Class F2302 - Zavia - Enya Jiao - Research Essay Padlet by

My Final Draft

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

My Reflection and Changes

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

I have learned how to write reference list correctly using the Harvard format, including citations from chapters in books and the publishers. This is something I hadn't noticed before, indicating that I wasn't reading materials carefully enough and need to improve in the future. I also understand that the beginning and end of an article should complement each other, closely linking to the main points of the content. The first paragraph should introduce the main idea of the article, while the last paragraph should summarize the central theme. It's unnecessary to add new content to these two sections.

Therefore, in the future writing of articles, I will use various documents more flexibly to enrich my articles, and make its structure more compact and interlinked.

My First Draft

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

My Reflection and Changes

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

1. I have modified the citation section in the text to conform to the Harvard citation format

2. I have added a requested reference

3. I deleted the cover page and expanded my content to over 1500 words

Any additional sources and notes

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

referencing and plagiarism worksheet

My Essay Plan

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

My Reflection and Changes

jiaoe — 2025-03-28 06:11:53 UTC

I first wrote some outlines, and then looked for references.

In class, my classmates helped me point out the shortcomings of the challenge section, and I also felt that the basis I found was inappropriate.

I have revised the challenge section and presented it from a different perspective.

I may first list the key points I want to say, and then look for examples or evidence based on the points and perspectives, rather than looking for examples first.

Practice essay

jiaoe — 2025-04-14 05:07:31 UTC