.
Hope you wanted to say 'Why didn't you ask nothing'. If you ask me, I want to say that It's false. I came to it and said 'Was you thinking about me while I was doing it'.
However It didn't answer...

Time to make changes

egorvernidub10 — 2020-11-26 15:24:17 UTC

I think everybody have some rituals for the weekends holidays, and just for the seasons of the year, but at the same time we have time to change yourself, to break rules and just to try everything what ever we want to. To my mind it's my turn attempt to break my habits. I will start from my scare.

It was an amazing summer day, the first day of the summer holidays. The sun was shining brightly and it was completly boiling. All of my family ware sitting in the car and my dad was driving it.It was something like a trip on the wild beach with all of our friends. Just for two-three days. We have the trip like this three - four times a year, always in summer.
After two hours, we had finally arrived, all of the people have already been there.My uncle was there too, he always brought same extremal thing here. thre was only one thing that I had never tried before, it was wakesurfing.
When I saw the board, the first thing that i think about 'Maybe it's time to overcome my fears?!'. I was the first pearson who want to go wakebording in this day. After half an hour when I came into the waterand understood that the water was freezing. I feeling quite nervous, but in this moment my uncle come into the water, it mean the there isn't road back. I exzostied to stand up on the board more than five times and qalways fell down, but I always try it for one more time, because I tald to myself that I must stand up on it.

Finally, I stand up on a board.
I think that all off the words can't describe the emotional that you fell when you stand up on the board. I always was scare about wakeboarding, I just was siting on the beach and watch at the people who had already tried it. All what I want to say it that it can be utterly arduos, but don't be scare to try something new. It time to make changes, it's time to find yourself.

Vicky

Story from Vika

2020-11-26 15:28:45 UTC

‘Hold on tightly’, they said

All my life I thought that bungee jumping is the most extreme sport , otherwise I changed my opinion after what I had experienced last summer. I was sunbathing on the beach near utterly breathtaking ocean. The weather was adorably amazing .My sister invited me to try water skiing . I agreed , nevertheless in the ocean was huge waves it really scared me and I started to feel myself really ill.

At first we were training to how we need to hold on the rope and what we need to do if we let go of it .After that we gone to the boat and moved to the depth .A lot of things made me nervous , nevertheless I was utterly powerful.Instructor saw that I wasn’t ready . “Just recharged your batteries”, he said . And it made me more confident .
Then I went to try it . Everything was okey . Suddenly I understood that I can’t felt my hands and I let go of the rope and fell into the water . When I emerged I saw nobody around me . It was terrible... I started to scream . Fortunately I saw a man who was sailing on the boat .

Finally this man helped me to get to the coast . On the beach I saw my sister with instructor. They was scared more than me . And I understood that if you feel horrible, won’t do extreme sport .

"Don`t be afraid to face fear"

2020-11-26 15:41:32 UTC

It was the most ordinary day of last winter and my family decided to attend the Carpathians in order to learn to ski. Of course, many things can go wrong when you`re new to us was immortally unusual and I was scared. Our instructor saying "don`t be afraid to face fear" is definitely true based on our experinse!

We came to our first lesson and my mom and I felt anxious. "Stay calm" our instructor said, "at first it will be scary, but then you wiil like it!" The lesson was really thrilling and impressive. By the end of first we were completely exhausted.

The following day, my mom decided to demonstrate what she had learned with the instructor and left the mountain.
How it turned out, she climbed the wrong mountain and moved to another area where no one lived. "Where did she go?" I asked instructor and we lost mom from our eyes. We searched for her long time and therefore contacted the security center.

Fortunately, an hour later my mother was found, but all this time I was totally nervous. She said that she even liked to walk around unfamiliar places and carry skis in her hands :)

Lera

Dangerous swimming

2020-11-26 17:01:37 UTC

A lot of people get into some dangerous situations in their lives, especially in their childhood.

Years ago me and my family went to a beach. We used to go there quite a lot then. The day was warm, sun was shinning high up in the sky. Me and my parents went swimming, even though I had never learn how to swim then, so I had to use these sleeve protectors for children. We swimmed far enough, so the sea level was too deep for me.

For some reason I really wanted to go even further, but it became utterly diffcult for me to move. Then I made a harsh move which caused my sleeve protectors to completely slip off my arms.

The next moment I feel that my body goes under the water. Once I realised what happened I was completely terrified. 'Am I drowning?', I thought. I was panicing because it was too deep for me to swim up.

Fourtunately, I felt someone's hand grab me and pull me up. When I got up I saw that it was my dad. I felt relieved.

From that moment I haven't gone too far away from the beach and finally learnt how to swim.

(Ann)

This was my first time...

2020-11-26 17:56:07 UTC

I don't know how many people do sports regularly, someone prefers an active life, while someone likes to lie on the bed and eat pizza while watching movie.

On the one wonderful morning my friend Max called me and invited me go to the stadium and see how other people will play hockey. Of course i agreed. It was thrilling for me to see, because I never seen how people play at hockey at real life. Suddenly when we left the house, it started to rain and Max said "Maybe we call taxi?". I fully agreed with him.

Finally we arrived at the stadium. The players demonstrated what they can do, it was cool. All of the sudden once of the players invited try us to play hockey. I said "I can't play", but they told me what they teach me. When i came on ice, i couldn't stand on feet. But after ten minutes i was running like i was born for this. It was a surprise to me, I really liked it.

However all of good ended when Max in the end of a game broke his leg... We called in ambulance and Maxim was take away. Luckily, everything was fine and after two weeks Max was on his feet.

Danya

2020-11-26 19:10:00 UTC

Alex's story

The story of how we got lost during a blizzard

This was last winter. My family and I went to a ski resort in Austria. That was incredible. It was very adorablе there. When we climbed to the top of the mountain and saw this view, we got goosebumps. The first time everything was great. We went skiing and went to the hotel. The next day there was not a strong snow storm. We decided to go for a ride, but when we went upstairs, the storm intensified and we saw nothing. We decided to go downstairs but turned the wrong way and got lost.

We confused the road and wandered into a closed road. It was very cold and we decided to wait out the storm under the tree. After a couple of minutes, the storm died down and we found the road down. We went into a restaurant and drank hot tea and ate a hot dog. Mom came, we told her everything, but she did not believe it.

In the end everything was fine but i got a little sick

Веttег late than never!

2020-11-27 13:48:01 UTC

This is a story about how I first tried to play volleyball.

It was an ordinary winter day. When I returned home from school, my friend Vadim invited me to volleyball practice. I refused because I had never played volleyball before and, in general, I am not a very athletic person. However Vadim somehow managed to convince me. When we came to the gym, I had a problem.

I had forgotten my trainers. After that I was about to leave, but one of Vadim's friends gave me his second pair. At the beginning of the warm-up, I was very nervous because I couldn't do anything. The guys in the gym helped me to get comfortable and after 20 minutes I felt more confident. Later we started a training match so I was completely cheerful about it because I really wanted to play.

During the match, I enjoyed the game and even managed to play well. Nevertheless as usually, I had a problem. In the second match I jumped wrong and fell on my finger. Unfortunately I broke it. Vadim called an ambulance quickly and I went to the hospital, but even so, I really enjoyed playing volleyball.

Artem

Dangerous surfing on a deserted beach!

2020-11-27 14:04:19 UTC

I remember my grandmother used to say in my childhood, ' Cross the stream where it is shallowest!'. Then I thought it was just her nonsense, but after some stories I realized that she was incredibly right.
Me and my two friends Tom and Sam decided to go surfing on one of the deserted beaches.We are professional surfers, we have been doing this for a long time.
The following morning after arrival, we immediately went to the beach. The weather was beautiful. Having prepared, without thinking, we went into the water. For some reason, no one was embarrassed by the fact that there was no one on the shore. Me and Sam
quickly got a taste, unlike Tom, who in his next unsuccessful fall hit his leg painfully on a stone. Tom said: "I swam ashore," to which we answered: "We will still remain in the water." After five minutes Tom had already swam to the shore and bandaged his leg. But then he noticed a shark that was not far from us, and immediately began to shout to us about it. But the trouble was that we didn't hear him.At some point, he realized what could happen and swam to us.After he shouted to us and we quickly swam an а large stone.
Finally, everything worked out. Tom called the rescuers and they saved and me from the shark. After all that happened, I can only say one thing: "Go to rest only in the checked places"!
( Ksenia )

Be careful what you wish for

2020-11-27 14:38:39 UTC

Sometime in our life we all lack desperate and risky actions. It can be cutting your hair, bungee jumping or swimming with shark. You never be absolutely prepared to do something extreme and dangerous otherwise critical situation force you . My story totally confirm it!

It was the last day of my trip in Poland. I met my friend and she told me about her parachute jump. I was surprised , but as she said 'It was incredibly enjoyable. Moreover advised me to do it. Honestly, I was really inspired by such thrilling experience and decided to parachute.

The following day I was going to Ukraine by plane. I felt a bit sad and in the same time I was waiting for jumping when I would come home. After two hours immortally wonderful flight, something went wrong. The airplane was vibrating . People screamed and didn't understand what was going on. We heard frightening ' Don't panic! The plane is falling! Take parachutes and get ready to jump' Everybody was devastatingly terrified. One by one we were jumping. I had imagined my jumping for another way nevertheless I hadn't much time to be nervous. I jumped. After 3 seconds I opened my parachute. What an amazing view! While I was flying, I was seeing breathtaking nature from the top. I was enjoying completely during I was in the air.

Fortunately, everything ended well. All people were alive . To be honest, situation completely horrible and it's almost different from I wished. I did not parachute again but I am glad that I had this experience.

(Nastya)

“Adventure time”

2020-11-27 14:52:57 UTC

Many people are afraid of adventure. I am too! However, one situation turned everything. It was a wonderful weekend. I decided to try myself in something new. I wanted to try mountain biking. I want to go up the mount.

Before I arrived I found an instructor and even agreed with him for a lessons. On the second day we are met. He showed everything we need when we go for a drive. He said, “Don’t worry I will be there”, and off we went. We rode bicycles sometimes took breaks.

It got dark. Our lessons were ending. We were returning back when unfortunately my bike turned off the path and drove down. My brakes were broken. Suddenly I saw a huge tree. I decided to jump off my bike before it crashed. I jumped and screamed "Oh my Gosh". I fell on the grass. My instructor was running to me while I was trying to get up.

Together we climbed the right path and went to the car. When we got to the car, I realized that I had lost my bracelet. But I didn't care about the bracelet I wanted to go home. When I got home I went to bed.

It's been a week since that day. I'm glad that I decided on such an adventure. It was really fantastic. By the way, I found the bracelet at home two days later. All this time I thought that I had lost him. Nevertheless no. Well don’t be afraid of this time – “Adventure time”.

(Anastasia) 0_0

Email 💗

2021-01-10 14:27:22 UTC

Hi baby,

Having an awesome time with my tiny niece. She’s utterly gorgeous. ~~You~~ should come and visit us soon.

I know that it will be so cool. My sis told me about ~~this~~ it and I saw a lot of posters in insta. Believe your mother will let you go. Really, can’t believe they you will be there. Can only dream about it.

The first thing you should do - is just talk to mom about it. You should say that you are old enough and you won’t do something stupid. Why don’t you ask you elder brother to help? He can explain your mum that the festival it’s an ordinary entertainment for teenagers and it’s perfectly safe. It’s also a good idea to take Sam with you. I reckon your mother will definitely not mind.

BTW, thanks for your presents to my baby niece. She was utterly thrilled with the brand new toys. This crocodile is so charming.

I’m sure things will be OK.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Lola:)

Writing email:)

2021-01-11 09:03:18 UTC

Hey Kiki,

I still remember our trip to the camp. It was utterly funny. Must see each other soon)).

Pity that I couldn’t come and go to the concert with you. It’s quite cool that you still go there. I can see why you unhappy, but know your mom, she needs to be persuaded correctly. It will bad of roses, she is no so strict.

The first thing you should do is what can be done to make her stop worrying. Have you thought about your older brother, perhaps he can go with you ? It’s better than going with mom and guess he love concerts. Ohh, but your brother is a breadwinner in the family and may not have a time. Spare idea. If I were you, I’d say that there will be a lot of people and will utterly arduous to get into trouble. Introduce mom to all the friends you go there with. In my opinion it’s good thinking. And as a last resort, take your mom with you, it’s better than not going at all.

Incidentally, did you hear that the new season of the series Stranger Things will be released. I hope we will watch it together like the previous seasons;). Say new actors will appear there.

I’m sure things will work out fine, don’t worry please)))

Hope to see you soon,

Maria

Writing email:)

2021-01-11 09:03:31 UTC

Writing from Artem

2021-01-11 11:35:23 UTC

—small explanation for reader—
Clara is my sister. However we don't live together. When we were children our parents began to live separatly and I stayed with my father. We have never met in real life because our mother hates me and my dad. I've always been chatting with Clara online. But once we've got a chance to go to the festival that was providing in my town. Mom didn't let her to go.

—Email—
Hello Clara,

Eternally grateful for your email. Fortunately still alive

Was confused when I've got your letter. Can't believe it's true! I see why you are worried. We haven't seen each other for more than 8 years! And your mum says that you ain't able to go there?!

Have you thought about saying that I won't be there. I know that it's terrible to lie. Merover we don't have another way. It's a good idea to say that you will go with Zhenzhen. Mom loves her. Definitely if I were you I would do everything possible to come to the festival. Also you can promise her that you won't speak with anybody there. Know that she afraids of that.

Incidentally, did you hear that there will be 'quiet room' It's a place where nobody speaks. There are no sounds at all. Hope to get there with you.

Forever yours,

A.A.

Email

2021-01-11 13:34:07 UTC

Hi Emily

Having a great weekend. You should visit our native city again.

I'm glad that you are healthy in our time. I can see why you're unhappy, however it's for our safety. Don't be too upset that the concert has been postponed to next year.

