EN22032 _WRITING ASSIGNMENT by Nguyen Thi Thanh Sum (FE FPL HCM)

Talk About Vietnamese Gestures And Customs

sumntt — 2022-09-25 05:08:01 UTC

PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-09-29 08:06:50 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Bao. Today, I would like to talk about Vietnamese gesture and customs.First of all, I want to talk about greeting.In Vietnam, there are many ways of greeting, depending on the case, there are different ways of greeting. The traditional Vietnamese way of greeting is shaking hand and bow other people, say hello and smiling. I greet older people by bowing and I greet younger people by saying hello and smiling. I sometime shake hands. I like gentle handshakes because It makes me feel comfortable and polite. Secondly, I would like to talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people exchange when meeting for the first time. Give and receive a business card with handing the card with his left hand, the main side of the business card facing up and the full name part to follow the recipient's gaze. I am currently a student and if I have a business card, I will use the above method to exchange business cards. You have to the base information on card as Logo,Company name, Your name & title, Contact details,Your address -online or physical...Thirdly, I want to mention about small talk. When Vietnamese people have a small talk, they often talk about news, drama and stories short and you should avoid for small talks about rumor. Finally, it is about gestures. The fingertips and thumbs meet to form a circle, the other finger is vertical (OK sign): means agree. In Vietnam, the notation holds hands and the thumbs-up sign means what they see is done very well, or a good idea. In Vietnam when you point at someone mean mention them and you should avoid because it impolite. Thanks for reading.

PS21901-Nguyễn Đức Huy-Topic 1

huyndps21901 — 2022-09-29 19:58:47 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. First of all, I want to talk about greeting. In Vietnam, there are many ways of greeting, depending on situations . I usually greet the older by bowing and when I greet my friends, shaking hands or saying hello are usually used. I like light shake hands. Because it makes me feel friendlier and more polite with people. Secondly, I would like to talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people often exchange business cards when they meet for the first time. As a student,I give and receive business cards by handing the card with the left hand, the main side of the card facing up and the full name to follow the gaze of the recipient. On the business card is the logo image and the company's name, full name, title, contact details. Thirdly, I want to mention about small talks. Vietnamese people often make small talks about their salary, news, religion and family. But, I usually avoid making small talks about someone's privacy. Finally, it is about gestures. Gestures are different in every country. In Vietnam, there are many gestures but the most common is the five-finger salute or ok sign. Thumbs up is a sign that you've done the job well or had a good idea. In Vietnam, when you point at someone it means you mention them so you should avoid doing it because it is not polite.
Thank you for listening.

PS23655-Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-09-30 06:14:52 UTC

Hello Teacher and everyone My name is Nghi Today I will talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. First about the greeting, because Vietnam is the intersection of many countries--> (Nước nào cũng vậy em, intersection ở mặt nào -->cụ thể nhé), there are many ways to greet. So I usually wave ~~the~~ hands and say hello to people who are the same my age or younger, but to older people I usually bow. Although Vietnam is a crossroads of many countries, I rarely shake hands to say hello because Vietnam people will limit physical contact than other countries (hạn chế như thế nào? cụ thể?) because they were very tight spacing???? (pls mơ hồ, cụ thể) of the body. Second about exchanging business cards, the Vietnamese always use two hands in what??? and look at the card carefully. While informally, people Vietnamese use one hand, look at the card and put it in a pocket. Thirdly, I want to mention about Small talk, When Vietnamese people have a small talk, they usually have for small talks is weather, job, hobby, food... and special topics you should avoid when talking are age, salary, application, weight, ... Finally, it is about Gestures, Gestures are actions that show different meanings in many countries, it can show that you are polite or unpolite so you should be cautious when using gestures. However, for Vietnam, you do not need to pay too much attention to gestures, just show respect to others through words.

Those are gestures and customs of Vietnamese people when they is are greeting. Thanks for ~~listing~~ listening.

Hướng Huy - PS23321

2022-09-30 09:32:01 UTC

DONE! Hi, my name is Huy. Today I will talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.
In Vietnam, there are many greetings such as shaking hands, bowing, and so on.
For older people, I choose to bow or nod, younger people and friends will choose
to say hello. I don't usually shake hands when meeting someone. I usually shake
hands gently because it doesn't require much force. When meeting a client or
someone at work, they will give business cards. I'm a student, so I only have a
student card. Business cards often have phone numbers, addresses, and emails.
Vietnamese people often have topics to talk about such as work, entertainment,
life for small conversations. The topic I usually avoid is a private topic because ...? What?
I don't want to share it. -->Why?

Please, em nên hiểu rõ những gì em viết hay sưu tầm.

PS26548-Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Thuận

thuannnmps26548 — 2022-09-30 10:04:12 UTC

Hi Ms.Summy,my name is Thuan.Today, I'd like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

First of all, let’s talk about Vietnamese greetings. Vietnamese people generally greet each other by joining hands and bowing slightly to each other to show respect. While kiss or a hug with your partner is considered to be acceptable in the main cities of Hanoi and Saigon, it's a social taboo elsewhere. When meeting with Vietnamese of the opposite sex sometimes a handshake is okay. A slight bow or nod is safer (safe hơn gì? hơi mơ hồ). A kiss on the cheek is a bad idea. ~~About~~ To/ for me, my way to greet~~ing~~ older people is by bowing my head and talking with them politely. To some people whom I’ve first met, I usually shake their hands gently and nod a bit.

Next, while still being a student I don’t have my own business card. As I know, people only give theirs when they’re having a business talk. Vietnamese people exchange business cards by standing up, the main side of the business card facing up with the full name and information part.

When talking about small talks, Vietnamese people often discuss about domestic news, share their own stories or just gossip. Although we can talk about whatever we want, there are some that we should avoid in order to stay away from trouble such as politics or religion.

Finally, it’s about Vietnamese gestures. Non-verbal language is very complex and can express what one thinks. Some common Vietnamese gestures and body language are nodding for greeting or agreement, head shaking for negative reply or disagreement.

That’s all I wanna share. Thank you for your attention.

It's OK. Please em nên hiểu rõ những gì em viết.

PS26555-Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-09-30 10:06:50 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher Sum, My name is Dung and I am happy to tell you about the topic "Talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs".
First of all, I want to talk about greeting. There are many ways to greet in VietNam such as bows, handshakes, and waves,...But the most common ways were bows and handshakes. For example, when you meet elderly people you should bow for greeting, or when you meet younger people you should nod or say hello or do a handshake. For me, I usually nod or say hello to younger people and bow to elderly people.
Secondly, I would like to talk about exchanging business cards. Since I'm still a student, so I don't know how people in Vietnam exchange their business cards but I think they will exchange their business cards on their first ~~met~~ meeting. And due to what I have researched, when I receive a business card--> As I know about exchanging business cards , I think I should stand up, hold the card with both hands, and have a smiling face so I can show respect and be polite to the partner. And about the information on a business card, we could see their name, phone number, email address, or the company that they're working for.
Thirdly, I want to mention about small talk. Vietnamese people usually talk about news, their work, or whatever the topic leads them to. For me, I normally avoid the topic of personality/ (personal privacy), because I think everyone is unique so blaming or mocking them about their personality makes me feel uncomfortable.
Finally, it's about gestures. Gestures have different meanings in different countries, when you do the L word in the US it's a mean loser but in China, it's mean number 8 - a lucky number in China's tradition. In VietNam, people usually wave their hands to say hello or thumbs up to say that they did a great job. And in VietNam, when you point at someone that means you mention them in your conversation but in some situations, pointing at someone is impolite and they might be upset about that.
Well, that's the end of my speaking. Thanks for listening.

Well-done !

PS24700_Nguyễn Phương Nam

2022-09-30 10:48:10 UTC

DONE! Hello everyone, my name is Nam. Today I'm going to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. First of all, I want to talk about Greeting. In Vietnam, there are 4 ways of greeting: waving, bowing, shaking hands, and hugging. In Vietnam, when meeting the elderly, greet by bowing, shaking hands or waving when meeting friends, waving when greeting younger people, and hugging when saying goodbye. I sometimes shake hands when I meet people. I like gentle handshakes because It makes me feel comfortable. Secondly, I would like to talk about Exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people stand up, shake hands and smile to exchange business cards, usually giving the business card with the left hand for the opposite person to receive with the right hand. when giving, the information side of the business card is facing up. I often use the above method to exchange business cards. on a business card with the giver's name, company name, and contact information. Thirdly, I want to mention Small talk. Vietnamese people often tell personal stories when making small talk, and Vietnamese people often avoid speaking ill of others when talking in small talk. Finally, it is about Gestures. I think in each country, the gesture will also have a different meaning. Vietnamese people usually indicate the number one by their index finger and the number two on the next finger, and the number five is an open palm. In Vietnam, the notation holds hands and the thumbs-up sign means what they see is done very well, or a good idea. In conclusion, In order to get acquainted well, we should know how to greet each other and make appropriate small talk. That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your reading

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PS24702 - Ngo Nhien

2022-09-30 11:01:11 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, my name is Nhien. Today I would like to talk about the gestures and customs of the Vietnamese people.
First of all, I want to talk about greetings in Vietnam, there are many greeting traditions such as nodding, shaking hands, waving, etc. When meeting an elderly person, I usually bow my head in a friendly way. , I greet younger people by greeting and smiling. I rarely shake hands with others, I like firm handshakes because I feel it shows enthusiasm and politeness.

Second, I want to talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people exchange business cards by standing up and handing out business cards with clear information to the person to be given. I've never exchanged business cards with others so I don't know what is true of the case. To get someone else's business card, you must politely talk to the opposite person. On a business card, there will usually be basic information such as Name, Phone Number, Address,....Third, I want to mention small talk. Vietnamese people often refer to the latest trending news and you should avoid unconfirmed rumors. In the end, it's about gestures. In Vietnam, the sign say hello is like raising your index finger and middle finger. The fist and the thumbs up symbol mean very well. In Vietnam, when you point to your ear,--> really??? it's referring to them, but it shows impolite. Thanks you for ~~reading~~ listening (vì em sẽ trình bày dưới dạng nói)

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PS22206 - Đinh Lưu Quang Phát

2022-09-30 13:41:27 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I will talk about the Vietnamese gestures and customs. First I will talk about Vietnamese gestures. In Vietnam, there are 3 common greetings: ~~younger than us, same as us and older than us~~. (Đây ko phải là cách chào hỏi) To greet the elderly, I bow and greet in a soft tone. To people who are younger than me, I usually say hello. For people who are the same my age, I greet and shake hands. I like the firm handshake because it shows how close two people are. Second, I will talk about exchanging business cards. In Vietnam, people often exchange business cards on the first meeting. I usually give my business card with two hands and say my name. I take a business card from someone with two hands and confirm the person's name. On my business card, it includes: Full name, company name, position, contact information. Next I will talk about small talks. Vietnamese people often make small talk about their grades???, salary and family. I usually avoid making small talk about someone's gestures and personality. Finally about gestures in Vietnamese. In Vietnam, the gestures that people often use are the "ok" sign, rubbing SO's head and shaking hands. In Vietnam, the symbol "thumb - up" means to like or agree to something. ~~Thanks~~ Thank you for reading--> mục đích bài này là để nói nên em nên dùng--> Thank you for your listening

PS23314-Nguyễn Anh Khoa

2022-09-30 15:19:32 UTC

Hello teacher. Today I'd like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. In Vietnam you can see everyone use a lots greeting ways. And with me, I usually use wave the hand and say 'hello' with my friends or the younger than me, especially with the elderly people I always use bow the head to show my respect with them. ~~There is~~ a popular greeting gesture~~s shake~~ is shaking hands but I haven't use it before, in future I think I will use it more casually. And if I do I prefer a firm handshake because it makes two opposites have a strong relationship. Beside some gesture above, in Vietnam peoples usually use exchange business cards. On that card we can see the information from the giver(--> recipient) like the phone numbers, the company name, address, website, etc.... If I'm the giver, I will introduce myself and prove me who I am before give it to them, and I'm the taker I will bow the head a little and take it. After the greeting you will have a small talk, so everyone mostly ask about health and something funny, in some cases I ~~use~~ need to avoid some topics ~~that make the opposite uncomfortable like~~ involving a long story or personal problems. Thanks for listening!

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ps22224_Trần Vĩnh Phúc

2022-09-30 15:35:42 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Phuc. Today, I will talk about the Vietnamese gestures and customs. First I will talk about Vietnamese gestures. In Vietnam, there are 3 common greetings: ~~younger than us, same as us and older than us.~~ (Đây không phải là cách chào hỏi vì em có dùng" :" có nghĩa là đang liệt kê)To greet the elderly, I bow and greet in a soft tone. To people younger than me, I usually say hello. For people my age, I greet and shake hands. I like shaking hands because we can feel the closeness between the two of us. Second, I will talk about exchanging business cards. In Vietnam, people often exchange business cards on the first meeting. I usually give my business card with two hands and say my name. I take a business card from someone with two hands and confirm the person's name. On my business card include: Full name, company name, position, contact information. Next I will talk about small talks. everyone mostly ask about health and something funny, in some cases use need to avoid some topic that make the opposite uncomfortable like a long story or personal problem. Finally about gestures in Vietnamese. In Vietnam, the gestures that people often use to signal are "like" (HOW???), "waving hands", "shaking hands","hello". In Vietnam, hand gestures are like the like button to show that you like something or compliment others. Thanks you for listening
(Thank you = thanks)

PS24969 - Trần Quỳnh Luân

2022-09-30 16:03:38 UTC

PS21891-Lê Thuận Thành

2022-09-30 17:22:32 UTC

DONE! Hello everyone, today I will talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. The traditional Vietnamese way of greeting is to cross their arms and bow other people. However, some men have adopted the Western practice of shaking hands and hugging is reserved for relatives only. I greet older people by bowing and say how are you today good or bad. I greet younger people by saying hello and smiling. Sometimes, I also shake hands with my friends. I like gentle handshakes because It makes me feel comfortable. Vietnamese people exchange business cards by standing up, chatting or first meeting. I usually handing the card with his left hand, the main side of the business card facing up. I often use the above method to exchange business cards. Business cards ~~provice~~ provide information about name, age, occupation, position. When Vietnamese people have a small talk, they often talk domestic news, work, activities every day or politics. So, we shouldn’t talk about sensitive issues, sensitive topics. That's all, thank for your listening.

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Ps23248_ Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-09-30 19:21:26 UTC

DONE! Hello, my name is Kien. Today, I will talk about the gestures and customs of the Vietnamese people.

First, I will talk about some Vietnamese greetings. In Vietnam, there are many different greetings depending on age. For adults, I greet them by bowing, and for friends or people younger than me, I greet them by saying hello or shaking hands with them. I rarely shake hands with strangers. I only shake hands with my friends.

The second is about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people often exchange business cards when they first meet or want to help each other. I'm a student now, and I exchange my business cards with others with both hands because it's polite. When giving a business card to another person, the main side of the card should be facing forward. The business card should have the company's logo, full name, address, phone number, email, and profession of the person giving the business card.

The third is about small talk of Vietnamese people. Vietnamese people often have small talk with each other about yesterday's news, newspapers, and current affairs or help each other at work. The topics that should be avoided for small talk are slandering others because it is easy to offend each other.

Finally about gestures. (Đây ko thể là câu) The gestures are different in each country. In Vietnam, there are common gestures such as greeting with the whole hand, and high five. But in Vietnam, you should avoid pointing a finger at others because it is not polite. In Vietnam, the symbol "Thumps - up" means like, or agree.

That's all, Thank you teacher for reading.
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PS26765-Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-10-01 03:03:42 UTC

DONE! Hello everyone, my name is Nam. Today I'm gonna talk about my topic that is Vietnamese gestures and customs.

First of all, there are some greeting ways like a bowing, a ~~wave or say~~ waving or saying hello in my Vietnam. I always greet younger people by with a bow, for my friends I usually greet them by a ~~wave~~ waving ,and I sometime shake their hands with light handshakes when meeting. Because it makes me feel more friendly and confident, that I can spend more time talking with my partner.

Secondly, when it comes to exchange business cards I always give business cards to others with one hand like ID card for example. And on this card, there are some my personal details such as my full name, age, date of birth and so on. And also there are fingerprints and a signature behind my card. Beside that, people in Vietnam usually ask about the topics like their name, age, occupation and health when communicating, and for me the topics I should avoid are their salary and their body, because it is not polite.

Lastly, people in Vietnam have some gestures when meeting someone, for example the “thumbs up” that mean you compliment someone is very good, and palm-up or palm-down that mean you want someone come here with me. And the last one is gestures you shouldn’t use with people who older than you is thumb-index that mean you want to point at someone and it is very rude --> Em nên tách ra 2 ý ra riêng rẻ thì người nghe dễ hiểu em hơn, viết lại nhé!. That’s all my topic I want to share with everybody. Thanks for listening to me.

Well-done!

PS24722 - Nguyễn Hà Thành Đạt - Topic 1

2022-10-01 05:42:12 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, I am Dat. Today I would like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. In Viet Nam, everyone can “ say hi “ in many ways. Some people wave their hand, others ~~are~~ hug. ~~There are~~ some close guys can slap love????. I usually nod and smile to everyone. I’ll shake hands with the people I respect. I think I prefer light handshakes to firm handshakes because it creates --> em thử dùng evoke/ inspire a comfortable feeling between two people. To exchange a business card, Vietnamese usually give and take it in many forms. They can send to email, ship to home and give it directly by hand when meeting each other and on occasion. On business card I can see infomations such as : company’s logo , name , address , Email and number phone,…. When Vietnamese meet together, they have many topics to small talks. They can talk anything they like or see what say that. They tell~~ing~~ jokes that aren’t even real. There are topics to avoid like gossip, toxic story or blame together about anything. Every country , gestures have different meanings. Example kiss cheek in Pairs is greeting but in Viet Nam, it show the love to someone. I just know a few gesture like hugging , nodding , smiling ~~and It can use~~ in many cases. “ Thumbs-up” sign in Viet Nam ~~is meaning~~ meaning like or admire something. It can be used when some people help others as lead the elderly across the street. In that time, people around use “ Thumbs-up” sign for that help.

Thanks for listening !

Well-done!

PS24732-Phan Bùi Anh Kiệt

kietpbaps24732 — 2022-10-01 06:30:38 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, my name's Kiet, today I would like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

The traditional Vietnamese way of greeting is to cross their arms and bow other people. Besides, there are also many greeting ways such as: bowing, hugging, nodding, saying hello, waving hand. I greet older people by bowing ~~and~~ while I usually say hello or smile to them towards my friends or people who are younger than me(I greet younger people or my friends by saying hello and smiling). I don’t like ~~shake~~ shaking hands because It makes me feel uncomfortable, so I like gentle handshakes. Vietnamese people exchange business cards by standing up, handing the card with his left hand in an polite way. I often use the above method to exchange business cards. I take business cards from others when I want know their personal information. I could see name, number phone, email and job on a business card. When Vietnamese people have a small talk, they often talk about domestic news, and stories about agriculture.

I usually avoid making small talk about someone's personality. In Vietnam, there are many gestures but the most common is the thumbs-up that means they see is done very well, or a good idea. Thank you for reading.

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ps23575 - Nguyễn Sơn Nam

namnsps23575 — 2022-10-01 07:37:03 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher and everyone, today I will talk about topic number 1, which is talk about vietnamese gestures and customs.

Firstly, in a country with a long civilization and patriotic tradition like Vietnam, here people often greet each other in many ways, which can be mentioned as: greeting each other verbally, smiling, waving, nodding, shaking hands,... As for me, when I go out, I usually greet people verbally, if I'm an older person or an elderly person, I will use honorifics to greet them. , but for those younger than me, I will smile and greet in a friendly manner. Usually, I don't shake hands when I meet someone, shaking hands in Vietnam is only common in long-term meetings, at work, and rarely in everyday life. But if I shake hands, I will choose a gentle handshake, because it shows sophistication as well as being friendly to the opposite person.

Next, to talk about giving business cards in Vietnam, it is also quite rare~~, it usually only~~ and usually appears in work, I don't have a business card, and if I want to get a business card from a person, I have to greeting as well as starting a conversation with them, if they feel that I am friendly, they will gladly give me their business card. On the business card, we can see the necessary basic information such as: Name, home address, phone number, email, ... and many other things, depending on the preferences of each person. make a business card.

Continuing the topic, we talk about small chats of Vietnamese people, we, Vietnamese people, will often talk about everything that happens in life to each other, from work, study, going to the market, the joys and sorrows and difficulties in life. However, in conversations, we should avoid speaking ill of an individual or a group as well as not being too prying, telling about someone's private life too much...

And finally, We will talk about how the actions of each country will have different meanings. In each country, there will be 1 gesture, dedicated to each different meaning, such as in the UK, kissing on the cheek is considered greeting, in Japan, shaking hands is considered greeting, and in Vietnam , waving means hello, nodding means agree or can also be seen as greeting in some cases,... and the thumbs up sign in Vietnam is an expression of satisfaction with the service. A job of someone or also considered as agreeing to something but not convenient to speak.
Thank you teacher and everyone who read my post

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PS21899-Nguyễn Thị Huyền Trang

trangnthps21899 — 2022-10-01 16:51:19 UTC

SEEN+DONE Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

First I will talk about greetings in Vietnam.
When meeting each other, Vietnamese people often greet each other by bowing, slightly bowing, shaking hands and smiling in a friendly greeting or asking for health. I usually politely use honorifics to greet the elderly, for younger people I will politely greet them, and with friends I will greet them in a friendly manner. I don't shake hands when I meet someone, I just bow to greet them. If I shake hands, I will shake hands gently because it shows I am a polite person.

Next I will talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people often exchange business cards with each other at work. When handing out a business card, I usually have the main side of the card face up, the words on the business card facing me, towards the opposite person so that the recipient can read it. When I receive a business card, I usually stand with my head bowed and receive the card with both hands. On business cards often have information such as logo, brand name, address, phone number and email ...
Third, I will talk about small talk. In small talk, Vietnamese people often talk about family, work, love and life... Topics that you should avoid for small talk are talking about other people's looks, families, and jobs.

Fourth, I will talk about gestures. In different countries the gestures have different meanings. In Vietnam, there are gestures such as thumbs up, car waves, head rubs, OK signs and the letter V. In Vietnam, a thumbs up means to respond to or agree with an idea, or to praise when someone does something well.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

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PS23253-Nguyễn Hồ Bảo Duy

2022-10-01 18:25:03 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher.Today i will talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs. In Vietnam, greeting is quite like nodding, raising hands or just as simple as looking at each other and smiling. I usually greet the elderly by bowing and saying hello to grandpa or grandma, for younger people, just raise your hand, and with friends, just smile is okay. Shaking hands is for business purposes only, so I never shake hands. I think I like a light handshake because I think it's simply social. Vietnamese people only exchange business cards with their partners, but normally, no one exchanges business cards. Up until now, I have never exchanged business cards because when I meet other people I introduce myself.
I received a few business cards from water companies because my mother sells soft drinks. The information I see on business cards is usually the name, phone number, and design. Topics that people often talk about are work, current news, technology, etc. People who speak softly are often related to sensitive topics. Gestures will vary from country to country like Japan. If you nod your head to say hello, in Vietnam it's a wave. I only know the thumb sign in vietnam. The thumb sign represents an interest or an action that I like.

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PS23588_Nguyễn Hoàng Tài

2022-10-02 15:13:43 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher and everyone, I’d like to talk about Vietnamese Gestures And Customs.

There are many ways to greeting in Viet Nam such as handshakes, waves , etc (et cetera). I greet older people by bowing and smiling, and when I see my friends or meet younger people, I usually greeting, smiling and talk together. I prefer a light handshakes than a firm shakehand. I like a light handshakes because it makes me feel comfortable.

Secondly, Vietnamese people exchange business cards by standing up and always offer it using both hands. When I give business card to others, I have always used above way to exchange .When i receive a card from someone else, also accept with both hands. On a business card, you can see the basic information such 🤬 name, email, phone number, address….

Thirdly, when Vietnamese people have a small talk, they often talk about news and agricultural, but you should avoid unconfirmed rumos. And finally, some gestures in Viet Nam are thumbs up, Ok sign and point finger. The “thumbs up” means tells someone to know that they have done well. Thank for you listening

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PD06547-QUOC PHUONG

2022-10-02 18:01:48 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, my name is Phuong. Today I would like to talk about the gestures and customs of the Vietnamese people.
First, I want to talk about how to greet in Vietnam, there are many greeting customs like nodding, waving and many more. When I meet an elderly person, I usually bow in a friendly manner. , I greet younger people by waving or hugging. Second, I want to talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people exchange business cards by giving each other a card containing contact information. I exchange business cards with other people by talking to them. On business cards usually there will be information such as Name, Phone Number, Address, .... Third, I want to speak softly. Vietnamese people often refer to the latest trending news and you should avoid unverified rumors. In the end, it's about gestures. In Vietnam, greeting is waving or waving. The hand like icon is great. In Vietnam, it is very impolite to point your finger at someone. Thank you for reading

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PS26524 -Nguyễn Trọng Khoa

2022-10-07 03:00:28 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, Ms.Summy and everyone, it’s an honor for me to be in this class, this journey with you guys. The topic today, the ~~very~~ first topic is VietNamese gestures and customs.

The first thing to say, there are many ways to greeting in Viet Nam, such as bowing, handshakes, waves, etc. Every kind of greeting has a specific situation to use. Talking about my (-->From my own personal experience, when I meet someone ~~that~~ who are older than me, I usually bow first, then put a respectfully and friendly smile on my lips, and then have some quick chats like asking how they are doing, or wish them a great day. If I meet someone who seems to be as the same age as me or younger than me such as my friends, or ..... ~~the people younger than me,~~ I prefer a quick smile and and a light handshake. Of course, a few quick chats are is always necessary, that’s my favorite way to start a conversation with people.

