Chalkline By Jane Mitchell by Abby Fenlon https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z Made with a bold sensibility en-us 2018-03-07 12:47:07 UTC 2023-01-19 19:39:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Brightnessdown.png Prologue abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/239106792 In the prologue of Chalkline we see the main character Rafiq hiding with two other trainee solders. The three boys kill all he oposite troop who come there way and quickly grab anything valuable that they can find.]]> 2018-03-07 12:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/239106792 Chapter 1 ** five years earlier abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/239108190 In this chapter we see Rafiq in his natural habitat, his home. Rafiq sister wants to go to school but Rafiq explains to her that girls aren’t allowed to go to school, but he is willing to fight for educational rights for her. We see that Rafiqs family is just like any other family.]]> 2018-03-07 12:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/239108190 Chapter 2 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/239109907 This chapter starts off quite abruptly. As rafiq enter the school all the teachers and head masters rush all the children into class rooms and hiding places. As the rebel’s enter the school they draw a chalkline on the wall and any child that was tall enough to pass the line was taken by the solders and thrown into a truck.]]> 2018-03-07 12:58:02 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/239109907 Chapter 3 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/240800525 In chapter three it starts off where the the boys are in the truck. All the boys have no idea where they are going. The Rebels open the door to huge brown hills and, surprisingly being nice to the boys, cook them food and give them water. The let the boys rest and then when it is time for the boys to go back into the truck one little boy runs off. After a wild chase the Rebels shoots the boy and leave him there.]]> 2018-03-12 12:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/240800525 Chapter 4 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/240803262 This chapter starts  off in the school with all the teachers and students terrified for their lives still shook for all the gunman barging onto the school.
 The headmaster sends out a little boy to see if theyhave  gone nd to his luck they have. When the headmaster knows what the coast is clear he grabs hold of two of the dmallest boys n the class nd starts to walk through the village. As people see him walking the try and offer support and first aid but the headmaster just keeps waking.]]> 2018-03-12 12:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/240803262 Chapter 5 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/241838214 In this chapter the all the boys who have been captured are let out again but this time for water. The gunmen tell them that they are going to ditch the truck and walk the rest off the way. They boys are all chained to a rope and worth every step they take the charged rope cuts there ankles. ]]> 2018-03-14 12:52:53 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/241838214 Chapter 6 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/250652500 In this chapter the boys are one climbing over the hills. Radique is asked to climb over tretrous drops but he trudges along and does it. Rafiq also get really impatient with the younger boys at the back as every time that they fall the rope cuts all their ankles so despite rafiq being a nice boy he looses his temper and yanks the rope to give them a tast of their own medicine.]]> 2018-04-11 11:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/250652500 Chapter 7 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/250654622 In this chapter the boys finally get to their last destination and are given food and water. Rafiq is constantly thinking of home and his family, but he doesn’t want to kick up a fuss as he has scene what has happened to the other boys. The boys are brought to a river after prayer time to wash themselves. For the first time after being captured he finally shows his emotions.]]> 2018-04-11 11:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/250654622 Chapter 8 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/250656566 In this chapter we find out that the leaders of the group are called Abdullah and Kareem. After the boys all say a prayer, have food and wash themselves they are sent up into the mountains to train for war. The boys are sent into a competition for water ad who ever is the strongest will get water. Rafiq wins the bottle of water but after someone steals the water Rafiq gets agravatied and punches the boy which leads him to get a punch himself from Kareem.]]> 2018-04-11 11:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/250656566 Chapter 11 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/252079985 In this chapter jameela and her mother and brothers are going to the market tot get one things for their houses. As the bus driver swings round a comment he comes to a sudden stop as there’re are loads of children in the dirty ground digging.jameela looks out the back window and see a boy only around 10 or 11, jameela thinks that this boy is Rafiq.]]> 2018-04-16 11:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/252079985 Chapter 9 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/252470250 In this chapter jameela is getting quite upset and worried about Rafiq and his where abouts. The police came around again looking for more witnesses about the abduction and what happened. The police also discover a murdered boy left for dead on the side of the road. A very very long period of time passes with out any weird from the police.]]> 2018-04-17 08:56:27 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/252470250 Chapter 15 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/252942035 In their chapter Kareem bring Rafiq and Samir to a safe house. Under the cover of darkness the boys bring in all the explosives ands keep them in the safe house.
The next day Rafiq,Kareem and Samir go outs into the tewon  to plan their location for the bombs. As Rafiq enter s the temple of the Hindu religion he is horrified to see the women with their hair blowing free and the men with no facial hair.