Have you thought about getting better prepared for the concert during this time? Sure the guys in the group will be happy to practice, however don't overdo it. It's a good idea to start writing a new song, cause you can definitely describe everything that happened during the quarantine.

By the way, thanks for the delicious pumpkin pie recipe. Parents were happy to eat it. Now they are waiting for you.

I'm sure everything will be OK.

Best wishes,

Masha

Email

2021-01-11 15:07:37 UTC

Hey Lucy,

Had already read the book that you recommended to me last time. An amazing story. You must to find some more interesting book for me.

Sorry to hear about all of it. I understand what a difficult situation it is. My mum always worried about myself. Certainly, you can always find a solution to the problem.

Perhaps, I can help you? Have you thought about promise her you'll call before you go to bed and first thing in the morning? Why don't you go for the day and come home in the evening? Oh... It's a good idea to tell her you're staying at my house. It might work.

Incidentally, did you hear that Mary, my sister from another mister will marry. Her "husband" is utterly ridiculous person. Can't believe that she will be a wife of somebody. Seems like five minutes ago we were sitting at the garden and playing dolls.

I'm sure everything will be OK.

All the best,

Vicky 💕

email

2021-01-11 15:30:09 UTC

Hi Dasha,

I can see why you're unhappy, however I reckon we can come up with the way how to solve your problem!

Seems like your mum is really worried about you! Why don't you try to explain her that there's nothing to worry about? You can tell her you'll text her before going to bed and once you wake up. It's also a good idea to remind her that my big brother is coming. Hope it'll reassure
her a bit!

By the way, thank you so much for lending me your coat! I'll return it to you soon!

I'm sure thing will work out fine. Hope to see you soon!

Best wishes,
Ann

Email

2021-01-11 19:58:01 UTC

Hi Ben
I had already watched that film that you recomend for me last week
Heard that your mother don't let you to the festival this week and I'm so sorry about that.My mother always worried when I leave somewhere for example for a walk or just go to the cinema with friends.But I found a way to solve this problem.An example last month my friends invite me go camping and my mother don't let me to go.We agreed on that I will call her every 3 hours all the day.You tryed to assure her with words like you will be safe and will call her for her sure?
However I want to tell you that my perents bought me a new fhone and we can play our favourite game more.
I'm sure that everything will be ok.
Hope to see you soon
Dima

Email )

2021-01-13 18:32:40 UTC

Hi sweetheart,

Thanks for your email .Grandma feels herself better . Fortunately, she can stand up and walk !) Should come and visit her.

I can see why you’re disappointed , otherwise you can understand your mother too!) Seems like I was in your place and mummy didn’t want to allow me to go to the festival. Can’t believe that now you’re going to the festival!!

Have you thought about going to the festival for the day and come home in the evening ?) It will be utterly awesome, cause mummy won’t worry about where will you sleep, etc . You will have great time all day !! If I were you , I’d do like this . It’s good idea to asked your friends to make video for you in the evening)

By the way , wanna tell you that brand new Ariana's Grande album will be released next week!!!! Can you imagine ?Guess that it will be breathtaking music))

I’m sure everything will be perfect ;)

Love ,
Vika

Email (Test) - Lola 💗

2021-01-14 19:20:57 UTC

Hi Eddie,

Reading a new book now. Perhaps, you have already heard about it. Love this book so much.

I can see why you’re worried ~~about~~. Nevertheless, you shouldn’t get upset about this. I had such situation last year when I broke my leg. (AND??) However, it wasn't the worst ~~days~~ ^dayof my life, ~~yuo~~ ^youjust need to spend this time with pleasure.

If I were you, I would start watching series. What about «Game of Thrones»? Really nice movie(WW) television series. Have you though(S) thought about embroidery? My sister is a huge fan of it and I also love it. I think you need to order a new game. Can play with your sis. I’ve heard about (MW) an online book club lately. Free for everybody. I reckon you’ll love it:) My best friend visites(S) visits it and she’s over the moon ~~about this club~~.

By the way, thanks for (MW) the sweets which you sent(G) which you have sent me to me. This blue chocolate was utterly delicious. I have already become an aunt and I’m so cheerful about it. (???????) Also I have already become an aunt and I am so glad about it. My tiny niece is utterly amusing.

I’m sure things will be OK:)

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sam

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Test (Vika)

2021-01-14 20:35:37 UTC

Hi Eddie,

Thanks for your email. I’m perfect cause grandpa is coming from (MW) the voyage!Come and visit him soon !!

I can see why you’re disappointed. Seems like my situation that I had last year , otherwise I just was(WOW) ill I was sick. Can’t believe that on your blog are 1000 subscribers! That’s utterly awesome !))))(WRONG PARAGRAPH). It was the best period ~~of time~~ for me !))I guess that you will have lots of trips^{in future}!!

Have you thought about watching films and making reviews of them ?) It’s a good idea to do this , cause lots of teenagers love it!) If I were you , I’d find people from another country and chat with them . In this way you can practise your foreign language skills!!!Try it !)

By the way , did you hear that J.K.Rowling have presented four brand new books ?) Have read one of them . Breathtaking!!!!!Especially I like cover of this book!You must read them !))

Hope ~~that~~ everything will be OK ;)

Forever yours ,
Sam

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Email Test( Maria)

2021-01-15 08:48:49 UTC

Hey Eddie,

Pity that you left me so quickly and we didn’t try mom’s utterly tasty pancakes. Come to us again, (P)you must try it.

Ohh, Eddie It’s utterly sad (MW)what happens(G) happened to your back. It’s not ^a(MW)bad(S) bed of roses ^to(MW)lie down and ~~can’t~~ do nothing. I understand why you’re unhappy. As soon as you feel better, let’s go let’s go ^{for a} walk to(WW) the(WW) walk and ~~let’s~~ eat our favorite ice cream.

So Okey(S), let’s think, what else you can do. If I were you , I’d draw drew(S) on your tablet. You don’t have to get up and sit down at the to(WW) (MW) table. The best thing would be to watch tutorial videos like make up or how to cook something. It not arduous but utterly helpful. It’s It would be ^a(MW)good ~~thinking~~ ^ideato check it out Brenda(S) brand new trendy clothes.In my opinion It would be ^aperfect idea:) I guess it’s good thinking. (???)

By the way, you ~~was~~ read(G) ^readmy book. So, what(WW) who is your favorite hero? ~~Tell~~ Tell(WW) Edward is quite cool^{, right?}. Just fell in love with this book :)

I’m sure everything will be OK.

Hope to see you soon,

Sam

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Test (Artem)

2021-01-15 16:56:45 UTC

Hello Eddie,

Eternally grateful for your email. Agree that this book was amazing. Especially the ending. It hurts too much.

It's a shame to hear that you have problems (without a) a problems(G) with your back. Can see why you are worried.(MORE)
However it's not time to suffer. There are a lot of thing, u haven't done yet.

Nevertheless, have you thought about your health? Know that school trip was you dream and you don't want to skip it. ~~Also,~~ ~~I haven't failed to remember that you will try to get there even without legs(??)~~.(if you don't like it I will delete it) However you need to take care of yourself. If you want I can lend you one more book. If you want, so I can give you all the (MW)books from all the (MW)libraries in the world. Just stay in your bed and don't go anywhere.(ONE MORE ADVICE PHRASE)
It's a good idea to start reading nonfiction.

By the way, yesterday I watched an (MW)amazing film. I failed to remember the name of it but it was literally the best film I've ever seen. I will say the name of it later.

I'm sure things will be Ok.
Stay positive and leave all bad thoughts in 2020.

Forever yours,

Sam

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Writing(Masha)

2021-01-16 08:19:34 UTC

Hi Eddie,

Having a great time with my family this weekend. Mom baked a tasty cake. If you want, I can give a the recipe.

I can see why you are unhappy. Don't be too upset about an ^being(MW)unable to go on this school trip. However do you know how many trips you still have?

Why don't you write ~~the~~ ^{on your} a(WW) blog about what you can do when you must lie in bed all day? If l were you, l would also start watching some brand new Netflix series ~~from~~(WW) ~~Netflix~~? Do you have a Netflix subscription? It's also a good idea to do DIY.

By the way, glad ~~that~~ you liked my brand new book. ~~It was a bed of roses for me to let you read it. (??)~~

?????????? I'm sure everithing will be OK. ~~Write to me more often.~~

Best wishes,

Sam.

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Test(Dima)

2021-01-16 09:55:25 UTC

*After*
Hi Eddie
(MISSING PARAGRAPH)

I'm so sorry about your bad feel.I understand that school trip must have been important for you but it but it's much better that you feel lighter

Did y ou measure your temperature and take the pills prescribed by the doctor?. If your bad feeling doesn't pass you can ask your friends to send fhotos(S) for you.If I were you I would ask my friends to take my camera and take a lot of pictures that places you would like to see.
Incidentally,did you hear that the sale of games with discounts started on the incentive And I bought both of us a new online game, we can play it later

I'm sure that everything will be Ok and your bad health will disappear even before the school trip
Stay cool
Dima

*Before*
Hi Eddie
(MISSING PARAGRAPH)

I'm so sorry about your bad feel.I understand that school trip must have been important for you (P)I think.

Its not easy but at first stay calm, (P)because your disease can pass before (MW)trip.But if it will not pass(G),you can ask your friends to send fhotos(S) for you.If I were you I ask(G) my friends to take my fhotocamera (S) and take many fhotos(S) and say that places you would like to see.(???)Oh by the way I bought a new game in steam for us so I(WW) you feel better (P)we can play it.(paragraph)

Everything will be Ok.Get well(PARAGRAPH) (P)
Dima

test (Ann)

2021-01-16 15:57:09 UTC

Hi Eddie,

Thanks for your e-mail. Feeling OK as usual. Glad you've enjoyed the book.

I can understand how upsetting it must be. Hope you will recover as soon as possible. However, I reckon you'll attend a plenty of exciting journeys in future!

In my opinion, It's an excellent idea to watch some films, series or documentaries cause they can be a great source of knowledge and entertaiment as well as books. When I had to stay in bed for a long time, movies saved me from boredom. Also, why don't you try a new hobby that doesn't need a lot of physical activity? You can try(GS) start drawing, for instance. Who knows, maybe you have some hidden talents.

BTW, I've tried snowboarding for the first time last week. Was really afraid to even step on a board at first(P) but then realised that it's actually an awesome activity.

I'm sure you'll recover quickly and will be able to go on another, maybe even more interesting, trip! Looking forward to for(WW) your reply!

CU,
Sam

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homework

valeripodolskaya — 2021-01-17 11:00:23 UTC

Hi Mary,

Thank you very much for your letter. Hope everything goes well for you. I`m fine too.

In your last letter you wrote that mom doesn`t let you go to the festival with friends and she`s worried.

I can see why you`re unhappy, but this is not a reason to be upset. Can give a couple of tips about this problem.

If I were you, I would suggest my mother that she can call at any time to make sure that everything is fine with me. Its also a good idea to invite someone older to the festial, for example a big sister. She`ll look after you.

Incidentally, thanks for the sweets - I`ve already eaten them all. Would be glad if you send more :)

I`m sure everything will be OK.

Have fun,
Lera.

Email (Anastasia)

hahaugar45 — 2021-01-18 08:54:53 UTC

Hey Sophie,

Having a colorful day, thanks. That’s very good to hear you!

About your mum. I can see what you upset nevertheless I can understand your mum. She loves and always cares about u. Cause you are her daughter. However if you really want to get to this festival need to look up a solution to the problem.

Why don’t you said that you’ll call to her? E.g. if you’ll call all the time she’ll be peaceful. It’s a good idea to tell your mum that everything okay :)) On the other hand you really ought to be careful. Besides have you thought about your mum going with you? Your mother is cool. It’ll be joyfully!

Oh, by the way did you hear that Rihanna came to my city. Can’t believe it :D!!! Hope I’ll go on her concert!!!!!

I’m sure things will work out fine.

Love,
A.

Email (Nastya)

2021-01-18 23:24:05 UTC

Hey, Nicole,

Never better. Falling in love with my new school.

It's a shame you frustrated nevertheless I can see why you are. All mothers always worried too much including mine. However aways remember she really loves you. Any activities doesn't cost relationship with her.

Have you thought about camping with your mom before the festival? She'll glad spend time with daughter moreover believe you're responsible and can stay safe. If I were , I'd also tell more about the festival, facilities , people around etc. Perhaps worrying cause of uniforming.

By the way, I send you the homecooked sweet surprise. Wait for sth special and pleasant.

I'm sure things will work out fine.

Love,
Nastya

Email (Artem)

ivanivanov11223324 — 2021-01-19 14:43:13 UTC

Hi Lucy,

Glad to hear from you again. Thanks for writing to me.

Now about your email. I understand that you are probably angry with your Mom, but you need to stop being angry. All moms are very worried about their children and mine too. If I were you, I wouldn't get mad at Mom.

The best thing would be to tell her to call you herself if she is worried. Once I told this to my mother and she let me go on a hike. But you have to answer her every call. After the festival, you should go up to Mom and apologize to her. I guess then she won't be angry anymore.

By the way, I'm going to come to your city after winter. I'll bring you a couple of gifts later I'll write about it later.

I'm sure everything will be OK.

Hope too see you soon,
Artem

Email (Danya)

2021-01-19 15:40:45 UTC

Hi Kylie

Thanks for your email.
Really happy to hear you.

I read you email and here is my advice. I understand what your mum worried about you and this situation with festival. At first, try to убедить her what with you will go your friends and what everything will be OK.

You can her with you so she doesn't worry, it would be fun :).
If i were you, I would be tell her where I and what happens with me. I'm sure if you tell her this, she will not worry and will let you go to festival.

By the way, did you hear about summer rock festival? My favorite band will be there, really waiting for this!

I'm sure everything will be good.
Think you can go to festival.

Waiting for your next letter, see you soon,

Your brother)

Email (Ksenia)

2021-01-22 15:44:22 UTC

Hello Maria,
was very happy when got letter from. Really
really miss you.