Moving on to the second problems, how VietNamese people exchange our business cards. The business card can give you some core informations about a person who gave it to you, such as their name, age, where they work and, ~~last but not least,~~ their contact information. When we have to give somebody our business card, we usually use both of our hands and then, a nod. And when ~~receive~~ received any business cards ~~that’s been giving to us,~~ we bow and use both hands to collect them ~~and bow,~~ of course, we don’t forget to say “Thank you!” every time ~~you~~ we receive something from somebody else. That’s a vey beautifull tradition of VietNamese people.

Finally, I’d like to talk about the topic of small talks. In our country, we like talking to each other. The topic of those small talks can be very variable, but mostly we talk about the things that happened in the whole day, about our family or sometimes some political issues. But you should avoid the topics about other people's looks, families or any unconfirmed rumors. Another thing in our gestures, the “thumb-up” sign, which means good, you’re doing great, or we are satisfied about something.

That’s all of my writing. Thanks for reading and looking forward to the next topic. Goodbye!

WELL_DONE!

Ps26555-Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-10-07 06:15:28 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, my name is Dũng. It's a pleasure to talk with you about my favorite movies.

First of all, I want to say that love watching movies and ~~if it's~~ cartoons (or animated films) are types/genres I am totally into ~~it.~~

Secondly, I would like to talk about my favorite movie. My favorite movie is One piece, the movie is fantastic. It's an animated series of films and the movie is about a kid who has a dream to be a pirate king so he begins a journey to find One piece treasure and becomes a pirate king. The movie was released in July 1997, because it's a series of films so it has a lot of episodes and each episode ~~has~~ lasts about 21 minutes ~~long.~~ In the movies, I like the main character most. (WHy? and WHO ?)

Thirdly, I want to mention about the place and people that I watch with. I usually watch the movie at home alone with my laptop or my smartphone when I have free time. Sometimes I have some food or soft drink during the movie so it can make it more entertaining.

Finally, it is about my experience when I'm watching the movie. I learned a lot when I'm watching the movie such as the power of friendship and that you shouldn't give up your dream. That's all about my speaking. Thank you for your listening.

WELL-DONE!

Trần Vĩnh Phúc ps22224

2022-10-07 14:53:30 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher. my name is phuc today i will talk about my favourite movie. i like watching movies because it helps me relax after a tiring day of studying and working. I like anime genre because it's funny, I feel relaxed watching it. my favorite movie is "black clover" a very good movie about two boys who dream of becoming magicians to build a peaceful kingdom where everyone can live happily together.movie released in 2017, Each episode is 24 minutes long, the movie has many characters, my favorite character is asta, i watched the movie on the website "animehay.club", i usually watch movies when i come home from school, i watch movies alone, i usually don't eat when watching movies. I've watched 170 episodes, what I learned from the series is to constantly try to follow my dreams, I love watching new episodes of the series. That the end. Thank you for listening

Em nên hiểu những gì em viết để học thuộc cho dễ nhé!

PS22206 - Đinh Lưu Quang Phát

2022-10-07 15:20:11 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, my name is Phát. Today, I will talk about my favorite movie. I love watching movies, especially Vietnamese movies. Because it makes me feel more familiar and closer. I like movie genres like action, drama and comedy. My favorite movie is Bố Già of the drama genre. The film is about the daily life of a big family. It was released in March 2021. The movie is a little over two hours long. I like the character ba Sang because he's kind and hard working. I watched that movie at BHD Pham Hung with my friends. I eat popcorn and drink coca cola while watching movies. I have only seen the movie once. From the drama, I learned how to treat my family members and love my family even more. If I have a chance, I will watch this movie again because it's good, touching and has a bit of comedy. Thanks you for reading!
Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

PS24702 - Ngo Nhien

2022-10-07 15:39:15 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher. My name is Nhien, today I will talk about my favorite movie.
First of all, I want to say that I quite enjoy watching action movies.
Secondly, I want to talk about my favorite movie. My recent favorite movie is called " Peaky Blinders " it's quite famous, I like this movie because it has a very good content. The film is about the "Shelby" crime family in the immediate aftermath of World War I. It was released in 2013, so far it has had 6 seasons. (Em nên nói thêm về nhân vật và cốt truyện)

Thirdly, I want to mention the place and the people I watch with. When I watch this movie, I usually watch it alone at home in the afternoons when I come home from school, although this is my first time watching this movie, I still want to watch the good action scenes again.

Finally, it's about my experience after watching the movie that it takes confidence to be able to do many things (CHUNG CHUNG-->NÊN CỤ THỂ). In conclusion, I would say that the movie is really good and worth watching. Thank you for reading

Hướng Huy - PS23321

2022-10-07 15:41:04 UTC

SEEN! Hello, my name is Huy and today i will talk about my favorite movie. My favorite movie genre is action and my favorite movie is The Amazing Spider-Man 1&2. The movie is pretty good to me. The genre of this movie is action and adventure. The story is about a teenager Peter Parker who is bitten by a radioactive spider then has super powers and stories happen around him. The film was released on June 29, 2012. The movie is about 2h16m long. The film is played by actor Andrew Garfield. My favorite character is Peter Parker, of course. I watch it at home and watch it on TV. Only me, I usually watch movies alone. Snacks of course, because when I watch movies, I like to eat some snacks. Maybe I watched it more than 5 times. From that movie I learned that "With great power comes great responsibility". I will watch that movie again.

Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

PS26548 - Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Thuận

thuannnmps26548 — 2022-10-08 05:30:16 UTC

SEEN! Hi Ms.Summy, today i'm excited to talk about a movie that i've watched many times because i love it so much and how hype it was, which is Avenger: Endgame. I'm a big fan of super hero films and I've watched so many Marvel movies based on comics, and this one was a big hit.

I did remember exactly the date when I watched this movie, which was released on April 26th, 2019. On that day, I was with my friends and we joined together to watch it at CGV theatre. It received such overwhelming love and attention from all over the world. It starred Hollywood A-list movie star such as Robert Downey Jr, who played Ironman, but my favorite actor is Benedict Cumberbatch, who played Dr.Strange with his phenomenal performance.

For me, this movie is everything Marvel fans could want and more. It was a highly satisfying celebration of 10yrs of Marvel Universe, which was filled almost every minute with excitement, drama, humor and visually interesting.
I've already downloaded this movie on my laptop, so when I have a chance like I'm in free time or holiday, I can watch it again so I can feel all the hype it brought to me that day. That's all I wanna share. Thank you for your attention.

Cố gắng thuộc nhé!

PS24732-Phan Bùi Anh Kiệt

kietpbaps24732 — 2022-10-08 07:17:34 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, My name is Kiet. Today I would like to talk about my favorite movie. My favorite genre of movie is a cartoon. I like Doraemon films the most, because it makes me smile and very funny. It's an animated series and the movie about the lives of the two main characters, Nobita and Doraemon. The movie was released on April 2, 1979. It is a series of films, so it has a lot of episodes and each episode has about 20 minutes long. I like Doraemon most in the movie, because he is very kind and smart. He always helps his friends in case of difficulty. I often watch movies at home on TV or smartphone. I watch it in my free time and after study to relax. I often watch the movie alone, but sometime I also watch the movie with my friends. I like eat popcorn and drink Coca-Cola while watching the movie. I watched it about 5 years ago. I learned a lot from this movie, but the most important lesson is power of friendship. Thank you for reading.

Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

PS24969 - Trần Quỳnh Luân

2022-10-08 10:01:55 UTC

SEEN! My favorite movie is Doctor strange 2 . It's an action movie genre. The movie is about a doctor who can use magic. It was released in 2022 and The movie is about 2 and a half hours long. the participation of actors such as: Benedict Cumberbatch, Benedict Wong and many other famous actors. My favorite Benedict Cumberbatch as doctor strange. I watched a movie at Lotte on the first Monday of the week with my friends.I ate popcorn and soft drinks while watching the movie. I watched the movie twice.I learned from the movie "Think carefully before you act".I still want to watch the movie again if I have a chance. Thankyou for your listening.
Em nên triển khai thêm không đơn thuần là trả lời từng câu hỏi trong hand-out, linh hoạt thêm chi tiết nhé! Nếu ko thể thì cố gắng hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

Nguyen Son Nam

namnsps23575 — 2022-10-08 16:19:22 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher and everyone, my name is Nam, today I will talk about topic 2, which is Talk about my favorite movie.

Firstly, I really like watching movies, especially action movies and horror movies, because it gives me a feeling of excitement and a little bit of suspense.

Secondly, when it comes to my favorite movie, it's called "Avengers endgame", I like it because it has a good plot, has thrilling action scenes and is very emotional. it's action and sci-fi genre, it's about wars between universes and the center is earth, it's released in 2019, lasts almost 3 hours, i like the character the most iron man because he is so brave and handsome.

Thirdly, I watched this movie with my friends at my high school, my friends and I used to drink some soft drinks and eat some snacks while watching the movie, I watched the movie again This is about 2 times.

And finally, concluding my paragraph, I will share about the lessons I learned from watching this movie, which is that it helped me improve my English, next, it helped me feel comfortable, interesting, I would love to watch the movie again and again. Thank you teacher and everyone for reading to me!

Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

PS23253-Nguyễn Hồ Bảo Duy

2022-10-08 21:53:42 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher,today i will talk about my favorite movie.I love watching movies because every movie is a different story.

They bring each person's knowledge, feelings and perspectives, the emotions that movies bring. My favorite genre of movies is action, animation because this genre makes the emotions inside become intense. Cyberpunk:edgerunners is cartoon. The movie is about the truth of the world, lots of action scenes. I like the character named David because he shows the will to never give up and the optimistic spirit. I watched the movie alone at home because of the series. that movie has a lot of violence and I don't let young children watch it. The series was released on Sep 22, 2022. The series has 10 episodes each and is 24 minutes long.

(NÊn dùng từ chuyển tiếp--> THam khảo trong outline) I like to eat popcorn and drink coke every time I watch a movie. I watched the movie twice because it was so good.
It took me about 5 hours to watch the movie and I will watch it one more time.

Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

Nguyễn Hà Thành Đạt - PS24722

2022-10-09 09:23:26 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher , I am Dat. Today I would like to talk about my favorite movie. First of all , I want to say that I am a big fan of movie. I usually watch horror and animated movie. Because It’s give me relax times as well as dramatic, tremble moment.

Secondly, I would like to talk about my favorite movie. It’s Doraemon : Nobita’s Dinosaur. It’s a old animated movie. I like that movie because it’s first movie I watched. It’s my childhood. Although that movie was released in 2006 , The image in the movie is still very beautiful and the content is still very deep. During 1 hour 47 min, you can see everything about friendship between human and animals. That movie have Nobita , Dinosaur and their friend. I really like Nobita because he is a main character. So, I can see the full story and emotions of this character.

Thirdly, I want to mention about the place and people that I watch with. Because the movie released in 2006, it doesn't show in cinemas anymore. I only can watch on the internet. I often invite my old friend to my house to that movie. During the movie, we eat fried chicken , drink soda and we still play mini game about that movie.

Finally, it is about my experience when I watch the movie. I learned that everything have feeling, emotion if we think that. We should open our hearts with everything around us to feel more loved. I will watch that movie many times to keep this in mind.

In conclusion, I would say that the movie is really good , The author has created a great value about the feelings of all things. That is the end of my speaking. Thank you for your listening.

Cố gắng thuộc nhé!

Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-10-09 10:04:23 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher and friends. My name is Nghi. Today I want to talk about my favorite movie. I am a person who often goes to the movies, especially action and horror movies. And here I will tell you about my favorite movie. The name of the movie is Avengers Endgame. It's an action sci-fi movie. The movie involved actors Robert Downey Jr, Chris Evans, Mark Ruffalo, Chris Hemsworth, ... and others. The work began to be premiered on April 26, 2019. The work is a story about a group of heroes who gather together to fight an evil plot to erase the entire universe. Iron Man is my favorite character, from intelligence to noble sacrifice for people and families. The scene that impressed me the most was the scene where Ironman snapped his fingers, causing the villain and his army to disappear. The film has a very grand opening and a very meaningful ending. I and my friends saw this movie at the Cinema. The film is 181 minutes long. I cried while watching this movie. I have watched it 3 times and I appreciate this movie. It's a great movie, a perfect movie from content to effects. It made me think a lot about sacrifice. It's that sometimes we have to sacrifice the little things for the bigger things. It's all about my favorite movie Thanks for listening.

Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

PS23314-Nguyễn Anh Khoa

2022-10-09 14:26:45 UTC

DONE! Hi teacher, my name is Khoa. Today I will talk about my favorite movie. I often watch movie on the weekends and genre of movie I like is fantasy.

One of movies I like is "The Hobbit", this is a novel fantasy movie with 3 seasons, start released from 2012 to 2014. I like this movie because it has (-->stays) a long duration from 1 to 2 hours each season, and the core movie content is very good. I like all characters in this film, they always have shine --> you mean shiny? --> extraordinary scenes in the adventure which make this film more and more special. The first time I watched it maybe sine 2014, and watch it on HBO channel at home. The film always starts streaming when I have lunch that makes me delighted ~~make me~~ ~~more happy~~ and I don't know how many times I watch it. I just watched it last month again and I hope it will release another season I missed it so much. Thanks for listening!

FB:
Please take notice of tenses!
Anyway, WELL-DONE!

PS21899-Nguyễn Thị Huyền Trang

trangnthps21899 — 2022-10-09 15:21:35 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about my favorite movie.
I like watching movie. I usually watch action and horror movies. My favorite movie is Train To Busan. It's a very good, thrilling and engaging movie. The film belongs to the genre of horror and action. The film's content revolves around the survivors on a train from Seoul to Busan who have to go through many difficulties and struggles to reach the last safe city after Korea is infected with a strange virus. It was released 6 years ago. The movie is 1 hour 57 minutes long. Actor Gong yoo takes the lead role (Seok-woo) in the movie and I like that character a lot, because he's very handsome. I watched it at the cinema with my friends and I was 14 years old at the time. I like to eat popcorn and drink soft drinks while watching movies. I have watched that movie twice already. The train to Busan is a society in miniature. There are all ages and social backgrounds. They share the same goal of surviving the pandemic but cannot unite to achieve that goal. Then in the end only 2 survivors made it to Busan. The lesson that I have learned from the film is that we must unite to survive. If I have free time I want to watch this movie again, because it is very good.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

Em nên hiểu rõ để dễ nhớ nhé! Good try!

PS21901-Nguyễn Đức Huy-Topic 2

huyndps21901 — 2022-10-11 15:30:09 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about favorite movie. I love watching movies. I like comedy, action and horror movies. I also watch cartoons sometimes. I very like “Home Alone” movies. I feel the movie very funny and entertaining. “Home Alone” movie is a comedy genre. The film is about a boy who goes on a Christmas trip with his family. But the boy got on the wrong flight to "New York" city. When he arrived, he met two robbers and the funny stories that followed. That movie was released in 1992. The movie is 90 minutes. The main character is a boy named Kelvin and two robbers. I like the character Kelvin because he's very smart. I watch the movie "home alone" with my family. I watched that movie when I was a kid. I drink coke and snack while watching movie. The movie is really good. I watched it about 5 6 times. I learned through the movie that I have to confidently handle the situations I encounter in life. I really enjoyed that movie and would love to watch it again. Thank you teacher for reading.

Em nên hiểu rõ để dễ nhớ nhé!

PD065470-TRANQUOCPHUONG

2022-10-12 07:20:44 UTC

SEEN! Hello, my name is Phuong. Today I will talk about my favorite movie. I usually watch movies on weekends and the genre of movies I like is horror movies. One of my favorite movies is "Train to bussan", it's a novel fantasy series with 2 parts, released from 2016 to 2020. I like this movie because it is 1 in length. up to 2 hours per season, and the content is very good. I like all the characters in this movie, they always have shining scenes in the adventure that makes this movie even more special. I first watched it in 2016, and watched it on the internet. The movie always starts playing when I have lunch which makes me happier and I have watched it countless times. I just rewatched it last month and I hope it releases another season. Thank you for listening!

Em nên hiểu rõ để dễ nhớ nhé!

Talk about your favourite movie

sumntt — 2022-10-13 08:32:46 UTC

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TALK ABOUT A HOTEL THAT YOU HAVE STAYED IN

sumntt — 2022-10-13 08:37:49 UTC

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TALK ABOUT GOOD AND BAD DRIVING HABITS

sumntt — 2022-10-13 08:40:58 UTC

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TALK ABOUT HOW YOU TAKE CARE OF YOUR APPEARANCE

sumntt — 2022-10-13 08:41:51 UTC

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PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-10-15 06:13:24 UTC

PS24700_Nguyễn Phương Nam

2022-10-15 16:06:58 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, My name is Nam. Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite movie. I love watching movies, I usually watch action films because the plot in the movie gives me a feeling of excitement and suspense. My favorite film is "John Wick", the genre of the movie is action movies, and the movie is great, I like it because the plot is attractive, the characters are realistic, and the cinematography is very good. It is the first installment in the John Wick franchise. The story follows former assassin John Wick and his attempt to hunt down the men who broke into his home, stole his vintage car, and killed his puppy, which was a last gift to him from his recently deceased wife. The first part of the film was released in 2014. the film has now premiered 3 parts and premieres part 4 in 2023. I like the character "John Wick" the most, he has perfect fighting and shooting ability skills. I watched the movie alone in my room, when I watch the movie I drink cocoa and eat a snack. I watched this movie 2 times. having to be persistent, and trying to achieve the set goal is a lesson that I have learned from the movie. In conclusion, I would say that the movie is really nice. That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Em nên hiểu rõ để dễ nhớ nhé!

PS24732-Phan Bùi Anh Kiệt

kietpbaps24732 — 2022-10-16 08:41:09 UTC

DONE! Hello teacher, My name is Kiet. Today I would like to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. It’s Phuc Thanh hotel. I stayed in a hotel last vacation in Da Nang. I stayed there for two day. The hotel was near the beach. The location of the hotel is very beautiful and convenient. I stayed in a double room with my friends. I chose the hotel because of its quality and beauty. The cost for a one day stay is about 250000 VNĐ. In the room there is a small fridge, a wardrobe, a television and hair dryer. The hotel has laundry service and spa so I can relax. It’s so comfortable and convenient. The service here is very good, the staff are enthusiastic and friendly. I like the location of the hotel best because it’s near the beach, I can go swimming and enjoy the sea food. This hotel is very good and I have nothing to complain.

Thank you for reading.

WELL-DONE!

PS21899-Nguyễn Thị Huyền Trang

trangnthps21899 — 2022-10-16 13:28:16 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel I've stayed in.
The last time I stayed at the hotel was two months ago. The hotel is called Novotel Saigon Centre. The hotel is located at 167 Hai Ba Trung, Ward 6, District 3, Ho Chi Minh City. This modern hotel is a 2-minute walk from the bus station, a 9-minute walk from Saigon Notre-Dame Cathedral, a 9-minute walk from the Catholic church and 2 km from Ben Thanh Market. I stayed in the Superior King room type. I stay in Superior King room type which costs 1,748,000 VND for one night.I took nothing from the minibar. The hotel offers services such as free Wi-Fi, flat-screen TVs, work desks, safes, mini-fridges and tea and coffee making facilities. In-room dining service. Features 3 bars, a gym, an indoor pool, and a steam room. I used services such as Wifi, TV, room service and bar. I have nothing in my room and I am very satisfied with the room I stayed in. I really like the hotel bar and I don't like the food there because it's not to my taste. I would recommend this hotel to my friends because it is very good.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

Em cố gắng nhớ nhé!

Phạm Gia Kiện_PS23248

2022-10-16 15:30:52 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, my name is Kien Today I want to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in, first of all I want to talk about the hotel that I stayed in during my last vacation in Da Lat. The hotel is called An An. The address of the hotel is 67 Phu Dong Thien Vuong, Ward 8, Da Lat City. I think the location of the hotel is great as it is near a very beautiful flower garden. When I got there, I chose a single room for 190,000 VND a night and had two bottles of water in the fridge. Second, I want to talk about facilities, services and amenities. The hotel has services such as laundry, food ordering and is equipped with in-room equipment such as refrigerator, air conditioner, wardrobe, hair dryer, television. Finally, I feel very satisfied with my stay at AN AN Hotel. The service of the hotel is very good, the staff is friendly, the space is comfortable. That brought me to the end of my talk. Thanks for listening.
Cố gắng nhớ nhé!

Nguyễn Sơn Nam

namnsps23575 — 2022-10-16 16:05:41 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher and everyone, today I will talk about topic number 3, that is: talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. First, to talk about this, the last time I stayed at the hotel was in September of last year, the hotel that I stayed in is called Yaly, it is located in Ialy town, Gia Lai Province. It has a pretty and high location, can look around the city, and see the scenery of the mountains and forests and is very airy, I stay in a single room type, the price is 150k per night, Fully furnished and equipped with a refrigerator. As for the service, the service here is quite good and friendly, including: cleaning the room, ordering food, shuttle,... I chose the shuttle service, that's when I want to clean my room and leave. about As for the interior of the room, there is a TV, a Refrigerator, a single bed, a small chair,... And in the end I feel very satisfied with my stay, which makes me feel good. what I like about the hotel is the view around the hotel and the atmosphere there, very comfortable and natural, and of course nothing let me down about this hotel at all, I really hope that If you ever visit this place, please come to the hotel to experience the great service I mentioned above.
Thank you, teachers and everyone for listening to me!
Em cố gắng nhớ nhé!

PS24969- Trần Quỳnh Luân

2022-10-17 04:16:18 UTC

SEEN! Today, I would like to talk about a hotel I have stayed in last year, I had a vacation in DN city with my family. We travel by car to DN city. We chose a hotel call Godden Bay. The hotel is designed in a classical style. The hotel is near the sea and city center, it very convenient for travel. We booked a Quad-room and it about one million a day. The room had large railing so we can watch sunrise every morning. The hotel had all convenient such as: shampoo, hair dryer, ironing board, towel, laundry bag, minibar….The service here are very good such as: reception is always 24/ hours, laundry service, shoeshine service, spa,… hotel staff very friendly and cheerfully. We stay here for a week. We are very satisfied with our stay as well as the service of the hotel. If I can return in DN city I gonna chose this hotel again and that all about the hotel I have stayed in. thank for ur you listening.
Em cố gắng nhớ nhé!

PS24702-NgoNhien

2022-10-20 16:56:46 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Nhien. Today, I want to talk about a hotel called "Minh Toan Galaxy" that I stayed 1 year ago in Da Nang. The location of the hotel is quite cool, overlooking the sea, giving visitors a comfortable feeling. I stayed in a double room with my brother for about 600,000 VND , the room was full of necessary tools for living such as a refrigerator, drinking water, television,... The hotel has a lot of services. Popularity services such as cleaning, laundry, spa, ordering... these services are very suitable for tourists coming to relax. In the evening, I use the a la carte service for a snack before walking around the City. After this trip, I am comfortable to enjoy everything, in 3 days at the hotel, I have experienced very good service.Thank you for reading.

PS26548 Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Thuận

thuannnmps26548 — 2022-10-21 02:26:50 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, my name is Thuan. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that I stayed at in Phu Quoc last March this year. The hotel's name is Phiiulinh Hotel and it's located in the south of the island, which is next to the beach this makes it convenient for us to go to the beach with just a few steps of walking. I traveled to the island with my mom so we chose a standard double room to stay in for 2 nights, which cost us about 800.000vnd/night. The car parking and the Wi-Fi are always free, so we can stay in touch and come and go as we please and this place offered us breakfast for 2 as soon as we booked. The facility that we used and found very convenient was the airport transfer service so we could fly home without a taxi booking. The hotel was painted white, and it offered some conveniences such as TVs, air-conditioners, etc. Everything was s.pick and span. I was very satisfied with the hotel as I really appreciated its helpful and hospitable staff so I have no dislikes about it after all. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for your listening.
Em cố gắng nhớ nhé!

PS26524_Nguyễn Trọng Khoa

2022-10-21 02:30:48 UTC

DONE! Hello Ms.Sum and my beloved classmates. Welcome back to our second topic of the course, which also my favorite topic, talking about my favorite movie.

At first, I loving watching movie so much, especially action, sci-fia and sometimes, horror movies, but mostly is action movies, superhero type. I think some of you guys have already guessed the name of my favorite movie, which I'm about to tell you right now. It's the Avengers series, and the most latest and the mos popular version of it is The Avengers: End Game.

It's based on the very famous Marvel's comic, which was first published a long time ago, and the series were also warmly welcome by the audiences all over the world. I remembered the date ~~me and~~ my friends and I gathered around at the theater, the movie was released on April 26th, 2019, so it was a few days later. But the heat is still so lit. Everybody ~~were~~ was all so excited and ~~spend an~~ felt overwhelming love for the movie. The movie was about the last fight between the Avengers - the superhero teams, with their biggest threat, Thanos, in order to save the planet. The casts of the movie were also very impressive, include many A - list movie stars such as Robert Downey Jr, Benedict Cumberbatch, Chris Evans, Chris Hemsworth, ...etc.

For my own experience, this movie was everything that a Marvel fan could expected. I'm talking about the movie technique, the fighting, the drama, the humor and the acting of the characters were all so perfect combined, a perfect celebration of 10 years of Marvel Universe. From the very first moment that I sat down my chair to the last minutes of the movie, I completely enjoyed and felt very satisfying. Some of the scenes also made me ~~feel goosebump. (--~~>gave me goosebumps)

In the end, there was nothing that I could complain about this movie but it made me have to go to the theater a few times later to watch it again. That's all about my favorite type of movie and the movie that I like most. Thank you all for reading and staying with me till here. Hope you guys all enjoy my story.

Goodbye all and please fell free to leave your comments and questions below.

Well-done!

PS26524_Nguyễn Trọng Khoa

2022-10-21 03:56:46 UTC

DONE! Hello Ms.Sum, and everyone, I'm here to day once again with another interesting topic of our course. Today I'm gonna tell you guys about a hotel that I stayed in since my last vacation trip.

