https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl GDN3000 Billy Kiosoglou, Michael Wright en-us 2023-09-13 13:16:39 UTC 2023-10-30 23:53:28 UTC hello@padlet.com akiosoglou3 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702086484 2023-09-13 13:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702086484 akiosoglou3 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702089066 Local Cafe Menu]]> 2023-09-13 13:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702089066 akiosoglou3 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702089311 2023-09-13 13:23:22 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702089311 akiosoglou3 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702089562 2023-09-13 13:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2702089562 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730159993 Usually I notice upbeat and vibrant designs associated with Japanese branding which is why I was surprised when I read the secondary text and realise this is Japanese cuisine and not a therapeutic/ massage shop. I just found everything about this design to be very simplistic with no personality.]]> 2023-10-03 12:36:59 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730159993 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730160309 I like the concept of graffitied signs because it's expressive and grabs your attention. However, the pastel colour is too pale against the dark blue sign which would be hard to make out from a distance or at night. There's some literacy issues; 'a' looks like an 'o', 'b' looks like 'D' so a redesign would be necessary to grab the attention of people nearby. ]]> 2023-10-03 12:37:11 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730160309 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730160842 The black and gold is bold and stands out quite well beside other shops with more basic primary colours, but the font itself can be quite illegible because it's too squished. I think some primary colours would help brighten up the exterior as well because it looks bland beside the hanging plants.]]> 2023-10-03 12:37:35 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730160842 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730161101 This shop does not have a colour scheme which co-ordinates well with the shop name. It is not welcoming like the 'hello' title and does not feel inviting. People mostly looked at the small board at the front of the shop which displayed the deals that they had on offer, evident that the low prices is what brings customers in more than the shop brand.]]> 2023-10-03 12:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730161101 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730161476 The red next to the grey shops is quite eye-catching but the fonts clashes with each other. The thing that engages the customers is the writing below the shop name which let's them know what is sold at the shop.

The passer by doesn't even look at the sign for too long, it is not memorable.  

These types of shops don't typically have much branding due to the reputation of a 'corner shop' as that alone is the reason why someone would go in there as it is right there and convenient.]]> 2023-10-03 12:37:59 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730161476 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730161983 This shop design looks quite plain. It could be to let the art be visually striking but it doesn't really do that. The white borders to stand out but so does the large blue background against the title of the shop name. ]]> 2023-10-03 12:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730161983 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730162998 2023-10-03 12:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730162998 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730163223 2023-10-03 12:39:00 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730163223 ea1074 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730163561 2023-10-03 12:39:11 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730163561 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730428928 2023-10-03 15:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730428928 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730429343 2023-10-03 15:03:20 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730429343 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730429625 2023-10-03 15:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730429625 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730756635 2023-10-03 18:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730756635 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730757581 2023-10-03 18:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730757581 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730758897 2023-10-03 18:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730758897 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730861658

The colours are not very appealing 

• Red and green are not colours recommended to use together for accessibility reason 

Looks like a very tacky and rushed design, in so does not feel premium 

The choices of fonts on every line makes it look very busy and inconsistent 

They are showing the obvious image of a monkey eating peanuts when they could have shown it in a different and more subtle way.

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Obvious imagery in the background, could have been more creative 

Text quite boring, kerning not done properly 

Hard to tell the difference in what we are reading due to the same font style 

The white coloured text is mixing with the background so not very visible 

Could be more simple with the image instead of scaling it across the whole page

]]> 2023-10-03 19:46:45 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730862743 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730865714

Looks worn out and is hard to read 

It does not strike out to people and specifically to drivers who may not be able to see at a quick glance. 

Feels life less and doesn’t attract a lot of attention 

The main postcode has been covered up which is not helpful 

Could be more colourful

]]> 2023-10-03 19:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730865714 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730873839

Overall design does not look welcoming.

Design is too simple and plain.

The color palette is dull, making it not exciting.

Images are too small to see.

]]> 2023-10-03 19:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730873839 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730874253

Overall arrangement is messy.

The text arrangement for ‘finest dark chocolate’ is awkward.

‘Sugar wise’ logo is awkwardly placed, leaving very big spaces on both sides.

Image of the chocolate can be arranged in a better way to make it the main highlight.

]]> 2023-10-03 19:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730874253 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730874500

The logos around the signage are randomly placed.

The design of the logo is not interesting.

Information has the same hierarchy as the logo.

‘020’ does not need to be smaller and underlined.

