7th Grade Writing by Meg Coppock-Huegel https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3 Leave me some feedback on my writing pieces en-us 2022-01-31 14:13:20 UTC 2026-01-26 19:34:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f33a.png Devasrigauri Lokesh devasrigauri https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2023528774 I thought your intrduction was really good and i liked how you put some figurtive language in there as well, it made me want to read more. 
One of my suggestion is to explain the evdence more in your warrant and create new points ]]> 2022-02-01 15:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2023528774 From Amanda 27abirck https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2023925854 Hey Meg, here’s my two stars and a wish, 
⭐️ Star 1:  I really how persuasive you are from the very beginning, I love how this first line really pulls the reader to be in your perpective: ‘’There are 100s, if not 100s of dogs not getting the walks they need.’’ This hook makes the reader feel sympathy for the dogs and gets them on your side and perpective from the start of your piece. 
⭐️ Star 2: I really like how realistic your problems are and how your piece claims how they can be fixed. One of your solved problems is that dogs wouldn’t use the bathroom on other peoples lawns because they would go at the dog park. This problem is relatable and connects with other problems people may have faced with dogs using the bathroom on their lawn. 
✨ Wish: I think you could add more figurative language in your piece since I really liked when you incorporated it. Anyways, good job!
-Amanda ]]> 2022-02-01 17:53:54 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2023925854 Eco Rider 27jrebuth https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2088340947 Hi Meg! 
It’s JoJo! 
I loved your presentation on Eco Rider! 
1 star that I have for you is I like how with your competition and the Eco Rider, the Eco Rider always seemed to have more. Let me elaborate on more. The competition was $10 an hour but yours was $5 an hour. You have a cooler and a gps and the competition has no extra luxuries.  Already I want to by yours, because the other scooter just seems rundown and out dated. Second star, I enjoyed how you gave visuals for your cooler and gps because it helped me see what you were talking  about, you showed it on the  Eco Rider  and pictures of gps and a cooler on your slide. Wish: The only thing that I wish you did better was explained does it run out of electricity because if i was all the way across down and did not have access to a eco friendly electric gas  station what do i do? Does it warn you if you are running low on electricity? Now that can happen with any viechle but sometimes its hard to find an electric charging station. 
Overall Meg, amazing job! I loved it! 
Your friend, 
Jojo 




]]> 2022-03-10 13:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2088340947 Eco Rider 27jgonzalez1 https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2088342441 Hi meg 
To start off this is a amazing idea eco rider is so beneficial to so many traveling back and forth/ trying to get to there destination quickly overall this is a great presntion  

My First star is that i liked that the eco rider was affordable only $5 a hour no fees and how you compared your prices to your completion which is $10 a hour and extra fess for renting 

My second star is that i comes with the luxuries of a gps and a cooler it helps a lot when going places 

My wish is That maybe you can add in does it charge in into a station or does it have solar panels. To recharge the eco rider with long trips.

-jaslene ]]> 2022-03-10 13:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2088342441 Buy My Product- 2 stars and a wish 27arebuth https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2088850895 I love how you hooked me right in the beginning with your strong hook and intro. 
I love how you chose a product that would help with a big issue that a lot of people care about. To me it is a great idea! Because it helps the environment and helps you in other ways!
I wish would be that in your presentation, you would have, how you came up about this product and how you are qualified to talk about it. Other wise, great job!  ]]> 2022-03-10 17:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2088850895 Informative Article 27liannotta https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2139161719 The organization of your article was creative and easy to follow. Your definitions thoroughly explained what the words meant. Something I wish you did is bold the words in the glossary to show that I could find the definition of the words.

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Luke]]> 2022-04-11 13:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2139161719 Informative autoridad 27klowe1 https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2139179687 I really enjoyed how in depth you went with your subtopics. They have a lot of though in them and were still enjoyable to read. The organization was thorough and well thought out.

I wish you had gone more into detail about some of your word cvhpoocve. I felt as if the glossary was not enough considering the complexity of the words and positions in the royal family,
]]> 2022-04-11 13:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2139179687 Informative Article https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2139517711 Hi Meg, its Angie! 
I really liked the types of research questions you chose for your subtitles. You really went in depth in the research. I liked all the pictures and captions you did that related well to the subtopics. A wish is to make some of the paragraphs into bullet points. Otherwise, I LOVE YOUR PIECE.]]> 2022-04-11 17:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/27mcoppockhuegel/947k3k924q7zq4b3/wish/2139517711