It's been 2 years since my last trip, back in 2020. My friends and me were planning for a trip to Phu Quoc in 2 days. It was in August so the weather was not in our favour, the rain kept falling down on us, and the sea was quite rough when we were on the ferry to the island. When we came to the hotel, which was not so far from the port, my first thought was "Oh, nice hotel!", It had a large front yard with a lot of green trees, and the hotel was painted all white, which pleased our eyes even though the weather were so gloomy at that time. We had 7 persons ("people" should be used better than "persons" in most cases) , so we decided to take 2 rooms, a large one for 4 of us, and the other one for the ladies. Our room had 2 double bed, perfect fit for 4 peoples like us. There was a heater in the bathroom so the problem of the cold outside is solved, they also placed a mini bar in the room and some clean, big towels. After taking a rest, we went down stair and tried to find something to eat, then went out for some exploration of the island. The next morning, we had breakfast by the hotel provided to us and felt quite satistfied.

In the end, I felt completely satisfied about that hotel, about the services that they gave us, the facilities and everything else. There wast just one thing that I dislike that is the weather at that time. If I have a chance to get back here, or some of my friends do, I definitely recommend this to them. What a memory!

It's the end of the topic today. Once again, I feel very thankfull to all for reading and staying with me till here. Hope you guys enjoy my story, and feel free to leave comments of questions below.
See you in the next topic!
WELL-DONE!
From my own experience, in MY OWN academic world, we almost rarely use "GUYS". Please consider the word carefully, "the words we use are part of WHO WE ARE-SUMMY" hiii

PS21901_Nguyễn Đức Huy

huyndps21901 — 2022-10-27 15:27:38 UTC

DONE!
HUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that you have stayed in. The last time I went to a hotel was last summer vacation. The name of that hotel is "Thuy Van". The hotel is located on Thuy Van street, Vung Tau city. Hotel location is very good. It's near the sea and restaurants. I stayed in a room type with a double room with my family. Hotel cost for one night is about 500,000 VND. In the minibar there is filtered water, coke, snack and chocolate. The hotel has convenient services such as elevator, supermarket, wifi, swimming pool and breakfast. I have used all the services of the hotel. I often rest, watch TV and take a bath. I am very satisfied with my stay. It helps me relax after school. I really like the room space. Because it's so wide and comfortable. don't like about the hotel is the small elevator. I will recommend this hotel to friends and family when they come to Vung tau city. Thank you teacher for reading.

Hello teacher, My name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that you have stayed in. The last time I went to a hotel was during my summer vacation. The name of that hotel is "Thuy Van." The hotel is located on Thuy Van Street in Vung Tau City. The hotel's location is very good. It's near the sea and restaurants. I stayed in a double room with my family. The hotel cost for one night is about 500,000 VND. In the minibar there is filtered water, coke, snacks, and chocolate. The hotel has convenient services such as an elevator, a supermarket, wifi, a swimming pool, and breakfast. I have used all the services of the hotel. I often rest, watch TV, and take a bath. I am very satisfied with my stay. It helps me relax after school. I really like the room's space. because it's so wide and comfortable. What I don't like about the hotel is the small elevator. I will recommend this hotel to friends and family when they come to Vung Tau. Thank you, teacher, for reading.

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-10-28 09:32:34 UTC

First of all, the last time I stayed in a hotel was six years ago. That hotel is loacted in Da Lat city near shopping centers and honestly, I can’t remenber the name of that hotel because I haven’t been there for a long time. Beside that, I think that location is very convenient for me. Because I can go shopping with my friend and I went sighseeing and took a picture of the beautiful view in Da Lat. And type of room I stayed in is single room with twin beds for three days and two nights. Because

There were only my aunt and me and we didn’t have a bunch of stuff so we can save money. And the price we stayed in one night is nearly five hundred thousand dong not including any services. Furthermore, in my room I had some drinking from minibar like bottled water and some cans of juice.

Secondly, when it comes to facilities, services and amenities that hotel some services like 24h-room service, bell service and rental car service. And I used 24h-room service for asking the staff to prepare food when I feel hungry anytime. And also, my aunt usually used rental car service for hanging outside with me when we felt boring at the hotel. Besides that, there were two beds, mini-bar, television and so on. And specially, there are some available towel, bath, toothbrush and toothpaste in the bathroom. After staying in the hotel, I’m really satisfied with my stay. Not only it is very peaceful and also the room which I stayed was so clean that I can sleep very well every night. And I like the most about the hotel is 24h-room service because the staff in there was so friendly, they recommended me some delicious food every meal that I can choose them easily.

And lastly, I would say that that hotel is really amazing, and I would recommend it to my friend. That’s all my topic I want to talk with you. Thanks for listening to me.

Hello everyone, my name is Nam. Today I would like to talk about my topic, which is a hotel that I have stayed in.

First of all, the last time I stayed in a hotel was six years ago. That hotel is located in Da Lat city near shopping centers, and honestly, I can’t remember the name of that hotel because I haven’t been there for a long time. Aside from that, I think that location is very convenient for me. Because I can go shopping with my friend, I went sightseeing and took a picture of the beautiful view in Da Lat. The type of room I stayed in was a single room with twin beds for three days and two nights. Because

We only had my aunt and me, and we didn't have much, so we could save money.And the price we paid for one night's stay was nearly five hundred thousand dong, not including any services. Furthermore, in my room, I had some drinks from the minibar, like bottled water and some canned juice.

Secondly, when it comes to facilities, services, and amenities, that hotel offers some services like 24-hour room service, bell service, and rental car service. And I took advantage of the 24-hour room service by asking the staff to prepare food whenever I felt hungry.And also, my aunt usually uses a rental car service to hang outside with me when we feel bored at the hotel. Besides that, there were two beds, a mini-bar, a television, and so on. In particular, there are towels, bath products, toothbrushes, and toothpaste available in the bathroom.After staying in the hotel, I’m really satisfied with my stay. Not only is it very peaceful, but the room in which I stayed was so clean that I can sleep very well every night. And what I like best about the hotel is the 24-hour room service because the staff is so friendly, and they always recommend delicious food for me to choose from.

And lastly, I would say that that hotel is really amazing, and I would recommend it to my friend. That's all I have to say about the subject. Thanks for listening to me.

Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-10-29 11:26:04 UTC

DONE!
NGHI XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Nghi. Today I will talk about the hotel I stayed at, during a family vacation. During my trip last summer, I stayed with my family in Da Lat. We chose to stay at the hotel with a view overlooking Xuan Huong Lake. The hotel is named Vietsovpetro, located at 7 Hung Vuong Street, Da Lat City, Vietnam. Xuan Huong Lake is one of the famous places to visit in Dalat. We booked a suite with 2 rooms for 4 people. In which, my parents stayed in a room with a queen-size bed, my brother and I stayed in a room with double twin beds. Room rates here range from 1million-2million VND per night excluding other service fees. Parking, internet, and breakfast are free served here. Not only that butthere are also swimming pools, gyms, saunas… Room service is very available from sofa, wardrobe, mini bar, hairdryer, tv... I had a request for laundry service and room service. For me, laundry service and room service are very important, because my purpose when coming here is to check in beautiful photos of the scenery here and enjoy delicious food. I am very satisﬁed with everything during my stay and I have shared this with my friends. What I liked most about this hotel was the convenient services at the hotel as well as the reasonable price. I hope to have the opportunity to come back to this hotel again if my family has the opportunity to go to Da Lat for vacation. Thanks for listening

Hello teacher, My name is Nghi. Today I will talk about the hotel I stayed at during a family vacation. During my trip last summer, I stayed with my family in Da Lat. We chose to stay at the hotel with a view overlooking Xuan Huong Lake. The hotel is named Vietsovpetro and is located at 7 Hung Vuong Street, Da Lat City, Vietnam. Xuan Huong Lake is one of the famous places to visit in Dalat. We booked a suite with two rooms for four people. My parents stayed in a room with a queen-size bed, while my brother and I stayed in a room with two twin beds. Room rates here range from 1 million to 2 million VND per night, excluding other service fees. Parking, internet, and breakfast are all provided for free. Not only that, but there are also swimming pools, gyms, saunas... Room service is available from the sofa, wardrobe, mini bar, hairdryer, TV, and other areas. I had a request for laundry service and room service. For me, laundry service and room service are very important, because my purpose when coming here is to check in, take beautiful photos of the scenery, and enjoy delicious food. I am very satisfied with everything that happened during my stay, and I have shared this with my friends. What I liked most about this hotel was the convenience of its services as well as its reasonable price. I hope to have the opportunity to come back to this hotel again if my family has the opportunity to go to Da Lat for vacation. Thanks for listening.

Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-10-29 11:26:50 UTC

DONE!
NGHI XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher and friends, My name is Nghi. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I used to use a motorbike to get around since I was in high school. For me, the good habits that we need to maintain when driving are: pay attention to the speed limit, maintain the following safe distance… We should maintain this good habit and should avoid: speeding, swerving, talking on the phone, texting while driving / riding, weaving through traffic, not stopping at red lights, not signaling when turning... so as not to encounter unfortunate cases.

I heard a story about the accident from my best friend. The accident happened at 10pm when my friend was walking in the square. Suddenly there was a loud noise. The speeding car hit a pedestrian, and the victim died on the spot. The person who caused the accident ran away immediately. About 10 minutes later, police arrived and surrounded the scene. After hearing about this accident, I have learned a lesson that not speeding can cause a serious accident that can lead to death. Advice for everyone is to give up bad driving habits. Practicing good habits will help you and everyone around you avoid collisions, damage to property, health and safety, and even life. Thanks for listening

Hello teacher and friends! My name is Nghi. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I've been riding a motorcycle since I was in high school. For me, the good habits that we need to maintain when driving are: paying attention to the speed limit; maintaining the following safe distances;... We should maintain this good habit and avoid: speeding, swerving, talking on the phone, texting while driving or riding, weaving through traffic, not stopping at red lights, not signaling when turning, etc., so as not to encounter unfortunate cases.

I heard a story about the accident from my best friend. The accident happened at 10 p.m. when my friend was walking in the square. Suddenly, there was a loud noise. The speeding car hit a pedestrian, and the victim died on the spot. The person who caused the accident ran away immediately. About 10 minutes later, the police arrived and surrounded the scene. After hearing about this accident, I have learned a lesson: not speeding can cause a serious accident that can lead to death. The advice for everyone is to give up bad driving habits. Practicing good habits will help you and everyone around you avoid collisions, damage to property, poor health and safety, and even death. Thanks for listening.

PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-10-30 07:32:49 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience. I'm a regular motorbike user and I've been riding a motorbike since I was 14 years old . Driving a car is dangerous so I always pay attention and I see myself as a good driver. Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. Some good driving behavior like pay attention to your surroundings, always drive slowly, and do not use electronic devices while driving. And people should learn and obey the law when participating in traffic. For example, when driving, you must not drink alcohol. Also, people should not stop at red lights, go fast, weave through traffic, and talk on the phone. Some of the above actions can cause some unfortunate incidents. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is driving with high speed, exceeding control limits. You maybe die when there is a collision with a big van and other cars. I always wear helmet when I drive my motorbike and never talk on the phone while driving, especially when I go with my family members. I once saw an accident when I was in high school. The accident happened on the road when I came home from school. Two students' motorbikes collided. Fortunately, both sides only suffered minor injuries and the two motorbikes were slightly damaged. There was no much damage. After hearing about this accident, I have learned a lesson that not speeding can cause a serious accident that can lead to death. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe, avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. Thanks for reading

Hello teacher, Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I'm a regular motorbike/motorcycle user, and I've been riding a motorbike/ motorcycle since I was 14 years old. Driving a car is dangerous, so I always pay attention, and I see myself as a good driver. Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. Some good driving behaviors include paying attention to your surroundings, always driving slowly, and not using electronic devices while driving. And people should learn and obey the law when participating in traffic. For example, when driving, you must not drink alcohol. Also, people should not stop at red lights, go fast, weave through traffic, or talk on the phone. Some of the above actions can cause unfortunate incidents. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is driving at high speed and exceeding control limits. You may die when there is a collision with a big van and other cars. I always wear a helmet when I drive my motorcycle and never talk on the phone while driving, especially when I go with my family members. I once saw an accident when I was in high school. The accident happened on the road when I came home from school. Two students' motorbikes collided. Fortunately, both sides suffered minor injuries, and the two motorcycles were slightly damaged. There was no much damage. After hearing about this accident, I have learned a lesson: not speeding can cause a serious accident that can lead to death. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. Thanks for reading.

ps23588- Nguyen Hoang Tai

2022-10-30 09:03:48 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher, my name’s Tai, I’m going to talk with you about my favorite movies.
Firstly, I love watching movies because it makes me relax after I doing my homework, and my favorite movies genre is cartoon. “Tom and Jerry” is my favorite movie. The movie is about a cat named Tom and a mouse named Jerry. They are fighting with each other, for each other. The bittersweet moments of Tom and Jerry taught us that life is meaningless without sharing fun and laughter with each other. The film was released in 1940, and each episode is from 6 to 10 minutes long. I like both characters. I watch movies at home in my free time. I’ve watched 117 episodés. I’ll watch the movie again because it’s very entertaining. And that’s all about my topic. Tks for your listening

ps23588-Nguyen Hoang Tai

2022-10-30 09:36:45 UTC

DONE!
TÀI XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name’s Tai, I’m going to talk with you about a hotel that I have stayed in. The last time I stayed at the hotel was about 3 months ago. The hotel name of that hotel is Regalia Nha Trang, and the hotel located in 89B Tran Phu, Nha Trang, Viet Nam. The location of the hotel is very good becase it’s on the beach. I stayed in a double room. There were a large TV and a twin bed, and there are a lot of drinks and fast food in minibar. The price is 300k vnđ for one night. The hotel had laundry service and spa so I can relax after travelling a lot. I used wireless Internet service and laundry service because I had a lot of dirty clothes. I’m very satisfied when I’m here. What I like about the hotel is the service and price. I don’t like the foods in the minibar because it’s quite expensive. This is a good hotel so I will recommend it to my friends. Thanks for your listening

Hello teacher, my name’s Tai. I’m going to talk with you about a hotel that I have stayed in. The last time I stayed at the hotel was about 3 months ago. The hotel name of that hotel is Regalia Nha Trang, and the hotel is located at 89B Tran Phu, Nha Trang, Viet Nam. The location of the hotel is very good because it’s on the beach. I stayed in a double room. There was a large TV and a twin bed, and the minibar had a lot of drinks and fast food. For one night, the cost is 300,000 VND. The hotel had laundry service and a spa, so I could relax after traveling a lot. I used wireless Internet service and laundry service because I had a lot of dirty clothes. I’m very satisfied when I’m here. What I like about the hotel is the service and the price. I don’t like the foods in the minibar because they're quite expensive. This is a good hotel, so I will recommend it to my friends. Thanks for your listening.

Hướng Huy - PS23321

huyhhps23321 — 2022-10-30 13:57:51 UTC

DONE!
HUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello, my name is Huy and today I will talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. The
last time I stayed at the hotel was 2 months ago. The name is NiN Garden Homestay. The location of the homestay is 26 Vo Thi Sau, Ward 2, Vung Tau City, Ba Ria. About the location, it is 500m from the beach, it is quite convenient for going to the beach. I stayed in 5 person room because I traveling with my friends. It costs 450k for 1 night, quite cheap for the group. Our room did not have a minibar. They have a the foosball table, a place to read books, a place to drink coffee. We used the foosball table when we first arrived and drank coffee when we were about to leave. The room has 5 beds and
a small window. I am quite satisfied with that place. What I like about that place is
that the rooms are containers, which is quite interesting to me. What I don't like is
that the room is quite small for 5 people.
Thank u for reading.

Hello, my name is Huy, and today I will talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. The The last time I stayed at the hotel was two months ago. The name is NiN Garden Homestay. The location of the homestay is 26 Vo Thi Sau, Ward 2, Vung Tau City, Ba Ria. It is 500 meters from the beach, which is quite convenient for going to the beach.I stayed in a 5-person room because I was traveling with my friends. It costs 450k for one night, which is relatively inexpensive for the group.Our room did not have a minibar. They have a foosball table, a place to read books, and a place to drink coffee. We used the foosball table when we first arrived and drank coffee when we were about to leave. The room has five beds anda small window. I am quite satisfied with that place. What I like about that place is
that the rooms are containers, which is quite interesting to me. What I don't like isthat the room is quite small for five people.
Thank you for reading.

PS24700_Nguyễn Phương Nam

2022-10-30 18:48:14 UTC

DONE!
PHƯƠNG NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I’m going to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. My friends and I went to visit Dalat 6 months ago. we booked the hotel and stayed there for 2 days. The hotel name is "Thanh Nhi". We got a room with 2 beds, the cost for 1 night in the hotel is 600 000 VND. The hotel location is quite convenient, it is located near a coffee shop and Xuan Huong lake. Next, I want to talk about facilities, services and amenities. In terms of facilities, good soundproof room, new appliances, in the room there is a TV, a small fridge, a hair dryer,... In terms of services, the hotel has a lot of services: Wireless internet service, Swimming pool and sauna, Laundry service, Wake-up service, 24-hour room service,... Finally, about amenities, the hotel has a lot of amenities: big and clean bed, air conditioning, brand new bathroom amenities, elevator,...I and my friends are quite satisfied with the hotel, what I like most about the hotel is that it has many good services and staff. In conclusion, I would say that the hotel is really nice. and I would recommend it to my friends. That is the end of my speaking. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, My name is Nam. Today I'd like to talk about a hotel where I've stayed. My friends and I went to visit Dalat six months ago. We booked the hotel and stayed there for 2 days. The hotel name is Thanh Nhi. We got a room with 2 beds; the cost for 1 night in the hotel is 600,000 VND. The hotel location is quite convenient; it is located near a coffee shop and Xuan Huong Lake. Next, I want to talk about facilities, services, and amenities. In terms of facilities, there is a good soundproof room, new appliances, and in the room there is a TV, a small fridge, a hair dryer,... In terms of services, the hotel has a lot: wireless internet service, swimming pool and sauna, laundry service, wake-up service, 24-hour room service,... Finally, about amenities, the hotel has a lot of amenities: a big and clean bed, air conditioning, brand new bathroom amenities, an elevator,... I and my friends are quite satisfied with the hotel. What I like most about the hotel is that it has many good services and staff. In conclusion, I would say that the hotel is really nice. and I would recommend it to my friends. That is the end of my speaking. Thank you for listening.

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-10-31 03:35:02 UTC

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-10-31 04:01:11 UTC

DONE!
DŨNG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher Sum, my name is Hoàng Dũng. Today, I would like to talk about the topic of good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience. I can ride a motorbike and I have been driving it since I was 18 and I have my own bike at home. I would consume that I am a good motorbike rider. Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. In my opinion, good driving habits are always paying attention on the road, observing the speed limit and maintaining a safe following distance. And about bad driving habits, I think that honking your horns at someone, staring at other drivers or speeding... The most dangerous driving behavior is speeding because you could cause an accident and someone might be dead because of that. For me, I always observe the speed limit because I don't want myself or someone to get hurt because of my driving habit. Finally, it's about an accident that I've seen or heard about recently. It was a crash and there are one person died. I have heard about it on the internet, the driver was speeding and caused the accident. It was terrible. I think we all should avoid speeding because it could cause some really bad accidents. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe, and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. That's all about my speaking, thanks for listening.

Hello teacher Sum, My name is Hoàng Dũng. Today, I would like to talk about the topic of good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I can ride a motorbike, and I have been driving it since I was 18, and I have my own bike at home. I would say that I am a good motorcycle rider. Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. In my opinion, good driving habits include always paying attention on the road, observing the speed limit, and maintaining a safe following distance. And about bad driving habits, I think that honking your horn at someone, staring at other drivers, speeding... Speeding is the most dangerous driving behavior because it can lead to an accident and the death of someone. For me, I always observe the speed limit because I don't want myself or someone else to get hurt because of my driving habit. Finally, it's about an accident that I've seen or heard about recently. There was a crash, and one person was killed. I have heard about it on the internet; the driver was speeding and caused the accident. It was terrible. I think we all should avoid speeding because it could cause some really bad accidents. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. That's all about my speaking; thanks for listening.

PD06547-QUOC PHUONG

2022-10-31 10:50:24 UTC

DONE!
PHƯƠNG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Quoc Phuong, today I would like to talk about a hotel I stayed at last year, I went on vacation with my family in Nha Trang city. We went there by my car. We chose a hotel called LinDa Travel. The hotel is designed in a romantic style. it is next to the sea and close to the city center. We booked a 4 person room and it was about 700,000 a day. The room had a big balustrade so we could watch the sea at night. The hotel has a full service such as make up the room , turn down the beds and a 24-hour front desk, in addition to a laundry service, the staff is very friendly and happy. We stayed here for a 5 days. We are very satisfied with our stay as well as the service of the hotel. If I can come back to Nha Trang city, I will choose this hotel again because it's amazing. Thank you for listening.

Hello teacher, My name is Quoc Phuong, and today I would like to talk about a hotel I stayed at last year when I went on vacation with my family in Nha Trang city. We went there in my car. We chose a hotel called LinDa Travel. The hotel is designed in a romantic style. It is next to the sea and close to the city center. We reserved a four-person room for about 700,000 per day.The room had a big balustrade, so we could watch the sea at night. The hotel has a full service, such as making up the room, turning down the beds, and a 24-hour front desk. In addition to a laundry service, the staff is very friendly and happy. We stayed here for five days. We are very satisfied with our stay as well as the service of the hotel. If I can come back to Nha Trang city, I will choose this hotel again because it's amazing. Thank you for listening.

PS 24732-Phan Bùi Anh Kiệt

kietpbaps24732 — 2022-11-04 06:49:51 UTC

DONE!
KIỆT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I don't know how to drive a car but I know how to drive a motorbike. I drove a motorbike 3 years ago. I’m a good motorbike rider because I have many good driving habits. I always pay attention when I driving motorbike. I always wear a helmet, turn with a signal and observe the speed limit when driving. I always stop at red lights and don’t text while driving. I usually maintain a safe following distance when on a busy street. There are many examples of bad driving habits that I know as some people don’t wear a helmet, don't turn off lights signal, don't stop at red lights and talk on the phone when driving on the street. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is driving at high speed and exceeding control limits. I had an accident. The accident was about 1 year ago. I hit the motorbike when it turned right but it didn't have a lights signal. I fell on the street, and it was lucky there was no body hurt and no much damage in the accident. Thank you for reading.

Hello teacher, Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I don't know how to drive a car, but I know how to drive a motorbike. I drove a motorbike 3 years ago. I’m a good motorbike rider because I have many good driving habits. When I'm riding my motorcycle, I'm always paying attention.I always wear a helmet, turn with a signal, and observe the speed limit when driving. I always stop at red lights, and I don’t text while driving. I usually maintain a safe following distance when on a busy street. There are many examples of bad driving habits that I know, such as people who don’t wear a helmet, don't turn off their lights when signaling, don't stop at red lights, and talk on the phone while driving on the street. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is driving at high speed and exceeding control limits. I had an accident. The accident was about a year ago. I hit the motorcycle when it turned right, but it didn't have a light signal. I fell on the street, and it was lucky there was no body harm or much damage in the accident. Thank you for reading.

PS24732-Phan Bùi Anh Kiệt

kietpbaps24732 — 2022-11-04 13:41:18 UTC

DONE!
KIỆT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, today I would like to talk about take care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident. I often take care of my teeth by brushing my teeth after I get up and before go to bed. I often use toothpaste PS for my teeth. I sometimes use sunscreen when I go to the beach and I use Clear for my hair. I don't go to the salon or the spa. I often take care at home. I don’t spend much money on cosmetic products, I only spend 200000 VND to toothpaste and shampoo. I go to the barber shop once a month for haircuts. I often go to the barber shop alone but sometimes I also go to it with my friends and the barber shop is near my house. I think cosmetic surgery is good because it helps everyone change appearance and be more good-looking. However It is very expensive and can have risks. If I have money. I don't do cosmetic surgery because I’m satisfied with my appearance now. Thank you for reading.

Hello teacher, Today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident. I often take care of my teeth by brushing them after I get up and before I go to bed. PS toothpaste is something I frequently use on my teeth. I sometimes use sunscreen when I go to the beach, and I use Clear for my hair. I don't go to the salon or the spa. I often take care of myself at home. I don’t spend much money on cosmetic products; I only spend 2000 VND on toothpaste and shampoo. I go to the barbershop once a month for haircuts. I often go to the barber shop alone, but sometimes I also go there with my friends, and the barber shop is near my house. I think cosmetic surgery is good because it helps everyone change their appearance and be more attractive. However, it is very expensive and can have risks. If I have money I don't do cosmetic surgery because I’m satisfied with my appearance now. Thank you for reading

PS21899-Nguyễn Thị Huyền Trang

trangnthps21899 — 2022-11-04 20:15:36 UTC

DONE!
TRANG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits.
I can ride motorbike. I've been driving a motorbike for 3 years now. I have a motorbike at home. I am a very good motorbike driver. Good driving habits can be mentioned such as maintaining a safe distance, paying attention to observing, driving at the allowed speed, ... Bad driving habits include speeding, using mobile phones while driving, swerving around, not stopping at red lights, not signaling when turning, overtaking in a no-pass area,... The most dangerous driving behavior is not stopping at a red light. I often have driving habits such as concentrating and paying attention when driving, driving at the allowed speed, maintaining a safe distance from other vehicles. When I was 19 years old, I witnessed an accident on my way home from school. One person was injured and one person died. Due to the speed of the motorcyclist, the accident caused the accident. As soon as I saw the accident, I immediately called the police. After that accident, I learned that one thing is to strictly obey traffic safety laws on road traffic, sign system, traffic light signals. When riding on a motorcycle, mopeds must stay in the right lane, must always wear a helmet to minimize injury if an accident occurs. Drivers need to avoid behaviors such as recklessly speeding, running red lights, not wearing helmets when participating in traffic.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits.
I can ride a motorbike. I've been riding a motorcycle for three years now. I have a motorbike at home. I am a very good motorcycle driver. Good driving habits can be mentioned, such as maintaining a safe distance, paying attention to observations, driving at the allowed speed,... Bad driving habits include speeding, using mobile phones while driving, swerving, not stopping at red lights, not signaling when turning, overtaking in a no-pass area,... The most dangerous driving behavior is not stopping at a red light. I often have good driving habits, such as concentrating and paying attention when driving, driving at the allowed speed, and maintaining a safe distance from other vehicles. When I was 19 years old, I witnessed an accident on my way home from school. One person was injured, and one person died. As soon as I saw the accident, I immediately called the police. After that accident, I learned that one thing is to strictly obey traffic safety laws on the road. Drivers need to avoid behaviors such as reckless speeding, and running red lights.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-11-06 04:16:28 UTC

PS24702 - Ngo Nhien

2022-11-06 08:14:56 UTC

DONE!

