The Soul Crshing Student Essay: Effective Language by Anna Buono https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9 en-us 2018-04-30 11:49:42 UTC 2018-04-30 13:47:28 UTC hello@padlet.com Imperative Conclusion https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256487563 "Now go and write"]]> 2018-04-30 13:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256487563 Imagery https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256488441 Korb uses imagery throughout the article to show the reader what his classroom is like.
Example: "Sand I'd smuggles back from California slid from between the pages to my desk."]]> 2018-04-30 13:07:36 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256488441 paragraph breaks for humorous or dramatic effect https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256489321 "crickets."
"maybe they were wondering what a blog was."
"but why can't they [see themselves as peculiar]?"
"the class looks up in wonder. this happens every semester."]]> 2018-04-30 13:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256489321 Alliteration https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256489728 "burbling bloggers," "stylized seflies"]]> 2018-04-30 13:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256489728 https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256489768 “It’s never: I read the text. I took the test. And it is never ever: I loved the text with queer devotion!”

]]> 2018-04-30 13:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256489768 https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256490383 "Don't worry, you'll never fully grasp how the world transcends you and your ability to describe it"]]> 2018-04-30 13:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256490383 Using "I" and "texts being read" to reference high school teaching https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256490588 2018-04-30 13:12:12 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256490588 Uses contrast when talking about what he gets versus what he wants in his students writing https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256490982 2018-04-30 13:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256490982 Funny haha https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256491621 "I assume they have taste"

]]> 2018-04-30 13:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256491621 https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256491747 "look in at your peculiar self and how your frontiers continue to edge back."]]> 2018-04-30 13:14:32 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256491747 https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256492137 "They're still waiting for something important or real to happen to them"]]> 2018-04-30 13:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256492137 https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256492369 juxtaposition: joys/ tragedies, shame/ grief]]> 2018-04-30 13:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/buono_anna/99djfnpjuwt9/wish/256492369