SY 2021-2022 Period 3 Language Development 2 by Marissa Winmill https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag Made with ♥ en-us 2021-08-31 16:54:49 UTC 2023-01-30 00:05:20 UTC hello@padlet.com Mrs. Winmill marissa_winmill https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707608320 https://sway.office.com/uHxdb0xfVu7fZMgN]]> 2021-08-31 16:59:08 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707608320 Angelica Mendez https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707609368



https://sway.office.com/WwFYDGaOAZmhAtE9Prompt: What are your goals for this school year? 
!. this year, i will get all A's in my classes. 
2. I will complete all my homework on time .
3. I will make my mom proud of me. 
4. I will get better taste in clothes and shoes .
5. I will make sure my family and friends are ok with me .
6. I will make new friends.
]]> 2021-08-31 16:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707609368 AHMAD https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707610290 https://sway.office.com/VvVk6ukjQYWb6S8z]]> 2021-08-31 17:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707610290 Ameenullah https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707614654 2021-08-31 17:01:49 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707614654 Sahar Sediqi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707621179 https://sway.office.com/uHxdb0xfVu7fZMgN]]> 2021-08-31 17:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707621179 Angela https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707621722 https://sway.office.com/QldSNK8ZjLIOvDtb]]> 2021-08-31 17:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707621722 SHUYI sn398686 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707622668 Tuesday, August 31,2021
what are your goals for this school year?
1. I will learn 30 more minutes a day.
2. I will finish homework on time.
3. I will go to bed before 12 o'clock.
4. Communicate with partners in English at school.
5. Learn English for 1 hour at home.
6. Exercise 30-60 minutes a day.
7. Drink more water every day.
]]> 2021-08-31 17:05:23 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707622668 SHUYI sn398686 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707662490 https://sway.office.com/E2WEKESqZOC1cKus]]> 2021-08-31 17:20:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1707662490 Angela Tomas https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1713320055 https://sway.office.com/QldSNK8ZjLIOvDtb]]> 2021-09-02 17:22:08 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1713320055 SHUYI sn398686 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1713348554 https://sway.office.com/E2WEKESqZOC1cKus]]> 2021-09-02 17:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1713348554 mahdi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1728696275 https://sway.office.com/VUYrdZvE6u1xCFzU]]> 2021-09-09 16:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1728696275 https://sway.office.com/2rBVr7ydppODp04M sn392654 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1731473853 Htun]]> 2021-09-10 17:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1731473853 Htun https://sway.office.com/9xSc5XdSMdtjPlEf sn392654 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1731477003 2021-09-10 17:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1731477003 angelichttps://sway.office.com/WHJQr97l4xUL1AP5a https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790387193 2021-10-04 17:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790387193 angelica https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790388234 https://sway.office.com/WHJQr97l4xUL1AP5]]> 2021-10-04 17:17:47 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790388234 Niamatullah Sahak https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790393463 https://sway.office.com/MADPJh5VS3igs1mH]]> 2021-10-04 17:19:52 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790393463 farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790395574 https://sway.office.com/ykTeWCHXdZcI4mYK]]> 2021-10-04 17:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790395574 Abzael martinezabzael https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790396830 https://sway.office.com/jOxvyZdXG9Y8n39M]]> 2021-10-04 17:21:12 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790396830 Sohil Tani https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790408189 https://sway.office.com/CkiV8I7hMJIJTeFT]]> 2021-10-04 17:25:47 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790408189 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790426668 https://sway.office.com/S4tMa2UJTnTurkhm]]> 2021-10-04 17:33:30 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1790426668 farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1836890429 Friday, October 22, 2021
What did you learn from your group conversation?
Two things I learned about my partner or group are:
1.
2.
How do you grade yourself in this conversation (using 0-4 scale)
]]> 2021-10-22 17:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1836890429 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1842384524 How was your weekend? What are your plans? What did you learn about your book?
.my weekend was bad i was home all day it was Rainy outside 
]]> 2021-10-25 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1842384524 Presentation Rubric marissa_winmill https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859299286 2021-11-01 16:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859299286 Peer Feedback marissa_winmill https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859303763 2021-11-01 16:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859303763 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859369582 Today is the beginning of Quarter 2. What are important things that you need to do better this quarter?
  1. I need to do all of my homework. 
  2. to be here every day on time.
  3. to be kind on the class.
  4. Get sleep 8 hours.
  5. Read book 30 minute every day.
]]> 2021-11-01 17:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859369582 Tuan Ahmad ( partner) https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859433479 Based on the rubric , my partner Ahmad is proficient because he had picture on his power point 

i think he can do better by learning English at his own time and reading a book 

What I appreciate about his presentation are the following :