NHIÊN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, today I would like to talk about take care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you my thoughts on my appearance and how I take care of it. I usually eat well so I don't get fat and use services to look better. I am not satisfied with my appearance now because it is too short. To take care of my teeth, I brush my teeth twice a day, morning and night, and use anti-hair loss shampoo to keep my hair strong. I use the popular "PS" branded product for my teeth care. I don't spend too much money on cosmetics. Second, I want to talk about a place I often go to to take care of my appearance. I don't often go to the barbershop, I only go to once a month, the barber shop is close to where I live, about 600m away, I often go there alone to experience the bar's services such as shampooing, shaving, .. I have to pay for each haircut and service use about 100 thousand. For me, real cosmetic surgery it helps us to be more confident when we don't look good, I find the biggest disadvantage is that it is very expensive for a real cosmetic surgery. Thanks for listening

Hello teacher, Today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you my thoughts on my appearance and how I take care of it. I usually eat well to avoid becoming overweight and use services to improve my appearance. I am not satisfied with my appearance now because it is too short. To take care of my teeth, I brush twice a day, morning and night, and use anti-hair loss shampoo to keep my hair strong. I use the popular "PS"-branded product for my teeth care. I don't spend too much money on cosmetics. Second, I want to talk about a place I often go to take care of my appearance. I don't often go to the barbershop; I only go once a month. The barber shop is close to where I live, about 600 m away, so I often go there alone to experience the bar's services such as shampooing, shaving, etc. Each haircut and service I use costs me approximately $100,000. For me, real cosmetic surgery helps us to be more confident when we don't look good. The biggest disadvantage, I find, is that it is very expensive for a real cosmetic surgery. Thanks for listening.

PS24702 - Ngo Nhien

2022-11-06 08:47:31 UTC

DONE!
NHIÊN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher , My name is Nhien. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience, I was able to ride a motorbike 7 years ago, I don't ride a motorbike at home I just ride a motorbike when going to another place. Second, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits, examples of good driving, paying attention while driving, keeping the speed limit, maintaining a safe following distance, examples of bad driving: drowsy while driving , gesture at other drivers, talk on the phone while riding, don't stop at red lights. The most dangerous driving behavior is not stopping at a red light, I usually have a good habit of paying attention when driving. Finally, it's about an accident that I heard about recently, the accident happened on Highway 1A, the accident happened 1 month ago, there were 2 people injured and taken to the emergency room. When I got into that accident I was just a passerby doing nothing, I learned from seeing such an accident that I shouldn't drive fast. Thanks for listening

Hello teacher, My name is Nhien. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I was able to ride a motorbike 7 years ago, but I don't ride a motorbike at home. I just ride a motorbike when going to another place. Second, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits. Examples of good driving include paying attention while driving, keeping the speed limit, and maintaining a safe following distance. Examples of bad driving include being drowsy while driving, making gestures at other drivers, talking on the phone while riding, and not stopping at red lights. The most dangerous driving behavior is not stopping at a red light. I usually have a good habit of paying attention when driving. Finally, it's about an accident that I heard about recently; the accident happened on Highway 1A, it happened a month ago, and there were 2 people injured and taken to the emergency room. When I got into that accident, I was just a passerby doing nothing. I learned from seeing such an accident that I shouldn't drive fast. Thanks for listening.

PS23624 Nguyễn Tuấn Anh

anhntps23624 — 2022-11-06 08:58:20 UTC

SEEN! Hello teacher and everyone . My name is Tuấn Anh .Today l talk about vietnamese gestures and customs .
First about the greeting . The traditional Vietnamese way of greeting is to cross their arms or bow other people, when l meet other older people , l greet them by bowing and say "how are you mr/mrs". For younger people l greet them by say "hello" or smiling . l rarely shake hands , l like gentle handshakes because it makes feel comfortable.

Secondly about the exchange the business card and small talk . Vietnamese people exchange the business card by standing up ,handing card with two hands . l often use the above method to exchange the business card . When Vietnamese people have a small talk, they often talk about domestic news, and stories about agriculture.
Thiếu phần kết
Em nên hiểu để dễ thuộc nhé!

ps24700_nguyenphuongnam

2022-11-06 11:31:30 UTC

DONE!
NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I’m going to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience. I use a motorbike every day, go to school, go to work, ... I've been riding a motorbike for about 6 years. I'm confident that I can drive fairly well. Next, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I have many good driving habits. There are many examples of good driving habits that I know. For example, pay attention, observe the speed limit, and maintain a safe following distance,…There are many examples of bad driving habits that I know. For example, talk on the phone, weave through traffic, don’t signal when turning, text while driving, don’t stop at a red light, pass in a no-passing zone, and drive at high speed,…. I always pay attention when I ride a motorbike, When turning, turn on the signal light, Stop at a red light,….sometimes, I ride a motorbike at high speed. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is don’t stop at red lights because it can cause traffic accidents. Finally, I want to talk about an accident I saw recently. I saw the accident on the way to school, the accident happened on highway 1, the truck was traveling at a high speed exceeding the allowed speed, and hit the median while changing lanes. The collision caused severe damage to the front of the truck, and luckily no one was hurt. I didn't help in that accident, because the traffic police came very quickly and solved the problem. After I saw the accident, I learned that we should drive at the speed limit, and be more careful when driving. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe, and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I’m going to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I use a motorbike every day, go to school, go to work,... I've been riding a motorbike for about 6 years. I'm confident that I can drive fairly well. Next, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I have many good driving habits. I know many examples of good driving habits. For example, pay attention, observe the speed limit, maintain a safe following distance,... I know many examples of bad driving habits. For example, talk on the phone, weave through traffic, don’t signal when turning, text while driving, don’t stop at a red light, pass in a no-passing zone, and drive at high speed,... I always pay attention when I ride a motorcycle. When turning, I turn on the signal light. I stop at a red light.... Sometimes, I ride a motorcycle at high speed. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is to not stop at red lights because it can cause traffic accidents. Finally, I want to talk about an accident I saw recently. On my way to school, I saw the accident on Highway 1. The truck was traveling at a high speed, exceeding the allowed speed, and collided with the median while changing lanes.The collision caused severe damage to the front of the truck, but luckily no one was hurt. I didn't help in that accident, because the traffic police came very quickly and solved the problem. After I saw the accident, I learned that we should drive at the speed limit and be more careful when driving. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for listening.

Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-11-06 12:10:35 UTC

DONE!

NGHI XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher and friends, My name is Nghi, today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. People always want to be better and I am no exception. It is often said that teeth and hair are the most important when it comes to appearance. For me it's hair, I usually take care of my hair every day after showering. I usually use wax to style my hair after drying it with a blow dryer. The cost to buy a bottle of wax is not too expensive, only 250k a bottle. And a bottle can be used for 3-4 months, so I usually don't need to spend too much money buying cosmetics. I usually go to get my hair cut twice a month at a barber shop called Quân Barbar. The shop is located at 613 Nguyen Van Qua, Quarter 1, District 12, Ho Chi Minh City 700000 and I often go there with my friends to get my hair cut. Although a haircut is a bit expensive at 80,000 VND, in return I find the haircut very beautiful and dedicated. I think plastic surgery is good because it helps people to change their appearance and look better. However, It is very expensive and can be risky. If I had money, I wouldn't have plastic surgery because I'm satisfied with my appearance.

Thanks for listening

Hello teacher and friends! My name is Nghi, and today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. People always want to be better, and I am no exception. It is often said that teeth and hair are the most important when it comes to appearance. For me, it's my hair; I usually take care of it every day after showering. I usually use wax to style my hair after drying it with a blow dryer. A bottle of wax is not too expensive to purchase, costing only 250k per bottle.And a bottle can be used for 3–4 months, so I usually don't need to spend too much money buying cosmetics. I usually go to get my hair cut twice a month at a barber shop called Quân Barbar. The shop is located at 613 Nguyen Van Qua, Quarter 1, District 12, Ho Chi Minh City, 700000, and I often go there with my friends to get my hair cut. Although a haircut is a bit expensive at 80,000 VND, in return, I find the haircut very beautiful and dedicated. I think plastic surgery is good because it helps people change their appearance and look better. However, it is very expensive and can be risky. If I had money, I wouldn't have plastic surgery because I'm satisfied with my appearance.

Thanks for listening.

PS21899-Nguyễn Thị Huyền Trang

trangnthps21899 — 2022-11-06 13:37:00 UTC

DONE!
TRANG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about my take care of appearance.
I am very satisfied with my appearance. I very often take care of my appearance. Every night before going to bed I will take care of my skin step by step such as removing makeup, washing my face then I will apply toner, moisturizing essence and moisturizer before going to bed. For my hair I use shampoo and conditioner every 2 days. As for my teeth, I only brush my teeth in the morning and at night. I use cosmetic lines from Cetaphil brand for skin, for hair I use Pantene brand, and for teeth I use Colgate toothpaste. I spend about 1 million VND for a cosmetic purchase. I don't go to salons and spas very often. I only go there once every 2 months for my hair and nails. My favorite salon is Sinh Anh Hair Salon Go Vap. Salon is located at 1051 Phan Van Tri, Ward 10, Go Vap, Ho Chi Minh City. I often go there with you. I use the service of shampooing, cutting hair, dyeing hair and it costs 7 hundred VND. I think plastic surgery is both good and bad. The advantage of plastic surgery is that it gives self-confidence. Its disadvantages are health effects and complications in the elderly, the cost of surgery is too expensive and sometimes it does not bring a satisfactory result. If I have money, I will not have plastic surgery for fear of affecting my health.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

Hello teacher, I'm Trang. Today, I would like to talk about my appearance.
I am very satisfied with my appearance. I very often take care of my appearance. Every night before going to bed, I will take care of my skin step by step, such as by removing my makeup, washing my face, and then applying toner, moisturizing essence, and moisturizer before going to bed. For my hair, I use shampoo and conditioner every 2 days. As for my teeth, I only brush them in the morning and at night. For my skin, I use Cetaphil cosmetic lines; for my hair, I use Pantene; and for my teeth, I use Colgate toothpaste.I spent about 1 million VND on a cosmetic purchase. I don't go to salons and spas very often. I only go there once every two months for my hair and nails. Sinh Anh Hair Salon Go Vap is my favorite salon. The salon is located at 1051 Phan Van Tri, Ward 10, Go Vap, Ho Chi Minh City. I often go there with my friends. I use the service of shampooing, cutting hair, and dyeing hair, and it costs 7 hundred VND. I think plastic surgery is both good and bad. The benefit of plastic surgery is that it gives me confidence. Its harmful effects are health effects and complications in the elderly; surgery costs are too expensive; and sometimes it doesn't give the desired results. If I have money, I will not have plastic surgery for fear of affecting my health.
That is my topic. Thanks for listening!

Ps23248- Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-11-06 14:17:19 UTC

DONE!
KIỆN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, My name is Kien, today I will talk about my good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my driving experience. I know how to drive a motorbike and I have been driving a motorbike for 4 years. I have a motorbike at home, but it is owned by my mother, not mine and I am not a good motorbike driver either. Second, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits while driving. Examples of good habits: pay attention, observing speed limits, signaling other drivers, and maintaining a safe distance below. Examples of bad habits: are speeding, swerving, talking on the phone, texting while driving, weaving through traffic, etc. I have a good habit of just observing the speed limit, driving a car, etc. while driving another car and my bad habit is using electricity while driving. In the end, it was about an accident that I saw. it was near my school. It happened when I got home. No one was injured in the accident, but their car was damaged quite a bit. I didn't see anyone get hurt much and many people were helping them so I got over it. I think people need to pay attention and focus when driving and not exceed the speed limit. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe, and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. That is the end of my speech. Thanks for your listening

Hello teacher, My name is Kien, and today I will talk about my good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my driving experience. I know how to drive a motorbike, and I have been driving a motorbike for 4 years. I have a motorbike at home, but it is owned by my mother, not mine, and I am not a good motorbike driver either. Second, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits. Examples of good habits include paying attention, observing speed limits, signaling other drivers, and maintaining a safe distance. Examples of bad habits are speeding, swerving, talking on the phone, texting while driving, weaving through traffic, etc. I have the good habit of just observing the speed limit, driving a car, etc. while driving another car, and my bad habit is using electricity while driving. In the end, it was about an accident that I saw. It was near my school. It happened when I got home. No one was injured in the accident, but their car was damaged quite a bit. I didn't see anyone get hurt much, and many people were helping them, so I got over it. I think people need to pay attention and focus when driving and not exceed the speed limit. In conclusion, I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. That is the end of my speech. Thanks for your listening.

PS23575 - Nguyễn Sơn Nam

namnsps23575 — 2022-11-06 15:24:05 UTC

DONE!
NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

hello teacher and friends, my name is Nam and today I will talk about topic number 4 which is about good and bad habits when driving. first i know how to ride a motorbike, i have been riding a motorbike for 2 years now and i have a motorbike at home, i think i am a good motorbike driver, because i always maintain the allowed speed and always care close to the road. when driving, but to talk about bad habits, it can be mentioned: following behind, using the phone, running a red light ..., and when driving is considered the most dangerous when driving: speeding, simply because this is very easy to get yourself into an accident, as well as cause accidents to others. and as I said above my driving habit is to always keep the speed limit and always watch when driving. Next we will talk about the accident, I witnessed an accident between 2 motorbikes happening in front of my school gate and at 11am there was an accident that caused 2 drivers to fall onto the road. and suffered minor injuries, 2 motorcycles were scratched, at that time I asked someone to take me to the hospital to help, and I lifted the motorbike to help them, and the lesson that I learned after the accident. : we always need to keep the allowed speed as well as pay attention when driving. Finally, the bad driving habits that drivers need to avoid are speeding, running red lights and not paying attention while driving.

Thank you teacher and everyone for listeningto me!

Hello teacher and friends! My name is Nam, and today I will talk about topic number 4, which is about good and bad habits when driving. First, I know how to ride a motorbike; I have been riding a motorbike for 2 years now, and I have one at home. I think I am a good motorbikedriver because I always maintain the allowed speed and stay close to the road. When driving, however, the following bad habits can be mentioned: following behind, using the phone, running a red light, etc., and when driving is considered the most dangerous, speeding, simply because it is very easy to get into an accident and cause accidents to others. And as I said above, my driving habit is to always keep the speed limit and to always watch when driving. Next, we will talk about the accident. I witnessed an accident between 2 motorbikes happening in front of my school gate, and at 11 a.m. there was an accident that caused 2 drivers to fall onto the road. and suffered minor injuries; two motorbikes were scratched. At that time, I asked someone to take me to the hospital to help, and I lifted the motorcycle to help them. The lesson I learned from the accident is that we must always drive at the speed limit and pay attention while driving. Finally, the bad driving habits that drivers need to avoid are speeding, running redlights, and not paying attention while driving.

Thank you, teacher, and everyone else for listening to me!

PS23575 - Nguyễn Sơn Nam

namnsps23575 — 2022-11-06 15:49:05 UTC

DONE!

NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

hello teacher and everyone, my name is Nam and today I will talk about topic number 5, which is about how to take care of my appearance. First of all, to say this, I am not satisfied with my current appearance, because I feel that my face is full of acne and my weight is quite high, I take care of my appearance. every day I usually brush my teeth at bedtime and after waking up, I shower and wash and dry my hair once a day, I usually use clear brand to wash my hair, collgate to brush my teeth ,.., I rarely use cosmetics, I usually go to the barber shop once every 2 months, and my barber shop is called "Minh Hai", located in Ialy town, Gia Lai Province, and I often go there to cut my hair alone, every time I come here, the tool that the owner often gives me is a hair clipper, and each time I cut my hair like that, I have to pay 30,000 VND. Next, I feel that the advantage of plastic surgery is that it makes someone more beautiful and confident, and the disadvantage as well as the bad point of plastic surgery is that it causes the person's health to deteriorate. and more likely to suffer from many diseases in old age. And lastly, if I had a lot of money, I wouldn't have had plastic surgery because in my opinion, everyone's natural beauty is the purest beauty.

Thank you teachers and everyone for listening to me!

Hello, teacher, and everyone! My name is Nam, and today I will talk about topic number 5, which is about how to take care of my appearance. First of all, to say this, I am not satisfied with my current appearance because I feel that my face is full of acne and my weight is quite high. I take care of my appearance. Every day I usually brush my teeth at bedtime, and after waking up, I shower, wash, and dry my hair once a day. I usually use Clear brand to wash my hair, Colgate to brush my teeth, and I rarely use cosmetics. I usually go to the barber shop once every 2 months, and my barber shop is called "Minh Hai," located in Ialy town, Gia Lai Province, and I often go there to cut my hair alone. Every time I come here, the tool that the owner often gives me is a hair clipper, and each time I have to pay 30,000 VND. Next, I feel that the advantage of plastic surgery is that it makes someone more beautiful and confident, and the disadvantage as well as the bad point of plastic surgery is that it causes the person's health to deteriorate and more likely to suffer from many diseases in old age. And lastly, if I had a lot of money, I wouldn't have had plastic surgery because, in my opinion, everyone's natural beauty is the purest beauty.

Thank you, teachers, and everyone for listening to me!

PS23314-Nguyễn Anh Khoa

2022-11-06 16:42:58 UTC

DONE!
KHOA XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, my name is Khoa. Today I will talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. On the last vacation, I and my family have stayed at Vung Tau one day. And we booked a family room size at Annata Beach Hotel, it located at 165 Thùy Vân, phường Thắng Tam. The room I stayed in have two twin beds and outside the window is the Vung Tau beach. In this room have some facilities like two lamp, a TV, a bathroom and a minibar or you can use some service like order food and drink at room, housekeeping, rent some clothes... After checkout the room it cost me 60usd, but satisfied with it, the service and the view is so good. I will comeback here soon on next vacation. Thank for listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Khoa. Today I will talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. On our last vacation, I and my family stayed at Vung Tau one day. We also reserved a family room at the Annata Beach Hotel on 165 Thùy Vân, Thắng Tam Ward. The room I stayed in had two twin beds, and outside the window was the Vung Tau beach. You have two lamps, a TV, a bathroom, and a minibar in this room, and you can also order food and drinks to your room, request housekeeping, rent some clothes, and so on.The room cost me $ 60 after I checked out, but I was happy with it because the service and view were so good. I will come back here soon on my next vacation. Thank you for listening.

PS23253-Nguyễn Hồ Bảo Duy

2022-11-06 21:31:52 UTC

DONE!
DUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, Today i will talk about a hotel that you have stayed in.The last time I stayed at the hotel was 3 years ago during summer vacation. That hotel is called HAHA. Address at Alley 261, Ly Thai To, Ben San, Nhon Trach, Dong Nai. The location of the hotel is very good, the scenery outside is very beautiful at night. I chose the single room because I wanted to be alone. Room rate is 250,000 VND for one night. The minibar has mineral water and cool towels. The hotel has housekeeping service, laundry,... I used the shuttle service to tourist attractions and housekeeping, laundry service. The room has bed, air conditioner, night light, table and chairs. I am very satisfied with my stay because the staff at the hotel are most enthusiastic and attentive. The entrance to the hotel is a bit narrow, making me feel very uncomfortable. I will recommend to my friends if they travel there

Hello teacher, Today I will talk about a hotel that you have stayed in. The last time I stayed at the hotel was three years ago during summer vacation. That hotel is called Haha. Address: Alley 261, Ly Thai To, Ben San, Nhon Trach, Dong Nai The location of the hotel is very good, and the scenery outside is very beautiful at night. I chose the single room because I wanted to be alone. The room rate is 250,000 VND for one night. The minibar has mineral water and cool towels. The hotel has housekeeping service, laundry service,... I used the shuttle service to go to tourist attractions and for housekeeping and laundry service. The room has a bed, an air conditioner, a nightlight, a table, and chairs. I am very satisfied with my stay because the staff at the hotel is most enthusiastic and attentive. The entrance to the hotel is a bit narrow, making me feel very uncomfortable. I will recommend it to my friends if they travel there.

PS26548_Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Thuận

thuannnmps26548 — 2022-11-07 03:13:50 UTC

DONE!
THUẬN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hi teacher Sum, my name is Thuan. Today let's talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I wanna share with you my riding experiences. I can ride a motorbike and I have been riding a motorbike since I was 18 and of course, I have my own motorbike at home. I would assume that I'm a good motorbike rider. Secondly, I would like to talk about some good and bad driving habits. We can obviously see some good habits such as following the speed limit, activating your light signals, and most importantly, always paying attention while on the road. On the contrary, some bad habits we can list like honking your horns at someone, texting while driving, or speeding, which I find the most dangerous behavior while driving. Finally, about an accident that I've seen/heard about recently. Honestly, that's happening anywhere and anytime. It was an accident so clearly, someone might get hurt. I think we all should follow the driving rules in order to stay safe not only for ourselves but also for everyone else. That's all I wanna share, thanks for listening.

Hi teacher Sum, My name is Thuan. Today, let's talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experiences. I can ride a motorbike, and I have been riding one since I was 18; of course, I have my own motorbike at home. I would assume that I'm a good motorbike rider. Secondly, I would like to talk about some good and bad driving habits. We can obviously see some good habits such as following the speed limit, activating your light signals, and most importantly, always paying attention while on the road. On the contrary, some bad habits we can list are honking your horn at someone, texting while driving, or speeding, which I find to be the most dangerous behavior while driving. Finally, about an accident that I've seen or heard about recently: Honestly, that's happening anywhere and anytime. It was an accident, so clearly someone might get hurt. I think we all should follow the driving rules in order to stay safe, not only for ourselves but also for everyone else. That's all I want to share; thanks for listening.

PS26548_Nguyễn Ngọc Minh Thuận

thuannnmps26548 — 2022-11-07 03:14:31 UTC

DONE!

THUẬN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hi teacher Sum, my name is Thuan, and today I will talk about how I take care of my appearance. First of all, I wanna share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I consider outer beauty can play an important role in someone’s life. It makes people feel more confident. To be honest, I’m satisfied with my appearance. I take care of my own appearance every day. Brushing my teeth twice a day after getting up and before going to bed, using shampoo for my hair when showering and skin lotion at night. I don’t spend too much money on those cosmetic products. Secondly, the place I usually go to take care of my hair is a barbershop. I go to the barbershop once every month. It’s a local shop near my home and I always make it alone by myself. Usually, I go to the shop to have my hair cut, which costs me 80k vnd each time. Finally, talking about cosmetic surgery, I find it unnecessary to do such things. It can no doubt enhance the appearance and improve confidence. However, it doesn’t always meet expectations and some mistakes can happen which leads to the risk of death. Also, it’s too expensive and requires a long recovery time. In conclusion, I would say that people should take care of their appearance so they can have better looks, feel more confident, and be more successful in their lives. However, people shouldn’t abuse cosmetic surgery because it can be dangerous at some point. That is the end of my speech, Thank you for your listening.

Hi teacher Summy!, My name is Thuan, and today I will talk about how I take care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I consider that outer beauty can play an important role in someone’s life. It makes people feel more confident. To be honest, I’m satisfied with my appearance. I take care of my own appearance every day. I brush my teeth twice a day after getting up and before going to bed, use shampoo for my hair when showering, and apply skin lotion at night. I don’t spend too much money on those cosmetic products. Secondly, the place I usually go to take care of my hair is a barbershop. I go to the barbershop once every month. It’s a local shop near my home, and I always make it by myself. Usually, I go to the shop to have my hair cut, which costs me 80K VND each time. Finally, talking about cosmetic surgery, I find it unnecessary to do such things. It can undeniably improve one's appearance and confidence.However, it doesn’t always meet expectations, and some mistakes can happen, which leads to the risk of death. Also, it’s too expensive and requires a long recovery time. In conclusion, I would say that people should take care of their appearance so they can have better looks, feel more confident, and be more successful in their lives. However, people shouldn’t abuse cosmetic surgery because it can be dangerous at some point. That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Ps24968 Trần Thế Đức

2022-11-07 03:20:03 UTC

First of all, I would like to talk about some common ways of greetings in Vietnam. Vietnamese people usually greet each other by by joining hands and bowing slightly to each other. I usually greet the elderly by bowing with crossed arms in front of the chest or simply bowing. For my friends or younger people, I just greet by waving, patting each other's shoulders or smiling at each other. Shaking hands is also a way of greeting in Vietnam. I often do the handshaking with my clients. I like firm handshakes because it can show certainty between two parties.

Secondly, I'm talking about the exchanging business cards. Exchanging business cards is really common in Vietnam. Vietnamese people exchange their business cards in formal and informal ways. In formal ways, people give cards with two hands and look at the card carefully to others. In informal ways, they just give their cards with one hand and quickly put it in their pocket to others. I often give my business cards with two hands and receive people's cards with one hand. On my business card, I always put my name, company name, location, job and phone.

Thirdly, I want to mention about small talks. Vietnamese often have small talks about daily drama, politics,ect . When I have a chit-chat with my friends, I often avoid talking about others people.

Finally, it is about gestures. In each country, gestures have different meaning. In Vietnam, some common gestures are nodding, bowing, shaking one's head,ect. When you give a thumb-up, it means they're doing somthing good . Pointing at someone with a finger is not polite and just do this with peole younger than you. With people older than you, you should palm up your hand.

That is the end of my speaking. Thank you for your listening.