]]> 2023-10-03 19:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730874500 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730898262 Building in the Middlesex campus, hard to find. We had lectures there and I remember I couldn’t believe it’s part of the university. This building definitely have to be demolished or need some graphics. ]]> 2023-10-03 20:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730898262 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730991041 -Typeface (hard to read)
-Arrangement 
-Alignment 
-Too plain]]> 2023-10-03 22:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730991041 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730991910 -Too plain 
-No direct info (green apple juice)?
-No Elements (image)]]> 2023-10-03 22:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730991910 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730992292 -Arrangement too packed 
-Font typeface 
-Photos


]]> 2023-10-03 22:19:34 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2730992292 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2731779542 Advertisement outside local shop - I really dislike the advertisement of random meats and foods and then try to blend them together and it looks so weird like the chicken and steak are one type of meat? 

Plus I don't like the type used - not enough contrast in colour to stand out]]> 2023-10-04 09:46:32 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2731779542 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2731787879 Building called Churchill House - Multiple things I dislike about this! 

Firstly the illustration of Churchill is really weird and disturbing and looks like someone just image traced around a picture they got offline rather than sketching it - without the Churchill name you wouldn't really be able to tell it's him

Secondly the connection of the 'H' between Churchill and the House makes no sense to me and looks really weird, the only thing I can think of the link is the link to Hendon for the emphasis]]> 2023-10-04 09:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2731787879 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2731792594 Dry Cleaners - Adding this one to the mix as I really don't understand how you call a place Diamond and use a weird script to have on your shop front ]]> 2023-10-04 09:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2731792594 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732063021 2023-10-04 13:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732063021 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732065219 2023-10-04 13:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732065219 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732076700 2023-10-04 13:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732076700 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732213157 2023-10-04 14:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732213157 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732215342 2023-10-04 14:41:54 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732215342 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732223584 2023-10-04 14:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732223584 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732226436 2023-10-04 14:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732226436 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732230034 2023-10-04 14:50:00 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732230034 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732242564 2023-10-04 14:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732242564 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732323799 Lackeisha bad design 1]]> 2023-10-04 15:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732323799 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732324751 Lackeisha bad design 2]]> 2023-10-04 15:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732324751 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732326063 Lackeisha bad design 3]]> 2023-10-04 15:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732326063 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732328465 (About the poster)
- The target audience is not clear (The contents looks for students, but cannot tell the purpose.  If the poster is for the parents, the design is too fancy and not suitable.)
- The sentence at the center is not readable.
- too many colors for the font and images.
- there is no the name of the school, so people cannot identify who publish this Cleary.]]> 2023-10-04 15:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732328465 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732330760 - The whole of shop design cannot make a good impression about 'beauty' or 'fantasy'.
- The atmosphere of the signboard and the decorations of the window cannot match, so whole of the design cannot represent the specific image of the shop.
- too many information.]]> 2023-10-04 15:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732330760 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732330785 2023-10-04 15:47:42 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732330785 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732331561 2023-10-04 15:48:11 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732331561 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732332848 - The logo looks like a blurred glasses, and it is not suitable for a opticians.
- The decorations of the window (such as the opening hour) cannot see clearly.
- Too many information.
- The positions of the elements in the signboard are not consistent, and it looks unstable.]]> 2023-10-04 15:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732332848 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732333824 2023-10-04 15:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732333824 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732339730 Use of lots of different logos, lack of consistency, use of different fonts and colours.]]> 2023-10-04 15:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732339730 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732341432 2023-10-04 15:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732341432 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732342619 2023-10-04 15:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732342619 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732350196 The signs look inappropriate for the pizza shop, it looks more like repair shop. Graphics are dated, window has too much different type and it looks messy. There is small pages with the offers which don't match with the rest, they are unreadable.]]> 2023-10-04 15:58:41 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732350196 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732352441 Sara bad design 1]]> 2023-10-04 16:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732352441 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732353307 Sara bad design 2]]> 2023-10-04 16:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732353307 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732353832 Sara bad design 3]]> 2023-10-04 16:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732353832 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732354857 2023-10-04 16:01:19 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732354857 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732359012 Board with the directions is to high for the commuters, I almost didn't notice it. Th typography is to small. For some reason there is another sign underneath cut in half. Signs don't work as a whole, all together it looks disorganized.]]> 2023-10-04 16:03:49 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732359012 agarepczuk https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732360008 2023-10-04 16:04:24 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732360008 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732396791 2023-10-04 16:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732396791 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732397520 2023-10-04 16:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732397520 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732398186 2023-10-04 16:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732398186 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732406601 2023-10-04 16:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732406601 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732426385 - the colour choice is poor, the mismatched browns as well just poor colour choices it doesn't feel inviting at all and it makes me want to stay away since I'll think the place is not sanitary.
- the 3 different fonts on the sign is just a bad combination and they don't compliment each other at all and it just lacks consistency. 
- the different graphics on the window just feel like a quickly done job with poor consideration and it feels like it's from different restaurants.]]> 2023-10-04 16:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732426385 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732436296 2023-10-04 16:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732436296 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732436723 Bad Design 2]]> 2023-10-04 16:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732436723 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732437057 2023-10-04 16:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732437057 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732443411 2023-10-04 16:51:04 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732443411 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732448900 2023-10-04 16:54:31 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732448900 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732454111 2023-10-04 16:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732454111 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732494132 2023-10-04 17:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732494132 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732498168 2023-10-04 17:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732498168 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732500372 2023-10-04 17:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732500372 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732503766 2023-10-04 17:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732503766 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732504312 2023-10-04 17:28:14 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732504312 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732504922 2023-10-04 17:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732504922 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732518454 2023-10-04 17:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732518454 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732519396 2023-10-04 17:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732519396 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732520079 2023-10-04 17:38:03 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732520079 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732547926 - the 2 different fonts make no sense at all to he together. The time completely  dominate the name of the shop.
- the name of the shop is very comical and feels like a 5 year old came up with the name.
- the colour scheme of red orange and yellow for the texts makes it unpleasant to look at and it doesn't really give you eyes a break since all the colours are relatively similar to each other it can look. It looks like a mess when tryna read it from a far.]]> 2023-10-04 17:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732547926 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732561945 It looks like it wasn’t designed by a designer.

