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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 07:44:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Refutation Sentence </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Although <strong>this </strong>is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits. This is because ....</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:15:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>ZZ&#39;s</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The Modern Age bring modern lifestyles. In conclusion, Mobile phones as a new tool to help human beings, and we are benefiting from conveniently connecting. This article gives a valid point to support this idea. However, it refutes that mobile phones also have some negative influences. The first one is that using phones in public places produced noise for humans and this will also distract others. Another reason is that grabbing a phone can also be a risk for drivers, it's so dangerous when you are distracted.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:33:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Oscar</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In summation, while mobile phones have revolutionized communication and offer many advantages, their widespread use has led to distractions in crucial situations and increased danger while driving. Balancing the benefits with potential downsides is vital. By promoting responsible usage and emphasizing safety, we can utilize the positive aspects of mobile phones while minimizing their negative effects on security.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:33:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>LiuDongao</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In conclusion, mobile phones can make it easier for people to get in contact as parents can keep track of their children when they are outdoors. Although this is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits. This is because if you need quiet or want to focus on a task it can be very disturbing to hear the sound of mobile phones. What's more important is mobile phones can be dangerous for car drivers as drivers do not concentrate on the road when they hear their phone.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:33:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wanqing</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><em>In conclusion,</em><em><mark> it has been stated that </mark></em><em>there are some benefits for the use of mobile phone as it is more convenient for business and outside people for emergency&nbsp; situations. </em>Although this is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits. This is because mobile phones are more likely to cause accident even threat to people’s life which is the most important for a person.&nbsp;<em><mark>Moreover, it can be a distraction in&nbsp; public spaces. </mark></em></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:34:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chelsea</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In conclusion, using mobile phones has its benefits, such as making it easier for us to connect with each other. Although this is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits. This is because mobile phones also bring various drawbacks, such as generating noise and causing distractions. It can even increase the likelihood of accidents occurring if using mobile phones while driving.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:34:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wendy</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In conclusion, mobile phones may initially bring positive factors to people. Including being able to respond to emergencies and bring convenience to diverse populations. Although this is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits. This is because, in most cases, mobile phones bring noise to people and make people have a bad experience. At the same time, mobile phones can distract people from their work, making it difficult for them to focus on work or study. Excessive use of mobile phones increases the risk of traffic accidents. Overall, the effect of using mobile phones on people is mainly negative.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:34:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yiyuan Hu</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In conclusion, the presence of mobile phones has revolutionized communication across modern world. While they offer undeniable benefits such as enhancing safety, aiding business transactions, and providing emergency assistance, Although this is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits.&nbsp; This is because their uncontrolled usage demands consideration. Balancing the conveniences with the distractions they pose in public spaces and the increased accident risks while driving is crucial. Overall, responsible and regulated mobile phone usage maintains an important role for the safety of everyone.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:36:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>li xiang</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><mark>In conclusion,</mark> it has been stated that mobile phones bring benefits as it can allows users to contact each other easily. Although <strong>this </strong>is a valid point, I would argue that the drawbacks override the benefits. This is because there are some negative influence, such as causing accidents and a distraction in public places. <br><br></div><div><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:36:41 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>YiHao</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In conclusion, mobile phones can make it easier for people to connect, as parents can keep track of their children while they are out and about. While this is a valid point, I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. That's because hearing your phone can be very intrusive if you need some quiet or want to focus on a task. The ringing of mobile phones can cause noise to people. What's more, the sound of mobile phones is dangerous for car drivers, because the driver's attention will be distracted when hearing the sound of mobile phones.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:37:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cheng Sun</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Overall, there're many benefits for using mobile phones. However, the drawbacks outweigh their benefits due to several reasons.  Excessive screen time can harm physical and mental health, and constant connectivity can hinder social interactions and communication skills. The distractions caused by mobile phones can impede productivity in academic and professional settings. Additionally, privacy and security concerns pose risks to personal information. Furthermore, using mobile phones while driving has been proven to increase the likelihood of accidents, despite government bans. Considering these drawbacks, it is essential for individuals to strike a balance between the benefits and drawbacks of mobile phone usage, using them responsibly and mindfully.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 09:41:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tension </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>- Positive / Negative&nbsp;<br>- Debate - one side arguing over another side&nbsp;<br>- Impact/effective ---- extent --- Big / Small&nbsp;<br>- Effectiveness of method/strategy/Approach/Theory --- Effective ---- Very effective /// Not very effective &nbsp;<br>- Main reason for something ///// Evaluating which is the main reason / Compare 1 reason to another<br>- Problem/solution &nbsp;/ Compare 2 solution ----- which solution is the BEST. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 11:10:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Homework for Monday </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>- one paragraph has been already written - include that paragraph in your homework. This paragraph SHOULD link to one side of the tension/position <br>- Now write the other side of the position/tension <br>- About 250 words <br>- include 3 citations <br>- Include syntheses <br>- Include a reference list at the end with full Harvard referencing <br>- Include the title above the writing <br>- The paragraph SHOULD only include <mark>1 THEME</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-08-09 11:39:03 UTC</pubDate>
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