Hello, Ms. Tran! My name is Duc. Today, I would like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

First of all, I would like to talk about some common ways of greeting in Vietnam. Vietnamese people usually greet each other by joining hands and bowing slightly. I usually greet the elderly by bowing with crossed arms in front of the chest or simply bowing. For my friends or younger people, I just greet each other by waving, patting each other's shoulders, or smiling at each other. Shaking hands is also a way of greeting in Vietnam. I often do the handshake with my clients. I like firm handshakes because they can show certainty between two parties.

Secondly, I'm talking about exchanging business cards. Exchanging business cards is really common in Vietnam. Vietnamese people exchange their business cards in formal and informal ways. People give cards with two hands in formal situations, and they carefully examine the card before passing it on to others.They simply hand out their cards with one hand and quickly put them in their pockets.I often give my business cards with two hands and receive other people's cards with one hand. On my business card, I always put my name, company name, location, job, and phone number.

Third, I'd like to bring up small talk.Vietnamese often have small talks about daily drama, politics, etc. When I have a chit-chat with my friends, I often avoid talking about other people.

Finally, it is about gestures. In each country, gestures have different meanings. In Vietnam, some common gestures are nodding, bowing, shaking one's head, etc. When you give someone a thumbs up, it means they're doing something good. Pointing at someone with a finger is not polite; just do this with people younger than you. With people older than you, you should palm up your hand.

That is the end of my speaking. Thank you for listening.

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-07 03:41:38 UTC

DONE!
NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I would like to talk about my topic that is my favorite movie. First of all, I like watching movie and I always watch movie with my family at home, and sometimes I go to watch movie with my friends at the movie theater on special events. And we like eating popcorn and drinking soft drink like Coca-Cola for example. Besides that, my genres of movies I like the most are animated film and comedy because they are so hilarious and make me feel relaxed after studying hard. Besides that, those films are very short time about 15 – 20 minutes and divide into many episodes which don’t make me feel boring. Furthermore, some of films give me different emotions. For example, Tom and Jerry or Mr. Bean film make me laugh a lot. Because the characters are so funny and act so silly like a clown, and also the film like Snow White and seven dwarfs make me very upset, but I have learnt the lesson from this film that is never be jealous and try to eliminate someone else even though they’re better than you about their looks or personality. And I would like to watch this movie again, because I want to learn more good things about Snow White and bring this story to my friend that they can learn something from this story. That’s all my topic I want to share with you. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I would like to talk about my topic, which is my favorite movie. First of all, I like watching movies, and I always watch movies with my family at home, and sometimes I go to watch movies with my friends at the movie theater on special occasions. And we like eating popcorn and drinking soft drinks like Coca-Cola, for example. Besides that, the genres of movies I like the most are animated films and comedies because they are so hilarious and make me feel relaxed after studying hard. Besides that, those films are very short—about 15–20 minutes—and divided into many episodes, which don’t make me feel bored. Furthermore, some films give me different emotions. For example, the Tom and Jerry or Mr. Bean films make me laugh a lot. Because the characters are so amusing and act like clowns, and because films like Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs make me so angry, I learned a lesson from this film: never be jealous and try to eliminate someone else, even if they are better than you in terms of looks or personality. And I would like to watch this movie again because I want to learn more good things about Snow White and bring this story to my friend so that they can learn something from this story. That’s all the information I want to share with you. Thank you for listening

Đại Dương - PS24721

2022-11-07 04:30:43 UTC

DONE!
DƯƠNG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Dương and today I’d like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

Greetings is a first thing you’ll do when you meet someone and that could make a comfortable atmosphere, present that you’re a friendly person. There’s a lot of ways to greet other people in Vietnam, to someone that same age as you or younger, you could shake hand, say “hi” or smile and nod your head. For elder people or one who have higher position at work, you should do a bow, say formal greetings and introduce yourself first. Greetings to your friends is more comfortable, you can tap on their shoulder, hug, call their name or even do a “special handshake” between best friends. When greeting to people, I usually bow then lightly shake hands and say something nice about them.

At work places, after greetings, people usually exchange their business cards. On business card will be their name, contact details, company’s name and could have a short paragraph to describe about them. I’m also prepare business cards with my simple personal information and exchange them to people I first meet. I’ll put my business cards in my left pocket and hand it to other with left hand while receive one with my right hand and put to separate pocket, to older people or one who have higher position, I’ll give my business card by two hands first and then receive also by two hands.

Vietnamese people would have a small talk after greetings. Work, family and news are topics people often talk about. A small talk could also a compliment, asking about something, there’s a lot of topics for a small talk but I think it’s some topics we shouldn’t talk about like salary, body condition and sensitive topics like politics for example.

And last thing I would like to talk about is gestures. Gestures can have different meaning in different countries, but as much as I know, most of gestures in Vietnam have the same meaning as most part of the world except for crossing middle and index fingers which mean “for luck” can have a sensitive meaning in Vietnam. other than that, I think it's safe for using most of popular gestures in Vietnam like a thumb-up have a compliment meaning or make a circle with index and thumb fingers mean “ok”.

That is, it’s all I have to share about Vietnamese gestures and customs, thank you for listening/reading.

Hello teacher, my name is Dương, and today I’d like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

Greetings are the first thing you’ll do when you meet someone, and that could create a comfortable atmosphere by showing that you’re a friendly person. There are a lot of ways to greet other people in Vietnam. To someone the same age as you or younger, you could shake hands, say "hi," or smile and nod your head. For elder people or those who have a higher position at work, you should do a bow, say formal greetings, and introduce yourself first. Greeting your friends is more comfortable; you can tap on their shoulder, hug, call their name, or even do a "special handshake" between best friends. When greeting people, I usually bow, then lightly shake hands and say something nice about them.

At work places, after greetings, people usually exchange their business cards. Their name, contact information, and company name will be printed on the business card, along with a brief description of themselves.I also prepare business cards with my simple personal information and exchange them with people I first meet. I'll put my business cards in my left pocket and hand them to others with my left hand, while receiving one with my right hand and putting it in a separate pocket; to older people or those in positions of authority, I'll give my business card with two hands first, then receive it with two hands as well.

Following greetings, Vietnamese people would engage in small talk.Work, family, and news are topics people often talk about. A small talk could also be a compliment, asking about something; there are a lot of topics for a small talk, but I think there are some we shouldn’t talk about, like salary, body condition, and sensitive topics like politics, for example.

And the last thing I would like to talk about is gestures. Gestures can have different meaning in different countries, but as far as I know, most gestures in Vietnam have the same meaning as those in most other parts of the world, except for crossing the middle and index fingers, which can have a sensitive meaning in Vietnam. Aside from that, I believe it is safe to use most popular Vietnamese gestures, such as a thumbs-up with a compliment meaning or making a circle with your index and thumb fingers to mean "ok."

That’s all I have to share about Vietnamese gestures and customs; thank you for listening or reading.

Ps23248- Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-11-09 03:16:20 UTC

DONE!
KIỆN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hi, my name is Kien. Today I want to talk about my favorite movie. First, I want to say that I like to watch movies and I often watch action movies. Second, I want to talk about my favorite movie, it's called Venom and which was released in 2018. It's an action movie genre, an hour-long movie and it's about a mysterious reporter guy. Eddie. Brock. secretly tracked down the evil plot of an organization and got infected with the symbiote and he turned into a dangerous Venom monster, and I love that character. Third, I want to mention the place and the people I watch with. I usually watch movies in my room with my friends and we often watch them together in our free time. we like to have snacks and soft drinks while watching movies. In the end, it's about the experience. I didn't learn anything from the movie, I just watched it for fun and I probably won't watch this movie again because I've seen it so many times. Conclusion Finally, I will say that the movie is really good. That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Hi, my name is Kien. Today I want to talk about my favorite movie. First, I want to say that I like to watch movies, and I often watch action movies. Second, I want to talk about my favorite movie, which is called Venom and was released in 2018. It's an action movie genre, an hour-long movie, and it's about a mysterious reporter guy. Eddie Brock secretly tracked down the evil plot of an organization and got infected with the symbiote, and he turned into a dangerous Venom monster, and I love that character. Third, I want to mention the place and the people I watch with. I usually watch movies in my room with my friends, and we often watch them together in our free time. We like to have snacks and soft drinks while watching movies. In the end, it's about the experience. I didn't learn anything from the movie; I just watched it for fun, and I probably won't watch this movie again because I've seen it so many times. Conclusion Finally, I will say that the movie is really good. That is the end of my speech. Thank you for listening.

PS21901_Nguyễn Đức Huy

huyndps21901 — 2022-11-09 15:37:22 UTC

DONE!
HUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits.
First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience,. I have been driving it since I was 18 and I have my own motorbike at home. I would consume that I am a good motorbike rider.
Second, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits. There are many examples of good drive at the right speed, wear a helmet and stay in the right lane and pay attention.
There are many examples of bad driving habits that I know such as some people not wearing helmets, not stop a red lights, not signal when turning. The most dangerous driving behavior is talking on the phone while driving. I usually have a good habit of paying attention.
Finally, it's about an accident that I saw about recently. This is an accident between a bus and a motorcycle. It injured 2 motorcyclists. And the motorcycle was completely destroyed. When I got into that accident I was just a passerby doing nothing, I learned from seeing such an accident that I shouldn't drive fast. Drivers need to accept good traffic regulations

Thanks you teacher for reading.

Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits.
First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I have been driving it since I was 18, and I have my own motorbike at home. I would say that I am a good motorbike rider.
Second, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits. There are many examples of good driving: driving at the right speed, wearing a helmet, staying in the right lane, and paying attention. There are many examples of bad driving habits that I know, such as some people not wearing helmets, not stopping at red lights, and not signaling when turning. The most dangerous driving behavior is talking on the phone while driving. I usually have a good habit of paying attention.
Finally, it's about an accident that I saw recently. This is an accident between a bus and a motorcycle. It injured two motorcyclists. And the motorcycle was completely destroyed. When I got into that accident, I was just a passerby doing nothing. I learned from seeing such an accident that I shouldn't drive fast. Drivers need to accept good traffic regulations.

Thank you, teacher, for reading.

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-10 04:10:25 UTC

DONE! THANKS FOR POSTING THE PHOTO!
NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello everyone, my name is Nam. Today I would like to talk about my topic that is good and bad driving habits. First of all, I have my own motorbike at home, and I have ridden for one year. I think I’m a good moto biker, before I drive a motorbike, I have learnt a lot of experience from my family who teach me how to drive well so that I can avoid many accidents in my life, but sometimes I still make mistakes. For example, I speeded while driving and didn’t stop at the red light because I was afraid of being late for school.

Besides that, there are some good driving habits in my life such as pay attention, observe the speed limit and maintain the safe following distance, but on the other hand, there are some bad driving habits I have known when I’m driving like not stop at the red light, weave through traffic, speeding and so on and weave through traffic is the most dangerous driving behavior. For example, when I’m driving on my way to school, and suddenly someone weaves through traffic on their left or right instead of going straight, and try to cut me off, if I don’t stop my car immediately, I will hit their car and make a big accident for us. So, for me I usually pay attention and observe the speed limit and also other signs when I’m driving.

Furthermore, when it comes to accident, there was an accident near my house in the morning. That is the person who drove motorbike hit the car and fortunately, nobody was hurt but the bumper and headlight were damaged and need to be replaced and I knew the cause for accident. He had a bad driving behavior that is using smartphone while driving so that he didn’t pay attention in front of him and consequently, he didn’t stop the motorbike and hit the car.

Lastly, after that accident I have learnt something about driving that I should concentrate in front of the road and shouldn’t be distracted by smartphone I can use it later after I drive motorbike. Because there is a lot of danger surrounding me and if I don’t pay attention, I will get injured by hitting car or motorbike. And I hope everyone will have good driving habits and avoid bad driving habits.

That’s all I want to share with you about my topic. Thank you for listening to me.

Hello everyone, my name is Nam. Today I would like to talk about my topic, which is good and bad driving habits. First of all, I have my own motorbike at home, and I have ridden for one year. Before I started riding a motorbike, I learned a lot from my family, who taught me how to drive well so that I could avoid many accidents in my life, but I still made mistakes. For example, I speeded while driving and didn’t stop at the red light because I was afraid of being late for school.

Besides that, there are some good driving habits in my life, such as paying attention, observing the speed limit, and maintaining a safe following distance, but on the other hand, there are some bad driving habits I have known when I’m driving, like not stopping at the red light, weaving through traffic, speeding, and so on, and weaving through traffic is the most dangerous driving behavior. For example, when I’m driving on my way to school and suddenly someone weaves through traffic on their left or right instead of going straight and tries to cut me off, if I don’t stop my car immediately, I will hit their car and make a big accident for us. So, for me, I usually pay attention and observe the speed limit and also other signs when I’m driving.

Furthermore, when it comes to accidents, there was an accident near my house in the morning. That is the person who drove the motorbike that hit the car, and fortunately, nobody was hurt, but the bumper and headlight were damaged and needed to be replaced, and I knew the cause of the accident. He had bad driving habits, such as texting while driving, so he didn't pay attention to what was in front of him, and as a result, he didn't stop the motorbike and crashed into the car.

Lastly, after that accident, I have learned something about driving: I should concentrate on the road and shouldn’t be distracted by my smartphone. I can use it later, after I drive a motorbike. Because there is a lot of danger surrounding me, and if I don’t pay attention, I will get injured by hitting a car or motorbike. And I hope everyone will have good driving habits and avoid bad ones.

That’s all I want to share with you about my topic. Thank you for listening to me.

PD06547_QUOCPHUONG

2022-11-10 10:34:58 UTC

DONE! NICE PHOTO!
PHƯƠNG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello everyone and teacher my name is Phuong , today I will talk about good and bad driving habits . First I want to talk about my riding experience , I can ride a motobike and I riding motobike for 2 year , I have a motobike at home , it is air blade .I’m a simple rider and I’m a good motobike rider. Second I would talk about a good and bad driving habit , the examples of good driving habit are pay attention , observe the speed limit , maintain a safe following distance , I think so . The examples of bad driving habit are speed , tailgate , talk on the phone , text while driving , weave through traffic not stop at red light , not signal when turning . I think the most dangerous driving behavior is speed because it will cause a serious accident and deadly . I’m a simple and good rider so I usually have a good driving habit . Finally it is about an accident that I’ve seen about recently . The accident in Truong Chinh street , it was last night , one person hurt but no damage . I called 115 when I see accident . After saw of the accident i learn I’m should pay attention while driving . I think the motobike rider avoid talk on the phone , drinking beer and alcoholic drink while driving . Thank for listening

Hello everyone and teacher, my name is Phuong, and today I will talk about good and bad driving habits. First, I'd like to discuss my riding experience: I can ride a motorbike and have been doing so for two years; I have an air blade at home. I’m a simple rider, and I’m a good motorbike rider. Second, I'd like to discuss good and bad driving habits. Good driving habits include paying attention, obeying speed limits, and maintaining a safe following distance. Speeding, tailgating, talking on the phone, texting while driving, weaving through traffic, failing to stop at red lights, and failing to signal when turning are all examples of bad driving habits. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is speed, because it will cause a serious accident and be deadly. I’m a simple and good rider, so I usually have a good driving habit. Finally, it is about an accident that I’ve seen recently. Last night's accident on Truong Chinh Street injured one person but caused no damage. When I saw the accident, I dialed 115. After witnessing the accident, I realized I needed to pay more attention while driving. Motorbike riders, in my opinion, should avoid talking on the phone and drinking beer or alcoholic beverages while driving. Thank you for listening.

PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-11-10 12:13:48 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, today I would like to talk about my favorite movie. First of all, I want to say that I am a person who likes to watch movies. I like watching movies like sci-fi, comedy, horror, action... Secondly, I would like to talk about favorite movie is Titanic is an American epic disaster romantic film released on December, 19th 1997. The movie is about 3 hours long and Titanic is one of the most famous kinds of romantic films which was directed by James Cameron. The film talks about the love story of Rose and Jack. Jack was a poor painter but he got a ticket for Titanic. Rose was from American and was engaged to a man. She was reluctant to marry him. She met Jack in Titanic and they fell deeply in love even there was a huge gap between them. However, during a sea voyage, the ship collided with an iceberg. Its face was broken and the ship was flooded. Many died including Jack. Rose survived because Jack helped her get on the boat. Jack sacrificed himself for Rose. Although it is just a classic sad love story, it includes a lot of emotions, especially deep about love. I watched the movie at home alone and I watched on the weekend. I would like to eat popcorn and drink pepsi while watching movie. Finally, This movie is based on a true story about a ship. Although it is just a movie, it has given me a feeling of eternal love. It felt like it was in my heart. Although it has been showing for a long time, when I watch it again, I feel very emotional about that love and I would like to watch the movie again.

Hello teacher, Today I would like to talk about my favorite movie. First of all, I want to say that I am a person who likes to watch movies. I like watching movies like sci-fi, comedy, horror, action... Secondly, I would like to talk about my favorite movie, which is Titanic is an American epic disaster romantic film released on December 19, 1997. The movie is about 3 hours long, and Titanic is one of the most famous kinds of romantic films. It was directed by James Cameron. The film talks about the love story of Rose and Jack. Jack was a poor painter, but he got a ticket for the Titanic. Rose was from America and was engaged to a man. She was reluctant to marry him. She met Jack on the Titanic, and despite the vast distance between them, they fell deeply in love. However, during a sea voyage, the ship collided with an iceberg. Its face was broken, and the ship was flooded. Many died, including Jack. Rose survived because Jack helped her get on the boat. Jack sacrificed himself for Rose. Although it is just a classic sad love story, it includes a lot of emotions, especially deep ones about love. On the weekend, I watched the movie by myself at home. I would like to eat popcorn and drink Pepsi while watching movies. Finally, this movie is based on a true story about a ship. Although it is just a movie, it has given me a feeling of eternal love. It felt like it was in my heart. Although it has been showing for a long time, when I watch it again, I feel very emotional about that love, and I would like to watch the movie again.

PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-11-10 12:16:34 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Bao. Today, I would like to talk about take care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident in themselves. You will impress and attractive other people by inner beauty, appearance and your behaviors. I often take care of my teeth by brushing teeth two times a day and dental floss. I often use toothpaste P/S for my teeth. And I usually use cleanser for my skin. I don't usually spend a lot of money on cosmetics. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually to go to take care of my appearance barbershop. I often go to barbershop once every 2 months and I often go to get a haircut near my house. I often go to barbershop alone. The services when I go to the barbershop are haircut and care, shaving and masking and I usually pay about 80k -100k for the service. Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery I think cosmetic surgery is good. It's helps everyone change outner and be more good-looking. Cosmetic surgery can change your outer beauty and you can have good appearance is shorter time, but it is very expensive and can have health risks/consequences. If I have money. I don't do cosmetic surgery. I will use it for other things which are more meaningful. Thank for reading.

Hello teacher, My name is Bao. Today, I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident in themselves. Your inner beauty, appearance, and behaviors will all impress and attract others. I often take care of my teeth by brushing them twice a day and using dental floss. For my teeth, I frequently use P&S toothpaste. And I usually use cleanser for my skin. I don't usually spend a lot of money on cosmetics. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance: the barbershop. I often go to the barbershop once every 2 months, and I often go to get a haircut near my house. I often go to the barbershop alone. The services I get when I go to the barbershop are a haircut and care, shaving, and masking, and I usually pay about $80–$100 for the service. Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery. I think cosmetic surgery is good. It helps everyone change their appearance and be more attractive. Cosmetic surgery can change your outer beauty, and you can have a good appearance in a shorter time, but it is very expensive and can have health risks or consequences. If I have money I don't do cosmetic surgery. I will use it for other things that are more meaningful. Thank you for reading

PS24728-Nguyễn Văn Bảo

2022-11-10 12:17:27 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, today would like to talk about a hotel that you have stayed in. It's Muong Thanh hote I stayed there for two nights.I chose the hotel because of its quality. The cost for a 1-night stay is about 500 000 VNĐ. We booked this hotel online and we got this property at a very reasonable price. We booked a double room, so that we all three members can put up together. The hotel has many services such as free airport shuttle, in-room mini bar, business center, fitness/exercise services, swimming pool and sauna. I would say the services in this hotel were splendid. When the bellman spotted us at the revolving door, he immediately came and helped us with the luggage. He carefully instructed us on how to get to our room and noted the hotel’s hotline in case of emergency. One of the things that I loved most about this hotel was the amenities. The dental kits were sufficient for three of us, and the bristles of the toothbrushes were super soft.. In the room there is a small fridge, a wardrobe, a television and most importantly there is a balcony. I especially like the balcony here because it has a very nice view.I can see the whole city while on the balcony. This hotel is very good and I have nothing to complain however I have little dislike for the toothpaste here because it tastes so bad. Near the resort I can visit the tourist attractions in this place, swim, take pictures and many more. Thanks for reading

Hello teacher, Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that you have stayed in. It's Muong Thanh Hoa. I stayed there for two nights. I chose the hotel because of its quality. The cost for a 1-night stay is about 500 000 VND. We booked this hotel online, and we got this property at a very reasonable price. We booked a double room so that all three of us could put up together. The hotel has many services, such as a free airport shuttle, an in-room minibar, a business center, fitness and exercise services, a swimming pool, and a sauna. This hotel's services were excellent, in my opinion. When the bellman spotted us at the revolving door, he immediately came and helped us with the luggage. He carefully explained how to get to our room and gave us the hotel's emergency phone number. One of the things that I loved most about this hotel was its amenities. The dental kits were sufficient for three of us, and the bristles of the toothbrushes were super soft. In the room there is a small fridge, a wardrobe, a television, and most importantly, a balcony. I especially like the balcony here because it has a very nice view. I can see the whole city from the balcony. This hotel is very good, and I have nothing to complain about; however, I have a little dislike for the toothpaste here because it tastes so bad. Near the resort, I can visit the tourist attractions in this place, swim, take pictures, and much more. Thanks for reading.

Hướng Huy -PS23321

huyhhps23321 — 2022-11-10 12:36:37 UTC

DONE!
HUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hi, I'm Huy and today I'm going to talk about good and bad driving habits. I can ride a motorbike. I have been driving a motorbike for 3 years since high school. I have a motorbike. I'm not sure I'm a good driver. Examples of good driving habits are obeying traffic laws and bad driving habits are speeding. Dangerous driving behavior is speeding because when you go too fast you can't control when something happens. The driving habit I have is driving a motorbike with the allowed speed. About the accident, I heard from my friend. That day, me and my friend sat at the coffee shop. He told me that on the way to the coffee shop, he turned on the turn signal to turn into the shop and there was a man who didn't notice the turn signal. He hit him, he fell on the road and got a slight scratch. The driving behavior that drivers should avoid is not paying attention to the turn signals.

Hi, I'm Huy, and today I'm going to talk about good and bad driving habits. I can ride a motorbike. I have been riding a motorbike for 3 years, since high school. I have a motorbike. I'm not sure I'm a good driver. Examples of good driving habits are obeying traffic laws, and examples of bad driving habits are speeding. Dangerous driving behavior is speeding because when you go too fast, you can't control what happens. The driving habit I have is to drive a motorbike at the allowed speed. I heard about the accident from my friend. That day, I and my friend sat at the coffee shop. He told me that on the way to the coffee shop, he turned on the turn signal to turn into the shop, and there was a man who didn't notice the turn signal. He hit him, and he fell on the road and got a slight scratch. The most dangerous driving behavior is failing to pay attention to turn signals.

Hướng Huy - PS23321

huyhhps23321 — 2022-11-10 12:52:27 UTC

DONE!

HUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hi, I'm Huy and I'm going to talk about how I take care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I use face wash in the morning and at night. I use shampoo for my hair, toothpaste for my teeth. For hair I use head and shoulders, for teeth I use sensodyne toothpaste. I don't spend too much money on cosmetic products. I usually go to the barber shop once a month. My favorite barber shop is on To Hien Thanh Street and it's called Tung Barbershop. I cut my hair there since high school so I know the owner and the service I like is shaving. Each haircut costs about 50,000. Regarding cosmetic surgery, I think it's good because it can be changed to the look you want. I will never go to cosmetic surgery because I want to change my appearance.

Hi, I'm Huy, and I'm going to talk about how I take care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I use face wash in the morning and at night. I use shampoo for my hair and toothpaste for my teeth. For hair, I use head and shoulders; for teeth, I use sensodyne toothpaste. I don't spend too much money on cosmetic products. I usually go to the barbershop once a month. My favorite barber shop is on To Hien Thanh Street, and it's called Tung Barbershop. I've cut my hair there since high school, so I know the owner, and the service I like is shaving. Each haircut costs about $50,000. Regarding cosmetic surgery, I think it's good because it can be tailored to the look you want. I will never have cosmetic surgery because I want to change my appearance.

ps24700_nguyenphuongnam

2022-11-10 18:31:42 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I’m going to talk about how to take care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you about how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I take care of my appearance every day, I’m happy with my appearance now. I always take care of my teeth by brushing my teeth twice a day, I usually brush my teeth with P/S toothpaste, and sometimes I will brush my teeth with salt to make my teeth whiter and stronger. In about 3 to 4 months, I will Change my toothbrush once for better oral hygiene. I always take care of my skin and hair every day, I usually wash my face with water. I always shower once or twice a day. I always take care of my hair with a "clear" shampoo, and when I shower I usually use a "romano" shower gel. I don’t spend much money on cosmetic products because I’m confident in my appearance now. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I usually go to the barber shop, I often go to a barbershop once every 2 months and I often go to get a haircut near my house, it is located on Kha Van Can street, I often go to the barbershop alone. When I go to the barber shop, I’d like to have a haircut, shave, and face shave at the barber shop and I usually pay 40k for the service each time. Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery, I think cosmetic surgery is good because it makes you would look more desirable, One good point is it would make you younger when you get old,… but it is very expensive and can have health risks/consequences because there may be something wrong in the operation. If I had enough money, I would spend on other things but not cosmetic surgery because It risks my life. I would say that people should take care of their appearance so they can have better looks feel more confident and be more successful in their lives. However, people shouldn’t abuse cosmetic surgery because it can be dangerous. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Nam. Today I’m going to talk about how to take care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I take care of my appearance every day, and I’m happy with it now. I always take care of my teeth by brushing them twice a day. I usually brush them with P/S toothpaste, and sometimes I will brush them with salt to make them whiter and stronger. In about 3 to 4 months, I will change my toothbrush once for better oral hygiene. I always take care of my skin and hair every day, and I usually wash my face with water. I always shower once or twice a day. I always take care of my hair with a "clear" shampoo, and when I shower, I usually use a "romano" shower gel. I don’t spend much money on cosmetic products because I’m confident in my appearance now. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I usually go to the barber shop; I often go to a barbershop once every 2 months, and I often go to get a haircut near my house; it is located on Kha Van Can Street. I often go to the barbershop alone. When I go to the barber shop, I’d like to have a haircut, shave, and face shave, and I usually pay $40 for the service each time. Finally, I believe cosmetic surgery is beneficial because it makes you look more desirable; one advantage is that it will make you look younger as you age; however, it is very expensive and may have health risks or consequences if something goes wrong during the operation. If I had enough money, I would spend it on other things but not on cosmetic surgery because it risks my life. I would say that people should take care of their appearance so they can have better looks, feel more confident, and be more successful in their lives. However, people shouldn’t abuse cosmetic surgery because it can be dangerous. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for listening.

