HWEO performances by Jaclyn CHOW

Austin

s16010380_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:31 UTC

Star:You guys spoke your lines really fluently and really loud and confidently.

Star: The narration matches the play and are spoke in the correct time!

Wish: Curtis could memorise his lines, he can try not hold the script and read it next time.

Moses

2021-06-25 02:45:33 UTC

The performance is great because it has an understandable moral and the tone of voice was great. You can perhaps stick the script on the whiteboard to be more efficient.

Jackson and Ara

s16010386_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:33 UTC

Star: We think the tone of voice is really good
Star: Good acting
wish: We think they need more body language but the presentation is actually really good!

Becky and Meadow

2021-06-25 02:45:34 UTC

star:Their tone of voice was very good.
star:They spoke very clearly.
wish: they can try to remember narrators lines.

Lucia

s16010022_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:37 UTC

Star: You have an interesting tone of voice to keep it not that boring. Your tone of voice was also depending on your emotions.

Wish: However, you could possibly project your voices so the back of the class could easily hear your voices.

Wish : I think they can do better at (eye contact)

2021-06-25 02:45:37 UTC

Star : They do well at body language.

( Tiffany and Kaelin )
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Wish : i wish miss silena at the beggining would have put emphasis to 'I' when she says i hope you are exited because i am.

Star:

Kassidy

s16010193_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:45 UTC

Star:I think you guys did good in acting and trying to not laugh on set Wish:Maybe the tune could be slower

Eugene and Kingsley

s16010655_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:45 UTC

Star 1: They express the story clearly and as well as the moral.

Star 2: I think the story is very clear of what it is happened and last they say the reason of don't steal anyones work, to make a shortcut.

Wish: That Christy's voice is a little bit low but it gets better later on.

Marco

s16010125_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:47 UTC

Star: I like how the story connects with a moral and how taking shortcuts in life is bad.
Wish: I think everyone could talk a little louder because I can't really hear them. Also maybe you can try to not actually hit people next time.

Fayha

s19040014_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:48 UTC

Star: Your Voice was loud and clear, And your backgrounds were relevant to the scenes.
Star: Your eye contact and your props were al very relevant.
Wish: Maybe all of you have books to write with [Only kate did].

Grace

s18030037_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:54 UTC

Star:Very good preformance it was very intresthing! But Next time try to hold you laughs cause i can see that you were sort of laugh.
Wish: Maybe try to hold your laughing cause you were sort of laughing.

Ivan

s16010085_2 — 2021-06-25 02:45:58 UTC

Star: Your voices were all loud and clear! I could hear from even the back row!
Wish: Sometimes curtis's voice was lowering so curtis could try to stable his voice and keep it loud

group 3 comment akira

s160101901 — 2021-06-25 02:46:04 UTC

Star : I think that group 3 did a very good job by remember their lines and their presentation is very good. Their tones of voices were loud and clear.
Wish : I wish that they will be better

Emma

2021-06-25 02:46:04 UTC

Star: Interesting story and smooth play!
Wish: It would be better if Christy could speak louder, you guys could add more body language also!

Wendy

s16010134_2 — 2021-06-25 02:46:18 UTC

Star:I think the moral that they choose is really good.
Star: I think it was good that they did not need to look at the script too much.
Wish: I wish they could talk louder.

Rex

2021-06-25 02:47:02 UTC

The story line was great and I think you could speak without the script in your hands, so it will be better without it.

Issac

2021-06-25 02:48:39 UTC

Star: Good tone of voice and intonation.
Wish: Next time, you can not hold a script

Lucia

s16010022_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:12 UTC

Star: Great use of props. Also you have a clear setting and character. Clear moral of the story.

Wish: Do not speak too quickly and instead, speak more clearly. Speak louder so the back of the class could hear. The narrator could have a more interesting tone of voice.

Tiffany and Kaelin

2021-06-25 02:56:20 UTC

Star :
-The way they did it is perfect.
-The performance is good, they did do body language and they have eye-contact in between.

Wish:
-I wish they didn't copy dhar man and i wish they had more emotion.
-I wish Ivan can speak a little louder, then is better.

Austin

s16010380_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:27 UTC

Star: The drama included a whole lot of humour! Really funny!

Star: Issac done a lot of body gestures and perfected the tone of voice!

Wish: The script can be more original and Ivan and Meadow can speak more loudly. Meadow can speak her lines more slowly.

