Writing Reflections by Katlyn Carpenter https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs Take time to see how you have grown en-us 2017-11-13 02:33:42 UTC 2026-02-01 02:33:19 UTC hello@padlet.com Writing Reflections https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279129 Ian Townsend

1: Elaboration I made my writing much more detailed and stretched out certain moments 
2: Lead I started with action to interest the reader
3: Ending I used a tone and mode to set the end

]]> 2017-11-13 15:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279129 Alex Braun https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279217 1: Elaboration: I included more detailthroughout the story.
2: Message: I included a theme/message in my story.
3: Conclusion: My conclusion had a theme and finished the story better.]]> 2017-11-13 15:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279217 https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279268 Lauren Fagan
1.)]]> 2017-11-13 15:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279268 N https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279272 2017-11-13 15:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279272 Kira Young https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279288
  • Description, I added more to make my reader feel in the moment
  • Elaborating, my story was longer then the first one
  • Setting, I told the reader were they were using details

    • ]]>     2017-11-13 15:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279288     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279366 Lillian Moore 
      I have grown by ...
    1. Using more description
    2. I have use more inner thinking 
    3.  My lead 
    4. Stretching out the heart of the story ]]>     2017-11-13 15:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279366     Tristan Gaboriault https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279395 1:Used lots of paragraphs 
    1. Made more sentences 
    2. Used themes
    3. More punctuation 
    4. Connect with other writers 
    5. I found more ways to write 
    ]]>     2017-11-13 15:13:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279395     Jasmin C. https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279458 1. I used more description 
    2. More correct spelling 
    3. More dialogue ]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279458     Angelina narrative https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279465
    1 my lead

    2 grammar 

    3 my handwriting ]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279465     Gianna https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279645 1. Actions 

    2.]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279645     Brandon https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279657 1.Actio

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    3.]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279657     Hannah https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279856 * My stories got much longer 
    * I made a more interesting lead
    * I got better at my ending and had a really strong ending showing what my story was really about]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279856     Nicholas Heller https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279862 1. I have added better description
    2. I used proper grammar
    3. I did not quickly finish my ending so I would be done with it
    4. My stories got much longer, instead of making it short

    ]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279862     Murphy https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279884 Style
    Organization
    Introduction
    I included more detail in the introduction,

    ]]>     2017-11-13 15:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206279884     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280092 Ryan Gottshall]]> 2017-11-13 15:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280092 https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280372 Lauren Fagan
    1.) I have added more dialogue 
    2.)  I made my story longer 
    3.) ]]>     2017-11-13 15:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280372     Kan https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280407 Ffg]]> 2017-11-13 15:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280407 Emmy Rabold https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280639 1. Character interaction, how they act with each other and without each other
    2. Emotion between the characters, expressing how they feel with each other
    3. Slowing down small moment and showing the deeper meaning ]]>     2017-11-13 15:15:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280639     Kailyn Wood narrative pre and post https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280844 1. In the pre on demand there was not much description but on the post on demand I explained ore details on how I was feeling 
    2.in the pre on demand there wasn’t a lot of talking and in the post on demand there was more talking to show how i was feeling
    3.on the pre on demand there it was shorter in text than my post on demand]]>     2017-11-13 15:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206280844     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206281623 Now I use more resources to help me spell thing right 

    ]]>     2017-11-13 15:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206281623     Murphy https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206281747
  • My style was better

    • The words, sentences, were not all over the place, but in a place where it belonged (organization)

    Dialogue, no dialogue in my pre, but a lot more in my post
    ]]>     2017-11-13 15:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206281747     Mark Walsh https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206281908 1. Lead I have edited a better start 

    2.description I have description it better

    3.ending I have made my ending better]]>     2017-11-13 15:17:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206281908     Brandon https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206282114 1. Action
    No improvement. Still same (positive)

    2. Dialogue 
    Good enough 

    3. Lead
    Maks se .]]>     2017-11-13 15:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206282114     Writing Reflections https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206282671 Maddie Meshey 
    1. I stayed in first person in my post on demand.

    2. I told my post on demand bit by bit and described it more.

    3. I have a stronger ending with a lesson and wrapped the story up better in my post on demand. ]]>     2017-11-13 15:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206282671     Samantha Koury https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206283416 1.) I have elaborated a lot more. My post on-demand is much long than my pre- and is much more detailed and descriptive.

    2.) My pre on-demand shows nor gives emotion, but my post on-demand shows my struggle while also giving the reader empathy.

    3.) I’ve gotten better at not skipping parts I thought were “unimportant” when they really could have given intensity to the story.]]>     2017-11-13 15:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206283416     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206283833
    Trinity yorkey: ]]>     2017-11-13 15:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206283833     Gianna https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206284576 1. Dialogue 
    2. Authors Craft 
    3. Transitions
    4. Elaboration
    5. Punctuation ]]>     2017-11-13 15:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206284576     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206284840 Trinity yorkey: I have more resources to help me use transitions words 

    ]]>     2017-11-13 15:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206284840     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206285053
  • Description I used better description by using better detail
    • ]]>     2017-11-13 15:21:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206285053     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206285533 Kahsan y
    I have more detail 
    And I have description]]>     2017-11-13 15:22:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206285533     Mya Borrell https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206286359
  • Description by using more detail
  • Spelling 
  • Inner thinking
  • Flashbacks
  • Lead
    • ]]>     2017-11-13 15:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206286359     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206286446 T
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    2.)  I extended my story
    3.) ]]>     2017-11-13 15:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206286663     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206287300 Ryan Gottshall

    1 craft 


    2 spelling 
    3 transition ]]>     2017-11-13 15:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206287300     https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206287546 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah]]> 2017-11-13 15:25:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206287546 https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206287941
  • Description 
  • Lead
  • Spelling
  • Inner thinking
  • Flashbacks 
  • Staying in the moment
    • ]]>     2017-11-13 15:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206287941     I’m trying (Brandon) https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206290004 1. Action

    2. Diolouge

    3. Endin]]>     2017-11-13 15:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206290004     Uhgu https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206295365 2017-11-13 15:38:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206295365 Jje https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206402645 2017-11-13 18:19:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kcarpenter3/8zidlp4jrgvs/wish/206402645