https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33 Write your narrative horror story below using Ken's tips outlined on the Padlet. en-us 2020-08-30 12:06:12 UTC 2026-02-21 03:51:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f47b.png shane1 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707227218 All human experience is received through the senses. Instead of TELLING the reader what the character feels, try to communicate fear, horror etc by SHOWING the reader what the character experiences through their senses, and also how they react to this in speech or action.]]> 2020-08-30 12:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707227218 haodai31 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707752804 A light shine into my eye “is that you god” jerald whisper to himself the light slowly fade away jerald thought to himself “I am going to see my grandma”
The light slowly reveal that it was  it was the tax collected he thought to himself “I can’t avoid tax anymore I hate begging an adult and can they tax my foot”
 
I turn my tv off “thank god am not jerald and I’m not an adult no tax for me until next year woo taxes” Hamlet scream on top of he voice he mom open the door she open mouth and said “shut up mate the Archduke Franz Ferdinand just got shot well this won’t start any thing” mom said

2 month later Germany declare war on the triple ententes and Belgium and Great Britain join so did it colonies and it herald birthday he got conscripted for the invasion of Gallipoli.

]]> 2020-08-31 01:34:40 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707752804 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707753475 “Hey mum I just had the weirdest dream ever I saw a Skeleton holding a camera”Said John. “Really I had the same dream to son now get your shoes on and get ready for school”Said Mom happily. “Mum I can see a skeleton at our door”Said John shocked. “REALLY” said mom scared. “Son stay here don’t move call the police if anything happens to me ok” Says mom in a serious tone.DOOR OPENS.  “Hi mam would you like a photo say cheese” Says the unknown person at the door.]]> 2020-08-31 01:35:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707753475 Scadaddle_Scadoodle https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707757084 The light illuminates the musty old room filling it with a light blue haze as a screech can be heard in the distance. Then Jane wakes up with a jump. Hearing someone tapping on her window. She Shudders. But it wasn’t someone it was someTHING. It has green tendrils as long as a small child with yellow blood stained teeth. It’s head the shape of a water drop but sharp and rigid it opens it mouth from side to side revealing a set of deep yellow teeth with a tongue long and selindracle as if it can slip through anything. It jerks. The Window Shatters. It enters with a slither. It enters her room. It slowly approches her bed it then stabs into her bed it shatters but no ones in the bed. Jane then bolts and runs out the window approaching the blue light. It opens with a hiss she enters the room it has a clean white esthetic on one side there is a control desk on the other side. Tubes. 3 small green tubes. With something inside. A small green tear drop it open and launches at the side at Jane. She jumps and trips. Then continues to the control panel but there is just symbols engraved into the sleek white panel. She inspects it. Dragging her hand over the symbols. A noise behind her. A slimy squishy noise. Then IT enters it slinks over to the control panel. It drips mucus all over the control panel it goes into the symbol engravings they light up blue it then starts to transform into Jane herself. Then heads out the door then the tubes light up one lowers. And pops up in the middle of the room as the doors close. The tube opens with a hiss. The thing in the tubes jumps at Jane reaching for her neck. It misses. Landing against the wall sliding down. It tries again this time succeeds lacking onto her neck burrowing down into her neck. Her neck rips open and with a snap and a help Jane dies. It then burrows into her chest ripping and tearing mutilating Janes life less body. Meanwhile backs in Janes room. The once Alien thing now a Jane clone goes back to sleep the window repairing itself.]]> 2020-08-31 01:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707757084 x_Lissy_x https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707758703 One night on Halloween two kids set off trick or treating. They went house to house collecting more and more candy. They kept on doing that until they reached “FreakHouse”. Now.. freak house wasn’t just called that for nothing, it’s because on October 31st 1991 the house raged up with flames and killed everyone inside. It is still standing but no one dares to go in it ever since... Well ever since now. The group of boys knocked at the door, trembling with fear. No answer. The boys began to look through the shattered windows. They saw no one. They climbed through the windows and never seen again.]]> 2020-08-31 01:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707758703 rhiannonclarke https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707760322 On a stormy night a little boy decided to go into the dark a spooky woods, he was with his little do muffin. Then a struck of lightning hit right  in front of him. and  the tree fell down and hit him. Then a shodow came and said. “BOO” and the little boy ran and ran but the shadow kept following him and muffin. Then he relized that he was scared of his own shodow. He then rushed home and could not sleep for the whole night ]]> 2020-08-31 01:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707760322 CodyLippi https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707762712 It was a dark night all the lights were about except for one. outside a haunted building were children used to here screams. So 3 children went over to the house there names were jeff Timmy and pineapple man. Pineapple man: its scary. As he shivered.]]> 2020-08-31 01:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707762712 rlcucel https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707765027 one stormy night, lightning illuminated the night sky.
When Boom! Lightning had hit a light pole that hadn't worked for years. It slowly turned on but not like a normal light. There were green bolts of light buzzing around, when it finally turned on the light was green.  