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-11 03:55:02 UTC

DONE! Nice picture!
NAM XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello everyone, my name is Nam and I’m nineteen years old. Today, I would like to talk about my topic that is how I take care of my appearance. First of all, I usually take care of my appearance every day because it makes me more confident when I meet someone, and I also I can show my respect to everybody .Now, I’m very happy with my appearance. For example, I often take a shower with shampoo “Head and shoulder” for my hair after studying at school and when I finish I will use my hair dryer or towel to dry my hair. Beside that, for my teeth I always brush my teeth by my toothbrush and toothpaste brand Close Up and after that I use mouthwash Literence to clean my teeth and that is the best choice to take care.

Futhermore, I sometimes go to salon with my aunt once a month and that is a salon hair called “Ngọc Sơn” salon hair and located on Phan Văn Trị street. And when we come there, the services we use those are haircut, facial and chemical peel and we have to pay totally four hundred thousand dong for each time.

Secondly, when it comes to cosmetic surgery, I think it is very bad, but it’s good a little bit. On the one hand, it would make me feel more confident and handsome that makes me successful, but on the other hand there are side effects after cosmetic surgery like my health becomes terrible ,and leaves scars and beside that, it costs me a lot money and time and I’m so afraid if there is something wrong in the operation, it will risk my life. So, if I had enough money, I would rather spend on other things like nutrition food course that teaches me about eating habit when I’m out of shape. That’s all my topic I want to share with you. Thanks for listening to me.

Hello everyone, my name is Nam, and I’m nineteen years old. Today, I would like to talk about my topic, which is how I take care of my appearance. First of all, I usually take care of my appearance every day because it makes me more confident when I meet someone, and I can also show my respect to everybody. Now, I’m very happy with my appearance. For example, I often take a shower with "Head and Shoulders" shampoo for my hair after studying at school, and when I finish, I will use my hair dryer or towel to dry my hair. Beside that, for my teeth, I always brush them with my toothbrush and toothpaste brand, Close Up, and after that, I use mouthwash, Literence, to clean them, and that is the best choice to take care of them.

Furthermore, I sometimes go to the salon with my aunt once a month, and that is a salon called "Ngoc Sơn" salon hair, located on Phan Văn Trị street. And when we come there, the services we use are a haircut, a facial, and a chemical peel, and we have to pay a total of four hundred thousand dong for each time.

Secondly, when it comes to cosmetic surgery, I think it is very bad, but it’s good a little bit. On the one hand, it would make me feel more confident and handsome, which makes me successful, but on the other hand, there are side effects after cosmetic surgery, like my health becoming terrible and leaving scars, and beside that, it costs me a lot of money and time, and I’m so afraid if there is something wrong in the operation, it will risk my life. So, if I had enough money, I would rather spend it on other things, like a nutrition course that teaches me about eating habits when I’m out of shape. That’s all the information I want to share with you. Thanks for listening to me.

PS21901_Nguyễn Đức Huy

huyndps21901 — 2022-11-11 10:20:29 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about how you take care of your appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident. I usually take care of wash my face with face wash after I get up and before go to bed. I use OXY to wash my face. I often use sunscreen when I go out in the afternoon. I spend about 500,000 VND on cosmetics every month. I often come to cut my hair about once a month. My favorite barber shop is 30Shine. The barber shop is located at 1A Ton Dan Street, District 4. I often go there with my brother and my friends. I usually cut my hair and wash it at the barber shop. I pay 100,000 VND each time and I am very satisfied with it. I think plastic surgery is good, it helps us to have good looks. However, it is very expensive and affects my health. If I had money, I would not have had plastic surgery because I feel satisfied and confident with my current appearance.
Thank you for reading.

Hello teacher, my name is Huy. Today, I would like to talk about how you take care of your appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident. I usually take care to wash my face with face wash after I get up and before I go to bed. I use oxygen to wash my face. I often use sunscreen when I go out in the afternoon. I spend about 500,000 VND on cosmetics every month. I often come to get my hair cut, about once a month. My favorite barber shop is 30 Shine. The barbershop is located at 1A Ton Dan Street, District 4. I often go there with my brother and my friends. I usually cut my hair and wash it at the barber shop. I pay 100,000 VND each time, and I am very satisfied with it. I think plastic surgery is good; it helps us have good looks. However, it is very expensive and affects my health. If I had money, I would not have had plastic surgery because I feel satisfied and confident with my current appearance.
Thank you for reading.

Ps24969 Trần Quỳnh Luân

2022-11-11 13:15:25 UTC

DONE!
LUÂN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

I am confident about going to be a good driver. I can tell some examples of good and bad driving habits to prove. Good are always checking your mirrors, use a turn/stop signal and both hands on the steering wheel. Bad are over-speeding, not using signals, not focusing on the road,… but i think the most dangerous is over-speeding. I have some habits that gonna make me a good driver such as checking mirrors, use signals when turning or stopping, go below or equal as speed limit… I have witnessed an actual accident between 2 motorbikes; they crashed into each other like the storm. This occurred about 2 years ago just right next to my home. Fortunately, none of them died, just some injuries. The accident was mainly caused by the other rider, who used the wrong lane and alcohol. What i learned from that is never ever use alcohol when attempting to ride or drive a vehicle. In conclusion, we can always be good drivers if we pay more attention to everything.

I am confident in my ability to drive safely. To demonstrate my point, I can provide examples of good and bad driving habits. Checking your mirrors frequently, using a turn or stop signal, and keeping both hands on the steering wheel are all examples of good driving habits. Overspeeding, failing to use turn signals, failing to pay attention to the road... but I believe overspeeding is the most dangerous. I have some habits that will make me a good driver, such as checking mirrors, using signals when turning or stopping, going below or equal to the speed limit,... I witnessed a real-life accident involving two motorbikes, which collided like lightning. This happened about two years ago, right next to my house. Fortunately, none of them died; they just sustained some injuries. The accident was mainly caused by the other rider, who used the wrong lane and was drunk. That taught me never to drink alcohol before attempting to ride in or drive a vehicle. In conclusion, we can always be good drivers if we pay more attention to everything.

Ps24969 Trần Quỳnh Luân

2022-11-11 13:17:06 UTC

DONE!

LUÂN XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher and friends, My name is Luan, today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. Did you know that in our whole life, we are just wandering to complete the identity that we chose? I knew that and I think the appearance play an important part in our identity. To this point of my journey, I can tell that i quite like the outward form of myself. I usually take care of my facial skin by washing it with cleanser, my teeth with toothpaste, my hair with anti-dandruff shampoos and some shower gel for my body. If i had a chance, I would definitely go to spa. To make a decision between inner and outer beauty, we have to look at the scenarios before and after we met them. There’s no such thing is a bad person, i believe, only the bad situations. I don’t want to perform any surgery on my body. , they won’tIf they can’t stand my outer-look have the patient to figure out my personality. In conclusion, both outer and inner beauty play important roles, but make sure to never judge a book by its cover.

Hello teacher and friends! My name is Luan, and today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. Did you know that we spend our entire lives just wandering around trying to complete the identity we chose? I knew that, and I think appearance plays an important part in our identity. At this point in my journey, I can tell you that I like my outward appearance. I typically wash my skin with cleanser, my teeth with toothpaste, my hair with anti-dandruff shampoos, and my body with shower gel. If I had a chance, I would definitely go to the spa. To make a decision between inner and outer beauty, we have to look at the scenarios before and after we meet them. There’s no such thing as a bad person, I believe, only bad situations. I don’t want to perform any surgery on my body. If they can't stand my appearance, they won't have the patience to figure out my personality. In conclusion, both outer and inner beauty play important roles, but make sure to never judge a book by its cover.

Nguyễn Hà Thành Đạt - PS24722

2022-11-11 14:34:52 UTC

DONE!
ĐẠT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher ! Im Dat. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience. I can ride a motorbike very good. I have been ridden motorbile since I was 17 years old. I have a motorbike at home and I use it to go to school and go to hang out. Secondly, I would to talk about good and bad driving habits. Good driving habits are pay attention, observe the speed limit and maintain a safe following distance. Bad dringving habits are speed, tailgate and talk on the phone,… I think the most dangerous driving behavior is talk on the phone when driving because it cause distraction and the accident maybe happen easily. Finally, I would tell you an accident I have seen. That’s a sad Sunday, I’m on my way go to dinner. Suddenly, a drunk man riding motorbike at high speed crash into a big tree. The man fell upside down and bleeding a lot from his head. His limbs are broken. Everyone around is focused and helped him. I called an ambulance and after 20 min He was taken away. I Think that’s a bad lesson for him, He should avoid drinking and control speed when driving. Therefore, I would say that people should obey traffic safety laws and drive carefully. Avoid bad driving habits to be a perfect rider. Thanks for listening!

Hello, teacher! Im Dat. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I can ride a motorbike very well. I have been riding motorbikes since I was 17 years old. I have a motorbike at home, and I use it to go to school and to hang out. Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. Good driving habits include paying attention, observing the speed limit, and maintaining a safe following distance. Speeding, tailgating, talking on the phone, etc. are all bad driving habits. I believe that talking on the phone while driving is the most dangerous driving behavior because it causes distraction and increases the likelihood of an accident occurring. Finally, I would like to tell you about an accident I have seen. That’s a sad Sunday; I’m on my way to dinner. Suddenly, a drunk man riding a motorbike at high speed crashed into a big tree. The man fell upside down and was bleeding heavily from his head. His limbs are broken. Everyone around him is focused and has helped him. I called an ambulance, and after 20 minutes, he was taken away. I think that’s a bad lesson for him. He should avoid drinking and control speed when driving. Therefore, I would say that people should obey traffic safety laws and drive carefully. Avoid bad driving habits to be a perfect rider. Thanks for listening!

Nguyễn Hà Thành Đạt - PS24722

2022-11-11 16:07:17 UTC

DONE!
ĐẠT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Dat. Today, I would like to talk about how you take care of your appearance. First of all, I want to share with you about how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I often take care of my appearance everyday. I always brush my teeth by “Colgath” toothpaste when I get up and before go to bed. To take care my hair I use natural shampoo to reduce hair loss. When I go out, I use sunscreen for my skin. I also use facial cleanser evey night. I spend money on cosmetic produtcs but not much because I just take care in a simple way. Secondly, I would like to talke about a place I usuallly to go take care of my appearance. I usually go to barber shop to cut my hair once a month. My favorite barber shop is “ Hair Buff “ . It is loacted on Nguyen Anh Thu street. I go there with my friend to play game while wait for my turn. Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery. I think cosmetic surgery is normal thing because everyone always to be beautifull. Cosmetic surgery help you be confident and benefits at work but It causes consequences and bad health effects. If I had money, I wouldn’t have cosmetic surgery because I want to keep everything my parents give me. Inconclusion, I would say that the appearance isn’t important but It help us very much in life. Let take care and improve the appearance to be success and confident. Thanks for listening!

Hello teacher, my name is Dat. Today, I would like to talk about how you take care of your appearance. First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I often take care of my appearance every day. I always brush my teeth with "Colgate" toothpaste when I get up and before I go to bed. To take care of my hair, I use natural shampoo to reduce hair loss. When I go out, I use sunscreen for my skin. I also use facial cleanser every night. I spend money on cosmetic products, but not much because I just take care in a simple way. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I usually go to the barber shop to have my hair cut once a month. My favorite barber shop is "Hair Buff." It is located on Nguyen Anh Thu Street. I go there with my friend to play games while I wait for my turn. Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery. I think cosmetic surgery is a normal thing because everyone always wants to be beautiful. Cosmetic surgery helps you be more confident and has benefits at work, but it causes consequences and bad health effects. If I had money, I wouldn’t have cosmetic surgery because I want to keep everything my parents give me. In conclusion, I would say that appearances aren’t important, but they help us very much in life. Let's take care of our appearance and improve it to be successful and confident. Thanks for listening!

Đỗ Như Bảo_Ps23573

2022-11-11 16:43:31 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello everyone, my name is Bao, today I will talk about the gestures and customs of the Vietnamese people. The traditional way of greeting the Vietnamese people is to fold their arms, bow, shake hands, and hug. I greet the elders by bowing. I greet the younger people by waving and smiling. I greet my friends by shaking hands or giving a hug to a close friend. I like firm handshakes because it exudes courtesy and respect between two people. Vietnamese people stand up, shake hands and smile to exchange business cards. I usually give a business card with my left hand to the other person to receive it with my right hand, when giving, the information side of the business card is facing up. The business card has the giver's name, company name and contact information. When Vietnamese people make small talk, they often exchange news, tell personal stories about work and daily life. Therefore, we should not talk about sensitive matters such as talking badly about someone in small chats. That's all, thank you for listening.

Hello everyone, my name is Bao, and today I will talk about the gestures and customs of the Vietnamese people. The traditional way of greeting the Vietnamese people is to fold their arms, bow, shake hands, and hug. I greet the elders by bowing. I greet the younger people by waving and smiling. I greet my friends by shaking hands or giving a hug to a close friend. I like firm handshakes because they exude courtesy and respect between two people. Vietnamese people stand up, shake hands, and smile to exchange business cards. I usually give a business card with my left hand to the other person, who receives it with my right hand. When giving, the information side of the business card is facing up. The business card has the giver's name, company name, and contact information. When Vietnamese people make small talk, they often exchange news and tell personal stories about work and daily life. Therefore, we should not talk about sensitive matters, such as talking badly about someone, in small chats. That's all. Thank you for listening.

Đỗ Như Bảo_Ps23537

2022-11-11 16:44:50 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, hello everyone, my name is Bao, today I will talk about my favorite movie.

I am a person who loves movies, especially action movies with humorous elements because it gives me a sense of drama and relaxation when watching.

Next I want to talk about my favorite movie, it's called "Rush Hour" it's an action comedy. The film tells the story of two policemen with a special mission to track down and catch the big gangs in Hong Kong. The film consists of three parts, the first part was released in 1998.

Next I want to mention places and people I watch with. Since this movie is quite old I have to watch it on the internet, I watch this movie with my family, I like to eat popcorn and drink coke while watching the movie. Because the movie is so good, I have watched it over and over again, it helps me to be more confident and joyful in life and if I have a certain opportunity, I will watch it again. That's all about my favorite movie. Thanks for listening.

Hello teacher, hello everyone, My name is Bao, and today I will talk about my favorite movie.

I am a person who loves movies, especially action movies with humorous elements, because it gives me a sense of drama and relaxation when watching.

Next, I want to talk about my favorite movie, which is called "Rush Hour." It's an action comedy. The film tells the story of two policemen with a special mission to track down and catch the big gangs in Hong Kong. The film consists of three parts; the first part was released in 1998.

Following that, I'd like to mention some of the places and people I watch with.Since this movie is quite old, I have to watch it on the internet. I watch this movie with my family, and I like to eat popcorn and drink Coke while watching the movie. Because the movie is so good, I have watched it over and over again. It helps me to be more confident and joyful in life, and if I have a certain opportunity, I will watch it again. That's all about my favorite movie. Thanks for listening.

Đỗ Như Bảo_Ps23573

2022-11-11 16:45:39 UTC

IT IS GOOD ENOUGH! WELL DONE!
Hello teacher, my name is Bao. Today I would like to talk about a hotel that I stayed in last June, it is called MAXIN HOTEL. I have stayed in this hotel during my summer vacation in Sapa. I stayed there for two days. The location of the hotel is very nice and convenient to see the beautiful rice terraces. I stayed in a double room with my friends. I choose mid-range hotel because of good quality without being too expensive. The cost for a day's stay is about 1,000,000 VND. The room is fully equipped with a refrigerator, TV and air conditioner. The hotel has a free morning service and shuttle service for sightseeing and I have used all of those services, it is comfortable and convenient. The service here is very good, the staff is enthusiastic and friendly, making me very satisfied. I like the location of the hotel the most because it is located in a place with a very beautiful view, can enjoy the whole majestic landscape in sapa. This hotel is very good and I have nothing to complain about. I will definitely recommend this hotel to my friends if they have a chance to come here.

That's all, thanks for reading.

Đỗ Như Bảo_Ps23573

2022-11-11 16:46:43 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Bao, today I will talk about good and bad habits when driving. First I want to talk about my driving experience, I can ride a motorbike and I have been riding a motorbike for 3 years, I have a motorbike at home. I'm not a good driver

Next, I will talk about good driving habits, an example of a good driving habit is obeying the rules when participating in traffic such as wearing a helmet, always observing the signs and most importantly driving correct speed. Examples of bad driving habits are speeding, swerving, running red lights. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is not wearing a helmet because it will be very dangerous for yourself. I am a person who always adheres to good driving habits.

Finally, about an accident that I saw recently. It was a motorcycle accident, although it was only a minor collision and no one was injured, but it made me know that I should pay attention when driving. I think that motorcyclists need to avoid drinking beer and alcohol while driving.

That's all, thanks for listening

Hello teacher, my name is Bao, and today I will talk about good and bad habits when driving. First, I want to talk about my driving experience. I can ride a motorbike, and I have been riding a motorbike for 3 years. I have a motorbike at home. I'm not a good driver.

Next, I will talk about good driving habits. An example of a good driving habit is obeying the rules when participating in traffic, such as wearing a helmet, always observing the signs, and most importantly, driving at the correct speed. Examples of bad driving habits are speeding, swerving, and running red lights. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is not wearing a helmet, because it will be very dangerous for yourself. I am a person who always adheres to good driving habits.

Finally, about an accident that I saw recently: It was a motorbike accident, although it was only a minor collision and no one was injured, but it made me realize that I should pay attention when driving. I think that motorcyclists need to avoid drinking beer and alcohol while driving.

That's all. Thanks for listening.

Đỗ Như Bảo_Ps23573

2022-11-11 16:47:49 UTC

DONE!
BẢO XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, my name is Bao. Today, I want to talk about taking care of my appearance. For me appearance is very important because it will help me to be more confident. I am quite satisfied with my appearance. I always take care of my teeth by brushing my teeth twice a day, I use colgate toothpaste. I usually just wash my face with water, wash my hair and shower with shampoos or shower gels like romano, I don't spend money on cosmetics because it's not necessary for me.

Next, I usually go to the salon to get my hair cut, usually every 2 months. I usually go to the barbershop alone by motorbike, my favorite barber shop is 30shine. The services I get when I go to a barbershop are haircuts, shaving and facial hair removal, and I usually pay around $4–$6 for this service.

Ultimately, it's about plastic surgery. I think plastic surgery is good. It helps people to change their appearance and be more attractive. Plastic surgery can change your appearance, and you can get a good look that makes you more confident, but it is expensive and can be dangerous to your health and life if misused. If I had money I wouldn't have had plastic surgery because it would affect my health and above all I was satisfied with myself.

That's all, thanks for reading

Hello teacher, my name is Bao. Today, I want to talk about taking care of my appearance. For me, appearance is very important because it will help me be more confident. I am quite satisfied with my appearance. I always take care of my teeth by brushing them twice a day. I use Colgate toothpaste. I usually just wash my face with water, wash my hair, and shower with shampoos or shower gels like Romano. I don't spend money on cosmetics because it's not necessary for me.

Next, I usually go to the salon to get my hair cut, usually every 2 months. I usually go to the barbershop alone by motorcycle, and my favorite barber shop is 30 Shine. The services I get when I go to a barbershop are haircuts, shaving, and facial hair removal, and I usually pay around $4–6 for these services.

Ultimately, it's about plastic surgery. I think plastic surgery is good. It helps people change their appearance and be more attractive. Plastic surgery can change your appearance, and you can get a good look that makes you more confident, but it is expensive and can be dangerous to your health and life if misused. If I had money, I wouldn't have had plastic surgery because it would affect my health, and above all, I was satisfied with myself.

That's all. Thanks for reading.

Nguyễn Hà Thành Đạt - PS24722

2022-11-11 17:50:03 UTC

Hello teacher, my name is Dat. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in. First of all, I want to say the hotel I have stayed in. Last summer, I have a vacation to Nha Trang and rented a hotel. The name of the hotel is “ Paradise” . It is located near the Nha Trang beach. As the name, It’s truly a paradise. I have booked a king-size bed to enjoy the vacation wonderfully. The price of room about 400K for one night. Secondly, I would like to talk about facilities, services and amenities. The hotel have many services like make up the room, turn down the beds and pick up the laundry… I used service : take away the dishes because I usually order food to my room. I have listen to music and watch movie in the room throughout the day, I just go out to sightseeing and walking in the night. Finally, It’s about my experience. I really feel happy and relax with my stay thank to the hotel. I very very like the services here because They always respect their guests and serve cheerfully. I think I didn’t like about view. Although It’s near beache, I can’t see any blue.

In conclusion, I feel the hotel is very nice. It has everything I need. I will be back with my loved ones. Thanks for listening!

PS23248-Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-11-11 23:01:33 UTC

DONE! it's OK!
Hello teacher, my name is Kien Today, I want to talk about how to take care of my appearance.
First, I want to share with you my appearance and how I take care of it. I think I'm not satisfied with my appearance because I look bad. The reason is that I pay very little attention to my appearance. I use CLEAR shampoo, Congate Toothpaste, and E100 cleanser to take care of my hair, teeth, and skin. I spend very little money on cosmetics because I don't have much money.
Second, I want to talk about a place where I often go to take care of my appearance. I usually go to 30Shine barbershop alone by bus. It has an address in District 7, Ho Chi Minh City. I usually use the hair cutting and washing service there for 100,000 VND.
Ultimately, it's about plastic surgery. Its advantage is that it can make you more beautiful. and vice versa, it can make you worse when the surgery fails. If I had money, I wouldn't go for plastic surgery because I would use that money for other purposes. At the end of the article, I want to remind everyone to take care of their appearance to have a better appearance and to feel more confident and successful in life. However, people should not abuse plastic surgery because it can be dangerous. That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your listening.

PS23248 - Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-11-11 23:16:40 UTC

PS23248 - Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-11-11 23:28:27 UTC

PS23248-Phạm Gia Kiện

2022-11-12 07:28:25 UTC

Ps26555- Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-11-12 07:33:48 UTC

DONE!
DŨNG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher Sum, my name is Dung. Today, I would like to talk about the topic "how to take care of your appearance".
First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I take care of my appearance every night. I usually wash my face and do skin care when I came home and to be honest, I'm not really happy with my appearance now. To take care of my skin, I usually apply lotions at night or whenever I went out. To take care of my hair, I usually use shampoo when I take a shower, the shampoo that I'm using is Clear-Man. To take care of my teeth, I brush my teeth every night and day with a toothbrush and PS's toothpaste. All of the products that I use for my personal care are not too expensive, they can be bought at a fair price at any store. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I go to a barber shop once every 2 months and my favorite barber shop is the one that is near my home. I usually go there by myself because for me it's just a haircut, no need to go with someone. I usually use a haircut service, sometimes I had my nail cut and they normally cost me about 100.000VND. Lastly, it is about cosmetic surgery. In my opinion, cosmetic surgery has a good side and a bad side. A good side of cosmetic surgery is you can change your look to be prettier and you can feel more confident when you look prettier.
A downside of cosmetic surgery is it can cost you a lot of money and it could be dangerous. If I have money, I won't do cosmetic surgery because I love my appearance for now. That's all about my speech, thanks for listening.

Hello, teacher Sum, my name is Dung. Today, I would like to talk about the topic "how to take care of your appearance."
First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I take care of my appearance every night. I usually wash my face and do skin care when I come home, and to be honest, I'm not really happy with my appearance now. To take care of my skin, I usually apply lotions at night or whenever I go out. To take care of my hair, I usually use shampoo when I take a shower; the shampoo that I'm using is Clear-Man. To take care of my teeth, I brush them every night and day with a toothbrush and PS's toothpaste. All of the products that I use for my personal care are not too expensive; they can be bought at a fair price at any store. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I go to a barber shop once every 2 months, and my favorite barber shop is the one that is near my home. I usually go there by myself because, for me, it's just a haircut. There's no need to go with someone. I usually use a haircut service; sometimes I have my nails cut, and they normally cost me about 100.000 VND. Lastly, it is about cosmetic surgery. In my opinion, cosmetic surgery has a good side and a bad side. A good side of cosmetic surgery is that you can change your look to be prettier and feel more confident when you look prettier.
A downside of cosmetic surgery is that it can cost you a lot of money and could be dangerous. If I have money, I won't do cosmetic surgery because I love my appearance as it is. That's all about my speech. Thanks for listening.

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-11-12 13:49:31 UTC

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-11-12 13:52:55 UTC

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-11-12 13:56:04 UTC

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-11-12 13:58:35 UTC

Ps26555 - Nguyễn Hoàng Dũng

dungnhps26555 — 2022-11-12 14:02:13 UTC

PS22206 - Đinh Lưu Quang Phát

2022-11-12 14:53:51 UTC

DONE!
PHÁT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in.

