8-1 Mindmap A -- Constructive Criticism by Megan Wilkinson

mwilkinson2 — 2016-09-15 15:06:05 UTC

This was a good mindmap but you could have added more information.

jtaylor61 — 2016-09-15 16:07:49 UTC

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:31:04 UTC

A good mindmap, not very crowded but just enough info to get a general idea.

JuliannJones — 2016-09-15 16:33:31 UTC

I think that you should have explained a little but more on your main ideas.

cruiz8 — 2016-09-15 16:35:42 UTC

You need more information and detail

I honestly think this is a very good mind map

mcampbell23 — 2016-09-15 16:36:49 UTC

asingh9 — 2016-09-15 16:37:30 UTC

I think you could have constructed this better. By adding a little more detail and explaining the main ideas.

You kind of stopped on revivalism, and didn't say anything about that topic

jejoiner — 2016-09-15 16:37:51 UTC

jvalladolid — 2016-09-15 16:38:57 UTC

I like how you had you bubbles spaced out but you could have added more information

I think adding on more would have been better but this mind map is still great and covers most of the main ideas

dnewcomb1 — 2016-09-15 16:41:07 UTC

"Please tell me Why you always hatin."

mcampbell23 — 2016-09-15 16:49:51 UTC

-YG

Swag Mind Map

dnoland2 — 2016-09-15 16:52:57 UTC

Could've added a little bit more detail. But it's still pretty good. <3

You need to say what transcendentalism means or is

cray3 — 2016-09-15 16:54:25 UTC

Love it

ndawson1 — 2016-09-15 16:55:35 UTC

dmartinez5 — 2016-09-15 19:07:25 UTC

didn´t explain some of the topic main ideas

This is pretty well organized but you need a bit more information these look a little low on detail maybe talk about reforms more

dserna — 2016-09-15 19:33:06 UTC

lugutierrez — 2016-09-15 20:16:38 UTC

You should of write more information, but it looks good.

stsosie — 2016-09-15 21:23:09 UTC

THE FONT IS SUPER DUMB I H8 IT!!! I LIKE THE ORGANIZATION BUT THE FONT COLOR IS A MONSTROSITY!!!

You didn't mention anything about the people who influenced many reforms. Dorothea Dix should have been connected to hospitals and prisons. You should have connected Ralph Waldo and Henry Thoreau to "Transcendentalism and Reforms". What reforms happened for the mentally ill? What did utopian communities led to? Very incomplete.

rbamburg — 2016-09-15 23:22:57 UTC

nisidro — 2016-09-16 01:52:44 UTC

needed a little more information

I like the info that you have but needs a little more.

amartinez46 — 2016-09-16 02:38:29 UTC

wrowan2 — 2016-09-16 03:25:33 UTC

Needs more info and the text in the red needs improvement.

rvilla1 — 2016-09-16 03:50:42 UTC

Everything looks great but one of the boxes on the left looks to be out of place

sdelfin — 2016-09-16 04:26:19 UTC

Your mind map is well organized but you might want to consider using your own main topics instead of using the ones from the book.

lugutierrez — 2016-09-16 04:50:34 UTC

needs more information

eriesen — 2016-09-16 04:59:16 UTC

I think you need to elaborate on revivalism.

jruiz6 — 2016-09-16 06:22:38 UTC

the map was well structured but there was a lot of information missing concerning people and events

skandler — 2016-09-16 17:09:57 UTC

Needs more information on everything and use your own words for the titles