6E4: Week 26_Wrap Up by Jerome Ople Ramirez https://padlet.com/vjerome1/931plbwch8n79fdd Made with a creative frenzy en-us 2022-02-21 02:09:11 UTC 2022-02-21 02:38:47 UTC hello@padlet.com YOUR TASK vjerome1 https://padlet.com/vjerome1/931plbwch8n79fdd/wish/2057885374 2022-02-21 02:10:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vjerome1/931plbwch8n79fdd/wish/2057885374 Tue Lam apobangpo https://padlet.com/vjerome1/931plbwch8n79fdd/wish/2057894910 Strengths:
- I met all the requirements for content, structure, grammar & style.
My peer's comments indicate that I have used fancy words, a proper structure and that my essay is error-free
Weaknesses:
Uh...once again...I guess I'm writing way too long and rambling. Sorry, I just can't trim it down!
How can I improve:
- I will try to paraphrase my sentences and eliminate unnecessary filler words to make my writing concise]]> 2022-02-21 02:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vjerome1/931plbwch8n79fdd/wish/2057894910