Ara and Jackson

s16010386_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:28 UTC

Star: We think its really good that they have the real props for the presentation.
Wish: We think they should add more tone of voice and it will be perfect if they do :D

Marco

s16010125_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:29 UTC

Star: I like how the mom was very rude and yelled at her son kept playing video games.
Wish: I wish that they could show more emotions on why the son was sad because he couldn't play video games. And maybe Ivan and Issac could speak a little bit louder.

Kassidy

s16010193_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:31 UTC

Star:The storyline was interesting and inspiring
Wish:Maybe the words could be slower so can hear clearer

Kate and Casey

s16010173_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:35 UTC

Star: The tone of voice was nice and clear, emotions were included too.

Star: The story was clear and easy to understand.

Wish: Next time, please come with a more original idea. Meadow could face the audience a bit more.

Grace

s18030037_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:37 UTC

Same thing as for Group 3 try to hold your laughs cause i can see that you were laughing but overall good job of the acting!

Akira

s160101901 — 2021-06-25 02:56:37 UTC

Star : they kind of remember their lines, and their props were real.
Wish : They need to give credit, louder voice, better tone of voice!!!

Christy

s16010104_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:39 UTC

Star: I like how meadow and Becky speak loud.
star: I like how Issac actually bring a xbox controller to make it seem more real,
Wish: I hope Ivan and Issac and speak clearly and speak more loud.

Fayha

s19040014_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:42 UTC

Star:Your props were relevant.
Star: I was able to hear everyone cleary!
Wish: Maybe becky could also move a bit.

Eugene and Kingsley

s16010655_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:47 UTC

Star 1: They show that gaming can have a positive side.

Star 2: They can show that don't really need to find a real job. Which we also can do a gamer, that is also a job.

Wish: I did not really hear Ivan and Issac, that they didn't really express his happiness when he won the tournament.

Moses

2021-06-25 02:56:51 UTC

The moral of the performance is amazing, it proves that you need to follow your dreams. But the narrator can speak with more expressions.

Wendy

s16010134_2 — 2021-06-25 02:56:59 UTC

Star:I liked that they choose good backgrounds.
Wish: I think they can speak louder and clearer.

Rex

2021-06-25 02:58:33 UTC

The story was great and the use of props are also good. But I think you could make the narrator speak in the middle to get peoples attention of the audience.

Emma

s20050005_2 — 2021-06-25 02:59:20 UTC

Star: The background can clearly show where they are. Slightly introduced into daily life also

Wish: It would be great if Issac and Ivan could speak louder next time. Add more body languages also

Meadow and Becky

2021-06-25 03:09:42 UTC

star:Their drawing and colouring is perfect!
star: i like how they protect animals from getting hunted.
wish: Grace can speak slower when she said "passing to Fayha to colour..."

Lucia

s16010022_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:42 UTC

Star: It's wonderful how you guys chose to do art instead of drama like other people. The moral was extremely clear.

Wish: Maybe you could make an artwork combined instead of 2 seperate artwork.

Tiffany and Kaelin

2021-06-25 03:09:44 UTC

Wish:
-i wish the presentations were longer because they were a bit short
-I wish they can show more things except of drawing and color animal pictures.

Star:
-they got there message through clearly that wildlife should be preserved.
-Their voice is clear and loud. Their performance is cool!

Akira

s160101901 — 2021-06-25 03:09:45 UTC

Star : I think that all their tones were really good, and their presentation was really good. Their drawings were good and the theme : stop hunting animals is creative and they remember their script really good.
I have nothing more to say, it was just so… good!

Marco

s16010125_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:47 UTC

Star: I like how they promoted mythical creatures and told everyone to save animals.

Wish: N/A

Austin

s16010380_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:48 UTC

Star: The drawing was amazing! The drawing of the shark and saving the animals were really inspiring.

Star: The theme of the entire performance is really influential.

Wish: The drawing process could be a bit longer

Kate and Casey

s16010173_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:48 UTC

Star: I like how the presentation was really loud and clear, I could
hear from near the back!

Wish: I wish the projector was connected so we could see the process of Grace's colouring.

Kassidy

s16010193_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:49 UTC

Star:Voices are loud and clear
Wish:Maybe someone could be talking while Grace is drawing so there will not be a awkward silence

Emma

s20050005_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:50 UTC

Star: pretty sure it was hard to perform with someone online, the music can clearly matches with the performance.

