Per 7: Informative Essay Rubric by CHRISTA PETRIDIS https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei Using the rubric, analyze the rubric for the performance task. Respond to one other student's post. en-us 2021-05-04 15:29:42 UTC 2025-11-15 00:02:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Maria Maria_F2 https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490749606 Level 1 looks like an essay that doesn't connect the dots with each progress, the evidence would be irrelavent to the topic.]]> 2021-05-04 17:13:01 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490749606 Maria Maria_F2 https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490764411 Level 2 essay would look like the topic would make sense and would follow up with the evidence and counterclaim later on.]]> 2021-05-04 17:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490764411 Maria Maria_F2 https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490772443 Level 3 essay looks like introducing the topic appropriately and it is relavant to what the main topic focuses on.]]> 2021-05-04 17:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490772443 Maria Maria_F2 https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490785530 Level 4 essay looks like reaching the expectations of what is needed and what is missing. Everything will be used accordingly and would be well organized]]> 2021-05-04 17:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490785530 Maria Maria_F2 https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490793849 This easy should be neat and has to meet or be above expectations. It has to make the reader intrested and know when to hit the points to connect the dots. The essay should be well explained and really long.]]> 2021-05-04 17:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490793849 Rebecca banini https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490837180 Level one looks like an essay that doesn't have an hook is not providing evidence that support what you talking about and no topic introduced ]]> 2021-05-04 17:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490837180 demonstrate an attempt to use evidence, but only develop ideas with minimal, occasional evidence which is generally invalid or irrelevant https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490916272 2021-05-04 17:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490916272 Razon https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490918021 Little to none evidence and essay shows lack of comprehension]]> 2021-05-04 17:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490918021 Santiago https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490920571 Level 1 essay has little evidence and talk irrelevant thing but not about the topic.]]> 2021-05-04 17:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490920571 vangie vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490924581 i  agree with  Santiago that a level 1 essay has little]]> 2021-05-04 17:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490924581 vangie vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490926344 i agreed with miria]]> 2021-05-04 17:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490926344 i agreed with miria vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490930350 vangie]]> 2021-05-04 17:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490930350 evel 4 essay looks like an essay that has hit every point . —clearly introduce a topic inmanner that is compelling andfollows logically from the task andpurpose vangie vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490932888 2021-05-04 17:46:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490932888 This easy should be neat and has to meet or be above expectations. It has to make th ereader intrested and know when to hit the points to coonect the dots. The essay should be well explained and really long.vangie vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490933405 2021-05-04 17:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490933405 Rebecca Banini https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490936748 Level 2 essay would look like the topic would make sense and would follow up with the evidence and counterclaim later on.]]> 2021-05-04 17:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490936748 Santiago https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490964385 A level 3 essay has develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, details, quotations, or other information and examples from the text.]]> 2021-05-04 17:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490964385 Rebecca Banini https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490975379 A level 3 essay has—exhibit clear organization, with
the use of appropriate transitions to
create a unified whole]]> 2021-05-04 17:54:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490975379 Rebecca banini https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490983521 A level 4 essay look like —establish and maintain a formal
style, using grade-appropriate,
stylistically sophisticated language
and domain-specific vocabulary with
a notable sense of voice]]> 2021-05-04 17:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490983521 Santiago https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490986250 A level 2 essay provide a concluding statement 
or section that follows from the 
topic and information present.
]]> 2021-05-04 17:56:17 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490986250 Level 2 essay would look like the topic would make sense and would follow up with the evidence and counterclaim later on. vangie vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490986543 2021-05-04 17:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490986543 Level 3 essay looks like introducing the topic appropriately and it is relavant to what the main topic focuses on. vangie vangileeh https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490987928 2021-05-04 17:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490987928 Rebecca Banini https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490998800 This essay should have an   hook to hook the reader  making the reader hook on. the topic should be clear .no runoff sentences and have a good grammar and evidence ]]> 2021-05-04 17:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1490998800 briana rodriguez level one youn eed to use Evidence https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491040011 2021-05-04 18:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491040011 briana rodriguez https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491049298 Level three -you have to introduce the topic very clearly ]]> 2021-05-04 18:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491049298 Nathaly https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491491418 Does not understand text, invalide evidence, and unorganized]]> 2021-05-04 19:48:12 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491491418 nathaly https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491685058 comprehend the text, has relevant evidence with inconsistency, and attempted at organization with inconsistent use of transitions]]> 2021-05-04 20:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491685058 nathaly https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491693913 shows appropriate analysis of texts, with relevant evidence, with some lack of variety and provides a concluding statement]]> 2021-05-04 20:50:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491693913 nathaly https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491698620 shows insightful analysis of the texts, relevant evidence, and proves a concluding statement]]> 2021-05-04 20:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491698620 nathaly https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491700262 organized, relevant evidence, atleast four or more paragraphs, few errors, good grammar, concluding statment ]]> 2021-05-04 20:52:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1491700262 Pheonyx https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494938786 docent stay on topic, no evidence.]]> 2021-05-05 17:27:45 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494938786 Ernest https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494938889 A level 1 essay has little evidence and unorganized.

]]> 2021-05-05 17:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494938889 Josslyn https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494941614 A level 1 essay does not have much strong evidence ]]> 2021-05-05 17:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494941614 A level four would have a claim ,evidence from the text and a conclusion https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494943663 2021-05-05 17:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494943663 Pheonyx https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494944214 level 2 would follow the topic stay on task, has good evidence.]]> 2021-05-05 17:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494944214 Ernest https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494944400 A level 2 essay would follow the topic, make sense and has relevant evidence.

]]> 2021-05-05 17:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494944400 Kristel https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494945634 Level 1 essay would lack of comprehension.]]> 2021-05-05 17:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494945634 Josslyn https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494946849 level 2 explains the evidence ]]> 2021-05-05 17:29:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494946849 Ernest https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494951059 Shows evidence that makes sense, with evidence that is relevant, and provides a strong hook and concluding statement.]]> 2021-05-05 17:30:14 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494951059 Santiago https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494953521 A level 4 would have all that a essay need.]]> 2021-05-05 17:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494953521 Josslyn https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494956809 Level 3 might have a hook ]]> 2021-05-05 17:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494956809 Ernest https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494957665 Shows sharp analysis of the text, and gives evidence that follows the essay well, and hooks in the reader early and provides a strong concluding statement.]]> 2021-05-05 17:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494957665 Ernest https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494963027 Very organized, relevant evidence, 5 or more paragraphs, little to no spelling or grammar mistakes, and a concluding statement]]> 2021-05-05 17:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494963027 Kristel https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494965980 Level 2 would have an attempt on organization ]]> 2021-05-05 17:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494965980 pheonyx https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494973736 a level 3 looks like maybe having 3 - 5 paragraphs, stays on topic, has good evidence, bad conclusion.]]> 2021-05-05 17:34:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494973736 Razon https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494977550 Essays organized, evidence relates to topic and shows comprehension of the topic and question]]> 2021-05-05 17:35:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494977550 pheonyx https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494988362 A level 4 essay is good has 5 or 6 paragraph's stays on topic, good evidence, and a good concluding paragraph,]]> 2021-05-05 17:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494988362 pheonyx https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494998343 an essay should look's organised , great evidence and reason, ]]> 2021-05-05 17:39:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cpetridis1/977s4omarfg5v8ei/wish/1494998343