When I found out that your parents broke down your live because not allowed you became singer, I was disappointed. Don't worry about this situation because many parents the same opinion. But later they change their mind.

If you want to be singer, you must make this in live.
Think this is cool turn into famous singer or band. You should pick alone up your profession. Hope you take up wonderful career.

How is your dog Bakky? Want to see she. Say hello to her.
I know all will be OK.

Love, miss already,
Ksenia.

Test (Ksenia)

2021-01-22 18:01:04 UTC

Hello Mike,
How are you? I was very interested your text for history lesson. (????)

But this not vere(S) actually (PS)now because l'm sick. And(P) wouldn't(G) set off to the trip with you. Don't worry this is not hard(T), but(P)I must stay at home and drink pills and more tea. But(P) this not hard(T). I might go to the school for next week(G). Now I waiting(G) (MW)video from you.

Oh, I forgot told(G) that my parents buy (G)me a new phone. Really cool?(??) When turn up to(WW) the school (P)(MW)show you new phone.

See you soon,
Ksenia.

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Test (Anastasia)

hahaugar45 — 2021-01-22 20:16:38 UTC

Hey Eddie,

Having a wonderful day! Glad to hear (MW)for ^fromyou.

I was so surprised to hear that you`re sick moreover you won`t to go(G) on (MW)a school trip to the(MW)Marburg Castel. I understand why you are upset.(G) However I`ll help you solve this problem.

Why don`t you tell your friend to make a video for you? Good idea if(WW) that your friend ~~to make~~(G) makes a video and after that you can watch ~~this video~~(T)it and write something on your blog. Have you thought about your friend calling by on ⁱⁿ(WW) the ZOOM(WOW). I`m sure you will enjoy this idea. Look, for instance your friend will be in ~~some~~ (WW)somewhere ~~place~~ and he will just call(G) and you will see everything. In my point of view ~~it a~~ this is good advice.(G)

Listen, did I tell you ~~about~~ that(WW) the "KISS" ~~that~~ is coming in this weekend(G)? ~~It will be amazing~~(G) It'll be cool. ^{Going to be cool}. Hope I go!!!!!)))))

Sure things will work out fine.

Take care,
A.

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Test (Artem)

ivanivanov11223324 — 2021-01-23 13:43:06 UTC

Hi Armin,

Glad to hear from you again. Thanks for writing to me.

~~I"m sorry for you~~,(PHRASE)I feel sorry for you ( but now you have to worry about your back. You shouldn't be very disappointed because of this.

I will give you some advice on how to avoid stress. To begin ~~I'm trying~~ I try(G) to figure out what can raise my mood. When I find something to take my stress away.(???) (P)my mood rises and the stress go ^goes(G)away. If I were you I would (P)watch a comedy or a TV series. After all ~~this~~ the best thing would be to go ~~hanging~~ for a walk(G) out with friends.

By the way, I'm going to come to your city next week (P)later I'll write where we can meet.

I'm sure everything will be OK.

Hope to see you soon,
Artem.

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Test (Nastya)

2021-01-23 15:01:46 UTC

Hi Eddie,

I'm pretty good(???). Enjoying last days of the winter holiday.

I can see why you are upset. To be ill is immortally horrible and miss(G) (MW) to miss the school trip is (MW)even worse. Nevertheless remember (MW) that your health is more significant than anything in the world. Sure you'll have another thrilling trip for the blog.

Why don't you start writing your own book? I have seen your posts- It's(G) It was ^{they are} exellent! Moreover you read really a lot(WOW) really read a lot. I believe you can write a wonderful story or novel. If I were you, I'd ask your friends to take a photos(G) photos and record a video from the Marburg Castle. You can edit a small film about the (MW)trip and publish it in the blog.

By the way, I'm going to visit your city. We'll meet next month.(remove some words) We'll meet ^{meet you next month}

I'm sure everything will be OK.

Bye 4 now(P),
Nastya

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Test (Lera)

2021-01-23 17:13:20 UTC

Hey honey,

Thank you very much for your letter. Glad that everything is OK around you. I'm fine too.

I can see why you're unhappy, but this is not a reason to be upset. Can give a couple of tips about this situation.

If I were you, I would suggest your school friends to take a lot of photos during the trip and send this photos to you. Why don't to tell your friends to start a live video and show you a Marburg Castle.

By the way, did you hear that in May there will be a Twenty one pilots concert in our city? Would you like to go?

I'm sure everything will be OK.

Love,
Lera.

(Artem)

ivanivanov11223324 — 2021-02-02 11:39:00 UTC

Hi Dima,

Thanks for the letter. Glad to hear from you again!

I saw what you write to me and I want to tell you that you wouldn't be nervous. I give you some advice about this situation.

if i were you, I would start studying for exams at the beginning of the year. First you need to repeat all the material that you forgot. Then I advise you to do tests and exercises to remember the material. To my mind this help you. Also turn off your phone when you studying it helps too.

By the way, did you hear the famous musician Max Korzh come to our city. Would you like to go with me to his concert?

I'm sure everything will be OK.

Hope to see you soon,
Artem

Writing from Artem

2021-02-11 15:34:41 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for choosing my suggestion as the winner.

I am so proud of myself. It is unbelievable that I won something. I still can not belive that it is true. If you do not mind I would like to ask you some questions.

First, I would like to get some more information about dates, travel arrangements and acomodation.
Also, I have a friend. Her name is Kiki. She wants to travel with me because Zaza lives in Switzerland. Zaza is her futher. Merover, she have not got a lot of money. So I am wondering if we can stay there for free.

Thank you once again for choosing me as a winner. I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Amurov Artem

(Ann)

2021-02-11 16:18:24 UTC

Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for your email informing me that my suggestion was choosen as the winner of the competiton.

It is surprising for both me and my friend that we have this opportunity to visit your factory in Switzerland. This is a rare chance so we will make sure to take the best out of this trip.

Could you inform me ~~about~~ what date the trip will be happening? I would also like to know the details about travel arrangements and accommodation. Could you confirm that we will travel and stay for free as well?

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Ann Sychuk

Email

2021-02-13 17:52:45 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your letter informing me that I have won the competition.

I am looking forward to this trip to Switzerland. I am over the moon about this. My friend and I was surprised when we received your letter. I am contacting you to enquire about details.

I have been always passion about a chocolate. My mum always named me «sweet tooth». I will finish school this year and I want to became a chocolatier. I like working with chocolate and making different sweets. Really, I can spend hours doing this.

Could you clarify where your factory is. I have read about different factories your network. Could you tell me if I need to book a hotel. Also I am interesting what the next dates are. I just need to buy ticket in advance.

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Your Faithfully,

Lolita Litvinova.

(Maria Homework)

2021-02-14 11:15:00 UTC

Dietary Sir or Madam

Thank you for your choosing me in your suggestion as the winner.

I was utterly shocked and happy. My friends and I watched the video about your chocolate factory and it was our dream to visit it. You made our dream come true and we got a chance to visit Switzerland.

I am contacting you to enquire about details that interest me.
Could you explain when you are going to send plane tickets for us? And I also like to know if you will meet us at the airport or we will get there ourselves? In ~~the~~ your email I read that you booked us a hotel, so can you tell me if we need to pay extra for rooms or food?

As I wrote earlier, I am going to Switzerland with my friends. An I have some questions about this. Can you confirm that their hotel rooms are also paid? And I would like to know if another person goes with us, but we ourselves will pay for everything, it will be not a problem?

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Your faithfully,

Maria Pashkova

Email

2021-02-15 14:12:35 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam

Thank you for your letter informing me that you have chosen my suggestion as the winner of this competition.

I am looking forward to go to your chocolate factory ! I was utterly shocked when I realised that I won this prize.It was my huge dream to be in your factory .I read a number of books about chocolate and your company

.I am contacting you to ask for more information about this trip.
Could you tell me what the dates will be ? I would also like to know if my friend __ stay and travel for free? Could you confirm me about travel arrangements and accommodation?

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,

Vika Kushnir

2021-02-15 15:01:19 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam

Thank you for your letter informing me that you

have chosen my suggestion as the winner.

I am really looking forward to getting to your factory. Before I won, I said that it would be in a bed of roses if I won and the next day I see I won. My friend and I were over the moon. It was a real shock for us.

Could you tell me information about dates also about travel accommodation and arrangements? Also a couple of questions about a trip to switzerland. is it paid for me and my friend as well? Can you confirm this?

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Your faithfully,

Alex

homework

valeripodolskaya — 2021-02-17 09:17:01 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your email informing me that you have chosen my suggestion as the winner of this online competition.

I am looking forward to go to your chocolate factory in Switherland. I want to admit that I was really surprised by this prize and will definitely come to you with my friends. I am contacting you to enquire about details.

Could you tell me when can me and my friend to visit your chocolate factory? I would also like to know if my friend ____ stay and travel for free? Could you explain me about travel arrangements and accommodation?

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Valeriya Podolskaya.

Email

2021-02-18 13:12:11 UTC

Dear Sir or Dear Madam,

Thank you for your email informing me that I have won this online competition.

I'm really glad I won. I want to thank you for such an incredible prize. At first, of course, I was very surprised at what I caught, I thought it was a joke. However then I realized that it was true and I was over the moon. By the way, my friend and I have long dreamed of visiting Switzerland. And I like chocolate at all.

Could you tell me information abot dates, travel arragements and accomodation? I would also like to know if my friend ___ stay and travel for free? Could you tell me if my friend can visit your factory for free?

Thank you once again for choosing me as a winner. I am looking forward to receiving your reply soon.

Your faithfully,

Masha

Letter

2021-02-18 14:04:31 UTC

Thank you for choosing my suggestion as the winner of your competition.

This is the first time I feel so happy because this is the first time I have won some kind of competition

.I would like to discuss what day the trip is scheduled for?And where I will live at the time of travel.

However I would like yo know my friend who comes with me have to pay for a place yo stay there or is it includes for him?

Look forward to hearing from you soon

Your sincerely ,
Dima

homework (Anastasia)

hahaugar45 — 2021-02-18 19:15:33 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Gratitude for your email informing me that you are choosing me suggestion as the winner.

My friend and I are definitely pleased about this opportunity and we look forward to visiting your chocolate factory in Switzerland. When I won in your online competition I was shocked. Before that I had never won anywhere and now I am overjoyed that I could. I am contacting you to enquire about the details.

Could you confirm when me and my friend can to visit your chocolate factory? I would also like to know about travel arrangements and accommodation.

Could you inform me ^that my friend will travel with me for free ? I also like to know if he is required to pay for a hotel.

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Anastasia Kovbosha

Homework. Nastya

2021-02-19 14:03:05 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for choosing my suggestion as the winner.

II feel incredibly pleased about visiting your chocolate factory. It will be the valuable experience for me and my friends.

Could you confirm what are dates of travelling to Switzerland and attending the factory? I would also like to know where an accommodation located is.

Could you clarify if tickets and residence for my friends is without cost?

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,

Anastasiya Radoutskaya

Chocolate fabric

2021-02-20 08:49:36 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for choosing my suggestion as the winner of your competition. I want to thank you for such an incredible prize.

I still can not belive that it is true. I won something for the first time and I was utterly shocked when I realized it. Me and my friend are looking forward to this trip to Switzerland. I read a lot of texts and watched some videos about chocolate and now the only one thing that I can think about it is your chocolate fabric. But now I am writing you to ask about details.

Could you tell me what the day of the visit is. Could you clarify where your factory is. I also want to know if my friend will travel for free.

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Your faithfully,

Viktoriia Vernydub

Homework. Artem

ivanivanov11223324 — 2021-02-23 13:38:55 UTC

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your email and for choosing my suggestion as the winner.

I still feel a little shock because I can't believe I won. This is not the first time I win, but this is the best thing I won. In my opinion, my friend and I will get unforgettable emotions on this trip.

Could you clarify ~~the date~~ when my friend and I can go to Switzerland. I would also like to know where the chocolate factory is and where we will live.

Could you confirm that my friend does not need to pay and he will be able to travel and stay for free.

I look forward to receiving your reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Artem Gribovskiy

2021-03-04 15:51:08 UTC

One day my parents decided to surprise me and go abroad. It was a secret that my mother gave me a riddle: "what is the capital of Great Britain?" I replied that the capital is London, I was right. We went to London and I was delighted. This will be my first time in London. When I first saw Big Ben, I said that this is the largest tower I have seen. My parents laughed.
Alex

ivanivanov11223324 — 2021-03-06 10:30:40 UTC

Hiya, Steve!

How are ya? It was good to hear smth from you. Im writting to tell you about my school and hobbies cause' you asked in your letter about this. So, let me give some more information about me.

As you know, I study in a very interesting school with kind teachers and I mean...too kind teachers for such a lazy person like me! We dont do much homework but we often do projects. im good at projects, this is the reason why I like my school. Im awesome at History and Literature. Moreover I'm bad at Chemistry and Math :confounded:. What about your school? What kind of teachers do you have in your school? What subjects are you good at?

You also asked about my hobbies...so, Im crazy about reading mangas and books but i like mangas more 'cause there are pictures with descriptions of sounds. Thats a really important thing when you read smth 🥺. Im also excited about drawing and playing video games. What about your hobbies and likes?

In letter you asked about my favourite music and what I do at the weekend...im keen on "The Cure" and "Mother Mother". You must listen to this music! :weary: For me these bands are like a family. Speaking about my weekends, well, i stay at home and sometimes go out with my friend. What about your fav music? And...what do you do at the weekends?

okay id better stop now. Say hello to your little sister and brother.

Cheers!
Alisa :heartbeat:

homework(Lera)

valeripodolskaya — 2021-03-31 16:04:50 UTC

Nowadays, we live in the world, where zoos with various and rare animals are most developed. At the moment, the actually theme in the world is animals, protection of animals and keeping animals in zoos.

One the one hand, a look some positive arguments. Firstly, There are opportunities for research. For example, we have learned more about genetics from studying zoo animals. Secondly, endangered species can be protected. For instance, some species which used to be wild are now only found in zoos. Moreover, many zoos have breeding programs to try and help endangered species. For instance, breeding programs are not cheap and paying visitors is the best way to fund them.