First of all, I want to say the hotel I have stayed in. The last time I stayed at the hotel was about four months ago. The name of the hotel is Sun Hill Hotel. The hotel is quite quiet and close to the sea. I was in the double room type. The cost for one night is about 300,000 VND. There is mineral water and carbonated water in the hotel refrigerator.

Secondly, I would like to talk about facilities, services and amenities. The hotel has a number of services such as room service, motorbike rental, minibar and wake - up service. I used room service, motorbike rental, minibar. I like room service because I can order food right to my room. In my room there are basic things like towels, toothbrush, toothpaste and hair dryer.

Finally, I am very satisfied with my stay because during the vacation I did not have any bad luck. I quite like the food at the hotel because it suits my taste. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in.

First of all, I want to mention the hotel I have stayed in. The last time I stayed at the hotel was about four months ago. The name of the hotel is Sun Hill Hotel. The hotel is quite quiet and close to the sea. I was in a double room. The cost for one night is about 300,000 VND. There is mineral water and carbonated water in the hotel refrigerator.

Secondly, I would like to talk about facilities, services, and amenities. The hotel has a number of services, such as room service, motorcycle rental, a minibar, and wake-up service. I took advantage of room service, motorcycle rental, and the minibar.I like room service because I can order food right to my room. In my room, there are basic things like towels, a toothbrush, toothpaste, and a hair dryer.

Finally, I am very satisfied with my stay because during the vacation I did not have any bad luck. I quite like the food at the hotel because it suits my taste. Thank you for listening.

PS22206 - Đinh Lưu Quang Phát

2022-11-12 14:54:37 UTC

DONE!
PHÁT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits.

First of all, I want to share with you about my riding experience. I have been riding a motorbike for two years. I have a motorbike at home. I am a good motorbike driver.

Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. Examples of good driving habits are paying attention, observing the speed limit and maintain a safe following distance. Examples of bad driving habits are speeding, talking on the phone and texting while driving. The most dangerous driving behavior is speeding. I usually have the habit of driving to observe the allowed speed and pay attention.

Finally, it is about an accident that I’ve heard about recently. The accident happened near the bus station in District 8. Two motorcycles suffered considerable damage. Fortunately, both suffered only minor injuries. The lesson I learned when I heard about the accident was not to speed and maintain a safe following distance. Bad driving behaviors that motorcyclists should avoid are speeding, talking on the phone and texting while driving. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits.

First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I have been riding a motorbike for two years. I have a motorbike at home. I am a good motorbike driver.

Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. Examples of good driving habits are paying attention, observing the speed limit, and maintaining a safe following distance. Examples of bad driving habits are speeding, talking on the phone, and texting while driving. The most dangerous driving behavior is speeding. I usually have the habit of driving to observe the allowed speed and pay attention.

Finally, it is about an accident that I’ve heard about recently. The accident happened near the bus station in District 8. Two motorbikes suffered considerable damage. Fortunately, both suffered only minor injuries. The lesson I learned when I heard about the accident was not to speed and to maintain a safe following distance. Bad driving behaviors that motorcyclists should avoid are speeding, talking on the phone, and texting while driving. Thank you for listening.

PS22206 - Đinh Lưu Quang Phát

2022-11-12 14:55:27 UTC

DONE!
PHÁT XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I would like to talk about how I take care of my appearance.

First of all, I want to share with you about how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. Right now I'm not satisfied with my appearance because I'm quite overweight. I always wash my face two times a day and brush teeth two to three times a day. The personal care products I use are toothpaste, deodorant, shampoo and soap. I don't spend too much on personal care products.

Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually to go to take care of my appearance. I usually go alone to the barber shop every month. My favorite barber shop is Đông Tây Barbershop. I usually cut my hair at the barber shop on Pham Hung street. I have to pay 80,000 VND for each haircut.

Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery. In my opinion, cosmetic surgery is good because it helps others to be more confident with their appearance. The advantage of cosmetic surgery is that it can correct defects in appearance quickly.The disadvantages of cosmetic surgery is that there are risks and quite expensive. If I had money, I wouldn't have had plastic surgery either because I am satisfied with my appearance. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Phat. Today, I would like to talk about how I take care of my appearance.

First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. Right now, I'm not satisfied with my appearance because I'm quite overweight. I always wash my face two times a day and brush my teeth two to three times a day. The personal care products I use are toothpaste, deodorant, shampoo, and soap. I don't spend too much on personal care products.

Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I usually go alone to the barber shop every month. My favorite barber shop is ông Tây Barbershop. I usually cut my hair at the barbershop on Pham Hung Street. I have to pay 80,000 VND for each haircut.

Finally, it is about cosmetic surgery. In my opinion, cosmetic surgery is good because it helps others feel more confident about their appearance. The advantage of cosmetic surgery is that it can correct defects in appearance quickly. The disadvantages of cosmetic surgery are that there are risks and that it is quite expensive. If I had money, I wouldn't have had plastic surgery either because I am satisfied with my appearance. Thank you for listening.

PD06547-QUOCPHUONG

2022-11-12 15:32:27 UTC

DONE!
PHƯƠNG XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, my name is Phuong . Today will talk about how to take care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I take care of my appearance every day, and I’m happy with it now. I always take care of my teeth by brushing them twice a day. I usually brush them with P/S toothpaste, and sometimes I will brush them with lemon to make them whiter and stronger. In about 1 to 2 months, I will change my toothbrush once for better oral hygiene. I always take care of my skin and hair every day, and I usually wash my face with water. I always shower once or twice a day. I always take care of my hair with a "X-men" shampoo, and when I shower, I usually use a "X-men" shower gel. I don’t spend much money on cosmetic products because I’m confident in my appearance now. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I usually go to the barber shop; I often go to a barbershop once every 1 months, and I often go to get a haircut near my house; it is located on Kha Van Can Street. I often go to the barbershop alone. When I go to the barber shop, I’d like to have a haircut, shave, and face shave, and I usually pay $5 for the service each time. Finally, I believe cosmetic surgery is beneficial because it makes you look beautifull however, it is very expensive and may have health risks . If I had enough money, I would spend it on other things but not on cosmetic surgery because it dangerous. I would say that people should take care of their appearance so they can have better looks, feel more confident, and be more successful in their lives. However, people shouldn’t abuse cosmetic surgery because it can be dangerous. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for listening.

Hello teacher, My name is Phuong. Today we will talk about how to take care of my appearance. First of all, I want to share with you how I think about my appearance and how I take care of it. I take care of my appearance every day, and I’m happy with it now. I always take care of my teeth by brushing them twice a day. I usually brush them with P/S toothpaste, and sometimes I will brush them with lemon to make them whiter and stronger. In about 1 to 2 months, I will change my toothbrush once for better oral hygiene. I always take care of my skin and hair every day, and I usually wash my face with water. I always shower once or twice a day. I always take care of my hair with an "X-men" shampoo, and when I shower, I usually use an "X-men" shower gel. I don’t spend much money on cosmetic products because I’m confident in my appearance now. Secondly, I would like to talk about a place I usually go to take care of my appearance. I usually go to the barbershop once a month, and I frequently go to get a haircut near my house; it is located on Kha Van Can Street. I often go to the barbershop alone. When I go to the barber shop, I’d like to have a haircut, shave, and face shave, and I usually pay $5 for the service each time. Finally, I believe cosmetic surgery is beneficial because it makes you look beautiful; however, it is very expensive and may have health risks. If I had enough money, I would spend it on other things but not on cosmetic surgery because it is dangerous. I would say that people should take care of their appearance so they can have better looks, feel more confident, and be more successful in their lives. However, people shouldn’t abuse cosmetic surgery because it can be dangerous. That brings me to the end of my talk. Thank you for listening.

ps23588-Nguyen Hoang Tai

2022-11-12 16:28:15 UTC

DONE!
TÀI XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, I’m going to talk with you about good and bad driving habits.

Firstly, I want to talk about my driving habits. There are many good driving habits that people already know, for example are: wear helmet, signal when turning and observe the speed limit when driving. And about a bad bad driving habits we should avoid: using the phone while driving, driving with Headphones On, incorrect speed, not stop at red light, not signal when turning… I think the most dangerous driving behavior is not stop at red lights, because there are so many cars and you’ll have an accident. When I driving, I always wear a helmet and stop at the red light.

I have heard about an accident near my house. One person died who not stop at red light and another was seriously injured in the accident. What I learned after I heard of the accident is never run the red light. Tks for your listening

Hello teacher, I’m going to talk with you about good and bad driving habits.

Firstly, I want to talk about my driving habits. There are many good driving habits that people already know, for example, wearing a helmet, signaling when turning, and observing the speed limit when driving. And about some bad driving habits we should avoid: using the phone while driving, driving with headphones on, incorrect speed, not stopping at red lights, not signaling when turning... I think the most dangerous driving behavior is not stopping at red lights because there are so many cars and you’ll have an accident. When I am driving, I always wear a helmet and stop at the red light.

I have heard about an accident near my house. One person died who did not stop at a red light, and another was seriously injured in the accident. What I learned after I heard of the accident is to never run a red light. Thanks for your listening.

ps23588_Nguyen Hoang Tai

2022-11-12 17:14:54 UTC

DONE!
TÀI XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hi everyone, I'd like to talk about take care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is very important beacause you’ll be more confident when you have a good appearance. I brush my teeth with PS toothpaste 2 times a day in the morning when I wake up and in in the evening when i go to bed. And I use romano 3 in 1 shampoo for my hair and my skin. I don’t spend a lot of money on cosmetic products. I usually go to the barbershop, about twice a month. My favorite barbershop is BearBabers, it’s near my house, in district 3. I go there alone, but sometimes I go with my friends. I cut my hair, shave my face and shampoo when I go to the BearBabers. I have to pay about 80k vnđ when I there. I think cosmetic surgery is good Because it makes people more beautiful. However, cosmetic surgery is too expensive and cosmetic surgery can leave many complications such as cancer or transformed. If I had money, I wouldn’t have cosmetic surgery, because I think I have a good appearance so I don’t need to have cosmetic surgery. tks for your listening.
Hi everyone, I'd like to talk about taking care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is very important because you’ll be more confident when you have a good appearance. I brush my teeth with PS toothpaste two times a day: in the morning when I wake up and in the evening when I go to bed. And I use Romano 3-in-1 shampoo for my hair and my skin. I don’t spend a lot of money on cosmetic products. I usually go to the barbershop about twice a month. My favorite barbershop is BearBabers; it’s near my house, in district 3. I go there alone, but sometimes I go with my friends. I cut my hair, shave my face, and shampoo when I go to the BearBabers. When I'm there, I have to pay around 80k vn.I think cosmetic surgery is good because it makes people more beautiful. However, cosmetic surgery is too expensive, and cosmetic surgery can leave many complications, such as cancer or being transformed. If I had money, I wouldn’t have cosmetic surgery because I think I have a good appearance and don’t need to have cosmetic surgery. Thanks for your listening.

PS23253-Nguyễn Hồ Bảo Duy

2022-11-12 17:27:06 UTC

DONE!
DUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu và tham khảo bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher. Today I wil talk about good and bad driving habits. My driving skills are very good. I started riding motorbikes at the age of 17 and it's been 2 years now. I have a motorbike at home. I am a good driver. Good habits when driving are paying attention, observing the speed limit, maintaining a safe following distance. tailgate, weave through traffic, not stop at red lights are all bad habits when driving. The most dangerous driving behavior is speeding and drinking. I usually have a driving habit of honking, staring at other drivers and never speeding. The accident happened at Quang Trung software park. The accident happened at 7:15 pm. There are 2 patients usually including 1 male and 1 female. The man had bleeding on the head and the woman had only a minor impact. I ran over to see the situation and called an ambulance. I took the most seriously injured person to a cool place to rest and help the woman up. I have learned to help people in trouble and avoid bad driving habits. Bad habits to avoid are drinking and speeding.

Hello teacher. Today I will talk about good and bad driving habits. My driving skills are very good. I started riding motorbikes at the age of 17, and it's been 2 years now. I have a motorbike at home. I am a good driver. Good habits when driving are paying attention, observing the speed limit, and maintaining a safe following distance. Tailgating, weaving through traffic, and not stopping at red lights are all bad habits when driving. The most dangerous driving behaviors are speeding and drinking. I usually have a driving habit of honking, staring at other drivers, and never speeding. The accident happened at Quang Trung Software Park. The accident happened at 7:15 p.m. There are usually two patients, one male and one female. The man had bleeding on his head, and the woman had only a minor impact. I ran over to see the situation and called an ambulance. I took the most seriously injured person to a cool spot to rest and assisted the woman in getting up. I have learned to help people in trouble and avoid bad driving habits. Bad habits to avoid are drinking and speeding.

PS23253-Nguyễn Hồ Bảo Duy

2022-11-13 05:48:53 UTC

DONE!
DUY XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, Today I will talk about how you take care of your appearance.I'm very satisfied with my appearance right now, but I still want to improve. I usually take care of my teeth and hair 2 times a week at 30shine. I usually use leave to wash my hair and coolgate to clean my teeth. I don't spend a lot of money on cosmetic products because I have a lot to spend. I usually go to the barber shop twice a week. My favorite barbershop is 30shine and it's also my go to place. Address is 47/10 Trung My Tay, To Ky. I go there alone. I usually choose the shampoo and barber service at 30shine. Those services cost 80,000 VND. I think cosmetic surgery is good because it improves the appearance of many people but should not be abused. Cosmetic surgery is advantageous in that it improves appearance and is disadvantaged in that it costs money and health. If I had money, I would not go to cosmetic surgery because I also do many other things such as charity, business, ...

Hello teacher, Today, I will talk about how you take care of your appearance. I'm very satisfied with my appearance right now, but I still want to improve. I usually take care of my teeth and hair two times a week at 30shine. I usually use soap to wash my hair and toothpaste to clean my teeth. I don't spend a lot of money on cosmetic products because I have a lot to spend. I usually go to the barbershop twice a week. My favorite barbershop is 30 Shine, and it's also my go-to place. The address is Trung 47/10. To Ky, my Tay I go there alone. I usually choose the shampoo and barber service at 30shine. Those services cost 80,000 VND. I think cosmetic surgery is good because it improves the appearance of many people, but it should not be abused. Cosmetic surgery is advantageous in that it improves appearance but disadvantageous in that it costs money and health. If I had money, I would not go to cosmetic surgery because I also do many other things such as charity, business,...

Trần Vĩnh Phúc ps22224

2022-11-13 09:20:34 UTC

DONE!
PHÚC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher. My name is Phuc. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel I have stayed in last year, I had a vacation in Da Lat city with my family. We travel by car to Da Lat city. We chose a hotel call sammy. The hotel is designed in a classical style. The hotel is near the sea and city center, it is very convenient for travel. We booked a Quad-room and it about one million a day. The room had large railing so we can watch sunrise every morning. The hotel had all convenient such as: shampoo, hair dryer, ironing board, towel, laundry bag, minibar….The service here are very good such as: reception is always 24/hours, laundry service, shoehine service, spa,… hotel staff very friendly and cheerfully. We stay here for a week. We are very satisfied with our stay as well as the service of the hotel. If I can return in Da lat city I gonna choose this hotel again and that all about the hotel I have stayed in. thank you for listening

Hello teacher. My name is Phuc. Today, I would like to talk about a hotel I stayed in last year when I had a vacation in Da Lat with my family. We travel by car to Da Lat city. We chose a hotel called Sammy. The hotel is designed in a classical style. The hotel is near the sea and city center, making it very convenient for travel. We booked a quad-room, and it cost about $1 million a day. Every morning, we could watch the sunrise from the large railing in our room. The hotel had all the conveniences, such as shampoo, hair dryer, ironing board, towel, laundry bag, minibar….The services provided here are excellent, including: 24 hour reception, laundry service, shoe shine service, spa, and so on. The hotel staff is extremely friendly and cheerful. We stay here for a week. We are very satisfied with our stay as well as the service of the hotel. If I can return to Da Lat City, I'm going to choose this hotel again, and that is all I can say about the hotel I have stayed in. Thank you for listening.

PS26524_Nguyễn Trọng Khoa

2022-11-13 09:33:49 UTC

DONE!
KHOA XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello everyone, hello Ms Sum. I'm here today to talk about our next topic, the bad and good driving habits. For the begining, I have ride the motorbike since I was eighteen. When I graduated from my high school, I took a quick course and got my driving license at that time. So you can say that I have been riding motorbike for seven years. I would assume that I'm a good rider.

The next thing I wanna tell you about is some driving habits, the good and bad habits. Most of you should have known, how to be a good rider. We must obey the traffic light, the signs and the signals from the police, which are very important and sometime they can save our life, it's not an exaggeration. Some more good driving habits are paying attention while we are on the road, keeping a cold head and making the right decision at the right time.

So, what are the bad driving habits? We can easily list it out, such as, using phone while we're driving, honking, or flashing the headlight. In my opinion, the most dangerous habit is speeding. It can makes us look cool, but it also reduces our ability to handle situations. A lot of accidents happened due to the driver was speeding. I saw by my own eyes, a man speed-up and crashed his bike into the train just because he wanted to cross the rail road and the train was nearby. The result was horrible and I realized how important of driving safely was.

That's all of today topic, hope you enjoy and be safe on the long road. Feel free to leave comments or questions on my writting.
Thank you!!

Hello, everyone, and Ms. Sum. I'm here today to talk about our next topic, the good and bad driving habits. I've been riding a motorbike since I was eighteen years old. When I graduated from high school, I took a quick course and got my driving license at that time. So you can say that I have been riding motorbikes for seven years. I would assume that I'm a good rider.

The next thing I want to tell you about is some driving habits, both good and bad. Most of you should have known how to be a good rider. We must obey the traffic lights, the signs, and the signals from the police, which are very important and can sometimes save our lives; this is not an exaggeration. Some more good driving habits are paying attention while on the road, keeping a cool head, and making the right decision at the right time.

So, what are some of the poor driving habits? We can easily list them out, such as using a phone while we're driving, honking, or flashing the headlight. In my opinion, the most dangerous habit is speeding. It can make us look cool, but it also reduces our ability to handle situations. A lot of accidents happened because the driver was speeding. I saw with my own eyes a man speed up and crash his bike into the train just because he wanted to cross the rail road and the train was nearby. The result was horrible, and I realized how important driving safely was.

That's all for today's topic; I hope you enjoy it and be safe on the long road ahead. Please leave any comments or questions about my writing.
Thank you!!

Trần Vĩnh Phúc - ps22224

2022-11-13 09:39:54 UTC

DONE!
PHÚC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher. My name is Phuc, today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I am not yet a good driver because I run red lights and speeding but I can give some examples of good and bad driving habits. It's always good to keep your rearview mirror attached, use turn signals, stop at red lights, don't go over the speed limit. The bad thing is speeding, not using signals, not focusing on the road, etc. but I think the most dangerous is speeding. I have some habits to be able to drive fluently such as checking mirrors, signal lights when turning or stopping. I once witnessed an actual crash between 2 motorbikes; They rushed at each other like a hurricane. This happened about 2 years ago, right next to my house. Fortunately, none of them died, with only minor injuries. Accidents are mainly caused by the driver of the vehicle in the wrong lane and caused by alcohol. What I learned from that is to never use alcohol while driving or operating a vehicle. In short, we must always obey the traffic laws while driving because it will keep us safe and safe for everyone. thank you for listening.

Hello teacher. My name is Phuc, and today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. I am not yet a good driver because I run red lights and speed, but I can give some examples of good and bad driving habits. It's always good to keep your rearview mirror attached, use turn signals, stop at red lights, and don't go over the speed limit. The bad thing is speeding, not using signals, not focusing on the road, etc., but I think the most dangerous thing is speeding. I have to have some habits to be able to drive fluently, such as checking mirrors and signal lights when turning or stopping. I once witnessed an actual crash between two motorbikes. They rushed at each other like a hurricane. This happened about two years ago, right next to my house. Fortunately, none of them died and only suffered minor injuries. Accidents are mainly caused by the driver of the vehicle being in the wrong lane and by alcohol. What I learned from that is to never use alcohol while driving or operating a vehicle. In short, we must always obey the traffic laws while driving because it will keep us and everyone else safe. Thank you for listening.

PS26524_Nguyễn Trọng Khoa

2022-11-13 10:04:40 UTC

DONE!
TRỌNG KHOA XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello Ms Sum, everyone. I'm so glad to be here again, and today topic is our appearance. It's an important aspect in our life, which brings up the first impression of other people about us when we meet for the first time.

First to say, I do take care of my appearance every day and I am satisfied with it. I usually brush my teeth twice a day, one in the morning after I get up and when I'm about to go to sleep. I also use shampoo and shower gel for my body in the bath. And I don't spend so much money on the cosmetic products in spite of knowing that they good for the skin, the hair, ...etc.

Moving on, once every month I will go to the barbershop in order to have my hair cut. My favorite babershop is Liêm's Barber for their decoration, the way they dress, all of them highlight the typical Chicano style. The hair cut costs me about 60 to 100 thousand VND each time and I feel good about it.

Another thing about taking care of appearance is plastic surgery. It's the most favorite way of the lady and some celebrities around the world. It can no doubt enhance ourr appearance and improve our confidence but it still have some bad stuffs. A lot of cases showed that people abused the surgery and some mistakes can happen and lead to many risk of the patience, the worst is dead, and the price is so expensive and requires a very long time of recovery.

That's all of my post today, hope you enjoy and I always welcome all of your comments of questions about my writting.
Thanks for reading!

Hello, Ms. Sum, and everyone! I'm so glad to be here again, and today's topic is our appearance. It's an important aspect of our lives that brings up the first impression of other people about us when we meet for the first time.

First and foremost, let me state that I take care of my appearance every day and am pleased with it. I usually brush my teeth twice a day, once in the morning after I get up and again before I go to sleep. I also use shampoo and shower gel for my body in the bath. And, despite knowing that cosmetic products are good for the skin, hair, and so on, I don't spend a lot of money on them.

Moving on, once every month I will go to the barbershop in order to have my hair cut. My favorite barbershop is Liêm's because of their decoration, the way they dress, and the way they all highlight the typical Chicano style. The hair cut costs me about 60 to 100 thousand VND each time, and I feel good about it.

Another thing about taking care of your appearance is plastic surgery. It is the preferred method of the lady and some celebrities all over the world.It can no doubt enhance our appearance and improve our confidence, but it still has some bad stuff. A lot of cases showed that people abused the surgery, and some mistakes can happen and lead to many risks for the patient; the worst is death, and the price is so expensive and requires a very long time of recovery.

That's all for my post today; I hope you enjoy it, and I always welcome all of your comments and questions about my writing.
Thanks for reading!

Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-11-13 11:30:49 UTC

Nguyễn Văn Nghi

2022-11-13 11:49:10 UTC

Lê Quang Trí

trilqps24876 — 2022-11-13 14:33:51 UTC

First of all, I want to talk about greetings in Vietnam. The traditional Vietnamese way of greeting is to nod, bow, and say hello. I usually greet elderly people or customers by the bow.

Secondly, I would like to talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people often exchange business cards formal way. I usually give business cards to others with two hands and the same when I take business cards from others. Because it brings me to feel polite. I could see the company name, address, job title, and contact on the business card.

Thirdly, I want to mention small talk. The topics Vietnamese people usually have for small talk are family, politics, and love. I often avoid topics such as salary, age, and relationships for small talk because it’s sensitive and others don’t like to answer.

Finally, it is about gestures. The gestures have different meanings in different countries. For example, the ok-sign in the United States means yes. In Brazil, it means rude. So you have to be careful when using gestures in each country.

In Vietnam, I know some gestures such as thumbs-up mean “like”,” good”, ok- a sign that means “yes”. In conclusion, in order to get acquainted well, we should know how to greet each other and appropriate small talk.

That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Hello teacher, My full name is Trí. I’m eighteen years old. I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about Vietnamese gestures and customs.

First of all, I want to talk about greetings in Vietnam. The traditional Vietnamese way of greeting is to nod, bow, and say hello. I usually greet elderly people or customers by the bow.

Secondly, I would like to talk about exchanging business cards. Vietnamese people often exchange business cards in a formal way. I usually give business cards to others with two hands, and I do the same when I take business cards from others. I like it because it makes me feel polite.I could see the company name, address, job title, and contact information on the business card.

In Vietnam, I know some gestures such as the thumbs-up mean "like," "good", ok- a sign that means "yes." In conclusion, in order to get acquainted well, we should know how to greet each other and make appropriate small talk.

That is the end of my speech. Thank you for listening.

Lê Quang Trí

trilqps24876 — 2022-11-13 14:34:32 UTC

DONE!
TRÍ XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, My name is Tri. I'm eighteen years old, I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about my favorite movie.
First of all, I want to say that I love watching movies because it helps me relax after stressful days. I love action films, comedy, a science – fiction.

Secondly, I would like to talk about my favorite movie. My favorite film is Avengers: Endgame. I love this movie because there are characters I like Tony Stark, Captain America,... The movie is so violent, and thought-provoking. The kind of film is science–fiction.
The film is about Earth's mightiest heroes. It was released in 2019. The film lasts about 3 hours with the cast of Robert Downey, Chris Evan, Mark Ruffalo,... The character I like most in the film is Captain America.
Thirdly, I want to mention the place and people to watch the film. I watched the film at CGV Cinema. I often watched films on the weekends. I usually watched the film with my friend. I have watched the film 4 times.
Finally, I have learned solidarity, friendship, and self-sacrifice from the film. If I have a chance, I will watch this movie again. In conclusion, I would say that the movie is really good. It had a good ploy Everyone should watch this movie once in their life.

Hello teacher, My name is Tri. I'm eighteen years old, and I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about my favorite movie.
First of all, I want to say that I love watching movies because it helps me relax after stressful days. I love action films, comedies, and science fiction.

