P3 PSA Critique by Amanda Umberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA Photo 1 Period 3 - Final Project Critique en-us 2020-11-04 18:42:39 UTC 2020-11-06 17:09:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4f8.png Make sure you are Logged In! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/891351299 First thing you need to do is log in to your g.highlineschools.org account so that you can leave critique for your classmates and receive credit for this portion of the project!]]> 2020-11-04 18:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/891351299 Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/891355577 Try to give feedback that points out something they did well and something they could do differently to make their work stronger next time!

Use sentence stems like: 
"I really like how you used..."
"Your images really make me feel..."
"I can easily see the story in your images because..."

and

"I wonder if..."
"What if you tried..."
"I think it would be stronger if you..."]]> 2020-11-04 18:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/891355577 Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/891375255 Every student should receive no less than 3 comments on their work from different students. Try to go to as many student's websites as possible and give feedback to everyone!]]> 2020-11-04 18:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/891375255 4017810 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895856674 I like the strong message in your photos that couple with what you said.]]> 2020-11-05 20:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895856674 I liked the filter you put on some of the images it really makes them stand out. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895863048 2020-11-05 20:48:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895863048 I like how you used the flag and words but you can use a different angle or a background that match your message to make you pictures stronger 4011359 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895864105 2020-11-05 20:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895864105 4017810 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895864431 Your 5 images were good.]]> 2020-11-05 20:49:14 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895864431 i like how u take the picture from the side 4048749 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895866339 2020-11-05 20:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895866339 Your photos are strong, the connection of what you're portraying is so good like the one of the shadow with a child in a corner, the lighting to make a shadow and the darkness covering the kid. 25147211 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895867308 2020-11-05 20:50:12 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895867308 i like how long your website was and how many photos there were 4010067 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895867744 2020-11-05 20:50:20 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895867744 WOW! your 5 best pictures were mind blowing. 4035277 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895868395 2020-11-05 20:50:32 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895868395 4017810 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895869234 I like the zoomed photo of the water bottle]]> 2020-11-05 20:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895869234 4008184 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895870453 I like how you use a paper and wrote help. I like the emotions you show in the images. I like the shadow of the image two. The poses are amazing. ]]> 2020-11-05 20:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895870453 I like how you edit your picture and how you use that image and make it related to your project. Nice job:) 4047712 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895872168 2020-11-05 20:51:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895872168 Your images are really good and strong, they show so much emotion with the colors and poses 4008906 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895872783 2020-11-05 20:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895872783 I really liked how you put captions on your photos, I think that your message showed good in your images. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895873552 2020-11-05 20:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895873552 4017810 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895876580 I like the idea of your series.]]> 2020-11-05 20:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895876580 The pictures are dark but good, showcases the ugliness of body shaming and the effects it can cause like the tape measure around the neck. 25147211 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895880708 2020-11-05 20:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895880708 4017810 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895880843 I appreciate the vocalization of the gesture of putting your hand around your neck, this is a serious topic.]]> 2020-11-05 20:54:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895880843 I like how you screenshot the text and how you edit your picture with a text that explain what happened in the picture. good job:) 4047712 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895881453 2020-11-05 20:54:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895881453 I like how the vibe your images give relates to your project. 4008906 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895883136 2020-11-05 20:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895883136 All your images have a important message behind abuse and you showed how it can affect kids into being scared/ traumatized 4005775 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895883708 2020-11-05 20:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895883708 I liked the way you used colors to sort of show emotions 2518596 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895885726 2020-11-05 20:56:04 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895885726 I really liked how you used the dead roses. 4011359 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895885893 2020-11-05 20:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895885893 I like how you used the rule of thirds in your photos, with text to explain what it feels/ looks like. 25147211 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895889140 2020-11-05 20:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895889140 your artist statement is really strong and I really like your idea of the picture but you can edit more your picture by adding more light and make it a little bit more clear. but great Job:) 4047712 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895889490 2020-11-05 20:57:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895889490 I really liked the lighting of your photos, you did good at showing emotion. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895892554 2020-11-05 20:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895892554 The way you used quotes and inserted them into your photos shows a stong message 2518596 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895894539 2020-11-05 20:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895894539 i like how you blurred the photos and made them black and white. 4010067 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895895525 2020-11-05 20:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895895525 I loved the way you used the measuring tape in your pictures and how you work those neg. comments 4011359 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895895611 2020-11-05 20:59:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895895611 The photo that popped to me the most was the one with the hand pose with the pills which gives the audience a clear meaning of the problem of using drugs 4005775 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895896271 2020-11-05 20:59:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895896271 I liked the message you showed in your images. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895897768 2020-11-05 21:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895897768 I like the your Idea project and how you give them the idea of what they should do because a lot of people struggle with this and don't like how they look. nice job:) 4047712 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895898799 2020-11-05 21:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895898799 I liked how the lighting changed, it made the feel of the picture darker. The one with hand on the head looks strong to me because of how you can see emotion on the face. 25147211 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895901059 2020-11-05 21:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895901059 I really liked the way you used props and the message in your images is very strong. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895902684 2020-11-05 21:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895902684 I like how your quotes match you pictures 4011359 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895907624 2020-11-05 21:03:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895907624 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895907821 i like your ideas]]> 2020-11-05 21:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895907821 I think your images are really strong and the black&white filter really brings emotion. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895907945 2020-11-05 21:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895907945 I like how you used words in your images to express your message 4008906 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895909605 2020-11-05 21:04:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895909605 4010185 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895909899 i like what you did with the images showing how bad littering is ]]> 2020-11-05 21:04:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895909899 your artist statement gave me chills it was good 4010067 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895909903 2020-11-05 21:04:09 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895909903 I liked how you used the same quote on each photo, the quote fits in each with how its in black and white with like one strong object/ thing in the picture 25147211 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895912441 2020-11-05 21:05:02 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895912441 I like how you put your picture is exactly related to the mood broad and how you put the text in the picture. 4047712 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895917138 2020-11-05 21:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895917138 I like how you used text to explain what the subject is feeling 4011359 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895918380 2020-11-05 21:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895918380 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895919231 I like your actions you have very good thoughts with the images]]> 2020-11-05 21:07:17 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895919231 I think you had a really strong message, you could make your images stronger by making them more focused. 4039859 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895919884 2020-11-05 21:07:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895919884 you're message is strong and the different angles are beautiful 2518596 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895920325 2020-11-05 21:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895920325 You're message is stong, I love it 2518596 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895934024 2020-11-05 21:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895934024 4008184 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895934975 I like how you zoom in "this is not a phase". I like the lighting on your images.]]> 2020-11-05 21:12:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/895934975 4008184 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/896051318 I like how you use a teddy bear. I love the lighting of the image of the first image. I like your captions. I like how you use stuff animals. I like the how the fourth image some part is blurry.]]> 2020-11-05 21:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/896051318 4008184 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/896713289 Your message is strong. It show a lot different emotions. I like how you add shadow in your third image. ]]> 2020-11-06 04:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/896713289 4008184 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/896729751 like how you add picture and words. I like message is strong. I like how you add captions. Your pictures are clear and easy to see.]]> 2020-11-06 04:50:06 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/896729751 I like how you have included an explanation with each of your images stating why it is important and what value it has for your topic. I would say you could improve your work by making the images a bit more specific, because they have a bit of a wide range for what you stated your topic was. Maybe try to take photos that cater more to your project. https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/898295643 2020-11-06 16:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P3PSA/wish/898295643