On the other hand the animals suffer from stress and depression. For instance, some animals become stessed because of contact with zoo visitors. Next, it is very difficult to recreate the animals natural environments. For example, birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds.
Also, under unnatural conditions, animals can stop reprodicing. For instance, this can lead to a reduction in the population of some rare animal species.

To sum up, visiting a zoo can be a wonderful way of spending time. To my mind, the zoo should be not just a place of entertainment. First off all, this is an institution for the protection and preservation of animals, people should understand this.

Writing (Lola)

2021-04-01 06:17:32 UTC

Nowadays, the best place for children’s entertainment is the zoo. Kids can observe different animals, play and just have fun. However, have you ever thought about animals, which want to live in the natural environment? Some people think that zoos should be closed, nevertheless others believe zoos are an integral part of childhood.

First of all, the zoo is a place where children can see different animals. In such a way, children learn about the environment by observing animals. For example, the tiger, about which the kids read in the book, can be seen live. Furthermore, endangered species can be protected. For instance, some species which used to be wild are now only found in zoos. There is also one more reason to keep animals in the zoo. There are opportunities for research. For example, we have learned more about genetics from studying zoo animals.

On the other hand, there are a lot of reasons to close zoos and let the animals go to their natural environmen. Firstly, animals are the same living beings as we, so they all have their own rights. For instance, they have their right for life, freedom and love. Secondly, in the zoos animals suffer from stress and depression. For example, some animals become stressed, because of contact with zoo visitors. Furthermore, it’s very difficult to recreate the animals natural environment. For instance, birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds.

To sum up, there are clearly strong arguments for and against closing and leaving zoos. To my mind, zoos should be closed, because keeping animals in captivity, we violate their rights. Animals need their natural environment.

Writing from Artem

2021-04-01 07:53:27 UTC

The first zoo in the world was opened in 1752. Imagine people seeing monkey for the first time.
I belive it was very unexpected. However, nowdays it has become usual entertainment for adults and children. Many people attend it every day. Nevertheless, there are some of them who think that this is not fair for animals.

On the on hand, there are a lot of arguments for keeping animals in zoos. First of all, it helps us explore them. For instance, people who have never been abroad can see and sometimes touch animals from all over the world. Futhermore, it protects animals and helps them stay alive. Some of them are not strong enough to stay alive in wild nature.

On the other hand, there are also many arguments against keeping animals in zoos. Firstly, they can suffer from stress and depession. Animals that was born in zoos do not know freedom. For example, birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds. Secondly, sometimes condition of some zoos can be disgusting. Animals can be starwing and freezing.

To sum up, there are a lot of arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos.
I reckon that in some way we should keep them but we must take care about condition of their life

You should have taken pros and cons as well as examples form the book.

Writing (from Masha)

2021-04-01 10:34:11 UTC

YOU DIDN"T WRITE IT!!

Since approximately 1250 B.C., when ancient Egyptian records describe birds, lions, and giraffes in captivity, zoos have entertained millions with exotic animals behind bars. Today, with species threatened and habitats disappearing worldwide, zoos are playing a new role in conservation. But are they really achieving what they claim? A growing number of critics argue no.According to the American Zoo and Aquarium Association (AZA), there are over 10,000 zoos worldwide.

On the one hand, there are arguments that we are conserving animals. Firstly, in zoos, animals are looked after, fed and watered, and diseases are treated. However, we will never reach the submerged conditions under which these animals live because we constantly need human intervention. Secondly, we can save animals that are on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, today some species of animals can be found only in zoos. So, for example, there are reserves in which this or that type of animal has been preserved for generations. Zoos also helped us study animals in more detail.

On the other hand, there are several inconsistencies. As it was said before, we will never achieve completely suitable natural conditions. So, for example, a bird in an aviary will never fly as freely as its relatives in the wild. Also, animals experience incredible stress when crowds of people look at them while standing behind the wall.

In conclusion, we get that man cannot create ideal conditions for animals. In my personal view, we should just leave them alone, because animals will constantly evolve, new species will appear and old ones will die out.

Writing from Dima

2021-04-01 11:21:14 UTC

KEEPING ANIMALS IN THE ZOO???

Nowadays , many of us have a cat or a dog at home, and those who already have them find it difficult to believe that someone lives without a pet.But others don't think it makes sense to keep pets.

First of all, having a pet is already a kind of plus to the mood.Futhermore stroking a pet calms down, reduces anxiety and stress, and this trick works even for those who do not consider themselves to be lovers of cats and dogs.

On the other hand approximately 20 percent of the population is allergic to animals, which complicates their maintenance.Instance even if a pet is kind to people, one must not forget that he also has his own needs, for example, to go for a walk.

To sum up have a pet its more plus than minus.Personally I think that have a pet and take care of him nice and fun.

writing (Ann)

2021-04-01 14:45:18 UTC

Zoos have become a regular source of entertaiment for most of people. I'm NO CONTRACTION (OFFICIAL STYLE) sure, lots of us have been there at least once. However, there are some argument regarding whether zoos are good or not.

Firstly, zoo gives a great opportunity for a detailed research about different species and their habitats. Some people also say that endangered species can be protected there, however, in my opinion, reserves are more suitable for this. In addition, I doubt that there could be a lot of rare animals at the zoo.

You GIve arguments and examples(You mustn't write your opinion here)

On the other hand, animals suffer from stress a lot. Of course they do, because they're being watched by thousands of people every single day. Also some zoo keepers don't take care of animals properly which can worsen their condition. It is hard to recreate natural enviroment species live in as well. For instance, it would be difficult to make polar bear's natural habitat in a small cage.

In conclusion, zoo might seem like a fun place to be but I'd rather go to some reserve because I feel like animals there are being safer.

You should have taken pros and cons as well as examples from the book.

Writing (Vika)

2021-04-01 15:40:54 UTC

In our time there are a lot of zoos . Every day millions of people visit this place to see different types of animals. For people it is a kind of entertainment. Some of people do not understand how animals live. So it is no surprising that the topic about keeping animals in the zoos is utterly negotiable.

On the one hand ,there are some good arguments for the idea of keeping animals in the zoo. First of all, it is a breathtaking place where endangered species can be protected. For instance, some species which used to be wild are now only found in zoos . Furthermore , in zoos there are opportunities for research. For example, we have learned more about genetics from studying zoo animals . In addition, ~~there are~~ the biggest argument for is that animals every time have water, food , medicine and they are protected from predators.

On the other hand , there are a number of arguments against. Firstly , in the zoo it is not a bed of roses to recreate the animal’s natural environments. For example, birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds . Secondly, the animals suffer from stress and depression. For instance, some animals become stressed , because of contact with zoo visitors .Furthermore, animals in zoos have shorter life than in their relatives whose live in wild environment.

To sum up , there are some reasonable arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos . In my view, zoos must stop their work , because it’ is a kind of businesses and a number of animals suffer from this terrible life ~~in zoos~~ . Nature created animals in wild environment we should not touch them at all.

Maria Hw

2021-04-01 15:57:34 UTC

Nowadays, many zoos operate around the world. This kind of entertainment for people has been popular since ancient times. But have you ever wondered how it affects animals? People are divided into two types, someone supporters zoos and sees nothing wrong with them and someone organizes protests if only the zoos are closed.

On the one hand, there are many arguments to prove zoos are even good for animals. First of all people help wounded animals and it is easier to look after them in the zoo. For example, if a bird cannot fly under the supervision of humans, it will be much safer than in the wild. Furthermore, it’s easier to study animals here. For instance, we have learned more about genetics from studying zoo animals.

On the other hand, all this can negatively affect animals. For example, some animals become stressed because of contact with zoo visitors or birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds. Zoos help animals. However if the conditions in the zoo are terrible, it will only harm the animal and will not save.

To sum up, if the conditions in the zoo are good and they help the animals and do no harm, then there is nothing wrong with that. In my personal view, animals can be rescued from injury and trouble, left in the zoo until complete recovery and, if possible, released back into the wild.

You should have taken pros and cons as well as examples form the book.

Homework (Anastasia)

2021-04-02 12:50:02 UTC

Nowadays, in the world we have a lot of zoos, almost in every city. Many people visit them every day. However, some people do not think that zoos are good for our planet. So people are divided into two camps: who are for and who are against. Which one is right?

On the one hand, there are several arguments for preserving animals in zoos. Firstly, there are amazing opportunities for research. For instance, we have learned more about genetics from studying zoo animals. In addition, we can find out new types of animals. Secondly, endangered species can be protected. For example, some species which used to be wild are now only found in zoos. Finally, animals will be healthy. If they live in zoos, specialists will look after them and help in case of anything. So many lives can be saved.

On the other hand, there are also many arguments against preserving animals in zoos. First of all, the animals suffer from stress and depression. For example, some animals become stressed because of contact with zoo visitors. They can feel immortally awful after that. The next disadvantage is that it is very difficult to recreate the animals’ natural environment. For instance, birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds. The last one of the strongest argument against zoos are it the same if people were in a cage. For example, imagine how you would feel yourself if you sat in a cage and people came and lookeed at you every day. Animals are like people. They need freedom.

To sum up, there are clearly strong arguments for and against preserving animals in zoos. I am convinced that zoos are horrible. We need to make more reserves in which there will be not visitors, only help for animals.

Homework. Nastya

2021-04-02 14:03:54 UTC

Currently we have a lot of various activities to spend time and zoos are one of them. Several years ago people enjoyed looking at animals in cages, but now more and more humans are against this place.

On the one hand, there are some positive effects. First of all species which can die out in the wild wil be protected. For example, an Asian lion that lives only in zoos and reserves. Furthermore many animals have been saved and recovered by people , especially hurt birds. Finally, the zoo is an opportunity for researching. For instance, we have been learning more about genetics.

On the other hand, there are also many arguments against keeping animal in zoos. Firstly, the animals suffer from depression. For example they can be stressed from contact with visitors. Furthermore, sometimes facilities in the zoo are horrible. For instance not enough food or space in a cage. In addition, it is very difficult to recreate the animals natural environments. For example, birds can never fly freely like it can in wild.

To sum up, there are clearly strong arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos. I am convinced that for animals it is better to live in freedom .

2021-04-05 14:33:35 UTC

KEEPING ANIMALS IN ZOOS

Nowadays, many kinds of animals live in zoos. For most people, it is hard to imagine a world without zoos, in such place like this, there are animals who have never had contact with the outside world. Some people think that we should leave them in the wild, but other believe they should stay in cages.

On the one hand, there are several arguments for leaving them in the wild. First of all, the animals suffer from stress and depression. For example, some animals become stressed because of contact with zoo visitors. Furthermore, It is very difficult to recreate the animals natural environments. For instance, birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds.

On the other hand, there are also many arguments to save them in the zoos. Firstly, endangered species can be protected. For instance birds kept in zoos can never fly freely like wild birds. However, zoos keep animals from the poacher

To sum up, there are lots of arguments for and against the zoos. Personally, I think they should be left in the wild to continue their life.

Vicky

Second writinig from Artem

2021-04-06 07:44:39 UTC

Nobody will disagree that cars are one of the most significant inventions in our life. Nowadays, we can get anywhere by them. However, is it so well as we think? Many people argue with this by saying that cars destroy the environment.

First of all, everybody should remember that we invented cars. I mean, we would not do it if it was not needed. For example, it was very difficult to get to another country by horses.
Somebody can say that we have planes and ships. Nevertheless, they are much more expensive than cars. For instance, traveling by plane can cost you 700 dollars. Instead of that you can use car which costs less.

On the other hand, there are a lot of arguments against using cars. Firstly, as I said before they can destroy the environment. Different fuels and oils can cause environmental issues, global warming, climate change and so on. Furthermore, they are dangerous. For example, there are a lot of accidents connected with cars happen every day.

To sum up, using cars have positive and negative sides. I am convinced that we should continue using cars but make them more ecological.

Maria, second essay

2021-04-06 09:19:16 UTC

Nowadays, it is impossible to imagine our life without cars. they have become utterly important to us in usual life. Every day there are more and more cars and this has a bad effect on the ecology of the earth. Yes, they make cars that run on electricity, but no matter how hard they try, cars on fue not go away. PLUS OR MINUS??

On the one hand, cars are fast and comfortable. Firs of all,you can get anywhere with them and it will be faster than using public transport. So It’s better then bus. Аlso machines that run on electricity are no worse than usual ones. Furthermore,they do not harm the environment and some of them look more stylish. Finally,you can travel by car and it can be cheaper than other transport and more convenient.

EXAMPLES???

On the other hand, fueled cars are really bad for the environment. For instance,they emit a lot of gas and this is utterly terrible for the environment. Firstly, that are a lot of cars and lot of traffic jams are created. Аnd secondly, there are many accidents due to cars.

To sum up, cars are useful for humans, but not useful for nature. To my mind,people need to protect the environment. For this you need to use bicycles and electric cars.

Is it good to have a car ?

2021-04-06 15:40:28 UTC

Nowadays, for most people, it is hard to imagine the world without cars. Some people think that we should change cars for something more ecological, like bicycle, but other believe that the car is utterly important thing in their life and nothing can't replace them. So having a car is a plus or a minus?

On the one hand, there are several arguments for changing cars for something more ecological . First of all, cars dirty the air . For example, it is arduous to breathe in big cities, where are lots of transport. Furthermore, driving the car can be riskily. For instance, every day somebody is crashing down in a car.

On the other hand, there are also many arguments to have cars. Firstly, you can be more mobile and you don't need to wait for public transport, somewhere in the street. For instance, you can went everywhere where you want to and it will be more faster then by bus. Beside of it you can take something really huge with you, even if you can not catch up it.

To sum up, there are lots of arguments for and against the car. Personally, I think we should make more ecological cars, which will power by air or water. It will be the best option, because it would be more mobile and ecological in the same time

Vicky

Writing from Masha

2021-04-06 15:44:27 UTC

People began to use transport for a very long time. Today there are many types of transport. We use it every day, however we didn't think about the consequences. And now we have a question 'Is transport a minus or a plus?'.

