7E7 - W27 Writing a story by Vinschool Metropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc Made with a little mischief en-us 2022-02-22 18:04:46 UTC 2022-02-23 03:55:57 UTC hello@padlet.com vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061160612 2022-02-22 18:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061160612 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061161118 2022-02-22 18:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061161118 Sample 1 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061186543
Ben and his father got off the plane and left the airport. That time, they came back after a trip to Hawaii. Ben was very delighted with their trip because he had been dreaming to go to there for a lot of time. When Ben and his father came back home, Ben ran to the kitchen and saw his mom was doing the washing up. After that, Ben said:" Hi mom! We came back." and started talk about his trip. Ben had been told that his and his dad had a wonderful experience in Hawaii. He said that: "The hotel we stayed is look so fancy and the service was great". Ben told his mother a lot of things about his trip. His mom just smiled. They continued the story about the trip in their lunch. He also showed some pictures and his family liked it very much. Shortly after their lunch,  Ben and his father was go to bed and took a long sleep after a amazing trip also a tired too.]]> 2022-02-22 18:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061186543 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061192990 Write YES or NO:
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  5. The writer has used imagery
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  1. The story begins with the given sentence
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  3. The writer has used past tenses.
  4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.
  5. The writer has used imagery
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My friend, Ben has told me his story on my summer vacation. They wanted to visit his grandparents in New York, so they decided to travel by plane. On Saturday, Ben and his father got off the place and left the airport by a taxi. The weather was wonderful there. They were so excited and enjoyed their vacation with his grandparents. After listened to Ben talk about his trip, I felt very good and wanted to try New York.]]> 2022-02-22 18:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061195084 Post your writing like this(timing: 15') vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061214892
  • Name:
  • The first sentence I choose:
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    • ]]>     2022-02-22 19:02:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061214892     vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061218384 Write YES or NO:
    Structure & Language
    1. The story begins with the given sentence
    2. The story has exposition, action and resolution
    3. The writer has used past tenses.
    4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.
    5. The writer has used imagery
    Answer the questions
    6. Do you have any other comments?
    7. Do you prefer this story? Why (not)?
    ]]>     2022-02-22 19:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061218384     Nghĩa nghia004553 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061845395 1. It's so cold today, I can't feel anything warm because the sun is disappear and I will be freeze if I don't wear something warm.
    2. It's so lonely in my class today that I can't hear any voice in my class.]]>     2022-02-23 03:47:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061845395     Ngọc ngoc005119 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061851394 1. It's so cold today. I can't leave my bed because outside is freezing right now. I need to find some warm clothes to save my life.
    2. There are not many students at school today. Because of covid, so everyone is afraid of positive. I feel so lonely now]]>     2022-02-23 03:52:58 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061851394     Tô Linh hảndsome Linh_Smithboi https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061854667 1. It's so cold today, my body is being possessed by the cold, I feel so cold, it would be better to sit in the room and hug the pillow to sleep
    2. It's lonely when only a few people go to school, I'm used to this situation]]>     2022-02-23 03:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/918dg2i45mtnjzqc/wish/2061854667