1 He did excellent job preparing for the presentation and adding more slides and picture
2 He put more examples and evidence on each side 

3 He did very excellent and effort 

What he can improve the following
He can speak more clearly by practicing more before presenting
He can do  better and speaking as well as he can 

He can be improve that was he learning English at his own time 

 ]]> 2021-11-01 17:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859433479 Mrs. Winmill- Tuan (partner) marissa_winmill https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859439791 Based on the rubric, I think Tuan gets a Proficient because ____________________.
What he did well was ___________________.
I also appreciate his ______________because____________.
What can be better is perhaps speaking with enthusiasm and clarity by practicing more before the presentation.
He can also add more examples and evidence of his learning in each slide.


]]> 2021-11-01 17:35:31 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859439791 farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859443365 2021-11-01 17:36:38 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859443365 Ahmad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859444897 2021-11-01 17:36:59 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859444897 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859445899 2021-11-01 17:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859445899 Shuyi sn398686 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859980910 2021-11-01 22:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1859980910 Ameenullah jan shuyi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862318969 I think she did very good on her power point 
her reading was very good she have a example and evident ]]> 2021-11-02 17:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862318969 Ahmad tuna https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862326074 Based om the rubric I Think tuna gets proficient because I had pictures and I can do better Explaining and giving more example]]> 2021-11-02 17:10:59 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862326074 Sohil Tani https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862334293 Abzael finish his assignment I think he did good job an his assignment he really good in reading and writing ]]> 2021-11-02 17:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862334293 (Farzad) my partner (Angelica) https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862357173 Based on the rubric, my partner Angelica. did great she talk about 10 of her defense I will give her Developing.]]> 2021-11-02 17:22:18 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862357173 marissa_winmill https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862361804 Your name
Based on the rubric, my partner Mahdi is proficient because he did well in all four categories.

What I appreciate about his presentation are the following:
1. He did an excellent job preparing for the presentation and adding more slides.
2. He put more examples and evidence on each slide.
3. He ...

What he can improve on are the following:
1. He can speak more clearly by practicing more before presenting.
2. He can add more examples and evidence of his learning.]]> 2021-11-02 17:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862361804 Ameen shuyi partent https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862387272 based on the rubric, I think Shyi gets a because PowerPoint is detailed. 
what she did was all required elements and graphicns, captions and other images, and speak clearly. 
I also appreciate about his presentation 
are the following 
1. her writing was good
she put more example.
what can improve on are the following

1.she can Add more examples and evidence of his learning   
2. ]]> 2021-11-02 17:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862387272 Shuyi- Ameen (partner) sn398686 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862387764 Based on the rubric, I think Ameen gets a advanced. because PowerPoint is detailed.

I also appreciate about his presentation are the following；
1. His PowerPoint content about reading for one hour a day because I can’t keep.
2. has all required elements and graphicns, captions and other images.
3. Speak clearly.

What he can improve on are the following:
1. He can add more examples and evidence his learning.]]> 2021-11-02 17:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862387764 (Sohil) my partner (abzael) https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862388355 Based on the rubric, my partner abzael is proficient because he did well in all for categories
What I apparition about his presentation are the following.
He did an excellent job preparing for the presentation because he did well in all for categories
He can speak little bait but he practicing
He add more examples and evidence and his learning
he put more examples