As i slowly crept over to take a look at it more closely, Zaps of light went everywere. I backed away afraid of being zapped. All of a sudden the green light started growing bigger and bigger bolts flying every where. The storm had past the only thing in the sky was a huge green light. 

Crowds started to build up around the light pole. The more people that came the more bolts of light appeared. Then the light pole exploded. The light died down when huge  gusts of winds swept the town. It was so strong people ran back inside. Everyone shivered as chills ran down their spines. 

A few moments later blobs of  floating green light started appearing across the sky. Still wind, weird noises started to be heard across the town. All the light posts then turned green. Randomly people started dropping to the ground. Screams  
then started  everywhere people ran as fast as they could. some people that did faint stood back up. Their eyes were glowing green. Other ordinary objects started glowing green and moving by them selves. 

the people and objects started chasing people and murdering them by shape shifting them selfs in to dangerous objects. blood was everywhere. the murdered people were then eaten by the possessed objects and people. I ran away as fast as possible ]]> 2020-08-31 01:44:32 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707765027 lenguyenleon https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707768751 Cherith was an ordinary boy. He liked playing soccer with his mates. Until that day.

It was an ordinary day for Cherith. He got ready for school. But as soon as he came down, he saw the true horror.]]> 2020-08-31 01:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707768751 diyabhudia https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707769429 One spooky night a group of kids decided to go trick or treat without a parents. They went from house to house collecting candy and then they came to a stop. There faces were scared. They came to a stop in front of the haunted house. They have heard stories about the house but never have seen it in real life. They walked up to the gate and lightly pushed. It creeped open slowly. They kids were shivering as they slowly walked to the door. They knocked on the door, and it creeped open. kids looked at each other. They slowly walked away. There was strange sounds coming from the house. When they reached the gate they ran back to there house. They were all panting for air. They noises got louder and louder, and the kids were terrified.]]> 2020-08-31 01:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707769429 Irfan_Nabizadah https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707769652 me and my friends giggling while prank calling people when we came across a man screaming in pain. We asked if there refrigerator was running no answer only sreaming wich fades away slowly and slowly and slowly and hear heavily breathing in the background. We asked if anyone could answer no one did so we hung up and tried to face time him. But no one answered so they called the police and told them what happened. While they were watching the news a serial killer was on there and said that he was torturing and some one called him so he picked up and said nothing. So he hung up and tried to face time me so i ignored him and then police knocked on the door i new i was done the kids in shock turned of the news and said nothing the entire night.]]> 2020-08-31 01:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707769652 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707770201 I was walking down the street when my phone started ringing, I wasn’t sure who it was because there was no caller ID but I answered Because i thought it was important when the person started talking it sounded as though the person was close so I said “hello who is this”?
He hung up immediately. At this point I was already a block away from where he hung up. I didn’t know if i should go back to my house or Not. I after a lot of contemplating I Decided Go to a busy shopping centre and catch my breath.  It was the middle of the day so they were open.That call might have been a wrong number but I couldn’t be so sure. After lots of water I started to think about what I would do. I could try to go home or go to my friends house for the night. In the end I decided to take a train home but first I had to get new clothes so I would look different. I bought the train ticket Then rode the taint I my house. I really was scared now but maybe I was just over reacting but I couldn’t tell.
I new I shouldn’t call the police but then I thought back to the fact that that person who had called me was really close to me and I couldn’t help but think that I might be in serious danger so I called all of my friends and asked if the wanted to sleep over for the night and watch a movie. I didn’t mention what happened. I didn’t want to be alone tonight, most of my friends could come and we had a great time but they left in the morning and I didn’t know what to do. I ended up at the beach hopping there was lots of people.]]> 2020-08-31 01:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707770201 agmiliona https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707772428 I walk down a dark and gloomy street at night. As I look around me I see nothing but darkness. I can hear the wind howling and the trees swishing around in the wind. As I was walking down the street I noticed that one light had a very weird glow to it. It was a lot brighter then all the other lights and it looks as if the is something shiny coming down from it. About five minutes later, I start walking past it forgetting it was even there. I’m almost home and all of a sudden, I heard a giggle.