Secondly, I would like to talk about my favorite movie. My favorite film is Avengers: Endgame. I love this movie because there are characters I like: Tony Stark, Captain America,... The movie is so violent and thought-provoking. The genre of the film is science fiction.
The film is about Earth's mightiest heroes. It was released in 2019. The film lasts about three hours and stars Robert Downey Jr., Chris Evans, Mark Ruffalo, and others.The character I like most in the film is Captain America.
Thirdly, I want to mention the place and people to watch the film. I watched the film at CGV Cinema. I often watch films on the weekends. I usually watch the film with my friend. I have watched the film 4 times.
Finally, I have learned about solidarity, friendship, and self-sacrifice from the film. If I have a chance, I will watch this movie again. In conclusion, I would say that the movie is really good. It had a good ploy. Everyone should watch this movie once in their life.

Trần Thế Đức

2022-11-13 14:34:52 UTC

DONE!
ĐỨC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, how are you today? I'm good. I'm very happy to tell you about good and bad driving habit.
First of all, I will talk about my riding experiences. I can ride a motorbike for me and I learned to ride when I was 18 years old. My parents bought a motorbike for me and its brand is Honda Wave. I think I'm a careful and good rider.
Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. In my opinion, good driving habits are paying attention to the road, shopping at the red light, and maintaining a safe following distance. In contrast, bad driving habits are speeding and calling or texting while driving. I think speeding is the most dangerous habit because you cannot control the car and see other people on the road when you so fast. I always ride at about 30-40 km/per hour.
Finally, I saw an accident 3 years ago on the Highway 19. Two big containers hit other and made other motorbike behind them tailgated. Luckily, nobody hurt but some motorbikes were damage. I learned from that accident is not speeding. That's my speech. Thank you for listening!
Hello teacher, How are you today? I'm good. I'm very happy to tell you about good and bad driving habits.
First of all, I will talk about my riding experiences. I can ride a motorcycle and have done so since I was 18 years old.Honda Wave is the brand of motorcycle that my parents purchased for me.I think I'm a careful and good rider.
Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. In my opinion, good driving habits include paying attention to the road, stopping at the red light, and maintaining a safe following distance. In contrast, bad driving habits include speeding and talking or texting while driving. I think speeding is the most dangerous habit because you cannot control the car and see other people on the road when you drive so fast. I always ride at about 30 to 40 km/h.
Finally, I saw an accident 3 years ago on Highway 19. Two large containers collided, causing other motorcycles to tailgate.Luckily, nobody was hurt, but some motorcycles were damaged. I learned from that accident that speeding is not okay. That's my speech. Thank you for listening!

Lê Quang Trí

trilqps24876 — 2022-11-13 14:35:25 UTC

First of all, I’m talking about some general information about the hotel. The last time I stayed in a hotel was 2 years ago. The name of the hotel is Xuan Hong Hotel. The hotel is in Da Lat city, at 69 Nam Ki Khoi Nghia street.

The location is good because it is near the city center. I can visit famous places in Dalat easily. I stayed in a double room because I traveled with my friends. There It cost about 600.000vnđ for one night. There were a large TV and a queen-size bed.

Secondly, I would like to talk about facilities, services, and amenities. The Hotel has turned down the bed, extra towers, extra hangers, and wake-up call. I used wake-up calls, and turn down the bed services because I had to go out early and I use wireless Internet service because I had to do homework so I felt comfortable when staying in there. In-room, I had a mini-bar, there are a lot of drinks and I had a hair dryer, it was convenient.

Finally, I was satisfied with my stay. I had a pleasant experience. What I liked most about the hotel is the price and service, the room rate was cheap so I saved money. But I don’t like the breakfast at the hotel because wasn’t delicious and too expensive. I think it needs to be fixed so that tourists have a better experience here. The hotel has a lot of good things so I will recommend it to my friends.

That is the end of my speech. Thank you for your listening

Hello teacher, My full name is Trí, and I'm nineteen years old. I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about a hotel that I have stayed in.

First of all, let me give you some general information about the hotel. The last time I stayed in a hotel was two years ago. The name of the hotel is Xuan Hong Hotel. The hotel is in Da Lat City, at 69 Nam Ki Khoi Nghia Street.

The location is good because it is near the city center. I can visit famous places in Dalat easily. I stayed in a double room because I traveled with my friends. It cost about 600.000 VND for one night. There was a large TV and a queen-size bed.

Secondly, I would like to talk about facilities, services, and amenities. The hotel has reduced the bed size, provided additional towers and hangers, and issued a wake-up call.I used wake-up calls and turned down the bed services because I had to go out early, and I used wireless Internet service because I had to do homework, so I felt comfortable when staying there. In-room, I had a mini-bar; there were a lot of drinks, and I had a hair dryer. It was convenient.

Finally, I was satisfied with my stay. I had a pleasant experience. What I liked most about the hotel was the price and service. The room rate was cheap, so I saved money. But I don’t like the breakfast at the hotel because it wasn’t delicious and was too expensive. I think it needs to be fixed so that tourists have a better experience here. The hotel has a lot of good things, so I will recommend it to my friends.

That is the end of my speech. Thank you for taking the time to listen.

Trần Thế Đức

2022-11-13 14:35:28 UTC

DONE!
ĐỨC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, how are you today? I'm good . I'm very happy to tell you about how I care about my appearance.
Fisrt of all, I'm happy with my appearance right now, I'm fit and tall. I take care of my appearance everyday for the best look. For my hair. I usually wash my hair with shampoo,conditioner 4 times a week. I also use hair serum. The product I use for my hairs is Biotin shampoo. For my teeth, I brush my teeth twice a day with Closeup toothpaste and Listerin mouthwash. Beside, I usually use sunscreen everyday when I go out. I go to the hair salon once a year for new hair for Tet holiday. The salon is near my house and for each time I go there, I spend 1 milllion VND. The service I use at the salon is haircut, hair care and dye my hair. I think cosmetic surgery is not bad but when we do it a lot, it can cause harm to out health. If I have money, I won't do cosmetic surgery, I will go to spa, or gym, or eat healty food for a better health and glow skin.
Morever, inside beauty is more important than outside beauty, so you can work hard, study hard and become more intelligent people than do cosmetic surgery.
That's my speech. Thank you for llistening!

Hello teacher, how are you today? I'm good . I'm very happy to tell you about how I care about my appearance.
First of all, I'm happy with my appearance right now; I'm fit and tall. I take care of my appearance every day for the best look. for my hair. I usually wash my hair with shampoo and conditioner four times a week. I also use hair serum. Biotin shampoo is the product I use on my hair.I brush my teeth twice a day with Closeup toothpaste and use Listerine mouthwash.Besides, I usually use sunscreen every day when I go out. I go to the hair salon once a year for new hair for the Tet holiday. The salon is near my house, and for each time I go there, I spend 1 million VND. The services I use at the salon are a haircut, hair care, and dyeing my hair. I think cosmetic surgery is not bad, but when we do it a lot, it can cause harm to our health. If I had the money, I would not have cosmetic surgery; instead, I would go to the spa, gym, or eat healthy foods to improve my health and skin.
Furthermore, inside beauty is more important than outside beauty, so rather than undergoing cosmetic surgery, you should work hard, study hard, and become a more intelligent person.
That's my speech. Thank you for listening!

Lê Quang Trí

trilqps24876 — 2022-11-13 14:35:55 UTC

DONE!
TRÍ XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello teacher, my full name is Trí, I’m nineteen years old. I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I’m quite confident about riding a motorbike. I have ridden a motorbike since 4 years ago. I have a motorbike at home. I think I'm a good motorbike rider because I always wear a helmet when I ride a motorbike and never talk on the phone while riding.

Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. There are many good driving habits as signaling when turning, maintaining a safe following distance, and paying attention. However, there are many bad driving habits as not stopping at red lights, talking on the phone, weave through traffic. To me, the most dangerous driving habit is speeding because you can’t control the speed so you maybe die when there is a big van or another car. In the past, I had an accident for about 2 years. The accident was at the intersection of Nguyen Trai street. I was riding my motorbike and I hit the motorbike and was running a red light. Then I fell on the street, lucky no one wasn’t seriously injured, my motorbike was slightly damaged. I think I need to pay attention more and handle situations faster. In conclusion. I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe, and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected acc

Hello teacher, My full name is Trí, and I’m nineteen years old. I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my riding experience. I’m quite confident about riding a motorcycle. I've been riding a motorcycle for four years.I have a motorbike at home. I think I'm a good motorcycle rider because I always wear a helmet when I ride a motorcycle and never talk on the phone while riding.

Secondly, I would like to talk about good and bad driving habits. There are many good driving habits, such as signaling when turning, maintaining a safe following distance, and paying attention. However, there are many bad driving habits, such as not stopping at red lights, talking on the phone, and weaving through traffic. To me, the most dangerous driving habit is speeding because you can’t control the speed and you might die when there is a big van or another car. In the past, I had an accident that lasted for about 2 years. The accident was at the intersection of Nguyen Trai Street. I was riding my motorcycle, and I hit the motorcycle while running a red light. Then I fell on the street; luckily, no one was seriously injured, but my motorcycle was slightly damaged. I think I need to pay attention more and handle situations faster. In conclusion. I would say that people must drive carefully to be safe and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents.

Lê Quang Trí

trilqps24876 — 2022-11-13 14:36:16 UTC

DONE!
TRÍ XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, my full name is Trí, I’m nineteen years old. I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. I am not satisfied with my appearance because there is nothing outstanding about my appearance.

But in my opinion, having a good appearance is an advantage. It helps me become more confident and easily get attention from everyone. However, Having a good appearance isn’t enough, inner beauty is more important because it shows the personality of each person. To take care of my appearance, I usually brush my teeth twice a day, every morning after waking up and before going to bed. Then, I wash my face at least three times and take shower at least twice a day. . For personal care products, I use Pantene shampoo, Enchanteur shower gel, and P/S toothpaste. I usually go to the spa once a month for facials. It's located on Le Quang Khai Street, in District 3. I usually go to the spa alone, sometimes with my mother. When I go there, I usually get a green tea mask and advice on products for my face, I pay about 500 thousand VND each time

I think we should only get cosmetic surgery when it's really necessary and we have to know enough. It has the advantage of helping us become more beautiful and confident, but it also has disadvantages: complications, pain, and recovery can be quite long.

If I had the money I wouldn't have had cosmetic surgery because I love everything on my body, love natural beauty and I'm the only original in the world. That's all my topic. Thanks for listening

Hello teacher, My full name is Trí, and I’m nineteen years old. I’m studying digital marketing. Today I would like to talk about taking care of my appearance. I am not satisfied with my appearance because there is nothing outstanding about it.

But in my opinion, having a good appearance is an advantage. It helps me become more confident and easily get attention from everyone. However, having a good appearance isn’t enough; inner beauty is more important because it shows the personality of each person. To take care of my appearance, I usually brush my teeth twice a day, every morning after waking up and before going to bed. Then, I wash my face at least three times and take a shower at least twice a day. For personal care products, I use Pantene shampoo, Enchanteur shower gel, and P/S toothpaste. I usually go to the spa once a month for facials. It's located on Le Quang Khai Street, in District 3. I usually go to the spa alone, sometimes with my mother. When I go there, I usually get a green tea mask and advice on products for my face. I pay about 500 thousand VND each time.

I believe we should only have cosmetic surgery if it is truly necessary and we are well informed about it.It has the advantage of helping us become more beautiful and confident, but it also has disadvantages: complications, pain, and a recovery that can be quite long.

If I had the money, I wouldn't have had cosmetic surgery because I love everything about my body, I love natural beauty, and I'm the only original in the world. That concludes my subject.Thanks for listening.

Trần Thế Đức

2022-11-13 14:37:05 UTC

Hello Ms. Tran! My name is Duc. I'm going to talk about my favorite movie.

First of all, I would like to say that I love to watch movies. I am a big fan of documentaries.

Secondly, I'm going to talk about my favorite movie. My favorite movie is “The Trapped 13: How We Survived the Thai Cave”. It is an unforgettable movie. The movie is about rescuing a junior association football team, twelve members of the team, aged 11 to 16, and their 25-year-old assistant coach trapped in the Tham Luang Nang Non cave in northern Thailand. It was released on 5th October 2022.
Its length is about 1 hour 43 minutes. The characters are Eak and Tee and Titan... There are many main characters. But I really like Eak, he is an assistant coach. I like him because he has a high sense of responsibility. The scene I like most is when the whole team is successfully rescued from the Tham Luang cave.

Thirdly, let me talk about the time I watched this movie. The last time I watched it was 4 days ago. I watched it with my sister at home. We ate dinner while watching it. I have watched this movie about 3 times just because it's a great movie.

Finally, I felt great after watching it and I learned to be responsible, have a high sense of responsibility, always be optimistic in all situations and solidarity from this movie. I would recommend it to my friends.
That's the end of my speaking. Thank you for your listening.

Trần Thế Đức-ps24968

2022-11-13 14:39:05 UTC

DONE!
THỊNH XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, my name is Duc. I will talk about my favorite movie.
First of all, I want to say that I love watching movies. I am a fan of the anime genre.

Secondly, I will talk about my favorite movie. My favorite movie is "One Piece" This is an anime about the journey to become the pirate king of the captain ''LUFFY'' and the sea adventures of the members on the ship. The movie premiered on July 19, 1997.
The series has more than 900 episodes aired, but there is no sign of ending yet.
The main character is the boy "Monkey D. Luffy" and the members include: Roronoa Zoro, Nami, Usopp, Sanji, Tony Tony Chopper, Nico Robin, Franky, Brook, Jinbe. I love the character of "Brook" because he is a musician, my favorite scene is when "LUFFY" comes to save his brother.

Thirdly, I would like to talk about the time I watched this movie. I watch movies at home. I watched it in 2018. I watched it with my best friend. We usually snack while watching movies. Every time I watch a movie, I feel happy. I learned after each episode: “Follow your passion and cherish your friends” in this series. I would recommend it to my friends.
That was the end of my speech. Thank you for listening.

Hello teacher, my name is Duc. I will talk about my favorite movie.
First of all, I want to say that I love watching movies. I am a fan of the anime genre.

Secondly, I will talk about my favorite movie. My favorite movie is "One Piece." This is an anime about the journey to become the pirate king of the captain "Lucky" and the sea adventures of the members on the ship. The movie premiered on July 19, 1997.
The show has aired over 900 episodes, but there is no sign of an end in sight.
The main character is the boy "Monkey D. Luffy," and the members include: Roronoa Zoro, Nami, Usopp, Sanji, Tony Tony Chopper, Nico Robin, Franky, Brook, and Jinbe. I love the character of "Brook" because he is a musician, and my favorite scene is when "LUFFY" comes to save his brother.

Thirdly, I would like to talk about the time I watched this movie. I watch movies at home. I watched it in 2018. I watched it with my best friend. We usually snack while watching movies. Every time I watch a movie, I feel happy. I learned after each episode to "Follow your passion and cherish your friends" in this series. I would recommend it to my friends.
That was the end of my speech. Thank you for listening.

Trần Thế Đức-ps24968

2022-11-13 14:40:23 UTC

DONE!
ĐỨC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello Ms. Tran, My name is Duc. Today, I want to talk about the hotel that I have stayed in. Last vacation, I went with my best friend to Vung Tau. We stayed in a hotel called "Malibu" Located on Le Hong Phong street, Ba Ria - Vung Tau ward, Vietnam. Hotel near the beach. We booked a single room with a medium bed. The cost for a night in that hotel is not expensive. That's 600 thousand Vietnamese Dong. Now, let me tell you about the hotel facilities, amenities and services. The hotel is fully equipped with all modern amenities. In our room, there was a large air conditioner. Standing showers are also available for this room type. If your group of close friends is more than 2 people, you can ask the hotel to prepare an extra bed. The hotel provided quite a few necessary services for us. We used the free airport shuttle bus to get from the airport to the hotel. There is a large swimming pool right in front of the hotel where we went to swim every morning. We had breakfast in the four-star restaurant right on the ground floor. The food there is very good, especially the seafood dishes are delicious. To end the speech, I would like to say that the hotel is really good. We are all satisfied with our stay there. I would recommend it to my friends.
That's all about my speech. Thanks for your listening.

Hello, Ms. Tran, My name is Duc. Today, I want to talk about the hotel that I have stayed in. Last vacation, I went with my best friend to Vung Tau. We stayed in a hotel called "Malibu," located on Le Hong Phong Street in Ba Ria-Vung Tau Province, Vietnam. hotel near the beach. We booked a single room with a medium bed. The cost of a night in that hotel is not expensive. That's 600 thousand Vietnamese dong. Now, let me tell you about the hotel's facilities, amenities, and services. The hotel is fully equipped with all modern amenities. In our room, there was a large air conditioner. Standing showers are also available for this room type. If your group of close friends is larger than two, you can request an extra bed from the hotel.The hotel provided quite a few necessary services for us. We used the free airport shuttle bus to get from the airport to the hotel. There is a large swimming pool right in front of the hotel, where we go to swim every morning. We had breakfast in the four-star restaurant right on the ground floor. The food there is very good, especially the seafood dishes, which are delicious. To end the speech, I would like to say that the hotel is really good. We are all satisfied with our stay there. I would recommend it to my friends.
That's all about my speech. Thanks for your listening.

Trần Thế Đức-ps24968

2022-11-13 14:41:19 UTC

DONE!
ĐỨC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!

Hello, Ms. Tran, my name is Duc. Today I would like to talk about my good and bad driving habits, first of all I want to share with you my driving experience. I have a motorbike and have been riding it for the past 4 years, it was given to me by my parents. Let me know that I am confident that I am a good and safe driver that I love.
Secondly, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits, I am confident that I drive very well and safely because I always stop at red lights according to the regulations and do not drink while driving, in addition, I have the habit of driving. bad driving habits. I ran too fast and forgot to turn on my turn signal when crossing the street, so the most dangerous thing I faced while driving was falling and getting injured. I often ride a motorbike to go to school and work.
Finally, I told about an accident that I met while going to school, it was a collision between a motorbike and a car while speeding, fortunately no one was injured and I also felt that I should obey. traffic Safety. throughput and speed allowed to protect yourself. as well as others. I want to say that people must drive carefully to be safe, and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents, I would recommend this to my friends.
That was the end of my speech. thanks for listening

Hello, Ms. Tran, My name is Duc. Today I would like to talk about my good and bad driving habits. First of all, I want to share with you my driving experience. I have a motorbike and have been riding it for the past 4 years; it was given to me by my parents. Let me know that I am confident that I am a good and safe driver that I love.
Secondly, I want to talk about good and bad driving habits. I am confident that I drive very well and safely because I always stop at red lights according to the regulations and do not drink while driving. In addition, I have the habit of driving. bad driving habits. I ran too fast and forgot to turn on my turn signal when crossing the street, so the most dangerous thing I faced while driving was falling and getting injured. I often ride a motorbike to go to school and work.
Finally, I told you about an accident that I met while going to school. It was a collision between a motorcycle and a car while speeding; fortunately, no one was injured, and I also felt that I should obey. traffic Safety. Throughput and speed enabled you to protect yourself and others.I want to say that people must drive carefully to be safe and avoid bad driving habits to avoid unexpected accidents. I would recommend this to my friends.
That was the end of my speech. Thanks for listening.

Trần Thế Đức-ps24968

2022-11-13 14:41:46 UTC

DONE!
ĐỨC XEM BÀI SỬA PHÍA DƯỚI EM NHÉ!
Em so sánh đối chiếu bài của em và bài sửa của cô bên dưới, chú ý lỗi dấu phẩy, viết hoa luôn nhé em!
Nếu có gì không hiểu em hỏi cô ngay trên lớp!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR GOOD TRY!
Hello teacher, how are you today? I'm good . I'm very happy to tell you about how I care about my appearance.
Fisrt of all, I'm happy with my appearance right now, I'm fit and tall. I take care of my appearance everyday for the best look. For my hair. I usually wash my hair with shampoo,conditioner 4 times a week. I also use hair serum. The product I use for my hairs is Biotin shampoo. For my teeth, I brush my teeth twice a day with Closeup toothpaste and Listerin mouthwash. Beside, I usually use sunscreen everyday when I go out. I go to the hair salon once a year for new hair for Tet holiday. The salon is near my house and for each time I go there, I spend 1 milllion VND. The service I use at the salon is haircut, hair care and dye my hair. I think cosmetic surgery is not bad but when we do it a lot, it can cause harm to out health. If I have money, I won't do cosmetic surgery, I will go to spa, or gym, or eat healty food for a better health and glow skin.
Morever, inside beauty is more important than outside beauty, so you can work hard, study hard and become more intelligent people than do cosmetic surgery.
That's my speech. Thank you for llistening!

Hello teacher, how are you today? I'm good . I'm very happy to tell you about how I care about my appearance.
First of all, I'm happy with my appearance right now; I'm fit and tall. I take care of my appearance every day for the best look. for my hair. I usually wash my hair with shampoo and conditioner four times a week. I also use hair serum. Biotin shampoo is the product I use on my hair.I brush my teeth twice a day with Closeup toothpaste and use Listerine mouthwash.Besides, I usually use sunscreen every day when I go out. I go to the hair salon once a year for new hair for the Tet holiday. The salon is near my house, and for each time I go there, I spend 1 million VND. The services I use at the salon are a haircut, hair care, and dyeing my hair. I think cosmetic surgery is not bad, but when we do it a lot, it can cause harm to our health. If I had the money, I would not have cosmetic surgery; instead, I would go to the spa, gym, or eat healthy foods to improve my health and skin.
Furthermore, inside beauty is more important than outside beauty, so rather than undergoing cosmetic surgery, you should work hard, study hard, and become a more intelligent person.
That's my speech. Thank you for listening!

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-13 16:10:57 UTC

Lê Thuận Thành - PS21891

2022-11-13 16:12:57 UTC

Hello teacher, today I will tell you about my favourite movie. In my free time, I often play game, listen to music and watch flim. I very love watching movies. My favorite movie genre is drama, comedy, cartoon and romantic. So one of the most favorite movies is Minions. The genre it is cartoon. The main characters are Bob, Kelvin and Stuart. They are very funny. The funniest part was when Bob became King after Stuart tried to steel the crown from the queen Elizabeth. Minions are small little yellow pills that get into a lot of trouble. The movie is about 1 hour and 30 minutes long. I like Bob most. Bob is the youngest minion with two round eyes. He has a little teddy bear that Bob always brings to anywhere he goes. i watched that movie at 8pm at cgv theater with my family. I usually use popcorn combo while watching movies. I actually love this movie very much. I have seen all episodes of Minions before. I am looking forward to seeing the newest episode named: Minions: The Rise of Gru.

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-13 16:16:02 UTC

PS23314-Nguyễn Anh Khoa

2022-11-13 16:20:02 UTC

Hello teacher, today I will talk about how I take care of my appearance. I'm happy with my appearance right now, because I often take care of my appearance . With my hair I use some shampoo products from "Clear" brand, with my face skin I recommend use cleanser from "Oxy" brand and my teeth I only use "PS" toothpaste. I think three of thinks have a good performance, so I use these everyday and vary satisfied. Beside that one a month, I often go to the hair salon for cut down my hairs. That is a small salon near my mom shop, and the skill of owner salon I think it good with me also and I only use normal haircuts service which cost me 40k vnđ. I think that all why I'm happy with my appearance now. Thank for listening.

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-13 16:21:12 UTC

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-13 16:25:45 UTC

Lê Thuận Thành - PS21891

2022-11-13 16:27:15 UTC

Hello teacher today I will tell you about a hotel I have stayed in. The name of the hotel is " The Imperial Hotel & Resort ". The hotel is in 159 Thuy Van Street, Thang Tam Ward, Thang Tam, Vung Tau. The location is very good because it is near in the city center and beautiful sea view. I can go to the beach and eat easily. My friend parents took me there by car. I stayed there last months on holiday. The room rate about 1500000 vnd. There were a large TV and a twin bed. There are a lot of drinks and fast food. The hotel had laundry service and spa so I can relax after travelling a lot. I like the service and price most. I like the atmosphere, it's a fresh air and comfortable I see a lot of good things so I will recommend to my friends.
Thanks for listening!

PS26765_Hoàng Vĩnh Nam

2022-11-13 16:31:35 UTC

Lê Thuận Thành-PS21891

2022-11-13 16:37:21 UTC

Hello teacher today I will tell you about good and bad driving habits. I can ride a motobike . I have been driving a motorbike for 3 years. I have a motorbike at home and I use it to go to school Driving a motorbike is dangerous so I always pay attention. I hope I'll be a good driver and I can drift motobike. There are many good driving habits that people already know. Many people wear helmet, turn with signal and observe the speed limit when driving. I see some people don't turn off lights signal, don't stop at red lights and talk on the phone. I think the most dangerous driving behavior is driving with high speed, exceeding control limits. You maybe die when there is a collision with a big van and other cars. I always wear helmet when I drive my motorbike and never talk on the phone while driving. In the past, I had an accident. I hit the motorbike when it turn right but signaled "left-turn" lights. The accident was at the intersection of 3/2 street and Ngo Quyen street. I was driving my car when I had the accident. The accident was about 2 months ago. My car was slightly damaged. They turn right but signaled "left-turn" lights. There was no body hurt in the accident. There was no much damage. I think I need pay attention more.
Thanks for listening!

Lê Thuận Thành-PS21891

2022-11-13 16:44:07 UTC

Hello teacher today I will tell you about take care of my appearance. I am happy with my appearance. I think appearance is important because some people feel more confident in themselves or when meet someone and you look good, that's a way to show respect to the person you meet. Inner beauty is more important. You will impress and attractive other people by inner beauty, your behaviors. I often take care of my teeth by brushing teeth two times a day. I often use toothpaste P/S for my teeth. I often take care at home so I usually use a facial mask. I buy facial mask about 20000 VNĐ. I think cosmetic surgery is good. It's helps everyone change outner and be more good-looking. Cosmetic surgery can change your outer beauty and you can have good appearance is shorter time, but it is very expensive and can have risks/consequences. If I have money. I don't do cosmetic surgery. I will use it for other things which are more meaningful.
Thanks for listening!