Valeria Hernández Macchi by Valeria Hernandez Macchi

My personal profile

valeria_hernandezm — 2018-08-06 19:41:57 UTC

There are many aspects of my personality that I would like to describe.

For those who do not know me, My name is Valeria Hernández Macchi, I am 22 years old and I study advertising, I go in the seventh semester.
I’m a very peaceful person, I enjoy spending time with my friends and family, although I consider myself a very responsable person about my studies and work.
I also like to ride my bike, I try to mobilize everywhere in it, sometimes there are very stressfully situations that overwhelmed me, but I try to keep calm.
My future plans are getting my degree and going to Australia for a year.

Questions

valeria_hernandezm — 2018-08-12 00:00:55 UTC

Where are your based?
In Bogotá, Colombia, I was born here.
What do your friends say about you?
That I’m very laid back, easy going and encredibly happy.
What´s your wors habit?
I try to use my bike most of the time and I like to practice crossfit.
what are your future plans ?
My future plans are getting my degree and going to Australia for a year
and work hard to be able to travel through more parts of the world.
What skill do you have?
I'm very good at drawing, but actually I do it when I feel bored.

Have you ever done anything scarry?

valeria_hernandezm — 2018-08-12 00:32:46 UTC

Last year, in October if I remember correctly, I went on my bike because I had been with my friends to go to ciclovia, I arrived earlier than everyone at the meeting point so I stayed there waiting for them to arrive. At one point I was approached by 2 people who were also on bikes, very well dressed, even one of them was wearing a cyclist uniform and a very good bicycle.
The situation began to seem normal because it seemed we had the same taste, we started to engage in a conversation about a group that they were supposed to go to different parts of the city and shoot. At a time when we were near an avenue they strategically settled to block my exit, for about 5 minutes the man asked me a question that made me turn and when I turned around I saw that he had a knife in my waist, surprising me completely and leaving me really confused.
The man asked me to give him my suitcase or my bicycle pushing the knife a little more and pressing on me, so I decided to give him my suitcase in which I was carrying my cell phone, my identification papers and money. When I handed her my belongings I felt very scared, I had never felt so scared really so much that I was shaking. 2 minutes passed while I understood what happened and I thought about following them, but it was too late.
It was the time where I felt the most fear and vulnerability in my life.

Valeria

odruiz — 2018-08-13 23:33:41 UTC

The three posts are really interesting and complete. However, the second looks more like a questionnaire and not a paragraph. There are few mistakes regarding grammar and spelling that you need to consider for next time. In general the information is quite interesting and easy to follow.

This is your grade:

Content: 5
Vocabulary and spelling: 4
Text order: 3.5 because there should have been 3 sequenced paragraphs.
Grammar:4.5

Global grade: 4.2 Good job dear!