If Then Collaboration by Mike Pappas https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh December Staff Meeting en-us 2017-11-21 17:02:17 UTC 2017-12-06 22:35:39 UTC hello@padlet.com Not writing in lines kbowman7 https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934330 Giving a template for letter placement.]]> 2017-12-06 22:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934330 shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934377 Use mentor texts to show examples of different types of writing.]]> 2017-12-06 22:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934377 Not writing in line kbowman7 https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934406 Is able to do the 1st line and for only 1 lesson..]]> 2017-12-06 22:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934406 Not writing in line kbowman7 https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934508 loses habit quickly]]> 2017-12-06 22:16:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934508 Not writing in line kbowman7 https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934574 daily reminders, goal post it, reinforce handwriting without tears]]> 2017-12-06 22:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934574 Supplementing other material in place of LC, while still using the Writer's Workshop model. shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934636 2017-12-06 22:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934636 Students are much more successful and engaged when using a variety of tools to teach writing. shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934681 2017-12-06 22:17:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934681 Using more unit prompts https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934819 2017-12-06 22:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934819 Expecting students to actively write for 40 minutes at a time. shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934912 2017-12-06 22:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213934912 Not requiring/expecting teachers to use LC as main source of curriculum. shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935192 2017-12-06 22:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935192 The writer uses a casual / conversational tone ncarpenter2 https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935335 We notice this as a common error in writing, with opinion pieces their writing could be more convincing if they sounded like an expert. 

Teaching points - areas to scaffold (pg 110 of If then Vocab)

Use expert / academic vocabulary
Use sophisticated transition words
Incorporate startling facts and credible sources.
 ]]> 2017-12-06 22:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935335 Using technology to create more engaging lessons. shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935418 2017-12-06 22:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935418 Use of Commas ncarpenter2 https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935445 Another common issue; run on sentences or short simple sentences that could be more complex, offsets for transition words. 

Teach uses and use student work for editing.

In a list, separate two or more adjectives, before names of people, and separate two strong clauses and conjunctions.]]> 2017-12-06 22:22:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935445 Using graphic organizers to help aide in learning and comprehension. shirano https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935682 2017-12-06 22:23:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213935682 taking notes from Ms. Grogen Crane writer workshop mini lessons/ high light and review with students/ keep notes in folder to be able to refer to https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213937246 2017-12-06 22:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mpappas5/94okydauevoh/wish/213937246