The colour combo doesn't feel right.

Type in general can be improved upon.

Has potential with the name ‘Diamond Cars’.

The big 'C' in a red circle doesn't mean anything.]]> 2023-10-04 18:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732561945 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732566846 Colours don’t inspire hunger.

The logo and the rest of the shop don't work in tandem.

The logo itself can be upgraded.

Not very warm and welcoming.]]> 2023-10-04 18:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732566846 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732575375 Doesn’t say luxury at all.

I don't think this would inspire a high-end customer to choose their service.

Type is understandably crammed, but could be done cleaner.

Colour is not bad at all as it allows the banner to stand out against the white building, but could use a more premium colour like a dark green or purple etc.]]> 2023-10-04 18:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732575375 libbynelson20_ https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732583792 2023-10-04 18:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732583792 libbynelson20_ https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732590288 2023-10-04 18:24:40 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732590288 libbynelson20_ https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732606806 2023-10-04 18:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732606806 christianvattathara1 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732622190 2023-10-04 18:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732622190 christianvattathara1 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732623892 2023-10-04 18:47:34 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732623892 christianvattathara1 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732624125 2023-10-04 18:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732624125 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732630823 2023-10-04 18:52:30 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732630823 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732631868 2023-10-04 18:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732631868 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732632253 2023-10-04 18:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732632253 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732633054 2023-10-04 18:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732633054 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732633058 2023-10-04 18:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732633058 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732633902 2023-10-04 18:54:42 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732633902 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732732530 2023-10-04 20:20:59 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732732530 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732773478 Sara-bad design]]> 2023-10-04 21:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732773478 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732786223 The background doesn't compliment the ice creams. The text doesn't go well with the whole design. The text is too thick. ]]> 2023-10-04 21:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732786223 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732787185 The drawing doesn't seem to be bold enough to catch attention. The text seem to be out of place with the image. ]]> 2023-10-04 21:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732787185 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732789028 This just seems to be very much outdated. The whole poster creates a very much old fashioned feeling. Too much of different weight of text is being used. ]]> 2023-10-04 21:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732789028 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732793162

Graphics can be improve

The numbering on each ‘door’ look odd in some areas

At the back of the box it show you what you will get from this advent calendar, which I think is unnecessary as it should be a surprise

]]> 2023-10-04 21:34:49 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732793162 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732793833

The colour of the packaging doesn’t remind me of caramel or toffee

Is look boring compare to the other nestle brand chocolate bar

Lack of characteristic ?