]]> 2018-04-18 11:54:09 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/252942035 Chapter 10 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/254321115 In this chapter a year has passed and Rafiq is still in the mountains learning how to be a solider. He really misses home and all his family and friends but every time that they come into his mind he always atriesa to disatract himself as he doesn’t want to show his emotions. The oys all fin out that they are training to become a Kashmiri freedom fighter and win the war. All the boys set out on a mission to learn how to plant bombs. As Rafiq and his partner are on the mountain watching all the other boys -last their bombs a bus runs around the corner. Rafiq recognizes the bus from home.]]> 2018-04-23 11:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/254321115 Chapter 12 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/254323970 In this chapter the boy who ran after the bus is given a punishment. All of the boys are brought to an abandona place. The boy who tried to run away is killed by stoning. Rafiq really hates throwing these stones at him but Rafiq knows that if he doesn’t he will be murdered himself.]]> 2018-04-23 11:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/254323970 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256785572 2018-05-01 08:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256785572 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256785579 2018-05-01 08:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256785579 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256785823 CHILD SOLDIERS
On the name of humanity great shame it does bring
The usage of children to fight in war is a terrible thing
By some so called patriots in the World of today
The scum of the Earth of them one well might say
For their abuse and their usage of children in such a cruel way
To karma they do have a huge price to pay
For the sake of their egos children by them are dehumanized
The cause they espouse to by their actions destroyed
Poor children many of whom will not live to see their prime
To use them to fight in war is a terrible crime
As subjects of warlords the victims of fear
Such stories as crimes against innocents one would rather not hear
Yet it all seems so tragic and so sad to say
That child soldiers are dying in wars every day. 

