2022 Writing Reflection + Goals by Shannon Lesko https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1 Put your name on a post-it in each column responding to the questions. en-us 2020-08-31 01:53:56 UTC 2023-01-17 17:08:39 UTC hello@padlet.com imdada2817 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447174081 Favorite piece was narrative about my grandpa.]]> 2023-01-17 17:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447174081 My hero essay https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447174452 2023-01-17 17:01:38 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447174452 Yousuf https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175025 Narrative about a Life Changing Event.]]> 2023-01-17 17:01:56 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175025 hardcastleh5636 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175052 Extended Metaphor Piece ]]> 2023-01-17 17:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175052 Mikey https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175140 I wrote an essay about my brother and me. It was a story about a time we ended up in the ER. It also described our relationship.]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175140 Sophie M https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175175 specifying examples and evidence]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175175 mc https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175265 One of my college essays about working with kids with disabilities ]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175265 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175401 My hero essay about my dad]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175401 Noven R https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175695 My final about how literacy impacted my life]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175695 Mary https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175760 My favorite piece that I wrote was a one page paper about Christmas cookies]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447175760 mc https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176238 writing more and being more complex with my stories ]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:44 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176238 Bri https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176287 Evaluate about thanksgiving ]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176287 eylera5294 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176626 my favorite piece was probably my expository writing about music - Ava E]]> 2023-01-17 17:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176626 Mikey - Extended Metaphor https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176812 I can't control
What goes on in my life, 
Kind of like a basketball can get picked up and played with 
Until the sun goes down. 
Every action I make has a chain reaction
That I feel that I can't control.
When I look right, the scoreboard shows,
Life is up on me. 
Life will throw an unexpected challenge at me
and force me to juggle 18 different things.
Sometimes you have to deal with what you are dealt.


]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447176812 hardcastleh5636 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177001 Transitions between paragraphs or topics ]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:11 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177001 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177399 My favorite piece was my evaluation essay about at TV show.]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:25 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177399 eylera5294 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177477 I want to get better at expanding on my topics]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177477 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177673 Extended metaphor 
RM]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177673 Mikey https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177838 I need to work on transitions and having more fluid throughout the essay.]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447177838 Sophie E https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178099 I want to get better at explaining my evidence]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178099 Noven R https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178112 Transitions and adding more detail]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178112 Mary https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178163 I want to get better at finding new ways to transition into paragraphs/sentences.]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:56 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178163 mc https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178229 "Standing in the box. It was a free kick. I was the goalie, nothing mattered except I had to stop this shot or we would lose the game."]]> 2023-01-17 17:03:58 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178229 Devyn https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178443 Evaluation about Strange Donuts]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:05 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178443 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178480 One skill I look to improve on this semester is getting my work in on time.]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178480 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178489 Personal essay about my relationship with school]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178489 Bri https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178687 Conclusions and details.]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:14 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178687 Rm https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178807 “As much as I want to go back to simpler times or redo past mistakes like a clock's hands, I have to keep moving forward and never backward. It doesn’t mean that you can’t revisit memories like a clock's hands revisiting numbers on its face.” ]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178807 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178845  There was one show in particular that stuck out to me, Naruto. I never would have thought that something as basic as a cartoon would end up having such a Jurassic impact on me.]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447178845 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179009 Descriptive essay about senior year]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179009 Y.M https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179300 "20, 40, 60..." Suddenly, he paused.  After locking eyes with his partner, the car was swept into gear, tires were screeching, and the gas pedal was floored. I]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179300 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179553 I wan't to get better at my word choice ]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179553 Bri https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179630 "Thanksgiving is the holiday when you are forced to meet with your relatives. Do you have that one uncle that you hate to see cause he creeps you out? Well too bad, you have to talk with him at the dinner table."]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:48 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179630 Ria https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179641 Senior year is when you’re just months away from leaving behind everything you’ve ever known—your friends, family, and home—just to move away to some foreign place to live in a foreign box-sized room with a foreign stranger that could be a serial killer.]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179641 Rm https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179858 improve transitions and hooks]]> 2023-01-17 17:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179858 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179974 my expository essay on the 2016 Chicago Cubs]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:02 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447179974 lily https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180096 Expository essay about personal essentials]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180096 Srujan https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180127 Review piece on Kanye West]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180127 Devyn https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180187 Connecting evidence and explaining]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180187 lily https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180491 Increasing my word count in essays]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180491 Details, word choice, and evidence. https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180515 2023-01-17 17:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180515 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180860 Transitions ]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447180860 Ria https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447181098 Working on transitions and structure to make my pieces flow more smoothly]]> 2023-01-17 17:05:47 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447181098 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447181761 I struggle with accepting that I’ll never be my dad's princess again, but as I grow older, I try to love and accept my dad more. I’m still a little kid, waiting for my father to pick me up, stroke my hair, and call me his princess. Yet, with that longing, I know I can't go back in time to fix our relationship. ]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447181761 carol https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447181765 I wrote kind of a review piece about my personal haunted house which basically consisted of my pet peeves, fears, and dislikes]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447181765 elsa https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182016 descriptive piece about my mom]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182016 Srujan https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182269 I want to have better word choice this semester and spend more time on reviewing my pieces. ]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:28 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182269 eylera5294 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182620 "The distractions from everyday fears are encapsulating, as I'm emulsified in a ship at sea, thunder claps and lightning strikes throughout the dark clouds camouflaged into the sky"]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:41 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182620 Devyn https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182716 The frying dough and the sweetness of sugar glaze surrounded my head. All I could think about was the smell.]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:44 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182716 Lucas https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182968 These words will be edged in my head for all of time, “The pitch ‘knock’ this is going to be a tough play for Bryant, the Cubs, win the world series! Bryant makes the play!” This is the comfort of the torment and comfort in no longer being a lovable loser

]]> 2023-01-17 17:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447182968 Noven R https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183087 Each intricately crafted bit of snow builds up in order to create the soft surface that I walk on with my favorite black combat boots. The crackling sounds of my boots coming into contact with the floor enter my ears, along with the sniffles from the people surrounding me--due to the frosty weather that we all endure together, even if we don’t want to.]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183087 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183113 I'm driving on my way to school as I am eating the breakfast she wakes up a little bit earlier in the mornings to make. ]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183113 Mary https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183201 While the cookie itself is chewy, the sugary coating on the outside gives it a crunchy shell, and it adds to the overall sweetness. If they are fresh out of the oven, then the Hershey’s kiss on top should be warm and soft and it melts as soon as it enters your mouth.]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183201 carol https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183587 I want to get better at having smoother transitions and staying on topic]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183587 elsa https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183620 choosing better words to flow with the piece]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183620 Aisha https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183640 Transitions ]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447183640 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447184071 Narrative about a mini evaluation of Parkways lunch

]]> 2023-01-17 17:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447184071 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447185143 The room was different from the others. Faded green paint along the walls, wood-type doors, chairs lining the room, and at the front, a lady behind a tiny glass window. ]]> 2023-01-17 17:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447185143 https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447185533 Transitions and getting started.]]> 2023-01-17 17:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/shannonlesko1/94amftyyjdkiote1/wish/2447185533