Wish: It would be better if Grace's drawing can be more meticulous.

Christy

s16010104_2 — 2021-06-25 03:09:53 UTC

Star: i like Grace drawing, the shark is so cute
Star: I like how they speak clearly and loudly
Wish:I hope Grace can slow down when she say "move on to fayha"

Moses

2021-06-25 03:10:12 UTC

Wendy's speech was loud and clear even though she was on zoom, the drawing was great.

Ivan

s16010085_2 — 2021-06-25 03:10:16 UTC

Star: your drawings were nice and the meaning was clearly stated.
wish: grace can speak slower

Eugene and Kingsley

s16010655_2 — 2021-06-25 03:10:22 UTC

Star 1: Their artwork is pretty cool of stop hunting for the animals.

Step 2: The artwork is fantastic to say stop hunting or hurt the animals, and the script is also detailed too.

Wish: Wendy could speak more about the dialogue when they were introducing their artwork.

Ara and Jackson

s16010386_2 — 2021-06-25 03:10:25 UTC

Star: Clear voice! We really like the part when they coloured the unicorn and drew the shark! We love it so much <3

Curtis

s19040014_2 — 2021-06-25 03:10:28 UTC

first star
The performance was very entertaining
Second star
The performance was logical and is calming

Wish
i wish there were more things to the performance

Issac

2021-06-25 03:11:31 UTC

Star: I like how they drew digital and traditional, I like how they had narrations of the drawings by Wendy.

Wish: They could have more drawings.

Rex

2021-06-25 03:11:40 UTC

The presentation was good and because you included Wendy while she is on zoom.

Becky and Meadow

2021-06-25 04:18:50 UTC

wish: Their voice was very low, except for Ara and some parts of Akira

wish: Lucia can stand closer to the middle so everyone can see her

wish: Akira can try to not laugh it out and when someone mess up don't be so dramatic

star: i like Emma's acting

Grace

s18030037_2 — 2021-06-25 04:18:51 UTC

Good Job for the acting i really liked how you Tried to keep your laughs!

Kate and Casey

s16010173_2 — 2021-06-25 04:18:58 UTC

Star: The plot was interesting and intense. Overall the story was nice.

Wish: Please hold in your laughs, also face the audience and please talk louder, we could barely hear Jackson and Emma.

Eugene and Kingsley

s16010655_2 — 2021-06-25 04:18:58 UTC

Star 1: Is good that the moral you should not bully people

Star 2: The script is good of how they said don't bully to people, or else you will sent to the principal and your score will get a 0.

Wish: Can you make a little bit more logic.

Tiffany and Kaelin

2021-06-25 04:19:03 UTC

Star:
-i think the story is good and they stuck to the script.
-I think they did well, but just that they can don't block the camera.
Wish:
-I wish that Emma can add more feeling when she talks.
-they were all more loud and confident.

Rex

2021-06-25 04:19:10 UTC

The play had a deep idea in it that bullying is not allowed and be nice to everyone. But they could speak louder and more expressions in them.

Kassidy

s16010193_2 — 2021-06-25 04:19:14 UTC

star:a great story to show what revenge is like,the moral of the story is not hard to tell
wish:maybe try to not actually hurt the groupmate

Fayha & Curtis

s19040014_2 — 2021-06-25 04:19:17 UTC

Star:Your Drama was well practiced and had a moral to it.
Star: All Voices were loud and clear.
Wish: Next time jackson could be a bit louder because even from the front of the classroom we couldnt hear him.

Marco

s16010125_2 — 2021-06-25 04:19:28 UTC

Star: I like how they used props and how they yelled and argued at each other.

Wish: I hope they would speak louder next time because I can barely hear them.

Ivan

s16010085_2 — 2021-06-25 04:19:37 UTC

Star: Your voices were all loud and clear
wish:Emma and Jackson could speak louder because i couldn't hear them

Christy

s16010104_2 — 2021-06-25 04:19:46 UTC

wish: i hope Emma and Jackson can be louder and more clear
Star: i like how Akira and Ara spoke loud enough.
Star: when Lucia is speaking, she spoke very clearly.

Moses

2021-06-25 04:20:03 UTC

The idea about the act was great, bullying in not allowed anywhere. But you can try to keep the laughing away so it will be better.

Issac

2021-06-25 04:21:52 UTC

Star: Good acting and tone of voice. I like how Ara and Jackson were still acting in the background when the focus was on Akira and Emma.