Fracis Duggan
]]> 2018-05-01 08:53:52 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256785823 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256786800 https://www.nytimes.com/2017/04/05/insider/seeking-the-truths-locked-inside-a-child-soldier.htmlhttps://www.nytimes.com/2017/04/05/insider/seeking-the-truths-locked-inside-a-child-soldier.html]]> 2018-05-01 09:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256786800 Chapter 13 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256980825 In this chapter the food in the camp begins to run low and all he children begging to get extremely cold as it is also now winter time. Ahmed asked who wants to go and raid a village for food, so Rafiq offers up to go with him to get food for the white camp. Rafiq finds it really difficult on the misión as is is a whole 24 hour journey to the village and back. ]]> 2018-05-01 18:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256980825 Chapter abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256986721 In this chapter all the mothers in Rafiq old town headed to varahumla to go and find the boys in the mountains. The police tell all the women the the boys were killed by and explosion in the mountains. Rafiqs father now doesn’t care about hm and says that Mahmood is his first son. ]]> 2018-05-01 18:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256986721 Chapter 16 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256991114 Rafiw is nw back in the safe house and all chid spoilers are prepairing for the mission, getting all the ammunition ready. As the boys approach the temple Samir is almost killed as he loses concentration during their mission. Hundreds of people get killed. Rafiq turns into a ruthless soilder not having a care in the world about who he is killing. All the surviving soilders split up and go back to the safe house keeping under the cover of darkness.]]> 2018-05-01 18:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256991114 Chapter 17 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256995185 In this chapter a storm blows in that keeps Rafiq up and awake in the mountains. Rafiq goes to get a torch whilst Ahmed look fire sheets of plastic to cover all their guns and other weapons. All of a sudden a massive explosion occurs and instantly kills Ahmed. Rafiq jumps up and realizes that their camp is under attack. Rafiq hides in cave to stay safe and alive.]]> 2018-05-01 18:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/256995185 Chapter 18 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257001111 In this chapter it is now five years after Rafiq has been stolen. All of s sudden a woman comes into the village and tells them that there has been an attack on a camp up in the mountains. The police also discover many young boys with guns in the place of the Varahumla attack. Jameela and where mother decide to visit he police and ask about he identity of the boys.]]> 2018-05-01 18:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257001111 Chapter 19 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257004899 In this chapter Rafiq is still hiding in the cave for the next three days. After plucking up the courage Rafiq returns to the camp to find everyone else lying there dead. Rafiq collects as much ammunition as he can, loads p a horse and set off to varahumla planing hid revenge]]> 2018-05-01 19:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257004899 Chapter 20 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257006489 In this chapter as Rafiq travels on his way to varahumla he raids different houses for food. Rafiq is really struggling to make decisions on what to do and when to do it. He hides all the weaponsin  a deserted area and makes sure that they are all covered up well so that no passers by will  see them. He decides to take some rest in a abandoneddoor way for the nighttime.]]> 2018-05-01 19:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257006489 Chapter 21 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257009241 In this chapter jameela and her mother head off to varahuma making sure theat jameela father doesn’t Lowe that their going to Gert infomation from the police about the child soilders. As they arrive at the police station they are faced with extremity long ques of all other parents waiting to hear about their kids as well.jameela sees a young boy sitting in a doorway, as she buys food for herself and her mother she buys a peach for him as well.]]> 2018-05-01 19:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257009241 Chapter 22 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257010560 In this chapter Rafiq is abruptly woken up by a young gil standing over him she hands him a peach and walks off before he can thank her. Thinking about his revenge whilst eating his peach. Rafiw goes back ti his horse and loads him up it’s amunition waiting for his revenge time to come.]]> 2018-05-01 19:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257010560 Chapter 23 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257011833 In this chapter the police tell jameela an her other that in the raid in the mountains there were no survivors and that he is very sorry for their loss. Jameela and her mother leave the police station filled with disappointment and griwf]]> 2018-05-01 19:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257011833 Chapter 24 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257012511 In this chapter Rafiq arrives at the white mosque. As he is about to start praying he see the little girl to gave him the peach. He sees her with what seems like her mother. They look sad to Rafiq but he is god that they have left the police station and returns to praying. ]]> 2018-05-01 19:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257012511 Chapter 25 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257014799 I this chapter jameela and her mother visit the market to buy presents for their siblings at home. As jameelas mother turnes her back when she turns to look back at jameela she notices that jameela is talking to a familiar looking boy sitting on a horse. All of a sudden a image of jameela and Rafiq appears into heart head and she hits the floor in shock fainting i the process. Jameela rushes over to her mother in completar shock her mother shouts as loud as she possible can to the young boy on the horse “Rafiq” she calls.]]> 2018-05-01 19:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257014799 Chapter 26 abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257016981 In this chapter in shock Rafiq turns aroun in complétate shock as he hears his name being called. Looking through the crouds franticly for and of his soilder friends hijos attention is drawn to the little girl and the women on the ground. Rafiq thinks that he is imagining as he turns around again to continue up the steps, the young girl taps him on the solders and says “are you my bother Rafiq” “yes” he replies “i am rafiq]]> 2018-05-01 19:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/257016981 Chapter 38 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/287863714 2018-10-01 20:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/287863714 Lot of mistakes https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/319052305 2019-01-09 23:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/319052305 Author https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/325076222 Jane mitchel]]> 2019-01-28 18:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/325076222 Abby fenlon ~ Film Techniques abbyffenlon99 https://padlet.com/abbyffenlon99/90vzsor9vl7z/wish/335805401 Today I am going to be talking about my two favourite film techniques. 

My first flim technque is animation. I really enjoy the scene where Will is in the car with Brother Joshua. I really enjoy the images that appear onto the field as they drive by. I think that this is a great way to show the audience what goes on in Wills’ mind. The images that apppear almost look as if they are from a comic book.  Also i think that this is quite a sad part of the movie so by bringing these images to the film they add life and colour. I also like the way that the images are raw and hand drawn and they add really dramatic affect to the film.  This helps us see how powerful Wills’ mind imagination is.

My second favourite film technique is costume.


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