https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn Add your ESA #1 Topic sentence to the wall! Please include your NAME! en-us 2017-09-26 15:12:10 UTC 2017-09-29 19:41:48 UTC hello@padlet.com atacla https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191304950 Every day, people must make choices in order to navigate living in society; however, there is a distinct division between those who make choices that follow their own constitution, and those who make choices that go along, unquestioningly, with the status quo. ]]> 2017-09-26 15:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191304950 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191798010 Everyone has a conscience that they try to follow; but, in certain situations, people  have to make the difficult decision whether to follow their own heart or do what they are told.
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*Changes in bold. See me about wording. I don't want to change the message of what you are trying to say. ]]> 2017-09-27 17:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191798939 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191799025 If one consistently obeys societal laws without question, there is a danger of losing him or herself.
*I shortened it--it should be okay now. See me if you want to make more changes. ]]> 2017-09-27 17:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191799025 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191799206 In everyday life, there are many opportunities during the day to make a choice; one could choose to go with the flow and go against what he believes, or he could stand for what he thinks is right, and not give in to societal pressure.
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*Be a little bit more specific in your connection to transcendentalism.]]> 2017-09-27 17:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191799874 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800115 In today's society, people constantly have to decide whether to be themselves or to change to fit in with society.
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]]> 2017-09-27 17:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800115 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800383 Henry David Thoreau explains the positives of civil disobedience in society
*Be more specific about the "positives" and what effect they have.]]> 2017-09-27 17:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800383 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800406 Most everyone in our world makes their choices off of their past mistakes; people have no other outlook and are afraid to make the same mistakes they already made.
*Corrections are in bold.]]> 2017-09-27 17:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800406 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800420 Henry David Thoreau talks of the controversial topic of government and he explains his stance about the article in a way that promotes infraction.
*Ian--make your sentence more concise  and direct: Thoreau promotes...]]> 2017-09-27 17:54:54 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800420 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800574  People run into many fears throughout an average day, but in a quote from Ralph Waldo Emerson he perfectly displays how we feel on a day to day bases. 
*Sara: Be more specific about what it is we are feeling; this is too general Maintain 3rd-person point of view for this paragraph. ]]> 2017-09-27 17:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191800574 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191801014 Everyone is given a voice to speak their mind, but society has taught people to be silent or say only what others want to hear; therefore, people must always practice putting their voices to good use.
*Grace-- my changes are in bold. ]]> 2017-09-27 17:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191801014 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191801602 The past is not what decides our future, but according to society, it is the best way to predict it, which makes consistency an extremely difficult rut to pull out of. 
*Piper--my changes are in bold. ]]> 2017-09-27 17:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191801602 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191802559 Even though it is easy to always remain the same in society, transcendentalism philosophy urges people to constantly be open to changes. Wenjie--this looks good.

]]> 2017-09-27 17:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191802559 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191803672 make your own choices, don't conform to social norms. Tyler--make sure this is s 3rd-person statement, and allude to the the reading to make it a complete sentence.]]> 2017-09-27 17:59:12 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191803672 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191872892 In life, people have to make a choice between being themselves or being who society want them to be.
*Angelina: This will work.

]]> 2017-09-27 20:32:57 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/191872892 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/192363651 Thoreau contends that a person's first obligation is to do what they believe to be right and not follow the law dictated by the majority.
Looks fine!]]> 2017-09-29 08:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/192363651 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/192590009 In life we are forced to be something that we aren't but in nature we are what ever we want to be like in Emersons
OK--change to third-person: "people"]]> 2017-09-29 18:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/192590009 https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/192591137 2017-09-29 19:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/atacla/8x8rhzw05pnn/wish/192591137