Wish: They could hold back their laughs.

Meadow and Becky

2021-06-25 04:30:46 UTC

wish: the characters are so mixed and don't understand which is which character.
star: I likes kingsley acting it was so realistic.
star: i love the props.

Kassidy

s16010193_2 — 2021-06-25 04:30:50 UTC

star:the story was entertaining and funny at the same time
wish:maybe have clearer stage directions and next time practice the lines more

Christy

s16010104_2 — 2021-06-25 04:30:53 UTC

Star: i like how it's so funny and it's not boring.
Star:I like rex and Marco tone of voices it was loud and clear
Wish: I hope Kingsley,Eugene and Moses voice can be more loud and clear.

Lucia

s16010022_2 — 2021-06-25 04:30:53 UTC

Star: Great Use Of Props. The scenes were very interesting.

Wish: You could speak more clearly and louder. You need a clearer moral.

Tiffany and Kaelin

2021-06-25 04:30:57 UTC

Star:
-it was absolutely hilarious and the story is great.
-They speak loud and clear enough. They did well at acting. Good job!
Wish:
-I wish they can do the acton more clearly. ( When they are running around and switching another character )
-{I wish kingsley would have been better at swithing teams althugh it is understandable.

Kate and Casey

s16010173_2 — 2021-06-25 04:30:59 UTC

Star: I think the play was funny and the plot was clear.

Star: They were loud and clear, the audios were funny and matched the scenes.

Wish: I wish that when the 'war' scene happened, you could hold back your laughs and it was really confusing.

Jackson and Ara

s16010386_2 — 2021-06-25 04:31:02 UTC

Star: Best acting in the world (from Jackson)
Star: Clear voice and its very funny :>
Wish: We think the story is a little messy

Grace

s18030037_2 — 2021-06-25 04:31:03 UTC

Good try on trying to remenber your lines but overall Good job on your acting.

Akira

s160101901 — 2021-06-25 04:31:05 UTC

Star : This is the best presentation yet! It’s has sound effects, and the props are nice, their tones of voices were really good, and they are loud and clear with their speaking. They all remember their scripts clearly

Emma

s20050005_2 — 2021-06-25 04:31:12 UTC

Star: A lot body languages, nice and funny play

Wish: It would be nice if Eugene could speak louder next time

Fayha&Curtis

s19040014_2 — 2021-06-25 04:31:30 UTC

Star:All their voices were loud and clear.
Star: Their performance was really comedic/funny.
Wish: Next time maybe they could try and remember their lines and not laugh that much.

Ivan

s16010085_2 — 2021-06-25 04:31:52 UTC

star: your voices were loud and we could hear all of you
Wish: you could be more organised and not read the script in the middle of the act

Issac

2021-06-25 04:34:43 UTC

Star: Most of the time their voices were loud and I can hear them.

Wish: Could be more organised, and hold back on the laughs.

Comment: I don’t really get the story.

Ara and Jackson

s16010386_2 — 2021-06-25 04:42:02 UTC

wish: you could have put background music by sending the video on email instead of making a youtube video.

Grace

s18030037_2 — 2021-06-25 04:42:10 UTC

Good Job on your presittation i really enjoyed it and it was very intresthing!

Becky

2021-06-25 04:42:11 UTC

wish: Austin looks like malnutrition, he cannot even carry a little piece of cardboard and everyone can speak louder. The text in the cut can be any other colours than blue, i cannot see the words

star: it is good that they can use imovie to make it

Akira

s160101901 — 2021-06-25 04:42:27 UTC

Star : they tried their best when making the play work, and their tones of voices were good.
Wish :Next time you should do the narrator earlier and make it a bit better

Emma

s20050005_2 — 2021-06-25 04:42:34 UTC

Star: The edits was really good, you guys were able to finish it in time with the time pressure.

Meadow and Becky

2021-06-25 04:43:19 UTC

wish: Tiffany can speak louder but it was great!
star: their acting was real

Ivan

s16010085_2 — 2021-06-25 04:43:44 UTC

star: your message was clear
Wish: please speak louder next time

Issac

2021-06-25 04:44:25 UTC

Star: I love the story and the message, and their acting was good.

Wish: They can speak louder and make the play longer.

Moses

2021-06-25 06:59:21 UTC

The presentation was great and it really explains friendship and putting different angles while recording is great.