On the one hand, there are many advantages to using transport. Firstly is that it can transport heavy loads with ease. Futtermore, transport was created for this purpose. There are many examples from history where scientists and mechanics tried to find a way to do this. Secondly is that with the help of transport you can easily and quickly move around! This is how we travel long distances. For example, by plane or cruise ship. However there are many people who cannot afford to travel because of their finances.

EXAMPLES???

On the other hand, transport is harmful to the environment. Futtermore, we continue to litter our planet! Most types of transport currently run on fuel that is made from oil. And we all know that earthly resources are not endless. I mean we need to give up fuel and switch to electricity.

To sum up, transport should change and be less used for our future. In my personal opinion, if we want, we can start doing something right now.

2021-04-06 23:29:57 UTC

YOU DIDN"T WRITE IT!!

Transport

All people use transport. When transport was first created, it was an innovation that brought both benefit and harm to the world.

This innovation has brought many benefits. I will list a small part. The main advantage of transport is its time saving. After transport was invented, people had a lot of free time. Another of the few advantages is security. Being in a car or on a motorcycle is much safer than walking. The last plus that I want to note is the convenience in transporting heavy things. When transport appeared, things became much easier to transport.

The first and main disadvantage of transport is not environmental friendliness. Now the planet is dying and global warming and transport is involved in this. Another problem with transport is the price, most of the transport is very expensive and few people can afford it. The final problem with transportation is danger. There are many people who poorly drive transport and because of this there are many deaths.

In conclusion, I want to say that despite the disadvantages, it would be much more difficult without transport. More time and effort was spent for any action, but the problem with the environmental friendliness of transport needs to be solved.

Alex

(Ann)

2021-04-07 17:01:24 UTC

Nowadays, we can't imagine our society without cars, buses, trains etc. Transport has become a normal part or our everyday life. However, a lot of people have argument regarding whether it's better to have your own car or use public transport.

On the one hand, cars have a lot of pluses and many people choose them among all means of transport. First of all, they allow us to get to the place quicklier than public transport. For instanse, if you need to go somewhere you won't have to wait for the transport to arrive and it won't have to stop during the drive. Secondly, cars are way more comfortable, because you don't have to deal with crowds there, especially during the summer.

On the other hand, a lot of people are against cars for some particular reasons. For example, public transport is more eco-friendly than cars, because it produces less smoke and transports more passengers. Furthermore, buses save the roads from traffic jams. For instance, if all the people that take bus had their own cars, the road would be much more crowded than it is now.

To sum up, both cars and buses have their own advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, cars are definetely more comfortable and faster then buses. Public transport system needs a lot of changes to become a good alternative to the cars.

(Dima)

2021-04-07 19:09:19 UTC

YOU USED SOMETHING!!

Nowadays many of us can't imagine our life without cars, busses,plates. Transport took an important place in our life.Most of people cannot understand those who do not use it and how they generally live.

First of all using transport comfortable with it you can get place which you want to visit more faster than on the same bike.Secondly withith transport its easy to transport a cargo which impossible to do by yourself.

EXAMPLES???

On the other hand using transport very strongly affects the state of nature due to exhaust gases.Futher more you must pay to buy fuel for your vehicle in order for it to work.

EXAMPLES???

To sum up , the invention of transport greatly facilitated the life of mankind.Personally I think using transport have more pluses than minuses.

Writing Test (Lola)

2021-04-08 17:52:01 UTC

Nowadays, a lot of people want to have a pet. It can be a (MW)dog, cat or hedgehog. People want to buy love or a friend for their children. However, have you ever thought about the (MW)other side of having a pet?

On the one hand, you can spend all your free time playing with its(WW) ~~him~~ ^it or watch a fill(S) film together. For instance, when all of your friends can not talk ~~with~~ ^to you, you can do it with your dog. Furthermore, it will be the best friend no only for you, nevertheless for your family. It will become a member of your family. For example, all holidays you will celebrate together.(WOW) you wiil celebrate all ^the holidays togther.

On the other hand, it is very hard to have a pet. First of all, a dog will(WW) can steal your shoes. For instance, my dog always do(G) does it. I just can not find it(WW) them. Furthermore, you need to work with him(WW) dog. If you will(G) no(WW) do not work, he(WW) ~~dog~~ ^it will become stupid and will never understand you. For example, like a small kid. You need to teach him(WW) ^your dog everything started(G) beginning ~~from~~ ^{with a} toilet to no(WW) not to steal shoes.

To sum up, having a pet it is an (MW)important step for (MW)everybody. To my mind, it is the greatest happiness in ^aperson’s life. I am so happy that I have a (MW)dog and cat. The(S) They are like children ~~for~~ ^to me. I love them to the moon and back. (So you still haven't said whethere it's great having a pet or not)

It's almost excellent!!!

The structure is perfect. There are all the paragraphs, linkers, arguments and examples. NICELY DONE!

There aren't many mistakes.

My only tip for you is to try to use more advanced vocabulary like some idioms or phrases from the book that we have learnt - that would be wonderfull if you did it! It would make your writing even better.

The same with grammar - try to use more passive voice, more conditionals and grammar like that. If you look at this essay, it's great however you only use will and verb to be in it. I hope you understand what I mean.

27/30

Maria test

2021-04-08 18:41:37 UTC

Nowadays, a lot of people have pets. It’s (G) It ^THEY could (IF) be dogs, cats, hamsters, spiders, snakes and others other(G). For many people pets areit is (G) like ~~a child~~ ^CHILDREN, they love them and can’t imagine there(MW)^their life without them. Let’s figure it out is it going to have pets or not.(????)~~Let’s figure it ou~~t ^{(It's not formal!!!)} is it good to have a pat, or not.

On the one hand, It is very responsible and ~~greatly~~.(WW) Firstly, we can help them. For instance ,(P)we can take an animals(G)an animal from the animal shelternursery(WW). Secondly, we give all our love to pets and they give us it in return(WOW)they give it to us in return. For example , (P)just look your dog in the eyes, (P)there is so much happiness in them when ^your pethe(WW) sees you. Furthermore, you enjoy it double.(???)Furthemore, It loves you despite everything.

On the other hand, it is can (G)it can be utterly terrible. Firstly, the animal can be harmed if you keep it at home. For example, if you keep at home (MW)tiger.(WOW)if you have a tiger at home. It is a(MW)wild animal and in free to him will be better(change it)in the wild he ^it ~~would be better~~ ^{feel much better}.Secondly, even usual cats and dogs in a human house can feel bad. For instance, there may be bad conditions or bad people who will mock animals.

To sum up, animals( pets) need to be protected. In my opinion, if you are not ready for an animal, for responsibility, you don’t(IF)~~would~~ ^should not ~~have to~~ take it home.

MUCH-MUCH better than your previous writing however still not perfect.

Speaking about the structure of your essay - it's excellent. You've got correct amount of paragraphs and all the info that's needed - GOOD JOB

I see that you have used lots of linkers and that's AWESOME.

Still you have lots of mistakes and I guess you see that too.

Also, try to use more advamced vocabulary, cause you see that you use pretty basic vocabulary like good/bad and others (I saw utterly terrible))))))

25/30

Writing test from Artem

2021-04-08 19:30:47 UTC

Nowadays, many people have their own pet. ~~However some of~~ ~~them~~(WHO?) ~~refuse having~~(G) ~~animals at all~~ However, there are those who refuse to have animals. But why is it so?

~~From~~(WW) On the one hand, having a pet has a lot of pluses. The biggest advantage of it is that animals are our friends. For instance, if you can not get on well with other people and you feel lonely, you can buy a dog or a cat which will make you happier. Furthermore, some of them can make you feel safer. For example, dogs can protect you from different robbers. ~~and~~ ~~so on~~(IF) (without this part)

~~From~~(WW) On the other hand, having a pet also has ~~a lit of~~(??) a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, ~~because~~ it can be dangerous for somebody. I mean, if you are (MW)allergic on(WW) to ~~something~~(like tometoes?) ~~wool~~ ^fur, you must not have pets. Secondly, it can be very difficult to look after them. For instance, some animals are enormously active. They can break something. or ~~something else.~~(IF) (without this part)

To sum up, having a pet i~~t is own decision of everybody~~(WOW) ^is everybody's own decision. I ~~belive~~(S) believe, it is not a bad idea but before buying a pet you need to think about it a lot.

Your writing is GREAT!!
I really-really loved it!

I fancy that you use some cool phrases and expressions (like get on well, enormously active and others) That's AWESOME

Your grammar is WONDERFUL too and you don't have many mistakes. You're really accurate.

It's short and yet to the point 'cause all the arguments you give they REALLY are advantages and disadvantages that you should consider before getting a pet.

One of the best writing you have ever done!!! KEEP IT UP!

28/30

(Test Dima)

2021-04-09 08:01:47 UTC

Nowadays many people have a cat or a dog in their houses.Having a pet is usually(PS) (~~Normal~~)* usual for people these days.And for people who have a pet is amazing that someone have not(a) pet.(????)
ONE PART O IS MISSING??(For most of people it is hard to believe that someone ~~haven't~~ have not got a pet)*

(On the one hand)*Firstly, a comma (P)(scientists have proven that)*having a pet (MW)(is a big)* plus for ()people(G) with weak hurt(hearts)(G) (S) and for people who(is) are (MW)always nervous.Secondly(Furthermore), a comma* (P) (MW)(a*)pet can be your friend before (~~his~~)your (S)death.(???)
EXAMPLES????(My familiar who haven't friends spent his time yo play with his dog who didn't mind to play with him) Sorry but it doesn't count cause you wrote this after the test

On the other hand, a comma people (who*)(MW)have alergic(allergy*)(PS) on to wool of pets' fur.Futhermore , a comma(P)haveing(G) a pet takes a lot of your own time and you ~~haven't to~~ should not forgot(G) to take a care(responsibility)(G) about(of) ~~his~~ your (pet)(WW).

To sum up(P) having a pet has (~~includes~~)* (G)more pluses than minuses if you ~~haven't~~ are not ~~alergic(allergy)(G) (PS )~~ allergic to on them.Personally I think having a pet is really cool.

PET - TAUTOLOGY!!!!!!!

Your paragraphs and the structure of your essay are ok but still you don't have any examples for the arguments you give.

Still, it's MUCH better than the one that you wrote last time!

You have LOTS of mistakes - you see that

I would also like you to use more than just basic set of words. It seems like a student from Focus 1 wrote it. I mean that you know so many cool phrases and expressions and don't use them(

21/30

test (Ann)

2021-04-09 09:53:56 UTC

Nowadays, more and more people consider getting themselves a pet. Of course, in this situation ~~thry get to choose~~(??) they can choose from a big variety of animals, whether it is a hamster or a bird. However, the most popular ones are dogs or cats. It is also important to understand that ^a pet is not somr (S)some kind of ^a toy but an actual animal ~~who~~(WW) which needs to be taken care of. This is the part ~~when~~ (WW) where people ~~are starting~~(G)start having arguments about having a pet at home. So is getting yourself a dog or a cat really worth it?

On the one hand, pets save a lot of people from loneliness. For instance, if a person lives alone and it bothers ~~them~~(WW)her or him, ~~they~~ he or she can get a pet who will make a(G)the person less sad and lonely. Furthermore, a lot of people get cats or dogs because they can be useful. For example, cats can catch mice which can be especially helpful in big houses.

On the other hand, having an animal at home is a huge resposibility. Firstly, you need to have enough money to buy food and other supplies for them. Secondly, you need to train your pet. For example, if an animal is not trained at all, it most likely will not behave which can cause a lot of troubles.

To sum up, getting a pet is a hard decision to make and it has a lot of advatages and disadvantages. In my opinion, it is up to every person to ~~choose~~(WW)decide whether they want to have a cat or dog or not. However, a person has to take responsibility(???) that comes with a new animal at their house.

I've got nothing to add - it's just PERFECT <3

When I read it, it seemed to me that it's just taken from a book - that's how much I loved it!!

30/30

Test (Vicky)

2021-04-09 13:43:36 UTC

Having a pet

Nowadays, most ~~of the~~ people have animals in their houses. But when you take a pet, it mean(G) means that you need to care on(WW) ~~about~~ ^of them(WW)~~him~~ ^it. Some people think that pets is(G)are one big minus, because you always need to clean after them. In (WW)At the same time other humans says(G)say that they are (MW)~~the~~ ^an utterly important part of theirs(WW)their life and their pet is theirs(WW) their best friend. So is a pet the biggest minus in your life or he will be your best friend(G) (WOW) will he ^it be your best friend?

On the one hand, there are lots of arguments for ~~do not take (~~G) ^taking them ~~to the houses at~~ home. ~~For example~~,^FIRSTLY pets in the beginning we ^were wild and then after millions years they become homeless, but something wild still live in them and it mean that they can break something in your room. (??????)^{I didn't understand this part}Furthermore, they stay wild for the ^their whole life ~~long~~ and they just can ^harm ~~fight to~~ you.(ANOTHER ARGUMENT) For example, people can be allergic to animals with wool. Like cats and dogs. Furthermore, animals can be aggressive and even bop you.

On the other hand, we have the only one "person" who will like you throw everything.(???) On the other hand, your pet is the only one you can trust to. Firstly, pets wouldn't(WW) will not tell you that you make(G) made a mistake, would(WW) will not argue with you. Besides, you will care of(WW) about him(WW) your pet and it mean(G) means that everything will be excellent in his life, he would(WW)will not going somewhere to find food, he ~~would~~ ^wil not fight with other animals and actually life of your pet will be a bed of roses.

To sum up,there are lots pluses and minuses. In my wey(S)view it is only your choose(PS)own decision, but I actually have a dog. His name is Chuk, he is my best friend. All ^the minuses start to be small when you find "your person".

I reallly-really liked the beginning of your essay but then something went wrong. Honestly, I didn't get the idea of the second paragraph.

