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vietcophuong — 2020-02-17 08:33:42 UTC

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Triệu Hoàng Long

trieuhoanglong1611 — 2020-02-18 08:43:09 UTC

Nowadays, due to so many delicious foods, people often forget to eat in moderation, excess nutrition leading to obesity. This is one of the serious diseases in many countries in the world today.
ý câu hơi dài dòng , nên viết lại câu 1 là : bởi vì con người ăn quá nhiều loại thức ăn giàu dinh dưỡng ( béo ) một cách k điều độ đã dẫn đến béo phì + câu 2
Nowadays, eating too much high- nutritious (fat) food immoderatly has led to obesity which is considered as one of the serious diseases in many countries in the world today. This essay will mention.........
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The family is the cell of society, the cradle nourishes people. But in today's modern age, over time, people and societies change very quickly, leading to the necessities of different individuals, so the family leads to disagreements leading to divorce.
BỎ CÂU ĐẦU BỎ BUT, GIỮ NGUYỂN CÂU 2. Ý TƯỞNG TỐT + BỔ SUNG CÂU 2 THIS ESSAY VÀO

Nguyễn Hoàng Thùy Dương

2020-02-19 02:56:56 UTC

Global warming is the increase of average world temperatures as a result of what is known as the greenhouse effect. Certain gases in the atmosphere act like glass in a greenhouse, allowing sunlight through to heat the earth's surface but trapping the heat as it radiates back into space. As the greenhouse gases build up in the atmosphere the Earth gets hotter. This process is leading to a rapid change in climate, also known as climate change.

2“Obesity” specifically refers to an excessive amount of body fat. “Overweight” refers to an excessive amount of body weight that includes muscle, bone, fat, and water. As a rule, women have more body fat than men. Most health care professionals agree that men with more than 25 percent body fat and women with more than 30 percent body fat are obese. These numbers should not be confused with the body mass index (BMI), however, which is more commonly used by health care professionals to determine the effect of body weight on the risk for some diseases.

Trần Mạnh Chiến

2020-02-19 03:05:36 UTC

1.Children's health are increasingly deteriorating by fatness throughout the world, even condition is pretty alarming among the world's most affluent western countries.There are a number of reason causing this problem and each problem needs to be dealt in a particular way.
2. Marital relationships play a vital role in modern society. However, according to recent statistics, the number of broken marriages is rising at an alarming rate in many Asian countries. This poses a threat to the standard of living of many people.
NOTE : Ý TƯỞNG LÊ THANH VS CHIẾN GIỐNG NHAU QUÁ TA

Nguyễn Bá Huy

2020-02-19 03:10:52 UTC

Obesity is a treatable disease that is a worldwide health concern associated with having an excess amount of body fat. It is caused by genetic and environmental factors and can be difficult to control through dieting alone. Obesity is diagnosed by a healthcare provider and is classified as having a body mass index (BMI) of 30 or greater. Nearly 40 percent of Americans have obesity.

Trần Thắng

2020-02-19 03:12:47 UTC

Global warming is one of the biggest issues facing humans nowadays, caused mainly by humans. It has most catastrophic effects on humans and humans have to take action to reduce the risks. In this essay, we will discuss the causes and effects of global warming and give some possible solutions.

cụm facing human : là nghĩa chủ động mà. bỏ đi e chỉ cần nói vế sau mainly caused by humans.
so people have to take action to ... ( đỡ lặp humans)

Hoàng Minh

2020-02-19 03:13:29 UTC

Global warming is an result from climate change that Earth.
This current period of warming is occurring more rapidly than any past events. It has become clear that humanity has caused most of the last century’s warming by releasing heat-trapping gases—commonly referred to as greenhouse gases—to power our modern lives.
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Global warming is a result from climate changes on the Earth
This current period of warming is occurring more rapidly than in any past event. It has become clear that humanity has caused most of the last century’s warming by releasing heat-trapping gases—commonly referred to as greenhouse gases—to power our modern lives.

Hoàng Quý Dương

2020-02-19 03:14:35 UTC

Obesity is most commonly caused by a combination of excessive food intake, lack of physical activity, and genetic susceptibility, but it can also be caused by one of them. A few cases are caused primarily by genes, endocrine disorders, medications, or mental disorder.
Obesity is a cause of death worldwide, with increasing rates in adults and children.It is also associated with various diseases and conditions, particularly cardiovascular diseases, diabetes mellitus type 2, obstructive sleep apnea, certain types of cancer, osteoarthritis, and asthma.

Lê Thanh

2020-02-19 03:15:25 UTC

Children's health are increasingly deteriorating by fatness throughout the world, even condition is pretty alarming among the world's most affluent western countries.There are a number of reasons causing this problem and each problem needs to be dealt in a particular way.
Marital relationships play a vital role in modern society. However, according to recent statistics, the number of broken marriages is rising at an alarming rate in many Asian countries. This poses a threat to the standard of living of many people.
NOTE :
Children's health is increasingly deteriorating by fatness throughout the world, even condition is pretty alarming among the world's most affluent western countries. There are several reasons causing this problem and each problem needs to be dealt with in a particular way.

Mạnh

2020-02-20 04:29:14 UTC

1 . The first cause of global warming is the greenhouse effect
2 . The cause of the greenhouse effect comes from the short-wave radiation of the Sun that can penetrate the atmosphere and directly into the ground and face and the soil absorbs them and heats up and then continues to wave the long wave into the atmosphere so that the CO2 absorbed makes the air heat up
3 . As a result, climate change, weather causes rainfall and temperature changes to create favorable conditions for infectious diseases to develop and multiply.
( phần thân )

Chiến

2020-02-22 08:25:41 UTC

1.Nowadays the number of overweight people is constantly growing.
2.The divorce of parents is the misfortune of the children, the children in the families of divorced parents will directly affect the formation of personality and future in the future.

