Audrey S. by Audrey Smith https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC 2023-03-29 04:54:09 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234207 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234207 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234210 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234210 30 Basic Human Rights 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234211 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234211 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234212 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234212 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234213 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234213 Rough Draft 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234215 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234215 Final Draft 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234217 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234217 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234218 The point of veiw is in first person and the main character Mich is telling the story]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234218 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234219 My story takes  place boston Massatusats, and it takes place around 2002. The stories unjust because if you state your opinion you could be killed. This is a huge bomb zone that Mich and Ruby are trying to escape and so its very hot/ humid. ]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234219 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234221 Narrator/ Main character #1 Mich
- 15 yrs old
-6'1
-loves to hang out with friends
- has a very strong opioion about the society and its problems
Main character #2 Ruby
- 16 yrs old
-girl
-met mich trying to escape and they instantly became friends and stick together through out everything in the story
- 5'5
-She also is very nice with a strong opioion

]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234221 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234223 They both had the same opinion about what was happening and they wanted state them but they didn't want to risk dieing.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234223 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234224 Mich and Ruby both state their opinions and then everyone starts yelling their opinions and they hold a protest and the authorities have nothing they can do to stop all the city so everyone over rides the authorities.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234224 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234225 They both get more anymore mature and become super close with each other and they finally take a stand for what they want]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234225 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234226 when Mich and Ruby finally take a stand and stand for what they believe in and then everyone joins in starts a protest then they get their way]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234226 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234227 To always stick for what you  have to say and to always say in matter the consequence because you never know what may happen.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234227 Due Dates 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234228 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234228 Prompt 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234229 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234229 Theo's Song 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234231 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234231 Rubric 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234233 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234233 Point of View 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234234 The point of view in "Theo's Song" is 3rd person because the narrator is not involved in the story and there is no "I" or "me". ]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234234 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234236 The setting is in the smithy and we think it may have been medivel times.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234236 Characters 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234238 The two main characters are Theo a 13 year old blacksmith and Neema.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234238 Conflict 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234240 Government is assigning jobs to people without their choice. Theo is told to be a blacksmith when he wants to be a musician. The government gave people jobs they didnt want because people are easier to control when there unhappy.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234240 Plot: Sequential 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234241 Event #:2 The blacksmiths are working in the smithy.
Event #:1 Theo is taken from the nursery pod and given him his assignment.
Event #:3 Neema explains how the autorities assign people to jobs they hate.
Event #:4 theo made a resolution that will change his life forever
Event # (Climax):Theo sings against the authorities permission.
Event #:Theo gets taken by the authorities and gets punished.
Event #:Neema takes a stand with the blacksmiths and sang
Event #(Resolution): The government relized they cant stop this so they let people pick their jobs.]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234241 Theme 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234242 To not let anyone else control you and this is the theme because when theo and neema and all the other blacksmiths did what they stood up for they got what they wanted rather then letting the government control them]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234242 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234243 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. ]]> 2017-12-14 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/216234243 Plot Diagram Example 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/217024028 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/217024028 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201402868 https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/217024088 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:06:36 UTC https://padlet.com/201402868/8utdb01twqiz/wish/217024088