In paragraph two and three you give only one argument in each when you need to have at least two in each of them. Also, there are no examples.

I liked the idea of "pets don't judge you" but you wrote too much about it and forgot about other arguments

Your ending is GREAT and the final idea is amazing.

You see that there lots of grammar mistakes - be more careful with it.

19/30

Test Vika

2021-04-09 16:41:11 UTC

~~In our time(WW)~~ Nowadays a lot of people have pets in their houses. Some people love their pets like ~~love~~ their own children, otherwise a lot of people really hurt their ~~pets~~ ^animals.For this reason there are arguments for and against to have(G) having a pet.

On the one hand , there are a number of arguments for to have(G)having pets. Firstly, pets can have a lot of opportunities to live with us (??)Firstly, pets can feel safe in our houses . For example , pets (MW)can get help when they (MW) get ill or they always have a food. Secondly, pets also can help us(WOW)can ^also help us . For instance, dogs can safe(WW)~~save~~ ^protect our house or even ^save life. Furthermore, we can help to less(WW)^decrease the number of homeless pets if we take them to our houses(G).

On the other hand , there are a number of arguments against. First of all , some people ~~make~~ ^do a bad things(G)bad things with(WW)topets. For example, they can not feed them at all or even fite(??)beat them! Secondly, some pets can be utterly aggressive with us or with other people. For instance, they can bite us and it can be adorably terrible.

To sum up, there are strong arguments for and against. To my mind have(G)having a pet it is utterly responsible. Otherwise, I guess that have(G)having a pet it is a perfect idea. People ~~won’t~~ ^{will not}feel lonely and ~~pets too(G~~)!^{neither will pets}

You are the only one who used some cliche phrases in the beginning of each main paragraph - EXCELLENT!!

The structure of your essay is just PERFECT. There are all the paragraphs and commas where they are neeeded. Also, you haven't forgotten about the linkers - GREAT

Speaking about the mistakes, if we compare your last year's writings and this year's ones - you will definitely see the difference but we've still got some work to do!

I see that you try to use the synonyms in every writing - I always notice it. Keep it up!

However there are TOO MANY WORDS "PET". You use it 13 times!!! You should substitute it with other words and synonyms like "they"/"animals"/ "it" or sometimes even omit it!

If you look closer at your grammar here, you will se that it's pretty basic. Most of the time you just use "can". Your essay would be much better if you used some more advanced grammar like passive voice or conditionals. Instead of " they can bite us" you can write " we can be bitten" and other things like this.

27/30

Test (Nastya)

2021-04-09 17:52:18 UTC

Nowadays a lot of types of transport help us move for a long distances. Otherwise many years ago people would use horses and humans ~~against(WW)~~ instead ^of cars. Actually would ^it (MW)be better if currently there (MW)~~were~~(G) was no transport?

On the one hand, there are several arguments for using transport. Firstly, it is immortally comfortable and fast to use cars or buses as a way to get (MW) to a destination. For example, to get^ting to my school takes 1 hour by(WW) on foot and 15 minutes by bus. Secondly, planes and trains is(G) are an opportunity ~~for~~(WW) to ~~traveling~~(G) travel abroad and ~~discovering~~(WW) ~~research~~ ^explore the world. For instance, without air or water transport we ~~can't~~^{can not} get to (MW)other continents.

For(WW) on the other hand, there are many arguments against using transport. First of all , transport ~~make~~(G) makes the world suffer from pollution. For example, during quarantine 2020, when people ~~didn't~~ ^{did not}go to the street and ~~didn't~~ ^{did not}use cars, air quality in China ~~were~~(WW) was much better than before. Furthermore(P) , vehicle usage is not healthy. For instance, humans spend ~~amoun~~t(WW) lots of hours sitting in cars and forget ~~walk~~(G) ~~walking~~ ^{to walk} on foot.

To sum up, there are clearly strong arguments for and against using transport. Personally, I ponder ^on (MW) that now people ~~can't~~ ^{can not} live without it, but we can make transport ~~safely~~(PS) safe^r ~~fot~~(S)for The Earth

JUST WOW!!! I am really amazed at how much you English has improved this year. I really believe this is your best writing ever!!!

The variety of vocabulary that your use like "currently", "immortally", "ponder on", "suffer from" and other phrases and expressions. I did feel that it was Focus 3 student who wrote it.

BTW, the way you used "would" in the first paragraph made my heart melt. AMAZING!!

However, there's one little comment. This type of essay it's kinda formal, so it means that you can't use contractions like "didn't".

Even though you've got some mistakes, you will get the best mark and you do deserve it.

30/30

P.S. there is a challenge for you in my comment. I have used one type of advanced grammar in it (twice) and for you it would seem grammatically wrong. I want you to find it and ask me about it next lesson.

Test (Anastasia)

2021-04-09 17:54:31 UTC

Nowadays we have a lot of transport. It can be public transport or ~~the~~ ^a(MW)car that you bought. Everyone was using(G)~~is using~~ ^uses it. However, many people think that car(G)cars makes our planet ~~are~~ polluted.

On the one hand, ~~we have~~ there are a lot of pluses of(WW)for using transport. Firstly, your trip become(G)~~will be~~ ^becomes cozy. For instance, If you go in(WW)to another city, you will(WW)can sleep in your car. It will be amazing for traveling. Secondly, we are economing(WW)save a lot of times(G)time. For example, when we go everywhere we can spend a lot of time for(WW)on it ~~this~~. Nevertheless if we drive, we would spent, for instance, ten minutes.(??)Nevertheless if we use a car, we do not waste so much time.

On the other hand, ~~we have~~ there are a lot of minuses of for using transport.(THE SAME) Firstly, it is air pollution. When we use cars they polluted(G)pollute our planet and animals are dying out. For instance, we can use electro car. Secondly, it is horrible for our healthy(PS)health. For example, if you go somewhere ~~on your legs,~~^{on foot,}you will ~~make~~ be(MW)healthy(PS)healthier ~~more better(G)~~. However if we ^you using(G)use transport ~~our~~ ^your organism become(G)gets worse. HOW CAN ORGANISM BECOME WORSE??

To sum up, we have there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages for using transport. In my point of view, we do(WW)should not using(G)use any more(WW) transport ~~like~~ ^than now. Develop your body skills!

Well, after correcting the mistakes it seems much-much better than before. You see how strongly mistakes change the perception of the essay. Try to be more accurate!

You did a GREAT job cause all the linkers, commas, paragraphs and other stuff are right where they have to be!

Moreover, the arguments that you give are valid (google it) and I totally agree with them.

I like the way you always try to use all this cool phrases and synonyms and I want even more of them.

The same with grammar. Avoid using the same grammatical structures all the time. Substitute them with more advanced ones like passive voice, conditionals - it would make your essay even better.

27/30

Test (Masha)

2021-04-12 16:02:47 UTC

~~For today~~(WW) Nowadays many people have a pet. It can be a cat or dog, however sometimes it can be a ~~spesial~~(S)special animal. For example (MW) a mini pig or monkey, crow or frog, and all of them are ~~someones~~(S)somebody's pets! So many people have a question 'Is it (MW) a plus or minus to have a pet?'

On the one hand, we have several pluses/ Firstly(P) , ~~is that~~ pets ~~giwe~~(S)give us their 'love'. For instance when you (MW) ~~are~~ ^come back home after long and boring school day your dog ~~meet~~(G)meets you and after that you become happier. Secondly(P) , ~~is that~~ ~~pet~~(G) pets ~~with time become your best friend.~~(WOW)~~will~~ become our best friends over time. You can tell it all your dreams and ideas. Futhermore, if you (MW) are sad (P) , you can cry with your pet and ~~it always will be~~ (WOW)will always be on 'your side'.

On the other hand, it is very difficult to have a pet. First of all (P) , you need to have a lot of ~~patiente~~(S)~~patientest~~ ^patience and money, because your pet will always ~~desrtoy~~(S)(WW)~~destroy~~ ^{cause harm to}your house or flat. Secondly(P) , ~~is that~~ you need to be (MW) an active person, if you have a dog. If you have a pet (P) , you need ^to walk with it. Also(P) , you need to be ready for many ~~else~~(WW)other ~~difficults~~(S)difficulties.

To sum up, people need to understand that pets ~~it is an~~ ^are animals and a ~~live~~(G)living orhanizms. In my personal view, not all of us are good at raising pets.

So, you see you don't need google to write a nice essay - you can do it yourself!!!!

The structure of your writing is ABSOLUTELY CORRECT. You have all the commas, linkers, arguments and examples. Nicely done!

However, the beginning seemed a bit strange to me. I didn't get why you have decided to write about "special pets".

You know, you and other guys have the same problem: you know lots of amazing expressions and phrases but you use basic set of words all the time. The same thing with grammar. You should substitute usual words with some cool ones like instead of "if you are sad" try something like " if you feel blue" and other stuff like that.

25/30

Hw Maria

2021-04-22 08:24:21 UTC

Today I want to raise such a topic as a donateing money to some funds. Have you done this? But donating money is not the only way to take part in a charity. Look. You can raise money for those in need, or ~~the~~ now a popular method is to train for charity. For example, you can take part in a cycle track or marathon. Usually all donations from such events go to charity.
There are also rich people who sponsor a person or a whole charit~~able~~y organization. However, if you do not have the opportunity to take part in all of the above, there is another easi~~est~~er way. You can share a webpage with a charity. Anyone can do it. So,charity is utterly cool and the people who take part in it are great !!!!

Namaste Morning Together (extra task from Lola)

2021-04-22 10:01:57 UTC

Namaste Morning together is a charity sport event which raised money for «Make-A-Wish Foundation». Yoga lovers and just people, who wants to try yoga for the first time, can take part in «Namaste Morning Together». In the morning participants of this event meet and heold up morning yoga classes, after which they meet the sunrise. People who wants to help, however can’t take part, can donate money online and will get a small present - a yoga sport costume. This event is sponsored by Amanda Monson who defeated cancer after 5 years of treatment. «Namaste Morning Together» has raised over $15 millions.

Hw Anastasia

2021-04-23 11:43:54 UTC

Nowadays a lot of kids are left without a family. They go to special homes where they are looked after, raised and taught. However, many homes don’t have a lot of money to support so many children. We need to assist them! We organize a charity party where you can: make friends, chat, have a great time and take part in donating money to for clothes, toys, etc. In addition , we long for to setting up a webpage where you can do this too. After raising money I will send you proof that the children got everything we promised. If possible don’t pass by. There are no fantastic people in the world!
P.S. If you would like to be my sponsor on at this party, you can send me your phone number and I will inform you more details about my event.

Hw Anastasia

2021-05-07 12:25:44 UTC

A new trend - a healthy lifestyle!

“Since Monday I have been a diet and doing sports!” Did you say this phrase? I guess sure! Every day a lot of human say it. People monitoring their nutrition and health, go to the gym, become a vegan. They create groups in which share their experience. Nowadays, a healthy lifestyle is in mode. Otherwise when you decide to do it, you can hear some comments like “This diet doesn’t help you! They only make worse”. Occasionally these words can make you not do it. Nevertheless, will it be horrible for you or not?

According to research, people who care about their health live longer than who don’t. National statistics show that a healthy person lives approximately 100 years. Previously, the population didn’t have a lot of various off food. They ate fatty, high-calorie, and sweet meals. They just didn't know how to change it to healthier. Now scientists have come up with many modifications that won’t harm the body. For instance, you can use soy meat and milk, honey, etc.

As well as this, with a healthy lifestyle you will feel yourself wonderful. Doing sport makes you feel awake all day. Moreover diet will have a positive effect on your body. It will help you lose weight, heart problems, and other diseases too. Additionally, you will stop being furious, annoyed and as a result start a cheerful life.

Finally, according to experts, people who have a helpful life they are more lucky than who aren’t. Although, scientists say that these humans have always won in lottery cause they have clear karma and mind. At addition, think better and become rich more often.

To sum up, a healthy lifestyle is what population really needs. With this we will improve physical and mental health.

H/w Nastya

2021-05-07 13:48:07 UTC

Your life will be healthier and happier!

Currently healthy lifestyle has different meanings. Someone says it is a lot of training, based on an another opinion it is various diets. Actually healthy lifestyle is a group of habits that help you live healthier and happier. They ~~are~~ include balanced diet, physical activity and emotional well-being. Although if I follow advices, what result will I have?

First of all, the main benefit is an awesome quality of health. According to scientists, humanS forget about frequent illnesses, deficit of vitamins or poor hair and fingernails. In addition, your body will looks outstanding, because extra fats will be burned by sport exercises.

"A sound mind in a sound body" . The quotes perfectly proofs the next advantage. Regular trainings and nutrition make our mind ponder over the body and way how to live. You won't dream about workshy holidays. In contrast, the life will include a lot of productivity and completed goals.

It is an opportunity for changing another live. You can become an incredible example for kids, parents and friends. A fit and cheerful person motivates people around to improve their routine. Furthermore, respect to you will rise.

To sum up, the value of healthy lifestyle is incredibly significant and I absolutely sure life changes in the best way.

Writing from Artem

2021-05-08 17:27:17 UTC

Go out!

It's sadly but today many people spend their free time inside. I am convinced that we should change it. Usually people say that they are too busy but in my opinion, everybody has an ability to go outside at least for 15 minutes per day. I want to add that time, you spend to get to school, work of somewhere else it's not time, you spent under the fresh air.

According to research, many people still believe that being outside does not really matter. But it does. One scientist said "Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better". After being outside you will feel yourself personally better.

As well as this, environment can physically improve you. Refer to statistics, those who live in mountains live much longer than those who live in cities. Additionally, nature helps us to relax. Also, there are a lot of outdoor activities such as games or sports that can increase your physical condition. A lot of teens can play or do them together.

Finally, sometimes people can find new friends while they are walking outside. Although, this rarely happens, so it's not a main reason to go outside.

That's why I'm sure, everybody should spend more time outside. It can bring a lot of benefits for your health and personality.