]]> 2023-10-04 21:35:53 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732793833 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732794291

The font used doesn’t match the name of the shop 

Not eye catching

The logo is not noticeable next to the big ‘super work’ word

]]> 2023-10-04 21:36:33 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732794291 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732809467 2023-10-04 21:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732809467 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732809641 2023-10-04 21:59:43 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732809641 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732809846 2023-10-04 22:00:00 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732809846 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732837555 2023-10-04 22:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732837555 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732838411 2023-10-04 22:48:24 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732838411 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732838523 2023-10-04 22:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732838523 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732843105 The oyster sign is out of place in terms of hierarchy and the sign seems too big and squashes the 'Food and Wine' headline]]> 2023-10-04 22:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732843105 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732848719 The use of italics could be changed on the shop name, the telephone numbers too big so the rest of the numbers goes to the next line. The use of the email twice is unsufficent as its the same email. ]]> 2023-10-04 23:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732848719 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732849019 The logo looks like popcorn and another typeface could be used.]]> 2023-10-04 23:06:19 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732849019 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732853475 Name of the shop is nice but couldn't really tell it's a framing shop, looks like a construction place. The email and numbers could be at the bottom or the top and the shop name in the middle ]]> 2023-10-04 23:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732853475 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732853503 - the font makes it feel like it's meant to be cowboy aesthetic doesn't really look nice to me.
- the yellow writing underneath is poorly done looks very tacky.

]]> 2023-10-04 23:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732853503 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732854552 The red underline in the sign isn't needed. The colour pallette on the title could be improved, not sure if it's a white outline or reflection of light on the sign.]]> 2023-10-04 23:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732854552 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732854564 2023-10-04 23:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732854564 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732854809 The banner looks too compact with information, didn't make the use of space. Now Available suggestion isn't really needed and colour of it contrasts too much with the banner colour]]> 2023-10-04 23:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732854809 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732856421 Seems dated with use of typography and older style signature logo, could do with a face lift]]> 2023-10-04 23:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732856421 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732857903 Not a fan of the Hendon Waste title, looks abit wonky and every letter has eyes on it, not sure what the concept behind it was. Typeface on the sub-heading could be improved, maybe the letters are too spaced out and there's too much use of italics. ]]> 2023-10-04 23:19:39 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732857903 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732862308 The mix of base colours, simple and complex fonts and lack of hierarchy between the shop sign and window signs]]> 2023-10-04 23:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732862308 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732885494 2023-10-04 23:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732885494 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732885822 2023-10-04 23:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732885822 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732886212 2023-10-04 23:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2732886212 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733026388 2023-10-05 01:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733026388 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733028978 2023-10-05 01:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733028978 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733029252 2023-10-05 01:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733029252 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733553427 The Grove Building
- unusual, complex shape
- rectangles of different sizes and colours, feels random
- perhaps attempting too much at once
- clashes with the more traditional surrounding buildings, especially the beautiful Hendon Town Hall]]> 2023-10-05 08:42:40 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733553427 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733559317 Cuisine King
- a number of sans serif typefaces are used. The 'C' and 'G' in 'Cuisine King' seem to be from different typefaces
- the grey colour scheme is dull and unappetising. It doesn't make me excited for a restaurant that offers Chinese takeaway and fish and chips]]> 2023-10-05 08:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733559317 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733567750 The blocky typography, green, white and grey colour scheme, and boat icon put me more in mind of a road map than a restaurant. Again, it does not feel appetising. However, I feel there is potential in the typography on the shelter.]]> 2023-10-05 08:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733567750 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733570638 2023-10-05 08:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733570638 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733571484 2023-10-05 08:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733571484 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733672700 2023-10-05 10:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733672700 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733673602 2023-10-05 10:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733673602 dmradishevsky https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733676447 All of this could and should be changed for better communication with potential customers]]> 2023-10-05 10:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733676447 dmradishevsky https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733678381 Doesn't show actually the frame at all( at least animals should be rotated)]]> 2023-10-05 10:21:46 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733678381 dmradishevsky https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733680358 The bike logo can be improved to attend more potential customers. Yello colour can be improved with typefont also.]]> 2023-10-05 10:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733680358 akiosoglou3 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733778565 2023-10-05 11:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733778565 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733975990 2023-10-05 13:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733975990 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733976729 2023-10-05 13:48:28 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733976729 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733979072 2023-10-05 13:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733979072 https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733979742 2023-10-05 13:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/akiosoglou3/8sy3mvboo39yb9nl/wish/2733979742