https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf Class Writing en-us 2019-04-02 04:31:22 UTC 2019-05-10 08:15:58 UTC hello@padlet.com qiuting2 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347473784 It was a scorching hot day. The sun shone like a brilliant disc in the sky. "Help!" shouted Mother. She just came back from the grocery store and saw her children watching television programme. She was very tired from carrying all the groceries. When she entered the house, she was walking unsteadily and panting heavily. It looked like she was about collapse. ]]> 2019-04-02 05:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347473784 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892045 It was a scorching day when Mother came back from the grocery store.  Ding dong! The door bell rang. Jane and Peter opened the door and saw that their mother was about to faint. Mother walked  unsteadily into the house.]]> 2019-04-03 01:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892045 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892234 It was a scorching hot day. Mother just came back from the groceries store.Beats of sweat trickled down Mother's  face as she went to the bed  to rest. ]]> 2019-04-03 01:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892234 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892351 About a year ago, something terrible happened when mother came home from the grocery store. Mother was perspiring because the weather was unforgiving. The sun shone mercilessly across the great blue sky. Mother returned home from the supermarket, staggering.
She walked into our apartment and felt like collapsing. Suddenly, she collapsed to the floor. 

''Ding dong!" Jane and Peter just returned from school.

''Ahhhh'' both of them screamed. They did not know what to do so they decided to call their neighbour.

]]> 2019-04-03 01:53:59 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892351 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892391 It was a scorching hot day,  the sun shone like a sparkling disc in the clear blue sky. After buying the groceries, she entered her house unsteadily.When her children Jane and Peter saw Mother, Peter took Mother's groceries and Jane brought Mother to her bed and asked her if she wants some water. Mother nodded her head.Jane]]> 2019-04-03 01:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892391 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892444 It was a scorching hot day at the zoo. Emily and Eric planned to spend the entire day there. While they were driving to the zoo, their mother called them and asked them if they could return home to help with the chores as she was sick .



]]> 2019-04-03 01:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892444 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892464 It was a very warm and hot day and the sun was shining brightly at Mother. She knocked on the door and called her children to open the door.

"Bang bang bang!" she knocked louder but no one helped her. She screamed at her children and then collapsed.]]> 2019-04-03 01:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892464 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892475 The sun shone brightly as mother dragged her feet home. She was breathing heavily as she was very tired. She was as pale as a ghost. She opened the door and walked unsteadily into the house. ''Help me carry the groceries,"  she murmured weakly.]]> 2019-04-03 01:54:42 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892475 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892526 It was a scorching hot day . The sun shone like a brilliant disk in the sky.Mother came back home from the supermarket carrying heavy things.As it was a hot day,mother had giddy spells and was breathing heavily.Her face was as pale as a ghost.CHILDREN,COME AND HELP ME!she shouted in a weak voice.Jane and Peter sprang into action.They helped  her to  bring the groceries to the kitchen_.
They fed her some medicine  and she went to rest.The children took over the house chores . When their mom woke up, she appreciated the effort

]]> 2019-04-03 01:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892526 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892527 It was one scorching hot day. The sun shone like a  brilliant disc in the sky.''Bring.......'' the door bell rang.Mother was very very weak and was breathing heavily and Mother was shocked as Peter and Jane were playing video games while eating potato chips. Mother came back from the noisy and crowded market stores. As Mother  entered the kitchen she was walking unsteadily as if she was ill.
 
Jane saw  Mother walking unsteadily and went to the room to take the thermometer to check Mother's  tempreture .As to Jane's surprise Mother was sick.Jane took  her Mother to her bedroom to rest.]]> 2019-04-03 01:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892527 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892792  “Rrrringgggg！”the  alarm clock rang.⏰Mother  went to the toilet to brush her teeth,wash her face and change her clothes.🙌.She carried her bag💼 and went to  the Supermarket to buy some vegetable and fruits  .🥗
    On her way home 🏡，the  sun shone like a brilliant disc⛅in the sky.☁
  ]]> 2019-04-03 01:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892792 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892794 Ring! It was a super scorching hot day. Mother was as pale as a ghost and looked super exhausted as she just came back from the grocery store. Jane scooted to mother and help her into the master bedroom.]]> 2019-04-03 01:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892794 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892805 One scorching hot day, the sun shone like a brilliant disc in the sky.
Mother went out to buy groceries at the super market. When she came home she unsteadily walked into the house and fell ill .Jane and Peter saw her walking// ]]> 2019-04-03 01:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347892805 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347893297   ''Ugh, so heavy!" Mother cried.
Jane and Peter were playing video games and did not realize that Mother came back home unsteadily. when they saw Mother,  they rushed to help her carry the groceries .]]> 2019-04-03 01:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347893297 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347894601 A great job done by you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your work is flashback and setting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job!!!!]]> 2019-04-03 02:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347894601 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347895778 Your work is great! Anyway, you could make your story longer!]]> 2019-04-03 02:15:05 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347895778 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896117 GOOD STORY BUT TOO SHORT.]]> 2019-04-03 02:16:40 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896117 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896126 You started with weather keep it up!]]> 2019-04-03 02:16:43 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896126 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896307 2019-04-03 02:17:44 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896307 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896380 We think that you used flashback great jo]]> 2019-04-03 02:18:04 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347896380 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347897062 Your work is fantastic!!! I guess your group put in a lot of effort.]]> 2019-04-03 02:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347897062 https://padlet.com/qiuting2/8udmpfzzxgsf/wish/347897179 Thank you for commenting for our.
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