Writing Maria

2021-05-09 16:57:40 UTC

“Stay fit on the street”

Today, it a quite huge problem force the child to spend time outdoors. Now in the world is the era of computer technology and social networks, as a result everyone forgot about the usual way of communication.This problem has affected not only children, adults people also suffer. Due to their busyness, they do not have time for walks in the fresh air. Additionally, do you know how important to spend time outdoors? Unfortunatel, not many people think about it.

As well as this, for example, sport in itself is utterly useful, but if you do it in the air the affect will double. Sport in a fresh air strengthens the immune system, give a boost of energy for the day and actually helps you stay healthy.
Although, it is not necessary to do strong physical activity, a jogging or walk will already improve your health. As a result yo will be stronger, tougher and happier.

Furthermore, spending time outside can be positive for your social interaction. Nowadays it is popular to have Internet friends, however, this will never replace live communication. In contrast, you can speak with friends on social networks, this is especially useful if this person is from another city, but to communicate live, to see facial expressions, emotions and movements of a person at once is much cooler.

To sum up, spent time in a fresh air it is utterly helpful. I would like to call on more people and tell to them that fresh air is utterly important for a person and even fifteen minutes of walking can relax you and make the body work again.
Sudly, that people do not understand it anyway they do not have any time for it.

I hope after reading this article people think about the problem of spending time on the street and will start to change something.

Maria Pashkova

Writing Dima

2021-05-10 05:52:33 UTC

"Go out and do some sports"
Sadly but nowadays many of us prefers to sit at home in return to go out and do some sports.Many young people have to go out and breathe fresh air.

According to research , outdoor walks provide a percent of your lifespan.When you walking and moving your body and does not sit in one place and walk all the time, this has a very strong effect on your health, scientists say.

As well as this, many sites were built for spending time on your own or with friends outdoors.As a result they fell much better that youngsters who stay at home the most of the time.

Finally , something teens just have to spent their time for diverse and social activity.In contact write to your friends and say --> let's go for a walk , and spent your time great.

To sum up healthy lifestyle is more important than stay unhealthy and indoors make new social and local activities and be happy.

Fresh air is the best medicine

2021-05-10 09:05:15 UTC

Nowadays, a lot of people spend most of the time indoors. At work, at home, in a store, in a cinema and etc. That’s why most of teens have different problems with their heath. They spend all their time playing computer, watching TV, surfing in Internet. But what alternative do they have? of course, we should enter forgot about outdoors activities. Instead of listening to music at home, you can meet with your friend and do some outdoors activities together. There are street games like football, badminton, tennis or sports, like yoga, judo, karate. Furthermore, teenagers may apply to the available outdoors activities in their living area. There can be different of various section.

According to an article on the benefits of fresh air for teenagers health, spending time outdoor is the best way to boost teen’s immunity and harder their body. Doing different physical exercises youngsters not only train their bodies, but also improve such quality as endurance. Additionally, sometimes fresh air can be much better than different medicines.

As well as this, spending time outdoors helps not only physical health, nevertheless also social. As a result, young people can find new friend dominating their interests. Teenagers, who visit one of local section, can make new friends easily than those who sit at home.

Finally, teens can find new hobby which will make their more happier. Mental health is just as important as physical. Sometimes teens just need to let go of unnecessary thoughts and just relax. In contrast, some activities can be dangerous for teenagers, that’s why they are only available from a certain age.

In conclusion, I want to say that time which you spend outdoors could be the best time of your life. Spend as much time in air as possible.

Lolita Litvinova

writing (Ann)

2021-05-10 14:19:19 UTC

"How to have fun outdoors"

Nowadays you can hear a lot of things like: "Teens don't spend time outdoors anymore, all they do is sit in their rooms and chat online!". Well, they just don't know about all the benefits of going outside?

A lot of young people are not aware of the whole range of activities you can do outside of your house. For instance, you can find quiet place to hang out with your friend and have picnics. This is a great opportunity to communicate with friend and spend time on a fresh air. Additionally, you can find any sport ground if you are interested in doing sports.

Unfortunately, not a lot of teenager understand the benefits of spending time outdoors. Besides it being healthy, hanging out outside is quite pleasurable because it's always nice to spend time on a fresh air, especially after many days indoors. Outside you can also have much more fun and make more of a good memories than in your room.

So, hopefully, young people will start going outside more often then they do now because it has a lot of advantages they probably couldn't think of.

H/W Artem

2021-05-11 13:29:07 UTC

A healthy lifestyle includes many things, including a balanced diet, daily exercise, sleep, happiness, and positive thinking. When we do everything for a healthy lifestyle, our life is on the right path. Living a healthy lifestyle is important for you to be happy and feel good in your present life and in the future.

As I said, a healthy lifestyle includes many different things.
The first is physical exercise.
One of the most important and easiest things is daily physical exercises. People usually do it in the morning after wake-up. This is a good way to improve your body and cheer you up. Many also visit fitness centers and a gym.

One more important thing is eating healthy food. If you eat unhealthy food there will be not benefits from doing physical exercises. Healthy food isn't about fruits and vegetables. You just need to cook seafood, meat and other foods right. Then it will be healthy food.

It is also important to keep regular hours. It means that, for example every day you go to bed at 10 p.m. and wake up at 7 a.m.

To sum up, health is a base of our life. We must take care of it.

Writing(Masha)

2021-05-11 16:25:25 UTC

Fresh air: the path to health near

'You are fat! It is not healthy!', ' You need to do some exercises!' - everyone has heard this at least once, in a park, school or public transport, as someone made such a remark. People say that fat people should be more attantive to their bodies, however they don't know that it is extremely hard. Many of them has some problems with family or friends, different genetic characteristics which makes them tend to be overweight or someone just like sweets and desert's. Everyone has any problems in their life and they solve them in their own way, so it is possible to be overweight. Especially often teenagers suffer from this.

For today many young people say a brand new idea that say's: 'Everyone has the right to dispose of their body'. As a result overweight people are not shy of their bodies, however there are those for who this didn't help much. These people are usually introverted and spend a lot of time indoors. Althogh they do not have the opportunity to go to fitness or the gym. lt is time to change it!

Nowadays, many teenagers understand that spending time outdoors is fun and rewarding, and you, too, can make this time enjoyable and beneficial for your health! Give up public transport and cars and start walking to school, to the work and home. Arrange morning and evening walks with friends, it is not as difficult as it seems. Instead of playing video games and watching TV shows, you can have a yoga session. You can arrange with your friends and start doing some superstar workout together. You can also go to picnics.

To sum up, there is no problem in being fat, just know that losing weight may not be as difficult as you thought at first. And you must also remember that fresh air - your health.

Happy life is your life

2021-05-13 06:51:17 UTC

Nowadays to stay home teenagers prefer . Nowadays teenagers prefer to stay home.(WOW) Sadly, they choose chatting with friends and surfing in the Internet more than saw theirs amigo in real life. Maybe, they just don't know about all of the benefits of going outside? Did they know how important is it ?

Unfortunately, the statistics of sciences show that lots of youngsters just don't know about the benefits of fresh air and they don't know any activities that they can do outdoor. Teens think that wast time outdoor aren't so important, but it is.

Additionally, sometimes fresh air can be much better than different medicines.
Fresh air ~~help~~ed^helps (G) to our body and mental health. Furthermore, you can train and make some exercise. Football, basketball, volleyball, badminton e.c. - activities that you can doing outdoor.

Out-of-doors you can find lots of interesting thing and hobbies. As a result, at the street you can find people with the same hobbies and interests, which will be your friend in the future. As well as this, spending time outdoors helps not only physical health, nevertheless also social.

In conclusion, I want to say that it is utterly important to spend time outdoor. Actually, doctors says that you must spend 15 minutes at the street. I hope you will. Also, it can be really fine, but you just need to find people with the same interest.

Vicky 💕

Nastya( test)

2021-05-21 16:49:55 UTC

~~Now no good doctors, is it?~~(G) (WOW) There are no good doctors now, ~~are not it~~^{are there}?

Certainly medicine is an area of opportunities. Lots of students would like to be a dentist^s(G) or a ~~terapist~~(G)therapist^s(S) in the future. Have you ever thought whether they are going to become good doctor? ~~about~~ if they ~~will~~ be so a professional (????) and what is a good doctor?

First of all, it is immortally significant to have helpful ~~knowleage~~(S)knowledge and an education(G) for ~~person~~ (WW) those who is(G) are going to connect ^{their life} with people ~~forthemore~~(S)furthermore ~~have an infuence~~ can affect on a human^s'(G) ~~healtn~~(S) health. Understandably, ~~it must know everybody~~ (WOW) Everybody must know it nevertheless not everyone does. According to statistics, more ~~the(~~WW)than (MW) half of medicine workers haven't(G)got ~~roots~~(??) rights for treating patients otherwise carry on do(G)doing it.

"Stop dancing fo two years"- ~~strictly said~~ ~~tell~~ me(WW) ~~a surgeon~~ (WOW) ~~tell me a surgeon strictly~~^{a surgeon told me strictly}. His ~~phrase~~ ^wordsreally made me(MW)~~felt~~(G) feel horrible. In contrast, if he had ~~calmy~~ explained (MW)the reasons and alternatives for this calmy, I wouldn't have been shocked so much.( great) Obviously, doctos should be more sociable and easy-going because they tell ~~about~~ such an ~~unexectfully~~ (WW) unexpected and serious thing^s(G). "Laughing makes you live longer"- this ~~quate~~(S)quote ~~proofs~~(S)proves that patients in a positive mood will be fight(G) with their ~~diseas~~(S) disease ~~easily~~ ^better.

As well as this, it's important to have improved ~~social~~ skills. What would you do if during operation time^{there was only a minute} for saving ^a liv^fe ~~was a minute~~?(G) This must be a ~~sensitive and~~ (MW)sensible person who can think and make correct decisions quickly.

In conclusion, ~~the~~(WW)a good doctor ~~make~~ (G)makes humanbeings healthier and happier. I guess there are many professionals, who we can trust to, but it is increadibly hard work.

25/30

Writing from Artem

2021-06-21 17:41:37 UTC

Nevermore

Before I start this article, I want to tell my dear readers that this review is just my personal opinion. I know that ~~many~~ lots of people have other points of view, but it's still not a reason to blame me and say how terrible I am. This event seemed not very good to me and here is my explanation why. Although, production company was kind to us and helped each time we asked. ~~To this event came more than 1000 people.~~ More than 1000 people came to this event. Totally we collected more than 200 dollars for charity.

It was a usual summer rainy day. I came there alone. When I was trying to get into, one woman said that I need to have a partner. I was quite disappointed and asked her why. However, she didn't want to share such an incrediblye secret. That's why I had to wait until someone else ~~come~~ came. After I finally could get there I saw a lot of fantastic paintings. Also, one class prepared a fascinating play. Everything was quite entertaining except one thing. During the whole event Ukrainian anthem was played. When we tried to dance, we couldn't because we had to listen to this "wonderful" song.

All this entertainment made me starving. Luckily, the production company organized food and a party. Unfortunately, I had to go home because I got a food poisoning after I had eaten their utterly delicious food. To be honest, I didn't like the show "Our School's Got Talent".

The only thing I'd suggest is to never come here. I suppose, It was really hilarious but I will never go there again.

All in all, if you have a partner and you are a fan of Ukrainian anthem you'd like it.

Writing Maria

2021-06-22 12:55:39 UTC

Our School’s Hot Talent

Yesterday at my school was a talent show. It was absolutely fantastic. One utterly brilliant girl juggled bottles, sang a song in French and danced hip hop at the same time. Almost all day we watched the show of the students of our school and admired their talent. They was an amazing experience!

The day before the show I was asked to sit on the jury and rate quite talented students. I don't think for long, I agreed.The next day I got up early, quickly got ready, put on formal clothes and went to school in sunny weather. When I arrived at the place I was a little nervous, because a lot of things depend on my opinion.
When the students began to show their talents, I stopped being nervous and enjoyed the wonderful performances.

As you all understood, after a long time in the place of the jury, I was extremely hungry. The production company organized food and party at the end of the day. When I filled the fabulous smell of hot dogs, burgers and pizzas, I could not control myself.
The rest of the party was incredibly hilarious.

One thing I didn't like and would like to change is the punctuality of the producers. They were an hour and a half late for the show.

If you are really talented and fascinating teenagers, you have to try yourself at a talent show. You won’t be disappointed.

«Laught a lot, have fun and show your talent» (Lola)

2021-06-23 07:25:08 UTC

My classmates and I visited «Our School’s Got Talent», where was different kinds of music, a variety of food and fascinating show from our students. The highlight of this event was - «show your talent and get a free drink». A lot of people took part in various of competitions. What a fantastic experience!

We have been there since morning, because we helped our teachers and the production company. That’s why my class was the first performance visitors. The weather was the best suitable for such an event: the sun was shining, a light south wind was blowing. The music was adorably fabulous. There was not only ordinary pop, however also jazz, blues, rock, country, some folk music and reggae. Our school festival was visited by the most popular dancing band of our city - «The wild winds». Their rock-n-roll was amazing. It won’t be a bead of roses to forget it.

After all entertainments festivalgoers was not just hungry, nevertheless immortally starving. That’s why they decided to visit a food court. There was a huge variety of food from all over the world. The most delicious for me was churros with caramel sauce from Spain. What about the drinks? I can never forget that thai coconut lemonade. Just without any words.

The only thing I’d suggest changing next time. is the number of sitting places. There weren’t enough chairs, for this many had to stand.

If you want to watch talent show and have fun with your friend, you should visit «Out School’s Got Tallent». You won’t be disappointed.

Our school has Talented people(Dima)

2021-06-23 10:19:20 UTC

Our school was recently visited by a television company that recently spent a day filming a part of reality TV show called "Our school Got Talent' at our school.The meaning of this Tv show was to show your talent and by the end of the day if you won 3third , 2econd or 1st place you will have reward.

That event would start next day in order to give schoolchildren to prepare for the show of talents.There are was some rules to show different talents and this talents have to be interesting and a bit usefully.