“Hehehe”

I turn my head immediately only to hear a voice thats say,

“Hi Lisa! Do you remember me?” Said the voice 

“Who are you? How do you know my name?” I replied with. It sounded like a girl.

“You don’t remember me? I’m the girl you bullied in high school. Sarah.”

I start freaking out because I didn’t know how she found me and I still regret me past decisions.

“Look Sarah, I-I’m really sorry ok. I didn’t think about it and I was rude but I- I’ve Changed!”

“Sorry Lisa but I don’t accept apologies now. It’s too late. I’m gone now.“

“W-What do you mean?”

“You see, after years of repetitive bullying by you and your friends, I gave up. I took my own life only realising it didn’t change you. All it did was make my entire family devastated.”

I didn’t know what to say. I was scared and my legs were shaking so much. I fall to the ground terrified. 

“I have been looking for you for ages. Now, I finally found you.”

“Please Sarah! I’m sorry!”

“Oh, I won’t hurt you. I’m just warning you. Karma will get you.”

I get up and sprint home! Shaking and terrified, I open the door and slam it behind me. I go to my bed and lay down. Trying to get some sleep. From then on, I have always tried to be as careful and nice as possible. But I still get a feeling someone is there.

]]> 2020-08-31 01:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707772428 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707885470 I’m walking down the usual alleyway that I walk down to go home and there’s a fenced of area were I need to go to walk home. I walk through the path of the long fences with electric wires at the top of every fence. It led to a door of a hospital, but not any ordinary hospital. The hospital has been abandoned about, 12 years ago I would say. But a light caught my eye, a light was on inside the hospital, and as I stare at it for a bit, SMASH. The light bulb popped. Silent screams came from what felt underneath the floor in the hospital. The door flys wide open, the screams get louder as my heart beats faster. I new I couldn’t go anywhere because the alley was the only way to get home. I turn to try and figure a way back home. But there are no fences, I turn, the door is closed and nothing, but silence, even all the lights are off. I must be going insane I told myself as I sprinted all the way back home, in the dark, gloomy and foggy night. -Emilia ]]> 2020-08-31 03:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707885470 emiliakovacevic9 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707900419 I’m walking down the usual alleyway that I walk down to go home and there’s a fenced of area were I need to go to walk home. I walk through the path of the long fences with electric wires at the top of every fence. It led to a door of a hospital, but not any ordinary hospital. The hospital has been abandoned about, 12 years ago I would say. But a light caught my eye, a light was on inside the hospital, and as I stare at it for a bit, SMASH. The light bulb popped. Quiet screams came from what felt underneath the floor in the hospital. The door flys wide open, the screams get louder as my heart beats faster. I new I couldn’t go anywhere because the alley was the only way to get home. I turn to try and figure a way back home. But there are no fences, I turn, the door is closed and nothing, but silence, even all the lights are off. I must be going insane I told myself as I sprinted all the way back home, in the dark, gloomy and foggy night. -Emilia ]]> 2020-08-31 03:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707900419 cherith_Bonam https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707902362 Ring!Ring! “Hi this is Cherith Bonam speaking who is this”? Questioned Cherith. “Hey you I am demanding you give to give me 8 million dollars right now” demanded in a deep voice.”Who is this actually tell me pls,pls” replied Cherith .I knew that couldn’t freak out if in if l did he would take advantage of me. The only thing that i had to do is keep calm and not overreact.So i need to first call the police and report.Just as i was saying that an unknown number popped on my messages saying “don’t even think about telling  the police”. Well i won’t be telling the police but my parents will.
 ]]> 2020-08-31 03:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707902362 Thomas_Antich https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707903223 Due to a phone glitch Diana overhears a conversation, she franticly hits the phone, she’s about too hung up but suddenly she hears about killing a woman that she knows, she thinks “maybe I should listen”.
 After the call ended she thought to herself “who could it be“! 
Later on she realised that the woman that they where trying to kill is her “how can this be”? She muttered under her stern voice. Suddenly the door was being knock on franticly “I don’t wanna die”, as she screeched in a depressive voice, the sound echos through the house axes cutting through the door, with a sudden adrenaline rush that franticly ran through her system she knew this was the end... -Thomas


]]> 2020-08-31 03:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707903223 mahmoudmarouff https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707903498 I walked into the gloomy night is was spooky but I rlly didn’t care so I kept walking and then I heard woosh i got scared and started running and I felt like someone was chasing me I looked back And I  didn’t See anything and .....




