https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall Made with a little mischief en-us 2017-10-16 08:18:51 UTC 2017-10-19 11:38:38 UTC hello@padlet.com 15mjackson https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197250186 By using dramatic verbs like lunged,crawled and grabbed to add tension.]]> 2017-10-16 08:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197250186 15mjackson https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197252134 For example it describes the attacker "heavily-accented voice"  
This builds tension as the reader wants to know who the attacker is and what he is going to do


]]> 2017-10-16 08:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197252134 15mjackson https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197253343 I think the writer does build tension throughout the text by describing the attacker making the reader want to know more and making them question who he/she is. A]]> 2017-10-16 08:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197253343 15mjackson https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197253896 The writer uses a Cyclical structure to build tension. It starts as a calm atmosphere and then it turns into a more tense atmosphere and then goes back to calm again this builds tension in the text as it is calm and suddenly the atmospheric changes as Connelly is drugged and shears turns to see the "mourinous silhouette" of the attacker.]]> 2017-10-16 08:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/15gridout/GeorgieWall/wish/197253896