These event were in our school in our Assembly Hall the cameramans who was filming all the progress.Some of students perceived this as a game but the most of them were absolutely fascinated at this.After the event , students could enjoy delicious food which which was brought here by the TV show .

In my opinion events like this have to be at all of schools
Students spent their time with pleasure and talents of them was brilliant.

If you are looking for a really friendly event with fantastic jury , audience and tasty food , then try to have a part in 'Our School Got Talent'.You won't be disappointed.

Behind the scenes (Nastya)

2021-06-23 11:38:30 UTC

What do you think about opportunity of showing your hidden talents? Recently students from our school had a chance to be a part of TV show and demonstrate their brilliant performances in front of cameras. It was an incredibly fantastic experience for participants and viewers.

The event started early in the familiar for us building, but that day it was utterly gorgeous and full of people. There was a huge stage and performers had enough space. Everybody presented absolutely various talents from putting on plays to artworks. The show consists an element of competition, so someone was extremely ecstatic and other felt devastated nevertheless judjes gave valuable advice how to improve skills.

It was pleasure from the production company to organise a really fascinating party with delicious food and excellent music. We had amazing rest from a nervous filming day .

Personally I spent all day with pleasure and will come there next year.

The only thing I'd suggest changing is to add workshops from judjes. I guess professionals will share their experiences and help students to be better.

Excellent party + amazing performance= unforgettable day !! (Vika)

2021-06-23 13:05:05 UTC

Me and my classmates, and other children from our school at this year’s Our School’s Got Talent , showed an utterly amazing performance , and I was shocked that almost all people in school have an absolutely fascinating talent . They showed it in front of the cameras!! What an excellent experience!!

All children started to prepare their adorably amazing and thrilling numbers the day before. In that day we didn’t have lessons , so we enjoyed the breathtaking performance. This year it was a lot of students who performed how they can sang , put on plays or even showed calamitously gorgeous artwork!!

As all students know , work in front of the cameras is really hard , so the production company organised devastatingly delicious food and absolutely cheerful party . All people were ecstatic to be part of this event !
To be honest , I was expecting immortality horrible day , but I was wrong - it was adorably amazing !!!

The only thing I’d changing next year is the number of rubbish bins , because all litter were on the floor - it was really terrible :(

To sum up , if you are looking for an utterly friendly and fabulous event to show your talent or just enjoyed it , then try Our School’s Got Talent next year . You won’t be devastated!!

Talent party

2021-06-24 17:53:43 UTC

Our school was ecstatic when the TV show came to visit us. All students show their talents so that others could admire them. The company also prepared food and drinks and they were so delicious!

In the morning we came to school. We saw the students hang up their pictures, others warmed up before the "performance". However there were also those who helped with the preparations for the party. The weather was sunny that day, so the tables with treats were taken to outside. When the party began, the guys from the parallel class came out on the stage, they played a funny melody without words. And every time the music changed. Several students performed together: some played music, others danced. There was even a gymnast's number with a ribbon. It seemed like a piece of cake for him to surprise everyone.

Of course, no one forgot about the dishes on the tables. Everyone found something that they liked. Cold drinks were the best option that hot day. To be honest, the food and drinks were so tasty that it seemed to me that it couldn’t be better.

In fact, I think it would be better to put the tables with food inside - in a cool room. Because we are all terribly tired of the heat outside.

If you want to enjoy our students creations, music and delicious treats, we invite you to our school party next year.

(writing from Masha)

White Rose (story from Artem)

2021-06-29 15:18:12 UTC

I reckon that today we can hear a lot of stories about different vandals or burglars, robbers or muggers, drug dealers or pirates but I want to tell you something special. Most of the criminals are wild in some way. They do something real and they get something real, of course, unfairly. However, there are some exceptions and I want to tell you about one of them. To be honest, I read this story in the newspaper and can't definitely say that it's true.

It started one incredibly freezing winter. It was late and every member of the family was sleeping except one small child. He was only ten years old and the boy was extremely afraid of darkness. For the reason of that he couldn't fall asleep. Suddenly, he heard a noise. Somebody was walking around the house. A few minutes later this somebody started knocking the door. Then he opened it and got into. The boy was devastatingly frightened. He began to cry. Slowly he moved to his mum and woke her up. When she turned on the light she saw that there was nobody. The criminal didn't steal anything. Even more, he left one thing. It was absolutely gorgeous white rose.
Unfortunately, police didn't believe in the boy's tale.

But it happened again and againg. Not with this family but with others. Everything was the same. Police had always founded a white rose. That's why people started calling this criminal in the same way.

Detectives were devastated. There was nothing stolen. There were no evidences. No witnesses. No reasons for doing that.

Luckily, after seven successfully commited crimes White Rose was arrested. It happened accidentally. One old man was walking around and saw him.
Detective came to criminal's house and saw a garden of white roses.

The case went to court. All the victims came. They were shocked. White Rose was very short and weak. It was unbelievable that this man could make so many people scared. Nevertheless, everybody knew that he was guilty. The judge asked him 'Why did you do that?'. Everybody was waiting for an answer for so long. Finally, White Rose answered 'Whole my life I was afraid that once somebody can burgle my house, mug me, murder me, rob me. I was scared of criminals. I thought, they would come to my house at night. They were like ghosts or different horrors for me. But once I understood that to stop being afraid of them, I need to become one of them. I was not frightened of people anymore because they were frightened of me'
The judge didn't like this answer. To be honest, nobody liked it. The accused was sentenced to eight years in prison. the trial ended.

The following day White Rose was murdered. Nobody wanted to be with him. Even in prison

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Crime story ( Maria )

2021-07-01 09:23:49 UTC

Once there were massive criminal events. At first, the police were told about burglary a utterly rich man's house.When all the officers went to the call, they also reported about the robbery of the main bank of the city. However, that’s not all. The last message was about a murder in the main square of the city. First detective interviewed victim and witnesses and started collected evidence.The owner of the house, that is, the first victim, said that he saw a short man with dark hair.
He was dressed all in black and looked like drug dealer.
When the detective asked witness of robberies and murders they described the same person. Which meant that the police found the suspect. This man was found and the judge accused him of all crimes. This man turned out to be a criminal person. He was already accused of piracy, theft, vandalism, shoplifting and also of arson. The accused was sentenced to life in prison. They was trial ends.

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a crime story (Lola)

2021-07-01 22:39:29 UTC

Alan Morgan is a local detective. Usually, he investigate the most primitive cases about banks robbery or street mugging. However, there was one exception. Last week he took up the judge’s murder case. First of all, he started to interview witnesses. There was no clue. So he decided to collect evidence. He found a chewing gum under the judge’s table. This mean that before the murder, someone was in judge’s office. The chewing gum was immortally extraordinary. It was without any sugar and from India. There were no more such in the city. Well then a suspect was in India before the evidence. Mister Morgan spent one more interviewing of witnesses, before what it turned out that only two people from the judge’s entourage were in India. It was his wife and his secretary. The secretary had an alibi. So Alan checked everything again and found out the judge’s wife had diabetes, that’s why she chewed sugar free chewing gum. A suspect was arrested and charged with a crime, after what the case goes to court. The judge’s wife found guilty. The judge wanted to break down. His wife was so irascible. She lost her temper and killed him without realizing it. The accused was found sentenced to 6 years in prison. No one could have through that the murder was his wife. She didn’t look like criminal at all. The trial ended and Morgan started new case about vandalism and also about drug dealing.

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5 days (story by Nastya)

2021-07-02 09:21:17 UTC

1 june. A social poll about top 5 the most terrible crimes has been published in newspaper, which claimed that the worst is murder, next robbery, arson, burglary and mugging. That day the 5 workers have been muged in different places and time otherwise in one day. What a weird coincidence!

2 june. A journalist told that sb had burgled his house. Three more people were in the similar situation. They believed there were a link between crimes.

3 june. Somebody enjoys looking at incredibly stunning fire, somebody is afraid of its affects. By the way, an arsonist set fire to the headquarters of newspaper agency. A detective came, collected the evidence and interviewed victims and witnesses, who told him about details of thefts that were committed earlier. . In conclusion, he joined previous cases. The workes were utterly frightened.

4 june. Investigation were continued. Some people suspected that the criminal is someone from the newspaper agency. Nevertheless the robbery were in the director's apartment. The detective found the top list which was published 1 june. Next stage is murder.

5 june. In stuff were two humans who hadn't been suffered from crimes. One of them is following victim, another one is quilty. The police spied on them. At 5 pm a men tried to kill but fortunately he was stopped and caught by the time. The men charged with all crimes, later judjes found him guilty and he was sentenced to 20 years in prison.

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Writing from Artem

2021-07-18 09:37:16 UTC

Hello Liz,

How are your days going? Have you already been tired of this summer holidays or still not?

If yes then I want to ask you to go with me and my grandmother to Sicily. Would you like to come? Our trip is on 16 August. We are going to stay there for two weeks.

My grandmother told me that after we arrive, we are planning to go hiking up Mount Etna. It looks pretty scary, moreover I haven't gone skiing before. Hope, you'll be less frightened than me. Also, we are attending Saint Bartholomew festival with fireworks display. To be honest, I don't really know what does it mean. All these decisions were made by my grandma and nothing will change her opinion. She said that it would be amazing and I have to believe her because, as we all know, grandmothers are always right.
Although, in my opinion, the best idea will be just to go to the beach near the ocean and spend most of the time there.

By the way, I've got a new cat. He is quite small and funny. However, he's enormously active. Now every day at 3 a.m. you can hear the endless 'Mmhhhheeeeeeoooooowwww' near my house.

I'm really looking forward to seeing you. Let me know as soon as possible.

Forever yours,
Artem

Email from Lola

2021-07-19 05:41:06 UTC

Hi Ann,

How are things up to? Where your summer holidays going? I hope you’re fine.

Next week, we want to visit Sicily with my grandmother. Would you like to come with us? There are the last three weeks of August, so I reckon you won’t be busy. Our flight is on the Monday’s morning from Vancouver International Airport. We are going to stay there last two weeks of August.

We are planning to go hiking up Mount Etna. Check it out. It’s literally fantastic. When I hit the book, I read about this mount several times. I hope we will visit Sain Bartholomew festival. Really, it won’t be a bed of roses to go there, cause it’s the most popular festival in Italy. I completely failed to remember to say about fireworks. A brand new traditional of this festival is evening fireworks show. It’s utterly fascinating.

By the way, we will walk a lot, moreover take comfortable shoes, so that it is not arduous to spend all day walking.

I am really looking forward to seeing from you.

Hope to see you soon,

Lola.

Email from Dima

2021-07-19 08:14:42 UTC

Hello Liz

How are things with you?How our summer holidays are going?How your family?

I'm writing to ask you , If you want to spent these holidays with me and my grandmother .

We are going to spend them in our country house.There are many different ways to spent them absolutely awesome.And in the middle of the summer group Jaga Jaga will met our country side Village and locals will create bug fireworks festival.

Additionally there is a big lake where we can fishing and swimming every day , and little forest , which haven't dungeon wild animals.Moreover I would you to see our big statue of Founder.

I hope you can come to add there good WiFi connection
And Television so in night we wouldn't get bored.

Look forward to hearing from you. Dima

Email from Vika

2021-07-19 08:45:00 UTC

Hi Liz,
How are things with u ? How is your puppy ? Is he ok?What have u been up to ? I hope you’re fine :)

Me and my grandma are going to visit utterly breathtaking Sicily! Do you fancy coming with us ? This trip is starting on Friday 13 August , moreover we’re staying there for two weeks.

I guess it will be utterly amazing trip , cause in the end of the first week we’re planning to go hiking up Mount Etna. I’ve heard that on the top of this mountain is calamitously breathtaking view , nevertheless it will be my first time of hiking! In the end of our trip we’re planning to visit Saint Bartholomew festival with fireworks display!!!

By the way , it will be perfect to have comfortable clothes with u , cause we’re going to walk everywhere !!

I hope u can come. Please let me know as soon as possible.

Love ,
Vika 🤍

Email (Maria)

2021-07-19 08:59:11 UTC

Hi Liz,
How are things with you? How are your summer holidays going? Do you want to meet up? How is your little brother Bob doing? Last week you said he broke his leg.

This summer I have utterly huge holiday plans. First of all, I plan to go to Sicily in August to see my grandmother. There we will see local sights and go to festivals. I remember that we have long dreamed of traveling together, but it was utterly arduous for us to persuade our parents. It was not bed of roses moreover all school year I had to hit the book, however I did it.

I plan to go there in the last two weeks of August.It won't be so hot and we'll be back before school. Furthermore, at this time in Sicily there is a fireworks festival to which we are going to go))) If it is not piece of cake for you to ask your parents for time off, tell them that my grandmother will review us, she is utterly responsible and cheerful. I also want to climb to the top of the Mount Etna and take gorgeous pictures of the sunset there.

By the way , don’t take a lot of clothes, in Sicily there is a huge shopping center where we can buy a lot of clothes not expensive.

I hope you can come. Let me know as soon as possible.

Hope to see you soon,
Stefan

Writing from Masha

2021-07-19 09:15:22 UTC

Hi Liz,

How are your summer holidays going? How's your brother John? I hope everything is fine.

My friends and l are preparing incredibly gripping holiday that would be in last two weeks in August. We would be over the moon if you decide to join us. So would you like to come? It's a bed of roses for me to prepare an accommodation to you. Moreover it's all ready done! You would stay in Sicily, in the house of my grandma. I reckon you would find a common interests.

On our holiday we would do a various things. However in my personal view you need to know what we would do. First of all we decide to go hiking up Mount Etna. Don't worry, we have an equipment to do that. And after that we would go on Saint Bartholomew festival. I'm sure you have never seen such fireworks display.

By the way, can you take that book called 'The Way of the Breadwinner, How to become rich'. My father are interested in such books, so l hope it won't be hard to you.

I'm really looking forward to seeing you.

Love,
Your Masha.