]]> 2020-08-31 03:41:12 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707903498 nguyenlouie2008 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707903589 As my hope slowly dies out, I knew I must continue on. Even if I die trying... the light, lingering and fading away - (kinda like my bank account) And before I know it, I’m dead. SIKE! I’m not dead... I’m ALMOST dead. I continue, only the find... it was my annoying neighbours’ kid flashing a dumb light. And it turns out to be I was just in a dream and I almost died for no reason. *sigh* “I love society”]]> 2020-08-31 03:41:16 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707903589 waynelau2 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707909758 As I was about to pick up the ringing phone, I suddenly froze into place thinking about who might be calling me. I went to pick up the phone and then.......


A car smashed through the front door, I tried to jump away, but all too late. I got hit by the speeding car and scraped my leg, I fell over onto the tiled floor...

A FEW SECONDS LATER
As I lose consciousness, I hear agents calling to each other “Quick! Get the phone while he’s down!” I then regained my consciousness, stood up and started running for the phone..

They quickly snatched the phone away from me, began running back to their car and drove away shortly after.
I went back into the house gasping for air, questioning why that phone was so special.

After a few days, most of my injuries had healed and I went back to where the phone was....



]]> 2020-08-31 03:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707909758 jeremy0609 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707915875
By Jeremy and Kelvyn

I was terrified every morning thinking about who was following me. I went to the freezer to get some Panadol for my headache as I turn I hear the door creak. Anyone there I say. As I go back to sleep all I keep thinking about is who was following me. I go outside for a run I see the man I actually see him. I run and run and keep looking behind. I stop too take a break I realise there was no sign of the man. I kept on walking and kept looking behind I feel that I haven’t ate in years that I could eat a horse. I stopped and looked behind I SAW HIM standing underneath the
 flickering headlight. Hey what do you want I said he never replied. I said hey if you don’t stop following me I will call the cops. No reply he just walked away so I walked and tried looking for food as my stomach was rumbling inside. Then I hear loud footsteps approaching it’s the guy I turn around I took a closer look at his face and he smiled creepily.]]> 2020-08-31 03:52:23 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707915875 lenguyenleon https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707921465 Ring!RING! Leon walks over to pick up the phone, his heart racing.”Who could it be?”
“Hello? Who are you?” Leon was waiting for a reply. But what greeted him was....]]> 2020-08-31 03:57:30 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707921465 Meltan_2 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707933144 We are getting ready to sneak out to the haunted house. When my friends were ready, we all grouped up outside and crept gingerly towards the dark shadow of number 13. When we built up our courage when we went in side Jim try’d to turn on the light but it was fickering so we had to use our phones. PT 1]]> 2020-08-31 04:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707933144 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707934016 Olivia Crisona

One morning when I woke up, I looked outside my bedroom window and saw a strange light on a light pole. I got dressed and ready for my first day of high school and rushed down stairs for my special breakfast. This year for breakfast I had: Bacon,Eggs,Sauseges and Hashbrowns. It was the best breakfast I’ve had this year.
 So after breakfast I went down to the bus stop and when I got on the bus, I saw my best friend Stacy. I told Stacy about the light I saw and she said she saw it to. We were starting to wonder what was going on.

After school Stacy and I were walking down the ally way we normally walk down after school and again we saw that same light but on a diffrent light pole but suddenly it started to get closer and closer to Stacy and I so we just sprinted home scared and nervous. The next day when we walked home the light had eyes and a mouth but Stacy and I dident notice it until it spoke to us. We couldn’t understand what it was saying so we both went home and searched up what language it was speaking. It turns out it speaks in french. So the next day we went to the bus and when we got to ashdale secondary collage,  it turns out we had the same schedule.  

After school when we saw the light, it had legs and arms. So we quickly got out our phones and translated in google: Hi. then it replied in english. Stacy and I were suddenly surprised. It was John and Rose, Stacy brother and my sister. We both then asked them how they became lights. Then they both transformed. We asked what just happened and they said they showed their true selfs. So we all went home. John and Rose were sister and brother and so they went back to we’re they belong: in heaven. 

The End]]> 2020-08-31 04:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/707934016 shane1 https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/708213641 Choose one:
- The Wrong Number
- The Strange Light]]> 2020-08-31 07:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/shane1/narrativeLA33/wish/708213641