https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical We work with love and light en-us 2018-11-26 18:02:42 UTC 2018-11-27 11:47:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Rocket.png https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193498 Positive: clearly put the time into the rehearsal, good use of levels, they have an understanding in what they are delivering and saying.
While delivering lines they have clearly worked on there movement, so that it comes across smooth and without unnecessary pauses.
Possibly improvement: focus on breathing, bits where need to be louder but good projection, allow your dramatic pauses to drag out longer, needs to be a smoother change in levels when coming to the end with the killing scene, Very powerful performance it was fantastic I enjoyed it and has come very far, well done girls.]]> 2018-11-27 10:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193498 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193501 Good projection 
Audience engagement
Realism 
Modernisation - still relating to script 
Memorised script 
Good engagement with each other 
Great characterisation and emotion during fight scene


Areas to improve;
Characterisation and reactions from csilla - phone scene 
Aware of staging 
Aware of props - candle! ]]> 2018-11-27 10:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193501 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193504 • good costume 
- nice staging & props
- Slow down on the phone call
- good use of stage. nice movement while on the phone
- realism 
- A lot better off script! :) 
- good characterisation 
- good emotions
- stayed in character even when audience laughed
- i loved how you used the pillow this time. had a mich more dramatic effect 
- just be careful louise that you don’t fall off the bed at that part :’)]]> 2018-11-27 10:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193504 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193532 Positive - audience awareness 
Listened to feedback given 
More movement in first scene 
Louise really good eye contact with the audience
Good use of the space 
Good connection between each other
Improvements - projection 
More fear (Louise is about to get killed)]]> 2018-11-27 10:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308193532 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308195253 2018-11-27 10:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308195253 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308195919 2018-11-27 10:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308195919 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308196460 Of your line delivery. Slipping up of words 

Your tech cues are different ]]> 2018-11-27 10:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308196460 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308197051 2018-11-27 10:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308197051 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308197274 2018-11-27 10:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308197274 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308197845 When the drama of the second scene erupts, the lighting changes, these are considered and the candle play. However, I need to feel Moreno if a struggle between each other ]]> 2018-11-27 10:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308197845 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308198156 2018-11-27 10:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308198156 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308198463 2018-11-27 10:59:05 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308198463 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308198748 2018-11-27 11:00:05 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308198748 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308201139 Possitive: can tell the difference in levels, Chelsea came across good an sleezy and delivers a strong male character, tia does a very good job at coming across hurt and innocent, you can feel and see the discomfort and distress. Can see that they have given more time between moments in scenes to bring a more dramatic effect. 
Powerful ending loved the delivery.
Possible improvements: at points there needs to a louder delivery, and give more time in what you say especially with you giving more time between lines.
Smashed it, very much improved and I enjoyed it very much.]]> 2018-11-27 11:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308201139 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308201164 Chelsea you have character to a tee. Kist careful.not to lower voice in olaces. Tia definatly improved with timidness. Good use of space. Good touch wheb looked at audience. Maybe a bit too long pause? Maybe toa nwed to be freaked out a bit more]]> 2018-11-27 11:09:41 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308201164 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308203185 Projection is better
Chelsea have a strong characterisation (bit quiet sometimes)
Staging is better than it was 
Tia have to be more scared 
It is showing that you have used Kate's technique of aggression and molestating. ]]> 2018-11-27 11:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308203185 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308203440 Need to be louder. 

Suite blaster - this is a well considered reference to the work. 

Tia - you’ve just arrived into the ‘amazing room’ so why after 2 seconds are your feet tapping the floor in boredom?]]> 2018-11-27 11:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308203440 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308204391 I like the tone, I like the new laughs in the lines. Which is good. Just slow down, and be louder ]]> 2018-11-27 11:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308204391 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308204775 Positive - more dramatic pauses which makes it more intense 
Chels characterisation 
Tia very timid 
Rehearsals pulled off 
Tia's facial expressions 


Improvements- tad improv ]]> 2018-11-27 11:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308204775 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308204854 Well done, maybe you could say hello as you enter the room. And leave the bottle behind. Then ask ‘is there anything else you need?’ Then wish them goodnight? Perhaps - think of character?]]> 2018-11-27 11:22:17 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308204854 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308205137 Really nice. But you need to seriously take time to look at yourself. Think of the power she has on you ]]> 2018-11-27 11:23:22 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308205137 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308205428 Why is there one line that’s direct address? I like it, but should Tia have the same at some point as well? Maybe Tia talks to the audience before leaving to go out? ]]> 2018-11-27 11:24:28 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308205428 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308205928 2018-11-27 11:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308205928 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308208659 Nice projection from both sides
Well thought actions and reactions
Good staging 
Brandon charcater was good
Jess should show more emotions and actions


]]> 2018-11-27 11:36:46 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308208659 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308208836 Positive - 
Love the atmosphere - really believable 
Brandon- good sternness to voice 
Really strong characterisation 
Good memorisation of script 
Positioning is better 

Areas for improvements -
Jess good timidness but project a little more
Don't stamp for sound effect 
Project in seduction scene 
Emphasis on word killer ]]> 2018-11-27 11:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308208836 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308208979 2018-11-27 11:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308208979 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308209043 Good setting. Jess look at audience more. Brandon good delivery of lines. Definately improved. Little bit louder. Positioning bettter. Think we need to be closer still? Both very believable. ]]> 2018-11-27 11:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308209043 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308209625 i love the use of props
Brandon you actually look like you’re drunk which i like,
Jess i love your character ! 
i love the costume as well :)
i like that we’re closer to the stage. makes it more intense 

]]> 2018-11-27 11:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308209625 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308209785 Jess the use of your blanket is good and helps you with the opening lines. Big improvement. Why can’t I go home - this line needs to be a different tone ]]> 2018-11-27 11:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308209785 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210002 2018-11-27 11:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210002 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210323 2018-11-27 11:42:44 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210323 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210799 2018-11-27 11:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210799 https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210970 2018-11-27 11:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/matthew_h_lord/historical/wish/308210970