Chiến

2020-02-22 08:43:42 UTC

1.It is the fact there are many
causes and effect of obesity. The first cause of obesity is the development of technology. It makes us lazy, lazy to operate. This will lead to obesity and other diseases.
ủa câu cuối cụt quá . nguyên nhân của béo phì là công nghệ và ảnh hưởng lại là béo phì . thay ý câu cuối nha

2020-02-22 10:25:00 UTC

Nguyễn Minh Đăng

Nguyễn Hoàng Thùy Dương

2020-02-22 10:39:39 UTC

At an individual level, a combination of excessive food energy intake and a lack of physical activity is thought to explain most cases of obesity. A limited number of cases are due primarily to genetics, medical reasons, or psychiatric illness. In contrast, increasing rates of obesity at a societal level are felt to be due to an easily accessible and palatable diet, increased reliance on cars, and mechanized manufacturing. The World Health Organization (WHO) predicts that overweight and obesity may soon replace more traditional public health concerns such as undernutrition and infectious diseases as the most significant cause of poor health. Obesity is a public health and policy problem because of its prevalence, costs, and health effects.

Đỗ Hoàng

2020-02-22 12:29:13 UTC

1.The first cause of obesity is fast food. It is often found that most children like burgers, pizzas, pasta and coke, chocolate and chips. Moreover, in the modern age, technology has made us lazy to refuse to exercise, so we need to ban carbonated beverages in schools. This diet can be replaced with milk, juice and fruit for lunch, eat lots of green foods, limit greasy foods to minimize obesity today.

Trần Ngọc Hiếu

tnhieu2k3 — 2020-02-22 13:46:56 UTC

1/ It’s the 21^st century. With the development of technology, human has created many things that helps to improve the lives of many other human. However, great advancement always comes with great loss. Since that day, humanity receives a grim reminder... that obesity was and has seriously affected many people of the world.
Note : Thêm câu this essay will discuss the causes and effect of this phenomenon.
câu bôi xanh nên ghép lại thành 1 câu. đưa câu số 1 thành :
With the development of technology in the 21st century
HELPS, OTHER HUMANS

2/ The obviously and most important cause of obesity is how we become more and more lazy toward physical activity over the past few years. The office lifestyle grow to be more popular, and the time human spend on exercise get reduced as the world progress. This make more and more people become less fit, and therefore, become fatter.
lỗi chia V , obiviouly laf adv còn important là adj. phải để dạng adj tất nha

Phạm lan anh

2020-02-22 13:49:18 UTC

Nowadays, the increasing rate of overweight children and adults is a worldwide health issue. Obesity is a major problem which is increasing day by day in school going children. There are various reasons behind it. This essay will discuss the causes of obesity and offer some solutions.

The first cause of obesity is junk food. It is often seen that mostly children are fond of burgers, pizzas, noodles and coke. These types of foods are easily available to them in school canteens.This problem can be solved by teaching children to cook healthy foods for themselves and banning junk foods and fizzy drinks in schools. This diet can be replaced by milk, juice and fruits for lunch.

The second cause of obesity is sedentary life style. It is true that the use of computers and television is increasing in children. They spend most of their time watching television or playing video games on a computer.This issue can be resolved by encouraging children to do physical exercises. Parents can take their children to park to encourage playing with friends....
bài viết tốt nhưng có tham khảo nguồn nào thế

2020-02-22 14:08:54 UTC

Ng. Hà Trang

2020-02-22 15:24:39 UTC

VIntroduction: One of the biggest problem people are facing today is divorce. The issue of divorce and increasing rates in the modern world is one of the most serious problem and social issues which influence people life to a great extent.

of the most serious problem and social issues which influence people life to a great extent. Body(cause and effect): Divorces are effecting on personal and social life very deeply. It causes stress and makes individual unsuccessful and changes lives. When parents get divorced they do not even think about what will happen with their children. Many students perform low in school because of their parents. Children of divorces parents have more problems in their behavior and psychological development. Many psychological studies show that children who live with both of their parents are happy.
NOTE : PROBLEMS / DIVORCED PARENTS
PHẦN INTRO : HAI CÂU VỀ CƠ BẢN KHÁ LẶP Ý
Introduction: One of the biggest problems people are facing today is divorce. THIS PROBLEM IS INCREASING RAPIDLY which influenceS people life to a great extent.
Body(cause and effect): Divorces are effecting personal and social life very deeply. BECAUSE ( ĐỂ THÊM PHẦN GẮN KẾT ) It causes stress and makes individual unsuccessful and changes lives. When parents get divorced they do not even think about what will happen with their children. CONSEQUENTLY, Many students perform low in school because of their parents. MOREOVER, Children of divorced parents have more problems in their behavior and psychological development. Many psychological studies show that children who live with both of their parents are happy.
Ý TƯỞNG TỐT, MẠCH LẠCH, THÊM CÁC TỪ NỐI ĐỂ BÀI VĂN GẮN KẾT HƠN LÀ OK

Việt Hà

2020-02-22 15:43:04 UTC

The first cause of divorce is eat a lot of fried food lazy exercise and when you finished eating and lying down. This easy will mention the reason why divorce is becoming a serious problem. As a consequence that we should eat healthier and do exercise good for healthy.
NOTE : ĂN NHIỀU ĐÒ ĂN SAO LẠI DẪN ĐẾN LY DỊ E NHỈ ? CHƯA HỢP LÝ NHA
REASONS : VÌ E KHÔNG CHỈ ĐỀ CẬP 1 LÝ DO