]]> 2021-11-02 17:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1862388355 Niamatullah Sahak- Partner Mahdi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1865277308 Based on the rubric, I think Mahdi gets a Proficient because he did every thing .
What he did well on his presentation.
I also appreciate his presentation to me and he speak clearly because He did a good job speaking.
What can be better is perhaps speaking with enthusiasm and clarity by practicing more before the presentation.
He can also add more examples and evidence of his learning in each slide.]]> 2021-11-03 16:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1865277308 Mahdi Partner (Niamatullah Sahak) https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1865300417 Based on the rubric, I think Niamatullah Sahak gets a Advanced because he did everthing Good.
What he did well was he did presentation good he put everything picture and record.
I also Advanced his work because He did very good job.
What can be better is perhaps speaking with enthusiasm and clarity by practicing more before the presentation.
He can also add more examples and evidence of his learning in each slide.]]> 2021-11-03 16:51:15 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1865300417 Pyay Mo https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1867973357 https://sway.office.com/2ZSqiOdRehJ1kDTi?ref=Link]]> 2021-11-04 16:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1867973357 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1868003392 Essential Question: How do families affect us?
Families affect us in many ways. They can affect us negatively or positively.
For example, in my family... in are family 8 people i have 2 and 4 bro brother
]]> 2021-11-04 17:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1868003392 Pyay Mo https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1868005271 https://sway.office.com/2ZSqiOdRehJ1kDTi?ref=Link]]> 2021-11-04 17:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1868005271 farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1881957284 Wednesday, November 10, 2021
How did you do when Mrs. Winmill was not here? Were you proactive? Explain?
i did read the EDGE when you were not here
]]> 2021-11-10 17:21:15 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1881957284 Mahdi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1931805464 https://sway.office.com/VUYrdZvE6u1xCFzU]]> 2021-12-06 18:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1931805464 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1945285035 Discussion Self-Evaluation
Today, I rated myself ___3________because
]]> 2021-12-13 18:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1945285035 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1972958284 Year 2022
Monday, January 3, 2022
How was your winter break?
My winter break was not Good I was home The first week. 
the the next week I stared going to gym.
]]> 2022-01-03 20:47:53 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1972958284 Mahdi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1972965106 https://sway.office.com/VUYrdZvE6u1xCFzU]]> 2022-01-03 20:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1972965106 Mahdi Ahmadi january 17 2022 https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1996539230 https://sway.office.com/VUYrdZvE6u1xCFzU]]> 2022-01-17 20:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/1996539230 Farzad https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152391540 The 10 Simple Daily Habits to Change Your Life video helped me think about what I can change about my life. To be successful in life, I will...
am think for my dad bring as food am think for my mom that she cook for as every day.
]]> 2022-04-21 17:07:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152391540 Tuan https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152392426 This video help me think about what I can improve myself , to change my life , I will do exercise and do homework 
I will do running around my house so I had beautiful body 
Homework I will do my homework and learning so I can become smart 
]]> 2022-04-21 17:07:52 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152392426 Niamatullah Sahak https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152394086 The 10 Simple Daily Habits to Change Your Life video helped me think about what I can change about my life. To be successful in life, I will do exercise every day because it is good for my health and I turn off my phone because I do not want to waste my time.]]> 2022-04-21 17:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152394086 Shuyi https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152412412 10 simple daily habits to change to your life]]> 2022-04-21 17:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152412412 Zahra Waezzada https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152427276 https://sway.office.com/7JkxUk3DrVygy3u4]]> 2022-04-21 17:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152427276 Abzz martinezabzael https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152428170
Journal Writing by Abzael Martinez J.
Thursday, April 21, 2022
Go to this Sway]]> 2022-04-21 17:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152428170 Christian Hollin https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152431859 2022-04-21 17:34:46 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152431859 Tuan https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152431863 19th April 
My spring break was great and I install hello talk app and this app is learning English and I have 4 Chinese friend , 3 boy , 1 girl and but they older than me especially the girl she is very cool and she think I am cute and I consider her as my older sister and I was lucky to make friend with her and I text her for 4 day 
I sleeping and I practice singing and my mom and her friend eat dinning together in my house 
I watching Anime and facetime with my friend 
]]> 2022-04-21 17:34:46 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152431863 Mo https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152433238 https://sway.office.com/E2WEKESqZOC1cKus]]> 2022-04-21 17:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/marissa_winmill/933xi02zpmdjz3ag/wish/2152433238