To begin with, the reason why money is so important is that it provides options for you to live a better life that you choose and puts you in control. Having money and being comfortable with finances also gives you freedom and choices to decide how you want to live and support the things you care most about in your life.  When you have money, you can control what you want or don’t want to do. You can generally afford a fancier lifestyle, bigger homes, better vacations or flashier cars…In additon, if you want to  have a different career, want to move to a different country,  travel somewhere new for vacation, financial problem would probably not your concern. Therefore, it cannot be denied that money can bring us happiness and peace of mind.

 

However, enjoying the little things in life can be another important factor for happiness. Obviously, this can make people feel comfortable. Some people think that life is about achieving great things like having a successful job or a big house, but life is also about small pleasures like having a good dinner or a nice walk in the countryside. In this way, people gain the comfort for a happy life. More meaningfully, enjoying the little things helps people become more patient and willing to put more effort in everything they do. They would consider small steps as the vital practice for great success. Therefore,  enjoying the little things is also an important contributing factor to  happiness.

 

 

 

                   + do not have to worry about basic needs in lives

                    + live comfortably  -> less stress

                    + somehow lives can be boring because we don’t have passion and love with our jobs

 

                + make our lives more interesting

                + people can do what they truly want -> feel comfortable and free

- Topic sentences:

Money plays an important factor in people’s happiness for many reasons. 

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+ Money is the material which is used to exchange necessary things for our life.

+ With money we can live a life without worrying about expenses.

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On the other hand, not only money is important, but also health is a needy element for a happy life.

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+ To earn money, a good health is indispensable factor.

+ It’s possible to live without money, but living without good health is impossible

First, financial problem is always one of the biggest issues humans have to face so when you have a lot of money you will have much less on your plate and feel more relaxed. Second, money can provide you with almost anything you want or need in life. Third, a great amount of money can give you a peaceful life which you can enjoy without having to worried too much about everything for the rest of your life.

However, happiness isn't always about money, one's social life contributes a lot, too. There are some people in the world who never have to worry about being broke, but they still feel empty and they feel like their lives are meaningless since they are alone. Of course in order to have much money, you have to make sacrisfies and sometimes the prices can be heavy like friendship and family. You can still be happy even when your property isn’t that much, as long as you have company and have faith in life.

In conlusion, money really is important when it comes to making a person happy, but it isn’t the only thing that can put a smile on your face, there are still many meaningful elements that can do it other than wealth 

Money is the key to happiness. First of all, only with money can you afford fun and exciting experiences, such as luxurious vacations along the beach or exhilarating trips to the wild. A person will most likely not be happy if he or she has to worry about getting enough money to pay bills all the time. Secondly, money can lead to most other factors which make a person happy. For example, with money, you can afford better healthcare services, therefore leading to good health, or the time to actually go socialize and have fun instead of trying to pay for basic needs.

Besides money, I believe that physical and mental health is also really important regarding one’s happiness. It is obvious that if one suffer from mental disorders like depression or anxiety, he or she will most likely not be happy at all. Also, if a person has serious diseases that are really hard to cure, not to mention life-threatening, uncurable diseases, happiness will definitely not be the first thing that comes to his or her mind, as curing the desease or prolonging life will be instead.

In conclusion, I believe that money and health is up there as the most important factors to happiness. However, lacking any single one of them, as well as other elements contributing to one’s happiness can be detrimental, so balancing among them is really the key to happiness.

 

 

Money can make you happy for some reasons.First of all, this may surprised you, but people who have money can avoid several mental illness.People who don’t have to think about money as a daily problem often feel happier with their life,they don’t have to worry about what to wear or eat,..they don’t feel stressed or stay in bad mood,..so their life is really comfortable.Secondly, money can afford fun. Having money means that you can freely buy or do your favourite thing.You can go holiday abroad, buy expensive things,take up  luxury hobbies or sometimes money can also help you follow your dream.

Besides money, happiness also comes from relationship.Firstly, people who are on good term with friends and family often feel happy because they can feel how much their family care about them.Many research has proved that people feel happiest when they are loved by people around. Next, by having good relationship with friends and family, you can easily get out of stress and tiredness. You can spend time talking with them about your daily life, your problems,.. then I believe you will feel happy and find your life meaningful after listening to their advice.

In conclusion, money and relationship are two important factors that make you feel happy in your life.

In my opinion, being financially adequate are crucial to your happiness. People have said “We are the master of our own world”, and with cashes and wealthiness along the side more people are captured within our world, bringing us the sense of being the center of the universe. It elevates our self-esteem, confidence, it satisfies our ego and needs, it makes us feel like kings and queens. Moreover, fortune often bring about fames and approval. Richness guarantee that our words have ears that listen and gives us respect and admiration. The words of a renowned successful man would be ton heavier than an ordinary one.

However, it is not only wealthiness that ensure our happiness but also other criteria such as mental and physical condition. Living healthily allows us to extend our longevity. The longer we live, the more we can experienced and possess during the life time. Furthermore, being healthy helps us cleanse our thought and see things more clearly. It is neccesary because life is just a matter of cognition and feeling, thoroughly estimating an life event may have you a better look on it. It is us that decide how we treat ourselves and others, thus, giving us the true actual happiness.

In conclusion, money may brings us the sense of having everything on our sides, gives us confident and respect but having a healthy soul and body also bring you a happiness that is worth more than the rest.

It is undeniable that money is the common standard of a successful and happy life as it provides people’s basic needs and entertainment. You and I feel good not to suffer from hunger and dehydration. With money, there is no need to be concerned about poverty and people receive instant fulfillment to their desire. In short, money means no worry and to most human beings, that is happiness.

Nevertheless, with human’s physical and survival needs being satisfied, there is a new pressing mental demand arises. For example, those demands are: craving for relationships, excitement, sense of belonging,... People rarely distinguish a happy life to a peaceful life and assume a quiet life will do their best. Woman’s life in a patriarchal social system is an example. Furthermore, young people find a connection between happiness and joyful acts. Meaning they have to be in rapture constantly or else they will experience boredom and loneliness real soon and that's far from happiness. Making money, however, seems to be tedious to our young generation as they dont produce the same amount of joy as hanging out with friends.

In conclusion, money may be important for happiness to occur. However, we all have our own definition of happiness.

Firstly, it is obvious that people have way less to worry about now than they did years or decades ago, therefore, they are often not able to pay much attention to appearance then. However, as the quality of life has generally improved, people do not have to constantly worry about basic needs, which means that they now have the time and resource to take better care of themselves and focus on their looks, physical health, mental health, ... I believe that this is one of the main reasons why people are more aware of their appearance nowadays.

Secondly, people are now more connected than ever, mostly through social media platforms. It can clearly be seen that posts that get the most interactions are more often than not from appealing people, which shows us how looks can greatly affect our impressions.  Consequently, others pay more attention to their physical appearance to post decent pictures like that themselves. This also holds true for real life, face-to-face interactions, especially when people meet for the first time. For example, an employer would have a much better first impression with a nicely-dressed, good-looking person than someone who wear worn-off clothes or does not look polished. In my opinion, physical appearance is not just a show-off, but almost a necessity nowadays.

In conclusion, I think that people, both men and women, keep an eye on their appearance more than they did in the past. This is mostly due to the improved quality of life and connectivity among us, which is a natural result of social development.